译林版新版九上英语单元书面表达写作指导unit5-unit8（写作框架+高分词汇词组+参考范文+写作模版）

该初中英语单元写作指导清单涵盖译林版九上Unit 5至Unit 8书面表达内容，包含音乐风格、画家、电影、舞台剧故事四大写作主题，提供写作框架、高分词汇、参考范文及模板等学习支架。 清单通过“4段式写作框架”梳理结构，如Unit 5分总起引入、原因分析等段落；“高分词汇替换表”分级呈现基础词与高分词对比，如“good”替换为“amazing”，提升语言能力。“万能模板”嵌入核心句式，如Unit 7电影模板含情节与感受结合设计，培养学习能力，教师可直接用于教学，学生能自主仿写，高效掌握写作要点。

译林版新版九上英语单元书面表达写作指导 （写作框架+高分词汇/词组+参考范文+写作模版） Unit 5 Music speaks 写作任务：写一篇关于你最喜欢的音乐风格的文章 （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） 第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入 功能：直接点明你最喜欢的音乐风格是什么，引起读者兴趣。 核心句式： 1. My favourite music style is classical/rock/jazz/country music. 我最喜欢的音乐风格是古典乐/摇滚乐/爵士乐/乡村音乐。 2. Of all the music styles, I love ... most.在所有音乐风格里，我最喜欢…… 第二段（中间1，3-4句）：分析喜欢的原因 功能：说明你喜欢这种音乐风格的原因，可以从感受、功能等角度展开。 核心句式： 1. I love this style because ...我喜欢这种风格，因为…… 2. This style of music always makes me feel relaxed/happy/excited. 这种曲风总能让我感到放松/愉悦/兴奋。 3. I first fell in love with this style when ...我初次爱上这种风格是在…… 第三段（中间2，2-3句）：补充细节或举例 功能：补充这种音乐风格的特点、代表人物或你喜欢的作品。 核心句式： 1. Common instruments in this style are/include the guitar/piano/violin. 这种曲风常用乐器有吉他、钢琴、小提琴。 2. One of the best-known ... musicians is ... 最负盛名的……音乐人之一是…… 3. My favourite piece of ... music is ... 我最喜欢的一段……音乐是…… 第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结升华 功能：总结你对这种音乐的感受，表达热爱。 核心句式： 1. There is nothing more powerful and relaxing than ... 没有什么比……更能让人充满力量、舒缓身心了 2. ... will always be an important part of my life. ……永远会是我人生中重要的一部分。 （二）高分词汇/词组积累 高分词汇替换： 基础词 高分替换词 含义 写作可用例句 like be fond of / be crazy about 喜欢 I am fond of classical music. good amazing / extraordinary / remarkable 极好的 The music has an amazing effect on me. make me happy lift my spirits / cheer me up 让我开心 Rock music always lifts my spirits. famous well-known / world-famous / celebrated 著名的 Beethoven is a celebrated composer. important significant / essential / vital 重要的 Music plays a vital role in my life. 高分词组： ① be deeply moved by 被……深深打动 ② have a powerful effect on 对……有强烈影响 ③ can't help doing 忍不住做某事 ④ be impressed by 对……印象深刻 ⑤ be/become popular around the world 在全世界流行 ⑥ play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色 ⑦ mix ... with ... 把……与……融合 （三）参考范文 My Favourite Music Style My favourite music style is classical music. Of all the music styles, it touches my heart the most deeply. I love classical music because it is beautiful and exciting. Whenever I feel stressed after a long day of study, listening to a piece of classical music can always help me relax and calm down. I first fell in love with this style when I heard Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata at a concert. The gentle melody was so moving that I was deeply attracted. Common instruments in classical music include the piano, the violin and the cello. One of the best-known classical musicians is Beethoven. My favourite piece of classical music is his Symphony No. 5, which is powerful and inspiring. There is nothing more powerful and relaxing than classical music. It will always be an important part of my life. （四）写作模板（万能模板） My Favourite Music Style My favourite music style is ________ (表明你最喜欢的音乐风格). Of all the music styles, I love it the most. I love this style because ________ (说明喜欢的原因). This