读后续写技能提升专项演练（六）-2027年高三英语二轮复习专题练习

**基本信息** 聚焦情感描写专项，通过典型情境（离别/雪崩）系统训练焦虑、恐惧等情感的词汇运用与句式表达，融合语言能力与思维品质提升。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |焦虑、担忧与绝望|1（陪伴的离别）|必用情感词汇（concerned/anxiety等）、动作链描写、形容词/过去分词短语作状语|以“离别”情境为载体，从情感词汇积累到高分句式运用，构建“词汇-句式-情感刻画”逻辑链| |恐惧、惊恐专项|1（雪山雪崩救援）|核心语块（send a chill down等）、无生命名词作主语、倒装句|以“雪崩”危机情境深化情感描写，进阶训练复杂句式（倒装/分词状语），实现情感表达的层次提升|

读后续写技能提升专项演练（六） 一、情感描写：焦虑、担忧与绝望 【陪伴的离别】 Since I was a little kid, a lovely golden dog named Lucky has been my closest companion. He accompanied me through every joyful and tough moment of my growth. He would greet me at the gate every time I returned home, wagging his tail wildly. When I felt upset or lonely, he would curl up beside me quietly, as if trying to comfort me with his warm body. For me, Lucky was never just a pet, but an indispensable part of my family and my childhood. However, as I entered senior high school, I was occupied with endless schoolwork. I gradually spent less and less time accompanying Lucky. Every day I hurried home for meals and rushed back to study, ignoring his eager eyes and gentle rubbing. My parents once told me Lucky was getting older and in poor health, but I turned a deaf ear to their words, too busy to care about his condition. One cold winter evening, I came home late as usual. The yard was deadly silent, without the familiar figure rushing towards me. A strange sense of unease crept over me. I searched every corner anxiously, but found nothing. My parents told me Lucky had been sick for days and refused to eat anything. I froze on the spot, filled with deep regret and panic. 续写要求 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答； 3. 紧扣情节，融入情感描写、动作链、分词状语、形容词短语状语等高分句式，贴合专题（九）所学技能。 核心考点对接： 1. 必用核心词汇 情感类：concerned, anxious, anxiety, helpless, despair 动作/叙事类：devote, urge, affect, damage 2. 必练高分句式 过去分词短语作状语、形容词短语作状语、动作链连贯描写、焦虑/绝望情感场景刻画 续写段落首句： Paragraph 1: Worried about Lucky’s fragile condition, I stayed by his side the whole night. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next morning, Lucky closed his eyes peacefully and left me forever. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、情感描写：恐惧、惊恐专项 【雪山雪崩失联救援】 To celebrate the warm and joyful Christmas holiday, John planned a romantic mountain trip with his beloved wife Maya. Tired of the busy and noisy urban life, they were eager to embrace the pure winter scenery in the remote snow mountain. Dressed in thick winter coats and equipped with simple hiking gear, they stepped into the vast white snowfield cheerfully. The whole mountain was covered with thick snow, silent and breathtaking. They wandered slowly along the quiet trail, laughing and taking photos, never intending to encounter any potential danger. Blinded by the beautiful snowy views, they unconsciously walked deeper and deeper into the unmarked mountain area. The sky was clear and the wind was gentle, making the trip extremely pleasant. However, without any warning, a deep, terrifying rumble suddenly echoed from the towering snow-capped peak. The ground began to shake slightly, and countless snow blocks started to roll down rapidly. Before the confused couple could calm down or make any escape reaction, a fierce and massive avalanche broke out violently, sweeping down towards them like furious, roaring beasts. 考点对接： 1. 必用核心词汇 send a chill down one’s spine、be overwhelmed by horror、palms sweating、knees trembling、throat tightened、break down 2. 必练高分句式 无生命名词作主语，分词短语作状语、形容词短语作状语、倒装句、焦虑/绝望情感场景刻画 续写要求 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答； 3. 紧扣情节，融入情感描写、动作链、分词状语、形容词短语状语等高分句式，贴合专题（十）所学技能。 Paragraph 1: A wave of overwhelming horror swept over John the instant the avalanche hit. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Just as he was sinking into despair, the rescue team arrived in time. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1.【陪伴的离别】 Paragraph 1： Worried about Lucky’s fragile condition, I stayed by his side the whole night. I gently stroked his dull golden fur, whispering all the words I had never told him before. Lying weakly on the ground, he no longer had the energy to wag his tail. Filled with anxiety and guilt, I regretted ignoring him for such a long time. The cold wind blowing through the window made me even more helpless, and my heart was torn with despair. I made up my mind to devote all my spare time to accompanying him, hoping to make up for my past carelessness. Paragraph 2： The next morning, Lucky closed his eyes peacefully and left me forever. I knelt beside him, overwhelmed by intense sorrow, and lowered my head in despair. The whole yard was empty and quiet, and no more warm greetings would welcome me home. His departure deeply affected me and taught me a precious lesson. From then on, I learned to cherish every warm companion around me. Though Lucky was gone, his loyalty and warmth would always highlight my childhood and stay in my heart forever. 范文亮点标注： 1. 形容词短语作状语：Worried about Lucky’s fragile condition / Filled with anxiety and guilt（复刻讲义经典句式） 2.过去分词短语作状语：overwhelmed by intense sorrow（绝望情感高分表达） 3.核心语块复用：lowered my head in despair, heart torn with despair, devote time to doing, affect me deeply 4.动作链描写：stroked, whispered, knelt, lowered head（连贯叙事，贴合教材动作佳句） 原文翻译： 从小到大，一只名叫Lucky的可爱金毛犬始终是我最亲密的伙伴。它陪伴我度过了成长路上每一个快乐与艰难的时刻：每次我回家时，它都会在门口迎接我，疯狂地摇着尾巴；当我感到沮丧或孤独时，它便会安静地蜷缩在我身旁，用温暖的身体试图安慰我。对我的而言，Lucky绝不仅仅是一只宠物，而是我家庭和童年生活中不可或缺的一部分。 然而，当我进入高中后，整天都被繁重的学业所占据，陪伴Lucky的时间越来越少。每天我匆匆回家吃饭，又立刻赶回去学习，完全忽视了他那双充满期待的眼睛以及他轻柔的抚摸。父母曾告诉我Lucky年纪渐长且健康状况不佳，但我对他们的劝告充耳不闻——实在太忙了，根本无暇顾及他的情况。 一个寒冷的冬夜，我像往常一样很晚才回到家。院子里死一般的寂静，熟悉的身影并未向我走来。一种莫名的不安感逐渐笼罩着我。我焦躁地搜遍了每个角落，却一无所获。父母告诉我，Lucky已经病了好几天，拒绝进食。我顿时僵在原地，心中充满深深的悔恨与恐慌。 2.【雪山雪崩失联救援】 Paragraph 1: A wave of overwhelming horror swept over John the instant the avalanche hit. Fear completely swallowed him, sending a chill down his spine. The roaring snow buried the surrounding scenery in a blink, tearing him apart from Maya in an instant. Extremely panicked, John froze on the spot, his palms sweating and his knees trembling violently. He shouted Maya’s name at the top of his lungs repeatedly, but no response came except the howling wind. So desperate did he feel that his throat tightened and tears blurred his vision. Overwhelmed by endless fear and helplessness, he collapsed on the snow, totally breaking down at the thought of losing his beloved wife forever. Paragraph 2: Just as he was sinking into despair, the rescue team arrived in time. Aware of the urgency of the situation, the rescuers searched the snow-covered area meticulously without delay. John dragged his exhausted body to follow them, his heart pounding wildly with every passing second. After a painful wait, they finally spotted Maya lying beside a big rock, slightly injured but still conscious. A surge of joy replaced his previous horror. The rescue team immediately sent the exhausted couple to the nearest hospital. Safe and sound at last, they held each other tightly, grateful for the narrow escape and cherishing their precious bond more than ever. 核心考点对接： 一、 必用核心词汇：send a chill down one’s spine、be overwhelmed by horror、palms sweating、knees trembling、throat tightened、break down 二、高级句式复刻 1. 无生命名词作主语：A wave of overwhelming horror swept over John / Fear completely swallowed him 2. 动词-ing短语作状语：sending a chill down his spine 3. 倒装句：So desperate did he feel that his throat tightened... 4. 形容词/短语作状语：Extremely panicked / Aware of the urgency of the situation 三、教材核心词汇 unique、intend、unfamiliar、aware、desperate、positive、negative 原文翻译： 为庆祝温馨喜庆的圣诞节，约翰与心爱的妻子玛雅计划了一次浪漫的山地之旅。厌倦了喧嚣繁忙的城市生活，他们渴望置身于偏远雪山纯净的冬日景致中。身着厚实的冬装、配备简易徒步装备后，两人愉快地踏上了广袤的雪原。整座山峰被厚厚的积雪覆盖，静谧得令人屏息。他们沿着幽静的小径缓缓漫步，边走边笑边拍照，完全未察觉可能存在的危险。被壮丽雪景吸引，两人不知不觉越走越深，深入这片无标记的山区。晴空万里、微风轻拂，旅途格外惬意。然而毫无征兆地，一声沉闷而恐怖的轰鸣从巍峨的雪山之巅传来。地面开始微微震动，无数雪块迅速滚落下来。就在这对困惑的情侣尚未缓过神来或采取任何逃生措施时，一场猛烈而巨大的雪崩突然爆发，如同狂暴的野兽般向他们袭来。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $