译林版新版九上英语单元书面表达写作指导unit5-unit8（写作框架+高分词汇词组+参考范文+写作模版）

译林版新版九上英语单元书面表达写作指导

（写作框架+高分词汇/词组+参考范文+写作模版）

Unit 5  Music speaks

写作任务：写一篇关于你最喜欢的音乐风格的文章

（一）写作框架梳理（4段式）

第一段（开头，1-2句）：总起引入

功能：直接点明你最喜欢的音乐风格是什么，引起读者兴趣。

核心句式：

1. My favourite music style is classical/rock/jazz/country music.

我最喜欢的音乐风格是古典乐/摇滚乐/爵士乐/乡村音乐。

2. Of all the music styles, I love ... most.在所有音乐风格里，我最喜欢……

第二段（中间1，3-4句）：分析喜欢的原因

功能：说明你喜欢这种音乐风格的原因，可以从感受、功能等角度展开。

核心句式：

1. I love this style because ...我喜欢这种风格，因为……

2. This style of music always makes me feel relaxed/happy/excited.

这种曲风总能让我感到放松/愉悦/兴奋。

3. I first fell in love with this style when ...我初次爱上这种风格是在……

第三段（中间2，2-3句）：补充细节或举例

功能：补充这种音乐风格的特点、代表人物或你喜欢的作品。

核心句式：

1. Common instruments in this style are/include the guitar/piano/violin.

这种曲风常用乐器有吉他、钢琴、小提琴。

2. One of the best-known ... musicians is ... 最负盛名的……音乐人之一是……

3. My favourite piece of ... music is ... 我最喜欢的一段……音乐是……

第四段（结尾，1-2句）：总结升华

功能：总结你对这种音乐的感受，表达热爱。

核心句式：

1. There is nothing more powerful and relaxing than ...

没有什么比……更能让人充满力量、舒缓身心了

2. ... will always be an important part of my life.

……永远会是我人生中重要的一部分。

（二）高分词汇/词组积累

高分词汇替换：

 

高分词组：

① be deeply moved by 被……深深打动

② have a powerful effect on 对……有强烈影响

③ can't help doing 忍不住做某事

④ be impressed by 对……印象深刻

⑤ be/become popular around the world 在全世界流行

⑥ play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色

⑦ mix ... with ... 把……与……融合

（三）参考范文

My Favourite Music Style

My favourite music style is classical music. Of all the music styles, it touches my heart the most deeply.

I love classical music because it is beautiful and exciting. Whenever I feel stressed after a long day of study, listening to a piece of classical music can always help me relax and calm down. I first fell in love with this style when I heard Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata at a concert. The gentle melody was so moving that I was deeply attracted.

Common instruments in classical music include the piano, the violin and the cello. One of the best-known classical musicians is Beethoven. My favourite piece of classical music is his Symphony No. 5, which is powerful and inspiring.

There is nothing more powerful and relaxing than classical music. It will always be an important part of my life.

（四）写作模板（万能模板）

My Favourite Music Style

My favourite music style is ________ (表明你最喜欢的音乐风格). Of all the music styles, I love it the most.

I love this style because ________ (说明喜欢的原因). This style of music always makes me feel ________ (描述你的感受). I first fell in love with this style when ________ (描述你第一次接触这种音乐的经历).

Common instruments in this style are ________ (列举该风格常用的乐器). One of the best-known musicians of this style is ________ (介绍代表音乐家). My favourite piece of this style is ________ (介绍你最喜欢的作品).

There is nothing more ________ than ________ (总结你的感受). ________ (表达这种音乐对你的意义).

Unit 6 The art of the brush