style of music always makes me feel ________ (描述你的感受). I first fell in love with this style when ________ (描述你第一次接触这种音乐的经历). Common instruments in this style are ________ (列举该风格常用的乐器). One of the best-known musicians of this style is ________ (介绍代表音乐家). My favourite piece of this style is ________ (介绍你最喜欢的作品). There is nothing more ________ than ________ (总结你的感受). ________ (表达这种音乐对你的意义). Unit 6 The art of the brush （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） 本单元写作任务：写一篇关于你最喜欢的画家的文章（An article about your favourite painter） 第一段（开头，1-2句）：引入话题，点明你最喜欢的画家是谁 核心内容：直接点出画家的名字和国籍，表明"这是我最喜欢的画家"的态度。 核心句式： ① My favourite painter is ... / The painter I like best is ... 我最喜欢的画家是……/我最喜爱的画家是…… ② He/She is a famous Chinese/French/... painter who ... 他/她是一位知名的中国/法国/……画家，其…… 第二段（中间1，3-4句）：介绍画家的生平和绘画风格 核心内容：讲述画家何时开始绘画、绘画风格是什么、擅长画什么题材。 核心句式： ① He/She began painting when he/she was very young/a teenager/... 他/她在年幼时/青少年时期/……便开始绘画 ② He/She paints/painted in a modern/traditional style. 他/她以现代/传统风格作画/曾作画。 ③ He/She often paints/painted animals/landscapes/people/... 他/她经常画/曾画动物/风景/人物/…… 第三段（中间2，2-3句）：介绍画家的代表作品及其影响 核心内容：提到画家最著名的作品，说明这些作品为什么了不起。 核心句式： ① His/Her most famous work is ... which ...他/她最知名的作品是……该作品…… ② My favourite paintings by this painter are ... because ... 这位画家我最喜欢的画作是……因为…… ③ The painting that I like best is ...我最喜欢的那幅画作是…… 第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结评价，表达敬意 核心内容：表达你对这位画家的敬佩之情，说明他/她的艺术对你有什么影响。 核心句式： ① I admire him/her because his/her works always ...我钦佩他/她，因为他/她的作品总是…… ② His/Her art has taught me to ...他/她的作品教会我去…… （二）高分词汇/词组积累 高分词汇替换： 基础词 高分替换词 含义 写作可用例句 good outstanding / remarkable 杰出的；非凡的 He is an outstanding painter in modern art. famous world-renowned / well-known 世界闻名的 She is a world-renowned artist whose works are admired globally. like be fascinated by / be drawn to 被……深深吸引 I am fascinated by his unique painting style. beautiful breathtaking / magnificent 令人叹为观止的 The painting is truly breathtaking. show demonstrate / reveal 展现；揭示 His works demonstrate a deep understanding of nature. 高分词组： ① be famous for 因……而闻名 ② be admired by 被……赞赏 ③ date back to 追溯到 ④ take pride in 以……为豪 ⑤ concentrate on 专注于 ⑥ be drawn to 被……吸引 ⑦ have a great influence on 对……有巨大影响 ⑧ leave a lasting impression on 给……留下深刻印象 （三）参考范文 My Favourite Painter My favourite painter is Qi Baishi, one of the most famous Chinese painters in modern history. He was born in 1864 in Hunan Province. Qi Baishi started learning painting when he was very young, and he taught himself how to paint after long days of work as a woodworker. Qi Baishi is famous for his unique painting style that combines bright colours with heavy ink. Unlike many traditional painters who focused on large landscapes, he concentrated on small things in nature. His favourite subjects were things that he noticed in the natural world, like flowers, fish, frogs and especially shrimps. The paintings that I like best are his shrimp paintings. The shrimps in his works seem so alive that you can almost feel them moving. His brush strokes are simple but full of life, which shows his deep understanding of nature and his outstanding artistic technique. I admire Qi Baishi not only because of his