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Unit11 Rules Matter! Reading for Writing
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Unit11 Rules Matter! Reading for Writing
课标要求
《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版)》七年级读写教学要求
1. 语言能力:
① 阅读范文Family Rules for a House Party,拆解四段式写作框架(标题-开头背景-主体因果-结尾感悟),完成分层信息图表;
② 自主绘制思维导图,选定写作主题、梳理起因、矛盾、新规、结果,起草完整记叙文;
③ 对照五维度作文评价量表完成自评、同桌互评,从因果逻辑、篇章结构、情态词汇、标点拼写四维度修改作文;
2. 思维品质:搭建「范文阅读拆解框架→思维导图自主构思写作→自评互评修改完善」闭环读写训练;熟练运用cause(起因)& effect(结果)逻辑串联全文,培养结构化叙事、辩证反思的写作思维;
3. 文化意识:范文围绕家庭聚会吵闹、房屋脏乱、父母制定家规展开,渗透“行为会带来对应后果、合理家规约束不良行为、培养自律品质”德育,引导学生理解家规的意义,自觉规范自身言行;
4. 学习能力:借助分层图表读懂英文记叙文标准写作结构;依托思维导图梳理写作完整线索;借助多维评价清单自主定位作文短板,掌握自评、互评、修改的完整写作学习方法。
学习目标
1. 知识目标
① 四段标准写作框架:Title → Beginning(事件背景) → Body(起因矛盾+新增家规,多层Cause) → End(行为改变+最终Effect/感悟)
② 范文完整原文: Family Rules for a House Party
My sister and I held a party at our house last weekend. The house was in a big mess after the party. Our parents got really angry and decided to make some new family rules.
First, there were a lot of dirty dishes left. From now on, we have to clean up the kitchen after every party. Second, a few of our friends moved our dad’s books. So now, we mustn’t play in his study. Last, we played really loud music, and it made our neighbors angry. The new rules say we can’t make too much noise.
We’re really sorry. We promise to follow the new rules and try our best not to break them.
③ Activity1 分层图表完整填空答案:
Title: Family Rules for a House Party
Beginning: My sister and I held a party at home, the house was messy, parents were angry and made new family rules.Body — Reasons for new rules(Causes):
1. Many dirty dishes were left after the party.
2. Friends moved father’s books in his study.
3. We played loud music and disturbed neighbors.End — Effects:We feel sorry and promise to follow all new family rules.
④ Activity2 三段写作模板(通用)
Title: Rules for ________
Firstly, ________________________________________
Secondly, ______________________________________
Lastly, ________________________________________
We think ______________________________________
⑤ Activity3 作文评价维度:
1. Cause & effect 因果逻辑表达;
2. 篇章结构完整;
3. must/mustn’t / should / shouldn’t 主题词汇运用;
4. 标点规范;
5. 单词拼写准确;
评级:1待改进 / 2合格 / 3良好 / 4优秀
2. 能力目标
① Activity1:读懂范文,完整填写四段式结构图表,分清多层起因与最终结果;
② Activity2:自主绘制写作思维导图,选定写作主题(家规/班规/公园规则),填充起因、矛盾、规则、感悟,完成作文草稿;
③ Activity3:逐条对照评价量表完成自评,交换作文同桌互评,标注错误并修改全文;
3. 素养目标:掌握因果叙事类英文记叙文写作结构,能清晰串联事件起因、行为、后果;理解家规、公共规则的价值,自觉约束自身行为,做到文明自律。
学习重难点
学习重点
1. 读懂范文,理清多层cause起因与effect结果,完整完成结构图表;
2. 会用Firstly/Secondly/Lastly分层列举多条规则,搭建标准四段作文框架;
3. 能对照评价清单自主查找作文拼写、语法、逻辑漏洞并修改。
学习难点
多层事件因果有序串联,逻辑不混乱;合理运用must/mustn’t/should/shouldn’t情态动词;作文段落过渡自然,感悟结尾贴合全文主题。
课前预习
1. 通读范文Family Rules for a House Party,圈出三件引发家规的不良行为;
2. 预习cause(起因)、effect(结果)两组核心名词;
3. 回忆一件因自身行为制定新规则的小事,简单梳理前因后果;
4. 预习Firstly/Secondly/Lastly分层连接词。
评价任务
1. 范文图表填写评价:Activity1标题、开头、主体三层起因、结尾结果全部填写完整,贴合原文,无信息遗漏,达标;
2. 写作思维导图+草稿评价:Activity2思维导图线索完整,作文四段结构清晰,分层连接词使用规范,达标;
3. 自评互评修改评价:Activity3完成星级自评、同桌互评,精准标注拼写、语法、逻辑三处以上问题并修改,达标。
教学过程
环节一:Reading for Writing读写板块导入(5分钟)
1. 板书主题 Making rules ,板书核心逻辑词 Cause & Effect;
2. 导入提问:What bad things will make parents make strict family rules? 引出三层读写任务:范文分层图表拆解→自主思维导图写作文→自评互评修改习作。
环节二:Activity1 阅读范文,完成四段式分层图表(10分钟·文本逻辑拆解,内嵌完整填空答案)图表框架:
Title
Family Rules for a House Party
Beginning
My sister and I held a party at home last weekend. The house was very messy, so our parents were angry and made new family rules.
Body (Causes / Reasons for new rules)
1. We left lots of dirty dishes after the party.
2. Our friends moved father’s books in his study.
3. We played loud music and made neighbors angry.
End (Effects)
We feel sorry for what we did. We promise to follow all the new family rules and won’t break them.
课堂操作:
1. 分段朗读范文,划分标题、开头、主体、结尾四部分;
2. 引导学生定位三件不良行为(三层cause),以及最后感悟承诺(effect);
3. 学生独立填写图表,教师逐栏核对答案,梳理完整事件因果链条。环节三:Activity2 绘制思维导图+起草作文(13分钟·写作构思实操,内嵌写作模板)
写作模板:
Title: Rules for ________
Firstly, ________________________________________
Secondly, ______________________________________
Lastly, ________________________________________
We think ______________________________________
课堂操作:
1. 示范思维导图要素:主题→起因矛盾→多条规则→结尾感悟;
2. 学生自主选定写作主题(family rules / class rules / park rules),填充思维导图;
3. 依托模板起草完整短文,要求使用Firstly/Secondly/Lastly分层,搭配must/mustn’t/should;教师巡视,指导学生串联cause & effect,补充过渡句,纠正情态动词使用错误。
环节四:Activity3 作文星级评价、自评互评修改(12分钟·写作完善输出)
评价五维度:
1. Can you express your view of rules and organize cause & effect?
2. Can you write a well-balanced article with clear structure?
3. Can you use must/mustn’t / should / shouldn’t correctly?
4. Can you use proper punctuation?
5. Can you spell all words correctly?
评级:1=Needs improvement 2=Satisfactory 3=Good 4=Excellent
课堂操作:
1. 逐条讲解评价标准,示范星级自评;
2. 同桌交换作文,互相打分,圈出拼写、语法、逻辑错误;
3. 学生结合自评、同桌点评修改全文,完善因果逻辑与结尾感悟;随机抽取两篇范文全班点评,示范修改方法。
环节五:课堂复盘+当堂微型写作小测(5分钟)
1. 知识点复盘:四段作文框架、三层cause事件、Firstly分层连接词、五维作文评价标准;
2. 当堂小测:口头复述范文三件起因与最终结果;用Firstly/Secondly写两条班规;
3. 课堂小结:写规则类记叙文要先写事件起因,分层列举规则,最后写出自身感悟;生活中各类规则都因不良行为产生,遵守规则才能营造和谐环境;4. 布置分层课后作业。
分层作业
基础必做:
1. 完整抄写范文全文、Activity1分层图表内容,朗读范文3遍;
2. 背诵Firstly/Secondly/Lastly分层句型,牢记must/mustn’t/should/shouldn’t用法;
提升选做:
1. 完善课堂作文,扩充至70词以上,补充一处cause & effect细节;
2. 仿写一组cause-effect句子,描写校园迟到带来的班规;
板书设计
Unit11 Rules Matter! Reading for Writing
一、Four-part essay structure:
Title → Beginning (background) → Body (causes) → End (effect & feelings)
二、Link words: Firstly, Secondly, Lastly
三、Key logic: Cause (bad behavior) → new rules → Effect (we promise to follow)
四、Modal verbs: must / mustn’t / should / shouldn’t
学后反思
1. 学生分不清多层cause先后顺序,课堂按原文时间顺序分层标注;
2. 作文缺少分层连接词,强制每篇至少使用Firstly/Secondly/Lastly;
3. 结尾感悟单薄,示范补充 “We learn that rules can keep everything in order” 升华句;
4. 当堂口头复述范文因果链条,快速检测逻辑掌握情况,叙事逻辑混乱学生拆分短句分步构思。
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