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外研版七升八暑假书面表达专项复习
(七年级下册Unit1~Unit6)
Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
写作常用词汇
happy, secret, joy, pleasure, friend, family, hobby, smile, help, share, warm, peaceful, meaningful, grateful, care, support, laugh
常用短语
the secret of happiness, small joys, spend time with, share with, care about, help others, bring joy to, feel grateful for, smile at, keep a positive attitude, spend time on hobbies
高分句子
1. Happiness lies not in the great achievements but in the small moments of life.(幸福不在于伟大的成就,而在于生活的小瞬间。)
2. The secret of happiness is not to get what we want, but to appreciate what we have.(幸福的秘诀不是得到我们想要的,而是珍惜我们拥有的。)
3. When we share our joy with others, it becomes twice as much; when we share our sadness, it becomes half as much.(当我们和他人分享快乐,快乐会加倍;当我们和他人分享悲伤,悲伤会减半。)
写作指导
核心要求:围绕“幸福的秘诀”,需结合具体事例(如和家人相处、帮助他人、培养爱好等),避免空泛议论;
时态:以一般现在时为主,描述具体经历时可用一般过去时;
结构:开篇点题→举例说明→总结感悟。
基础参考范文
The Secrets of My Happiness
Happiness has many secrets for me. First, spending time with my family makes me happy. Every weekend, we have dinner together and talk about our days. Second, helping others brings me joy. Last month, I helped a classmate with his math, and he got a good grade. I felt very happy. These are my secrets of happiness.
培优参考范文
The Secrets of My Happiness
Happiness is like a warm light that lights up my life, and its secrets are hidden in the small things around me. One secret is the time I spend with my grandmother. Every Sunday, I go to her house, and she tells me stories about her childhood while making my favorite dumplings. The smell of dumplings and her soft voice make me feel warm and happy. Another secret is helping people in need. Last winter, I joined a volunteer group to give out warm clothes to homeless people. When I saw their smiles, I realized that happiness comes from giving, not taking. These small things are the most precious secrets of my happiness.
写作模板
The Secrets of My Happiness
Happiness is important for everyone, and I have my own secrets of happiness. First, ____________________(第一个幸福秘诀,如和家人相处/培养爱好). I often ____________________(具体做法), and it makes me feel ____________________(感受). Second, ____________________(第二个幸福秘诀,如帮助他人/分享快乐). Once, I ____________________(具体事例), and I found that ____________________(感悟). These are my secrets of happiness, and they make my life full of joy.
Unit 2 Go for it!
写作常用词汇
goal, dream, try, effort, challenge, succeed, fail, practice, brave, confident, work hard, never give up, achieve, progress, encourage, overcome
常用短语
go for it, set a goal, try one's best, work hard, never give up, overcome challenges, make progress, achieve a dream, practice doing, encourage sb. to do, take risks, learn from failure
高分句子
1. When you have a goal, don't hesitate to go for it—even small steps lead to big success.(当你有目标时,别犹豫去追求——即使小步也能走向大成功。)
2. Failure is not the end, but a chance to learn and grow, so we should never give up when we face difficulties.(失败不是终点,而是学习和成长的机会,所以面对困难时我们绝不能放弃。)
3. Confidence and hard work are the keys to achieving any goal; as long as we go for it, we will get closer to our dreams.(自信和努力是实现任何目标的关键;只要我们去追求,就会离梦想更近。)
写作指导
核心要求:围绕“去追求(目标/梦想)”,需体现“努力的过程”(如克服困难、反复练习),避免只说结果;
时态:描述目标和态度用一般现在时,描述经历用一般过去时;
结构:点明目标→描述努力过程→总结收获。
基础参考范文
Go for My Dream of Playing the Guitar
My dream is to play the guitar well. I started learning it last year, and it was hard at first. My fingers hurt when I practiced, but I didn't give up. I practiced for an hour every day. Now I can play a few songs. I will keep going for my dream.
培优参考范文
Go for It: My Journey to Win the Speech Contest
When I heard that our school would hold an English speech contest, I decided to go for it—even though I was afraid of speaking in public. First, I chose a topic about my favorite book, and I wrote the speech carefully. Then, I practiced in front of my parents and teachers, and they gave me useful advice. On the day of the contest, I was very nervous, but I took a deep breath and started speaking. When I finished, the audience clapped loudly. I didn't get the first prize, but I got a chance to overcome my fear. Going for it taught me that courage is more important than the result.
写作模板
Go for My Goal of ____________________(具体目标,如学好英语/参加运动会)
I have a goal of ____________________(具体目标), and I decide to go for it. At first, ____________________(遇到的困难,如基础差/害怕失败), but I didn't give up. I ____________________(努力的过程,如每天练习/请教他人). When ____________________(具体经历,如比赛/考试), I felt ____________________(当时的感受). Finally, ____________________(结果,如取得进步/收获勇气). Going for this goal makes me realize that ____________________(感悟).