artistic talent, but also because of his spirit of never giving up. His story has taught me that with hard work and passion, anyone can achieve their dreams. His works will always be a source of inspiration for me. （四）写作模板（万能模板） My Favourite Painter My favourite painter is ________（画家名字）. He/She is a(n) ________（国籍/地区）painter who ________（用定语从句简要介绍）. He/She began painting when he/she was ________（开始绘画的时间/年龄）. He/She paints/painted in a ________（绘画风格）style. He/She often paints/painted ________（擅长题材）, and his/her works are/were ________（作品特点）. His/Her most famous work is ________（代表作品）, which ________（用定语从句介绍作品特点或成就）. The painting that I like best is ________（你最喜欢的那幅画）because ________（喜欢的原因）. I admire him/her because ________（表达敬佩的原因）. His/Her art has taught me to ________（画家对你有什么启发）, and I believe that his/her works will ________（对未来的影响或展望）. Unit 7 The big screen （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） 本单元的写作任务是"写一篇关于你最喜欢的电影的文章"，属于说明+议论类文章。推荐用4段式结构： 第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入 开门见山地点出你最喜欢的电影是什么，用一两句话引起读者的兴趣。 核心句式： ① My favourite film is..., which is a... (type) film directed by... 我最喜欢的电影是……，这是一部由……执导的……（类型）影片 ② Of all the films I have watched, ... leaves the deepest impression on me. 在我看过的所有电影里，……给我留下了最深刻的印象。 第二段（中间1，3-4句）：介绍电影情节 简要介绍电影的主要情节（plot），不必太详细，抓住主线即可。 核心句式： ① The film tells the story of... 这部影片讲述了……的故事 ② It is about a... who/that... 这是关于一个……其…… 第三段（中间2，3-4句）：表达你的感受 说明你喜欢这部电影的原因，可以从情感、演技、主题等角度展开。 核心句式： ① What I love most about this film is that... 这部电影最打动我的一点是…… ② The film is so touching/moving/inspiring that... 这部电影十分感人/动人/鼓舞人心，以至于…… ③ I was deeply impressed by... ……给我留下了极为深刻的印象 第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结推荐 总结从电影中学到了什么，或者向读者推荐这部电影。 核心句式： ① From this film, I learn that... 从这部影片中，我明白了…… ② I highly recommend this film to anyone who... 我强烈向所有……的人推荐这部影片 （二）高分词汇/词组积累 高分词汇替换表 基础词 高分替换词 含义 例句 good outstanding/remarkable 杰出的；非凡的 Her performance is outstanding. like be fond of / be attracted by 喜爱；被吸引 I am fond of action films. sad touching / moving 感人的 The story is so touching that I cried. famous well-known / world-famous 著名的 She is a world-famous actress. important significant / meaningful 有意义的；重要的 The film has significant educational value. very extremely / remarkably 极其；非常 The film is extremely popular. 高分词组 ① catch one's attention 引起注意 ② play the lead role 扮演主角 ③ be based upon/on 基于；改编自 ④ go beyond 超出；超越 ⑤ pass away 去世（委婉语） ⑥ mark the beginning of 标志着……的开始 ⑦ so...that / such...that 如此……以至于 ⑧ so that 以便；为了 ⑨ live through 经历（灾难等）而幸存 ⑩ come to life 活了过来；变得生动 （三）参考范文 My Favourite Film Of all the films I have watched, Dangal leaves the deepest impression on me. It is a touching sports film based on a true story, directed by Nitesh Tiwari. The film tells the story of a father who trains his daughters to become world-class wrestlers. Although the girls face many difficulties, they never give up. Their hard work and determination finally lead them to success. What I love most about this film is that it is both funny and inspiring. The father is so strict yet so loving that his daughters understand his intentions in the end. The film is such a moving story about family support and girl power that I couldn't help crying when I watched it. From this film, I learn that hard work is the key to success and family support is of great importance. I highly recommend this film to everyone so that more people can be inspired by this wonderful story. （四）写作模板（万能模板） My Favourite Film Of all the films I have watched, ________ leaves the deepest impression on me. It is a ________（电影类型）film directed by ________（导演）. The film tells the story of ________（电影主要情节）. Although ________（遇到的困难或转折）, ________（最终结果）. What I love most about this film is that ________（喜欢的原因）. The film is so ________（形容词）that ________（结果）. It is such a ________（名词短语）that ________（结果）. From this film, I learn that ________（学到的道理）. I highly recommend this film to anyone who ________（推荐理由）. Unit 8 The world of literature （一）写作框架梳理（4段式） 本单元的写作任务是"创编一段舞台剧故事" 功能：交代背景（时间、地点、人物），设置场景 核心句式： The scene is set in ________.（场景设定在……） [Character] is ________ when ________.（当……时，某角色正在……） 第二段（中间1，3-5行对话） 功能：引入冲突或问题，展开人物对话 核心句式： [Character A]: What's the matter?（怎么了？） [Character B]: I don't want to ________ because ________.（我不想……因为……） 第三段（中间2，3-5行对话） 功能：推动情节发展，出现转折点 核心句式： [Stage direction: Something unexpected happens.]（舞台提示：意外事件发生） [Character A]: Don't worry. If you ________, you will ________.（别担心。如果你……，你就会……） 第四段（结尾，1-2行） 功能：解决冲突，或留下悬念 核心句式： [Character] realizes that ________.（某角色意识到……） [The doorbell rings / The lights go out.]（门铃响了/灯灭了——用舞台提示营造悬念） （二）高分词汇/词组积累 高分词汇替换 good → outstanding 杰出的 例：an outstanding performance sad → heartbreaking 令人心碎的 例：a heartbreaking story important → meaningful 有意义的 例：a meaningful experience surprising → unexpected 出乎意料的 例：an unexpected ending like → be fond of 喜爱 例：be fond of reading show → reflect 反映 例：reflect the beauty of life 高分词组 ① be set in 以……为背景 ② be full of 充满 ③ cannot help doing 忍不住做某事 ④ leave a deep impression on 给……留下深刻印象 ⑤ come up with 想出；提出 ⑥ remind sb of sth 使某人想起某事 ⑦ make up one's mind 下定决心 ⑧ give up 放弃 （三）参考范文 Act 1, Scene 2 Emily's bedroom at Julie's house [Emily is standing at the door, holding a book. Julie is sitting on her bed, looking out of the window.] Emily: Hi, Julie! I am Emily, your neighbour. I saw you walking to school alone this morning. Are you new here? Julie: Yes, I just moved here last week. I do not know anyone at this school. Emily: Do not worry! If you come with me, I will introduce you to my friends. We are all very friendly. Julie: Really? That is so kind of you. Unless someone talks to me first, I am usually too shy to speak. Emily: I understand. I used to be shy too. But unless you take the first step, you will never make new friends. Come on, let us go! Julie: [smiling] OK. Thank you, Emily. [They walk out of the door together. The lights dim.] （四）写作模板（万能模板） Act ________, Scene ________ ________（场景地点） [________（舞台提示：描述人物动作和环境）] ________（角色A）: ________（表明自己的基本态度/问题） ________（角色B）: ________（回应，提供建议或安慰） ________（角色A）: ________（表达犹豫或担忧） ________（角色B）: If you ________（建议1）, you will ________（可能的结果）. Unless you ________（建议2）, you will not ________（不采取行动的后果）. ________（角色A）: [________（舞台提示：态度变化）] ________（接受建议/做出决定） [________（舞台提示：情节转折/悬念结尾）] 1 / 12 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $