摘要:
该初中英语中考复习学案聚焦“劳动伴我成长”作文主题,系统整合中考英语写作核心考点,涵盖记叙文(劳动经历)和议论文(劳动意义与建议)两大题型,通过“原题分析-必背短语-支架写作-范文仿写-当堂任务”的递进式架构,引导学生借助填空式写作支架自主构建“点题-过程-收获”(记叙文)和“观点-建议-总结”(议论文)的写作框架。
亮点在于“精细化写作支架”和“分层训练设计”,如记叙文提供“劳动过程描述”“感受收获表达”等填空模板,议论文设置“家庭/学校建议”具体表述引导,培养语言能力和思维品质。学生通过范文填空仿写实现自主诊断,结合当堂写作任务强化输出,教师可依据学生支架完成情况定位薄弱环节,实现精准辅导,有效提升备考效率。
内容正文:
中考英语作文专项学案
主题:Labour Makes Me Grow 劳动伴我成长
班级________ 姓名________
一、中考作文原题(二选一)
请以 Labour Makes Me Grow 为题写一篇英语短文。
A. 记叙一次亲身劳动经历,描写劳动过程与个人成长收获
B. 谈谈中学生劳动的意义,并从家庭、学校写出具体建议
写作要求
1.词数90–110,三段式书写,语句通顺、逻辑清晰
2.禁止出现真实人名、校名
2.至少使用3个提示词
提示词:housework, independent, responsibility, develop skills, volunteer, suggestion,
share burden
二、必背高分短语
share housework 分担家务|develop life skills 培养生活技能form responsibility 培养责任感|become independent 变得独立benefit a lot from labour 从劳动中受益匪浅
三、精细化支架写作
题型A:劳动经历(记叙文)
结构:点题 → 具体劳动 → 过程感受 → 成长收获
Labour plays an important role in my growth. Last ________(周末/假期), I took time to do housework, such as ________(扫地拖地/整理房间/洗碗/洗自己的衣服) at home.
At first, I found the work a little ________(累人、繁琐的). I even wanted to stop. However, I ________(鼓励自己坚持下来)and finished all the work carefully. In the end, my house became ________(干净、整洁、温馨的). My parents were very satisfied with me.
This meaningful experience teaches me to ________(主动分担家庭家务). Gradually, I become more ________(独立的)and learn to take ________(责任)for my daily life. I truly ________(收获很多)from labour.
可直接填写的具体劳动(任选其一)
sweep and mop the floor 扫地拖地|tidy up my bedroom 整理房间do the dishes after dinner 饭后洗碗|wash my own clothes 清洗衣物
题型B:劳动观点+建议(议论文)
结构:现状引入 → 劳动价值 → 家庭具体建议 → 学校具体建议 → 总结升华
Nowadays, many students pay all their attention to studies and ________(很少)do labour/do some chores. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion, labour is very ________(有意义的). It can help us ________(培养基本生活技能)and build ________(责任感).
Here are my specific suggestions. At home, we should ________(日常主动做家务,如叠被子、洗碗、打扫房间)instead of letting parents do everything for us. At school, we should ________(打扫教室、校园种植、社区志愿劳动)to make our school more and more beautiful.
In a word/All in all, labour shapes our character and develop our life skills. Only through labour can we grow into ________(全面发展的)teenagers.
可直接填写的具体建议
家庭:make beds, do the dishes and clean rooms in free time学校:clean our classroom, gardening and volunteer activities 全面发展的:well-rounded
四、范文填空仿写(课堂训练)
范文A(劳动经历)
Labour _______________ (在…中发挥重要作用)in my growth. Last ________(周末), I tried to (整理房间) and (洗衣服) on my own.
At the beginning, I found the housework ________(累人的) and (甚至想停下来). But I never (放弃). After working hard, my room became ________(干净整洁的). My parents ________ (为我骄傲).
This experience teaches me to ________ (分担家务). Gradually, I become more ________(独立的)and (有责任心的). I really ________ (受益匪浅) labour.
范文B(观点建议)
Nowadays, most students only (关注学业) and ________ (很少劳动). , (我认为)labour is ________(有意义的). It helps us ________(培养生活技能) and ________ (形成责任感).
I have two practical ________(建议). At home, we can ________ (每天整理床铺、洗碗). At school, teachers can ________ (组织各类劳动实践活动)regularly.
Only through constant labour can we ________ (成长为全面发展的青少年).
五、当堂写作任务(二选一)
运用本课词汇与写作支架,独立完成90–110词作文,至少使用3个提示词。
1.我的一次劳动经历
2.我对中学生劳动的看法与建议
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