Unit 3 Food matters
写作常用词汇
food, healthy, delicious, taste, cook, meal, nutrition, favorite, diet, traditional, fresh, sweet, salty, spicy, homemade, restaurant
常用短语
food matters, healthy diet, traditional food, cook meals, favorite food, taste good, fresh food, homemade food, go to a restaurant, have a meal, balanced diet, try new food, food culture
高分句子
1. Food matters not only for our taste but also for our health, so we should choose our food carefully.(食物不仅关乎口味,也关乎健康,所以我们应该谨慎选择食物。)
2. Traditional food carries the culture and memories of a place, and every bite tells a story.(传统食物承载着一个地方的文化和记忆,每一口都讲述着一个故事。)
3. Homemade food is always the most delicious, because it is full of the love of family.(自制的食物总是最美味的,因为它充满了家人的爱。)
写作指导
核心要求:围绕“食物的重要性”,可结合“健康饮食”“传统食物”“自制食物”等角度,需有具体的描述(如味道、做法、感受);
时态:以一般现在时为主,描述经历用一般过去时;
结构:点明食物的重要性→具体描述(如喜欢的食物、饮食经历)→总结感悟。
基础参考范文
Food Matters for My Health
Food matters a lot to me. I like eating vegetables and fruits, because they are healthy. My mom cooks meals for me every day, and her dishes are delicious. I don't eat too much junk food, because it is bad for my health. Good food makes me strong and happy.
培优参考范文
Food Matters: The Story of My Grandma's Dumplings
Food matters not only for our body but also for our heart, and my grandma's dumplings are the best example. Every Spring Festival, my grandma makes dumplings with cabbage and pork. She always says that dumplings bring good luck and family together. I like to help her wrap dumplings, and she tells me stories about her childhood while we work. When the dumplings are cooked, the whole family sits around the table. The taste of the dumplings is soft and delicious, and it is full of love. This food matters to me, because it carries the warmth of my family and the tradition of our festival.
写作模板
Food Matters to Me
Food matters a lot in my life, and I have a special love for ____________________(具体食物,如妈妈的面条/家乡的月饼). This food ____________________(特点,如美味/健康/有意义). I often ____________________(和食物相关的经历,如和家人一起吃/自己做). When I eat it, I feel ____________________(感受,如温暖/幸福/满足). Food matters not only for ____________________(一方面,如健康) but also for ____________________(另一方面,如情感/记忆). I will always cherish the food that matters to me.
Unit 4 The art of having fun
写作常用词汇
fun, hobby, activity, game, travel, movie, music, party, friend, relax, enjoy, interesting, exciting, creative, leisure, hobby, pastime
常用短语
the art of having fun, have fun with, spend time on hobbies, play games, watch movies, listen to music, travel around, relax oneself, enjoy oneself, have a party, creative activities, leisure time, pastime activities
高分句子
1. The art of having fun is not about doing expensive things, but about finding joy in the simple moments of life.(享受乐趣的艺术不在于做昂贵的事,而在于在生活的简单瞬间找到快乐。)
2. Having fun with friends makes our leisure time more colorful and memorable.(和朋友一起享受乐趣让我们的休闲时光更丰富多彩、更难忘。)
3. Creative hobbies, such as painting and writing, are not only fun but also help us develop our imagination.(创造性的爱好,比如绘画和写作,不仅有趣,还能帮助我们发展想象力。)
写作指导
核心要求:围绕“享受乐趣的艺术”,需结合具体的休闲活动(如和朋友玩游戏、培养爱好、旅行等),体现“乐趣的来源”;
时态:以一般现在时为主,描述经历用一般过去时;
结构:点明乐趣的艺术→具体描述活动→总结感悟。
基础参考范文
The Art of Having Fun with Friends
The art of having fun for me is playing with my friends. We often play basketball after class, and we laugh a lot. Sometimes we watch movies together on weekends. These activities make me happy and relaxed. I think having fun with friends is the best way to enjoy life.
培优参考范文
The Art of Having Fun: My Hobby of Painting
The art of having fun is a way to relax and enjoy life, and my hobby of painting is my favorite way to have fun. Every weekend, I take my paintbrushes and go to the park. I paint the trees, the flowers and the children playing. Sometimes I paint the sunset, and the orange light makes the picture warm. When I paint, I forget all my worries and feel peaceful. Painting is not only fun but also helps me see the beauty of life. This is the art of having fun for me—finding beauty and joy in the world around me.
写作模板
The Art of Having Fun for Me
The art of having fun is important for me, and my favorite way to have fun is ____________________(具体活动,如听音乐/旅行/做手工). I often ____________________(具体做法,如每天听音乐/假期旅行), and it makes me feel ____________________(感受,如放松/快乐/兴奋). Once, I ____________________(具体经历,如和朋友旅行/参加绘画比赛), and I found that ____________________(感悟). The art of having fun helps me ____________________(收获,如缓解压力/发现生活的美). I will keep enjoying the fun in my life.
Unit 5 Amazing nature
写作常用词汇
nature, amazing, beautiful, animal, plant, mountain, river, forest, sky, star, wonder, wild, protect, environment, discover, admire, natural
常用短语
amazing nature, natural wonders, wild animals, green forests, clear rivers, blue sky, protect the environment, admire the beauty of nature, discover nature, natural world, live in harmony with nature, enjoy the scenery
高分句子
1. Amazing nature is full of wonders, from the tallest mountains to the smallest insects, and every part shows the magic of life.(神奇的自然充满了奇迹,从最高的山到最小的昆虫,每一部分都展现了生命的魔力。)
2. When we admire the beauty of nature, we should also remember to protect it, because it is our home.(当我们欣赏自然的美时,我们也应该记得保护它,因为它是我们的家。)
3. Spending time in nature helps us relax our mind and feel the peace of the world.(在自然中度过时光帮助我们放松心灵,感受世界的宁静。)
写作指导
核心要求:围绕“神奇的自然”,需结合具体的自然景观或经历(如看到某种动物、游览某个景点、观察植物等),体现“神奇”之处;
时态:以一般现在时为主,描述经历用一般过去时;
结构:点明自然的神奇→具体描述→总结感悟(如保护自然)。
基础参考范文
Amazing Nature in My Hometown
The nature in my hometown is amazing. There is a small forest near my house, and there are many birds in it. The river in front of the village is clear, and I can see fish swimming in it. I like walking in the forest and listening to the birds sing. This amazing nature makes me happy.
培优参考范文
Amazing Nature: The Night Sky in the Countryside
Amazing nature always surprises me, and the night sky in the countryside is the most amazing thing I have ever seen. Last summer, I went to my uncle's village. At night, there were no bright lights, so the sky was full of stars. The stars were so bright that they looked like diamonds on a black cloth. I lay on the grass and watched the stars. My uncle told me stories about the constellations, and I felt like I was in a magical world. This amazing night sky made me realize how beautiful and wonderful nature is. We should protect the environment so that more people can see this amazing view.
写作模板
Amazing Nature I Have Seen
I have seen many amazing things in nature, and the most amazing one is ____________________(具体事物,如黄山的云海/大熊猫/春天的花海). When I saw it, I felt ____________________(感受,如震撼/惊喜/感动). It was ____________________(具体描述,如形态/颜色/声音). This amazing nature makes me realize that ____________________(感悟,如自然的神奇/需要保护自然). I hope I can see more amazing things in nature in the future.
Unit 6 Hitting the road
写作常用词汇
travel, journey, trip, road, destination, experience, adventure, explore, scenic, journey, trip, travel, road, destination, experience, adventure, explore, scenic, memorable
常用短语
hit the road, go on a trip, travel to, scenic spots, memorable journey, explore new places, travel experience
高分句子
1. Hitting the road is not just about reaching the destination, but about enjoying the beautiful scenery and meeting interesting people along the way.(上路不只是为了到达目的地,更是为了欣赏沿途的美景、遇见有趣的人。)
2. Every journey has its own story, and the experiences we get from hitting the road are the most precious treasures in our life.(每一段旅程都有自己的故事,我们从上路中获得的经历是人生中最珍贵的财富。)
3. Hitting the road to explore new places helps us broaden our horizons and understand different cultures.(上路探索新地方帮助我们开阔视野、了解不同的文化。)
写作指导
核心要求:围绕“上路(旅行)”,需结合具体的旅行经历(如去某个地方、遇到的人、看到的景、收获的感悟),体现“旅程的意义”;
时态:描述经历用一般过去时,总结感悟用一般现在时;
结构:点明旅行的契机→描述旅行过程→总结收获。
基础参考范文
Hitting the Road to Beijing
Last summer, I hit the road to Beijing with my parents. We visited the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. The Great Wall was very long and amazing. We took many photos and ate delicious food in Beijing. This trip was memorable, and I learned a lot about Chinese history.
培优参考范文
Hitting the Road: My Journey to Xiamen
Last month, I hit the road to Xiamen with my classmates, and it was the most memorable journey I have ever had. We took the train and arrived in Xiamen in the morning. The air was fresh, and the sea was blue. We walked along the beach, picked up shells and watched the sunrise. We also visited Gulangyu Island, where there were many old buildings and beautiful flowers. One day, we tried local seafood, and it was very delicious. This journey not only let me enjoy the beautiful scenery but also taught me to take care of myself and get along with others. Hitting the road to Xiamen was a wonderful experience, and I will never forget it.
写作模板
Hitting the Road to ____________________(具体地点,如西安/三亚/成都)
Last ____________________(时间,如暑假/寒假/五一假期), I hit the road to ____________________(具体地点) with ____________________(同行的人,如家人/朋友/同学). We ____________________(交通方式,如坐火车/坐飞机/坐大巴). During the trip, we visited ____________________(具体景点,如兵马俑/海边/宽窄巷子) and ____________________(做的事,如吃美食/看日出/买特产). The most memorable part was ____________________(最难忘的部分,如遇到的人/看到的景/经历的事). This trip taught me ____________________(收获,如独立/包容/珍惜友谊). Hitting the road to ____________________(具体地点) was a wonderful experience, and I hope I can travel to more places in the future.
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