摘要:
本讲义聚焦高中英语主题公园说明文写作核心知识点,通过文体解读明确说明文特征,提供必备词汇(如“be located”“date from”)和句型(如介绍公园、交通方式的句式)搭建语言支架,再以写作步骤(审题谋篇、遣词造句、词句升级、妙笔成篇)引导写作流程,结合实践应用(推荐公园)与跟踪训练(投稿任务)实现能力迁移。
该资料亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过词句升级(如用过去分词作状语合并句子)提升表达准确性,以思维品质发展为导向,借助文章架构图示帮助学生构建逻辑清晰的写作框架,同时阶梯式任务设计(从基础写作到投稿实践)助力学习能力提升。课中教师可依托结构化内容高效授课,课后学生能通过范文和训练查漏补缺,强化写作技能。
内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
介绍一个公园
本单元写作任务是介绍一个主题公园。这类作文需要使用生动的语言对某一主题公园(或景点)进行具体逼真的描绘, 属于说明文。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
①be located位于;坐落于
②with a history of有着……的历史
③be famous for因……而闻名
④be intended for针对
⑤date from/back to...始建于……
⑥one of the most famous parks最为著名的公园之一
⑦varieties of entertainments各种各样的娱乐活动
⑧advanced technology先进的技术
⑨magical world魔幻世界
⑩enjoy increasing popularity享有越来越高的人气
[必备句型]
1.介绍主题公园
①Disneyland is the most successful theme park in the world, which brings great happiness to children.
迪士尼乐园是世界上最成功的主题乐园, 它为孩子们带来巨大的快乐。
②Hong Kong Disneyland is a resort area located on Hong Kong Disneyland theme park.
香港迪士尼乐园是坐落于香港迪士尼主题公园内的度假区。
③The theme of the park is to help people be aware of the importance of saving resources.
公园的主题是帮助人们意识到节约资源的重要性。
2.介绍交通方式
①You can reach the building by overpass or underpass.
你可以通过过街天桥或地下通道到达这座建筑。
②You can get there a little more quickly by taking Bus 219.
你可以乘坐219路公交更快速地到达那里。
3.介绍注意事项
①You should pay attention to your behavior and take care not to lose your belongings.
注意自己的行为, 并当心不要丢了自己的物品。
②It's better for kids to be accompanied by their parents all the time.
父母最好一直陪着孩子。
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友汤姆(Tom)暑假想来中国游玩,请你给他推荐一个好玩的主题公园。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.听说你暑假要来中国游玩,我很高兴。
I am glad to hear that you will come to visit China in summer vacation.
2.中国有很多著名的主题公园,上海的巧克力开心乐园就是其中之一。
There are many famous theme parks in China,and Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is one of them.
3.上海的巧克力开心乐园是以巧克力为原材料打造的主题公园。
Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is the one made of chocolate.
4.巧克力开心乐园位于上海市世博园区。
Chocolate Happy Land is located in Shanghai Expo zone.
5.据悉,巧克力开心乐园总占地面积达3万多平方米。
It is reported that Chocolate Happy Land covers an area of more than 30,000 square metres.
6.园内设有巧克力王国、甜蜜伊甸园及其他六个景点。
There are chocolate kingdom,sweet Eden and other six scenic spots.
7.如果你觉得不错,那就来上海巧克力主题公园吧!
If you like it, come to Shanghai Chocolate theme park!
第三步 词句升级
8.用过去分词作状语合并句3和句4
Located in Shanghai Expo zone,Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is the one made of chocolate.
第四步 妙笔成篇
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear that you will come to visit China in summer vacation.
In fact,there are many famous theme parks in China,and Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is one of them. Located in Shanghai Expo zone,Shanghai Chocolate Happy Land is the one made of chocolate. It is reported that Chocolate Happy Land covers an area of more than 30,000 square metres. There are chocolate kingdom,sweet Eden and other six scenic spots.
If you like it,come to Shanghai Chocolate theme park!
Yours,
Li Hua
你校校报正在征集《公园之美》栏目稿件,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个你去过的或者喜欢的公园,可以是主题公园,也可以是国家公园,内容包括:
1.公园名称,地理位置;
2.公园的著名景观,特色设施;
3.你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节使行文流畅。
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【参考范文】
Located near the city center, the newly built Sports Park whose theme is “Make sports part of our life” has been open to the public.
Covering an area of 400,000 square meters, the park, which combines physical exercise with entertainment, is one of the largest modern parks in our city.It features plenty of top sports facilities, which can meet people's needs of doing exercise as well as receiving professional training regularly and conveniently.What's more, it is surprising that most facilities can be used for free.
Welcome to the Sports Park and enjoy the pleasure of doing sports.
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