河南六升七衔接第8讲 英语短句及小作文写作特训2026-2027学年人教版英语七年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦六升七英语写作衔接，通过书写规范、时态训练及分层习题，实现从单词堆砌到50-60词连贯短文的过渡，适配暑期专项训练需求。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础巩固|15道句子改错|大小写、标点、时态、主谓一致|针对小学常见错误设计，强化书写规范| |能力提升|12道单句写作|三大基础时态、比较级、There be句型|结合中文提示，夯实完整句式表达| |培优拓展|8道小作文|逻辑连贯、连词使用、50-60词控制|对标七年级评分标准，提供三段式结构模板与范文|

人教版英语河南六升七衔接第8讲 英语短句及小作文写作特训 专项简介 本专题衔接小学零散单词式写作，对标七年级50-60词标准短文写作要求，重点规范大小写、标点符号，训练使用三大基础时态组织完整句子，杜绝单词堆砌、句式残缺等扣分问题，分层由短句过渡到完整小作文，适配河南六升七暑期衔接写作专项训练。 知识点总结 1. 书写规范：句子首字母大写，句末正确使用句号、问号，专有名词大写（星期、月份、人名、地名）； 2. 写作核心：使用一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时写完整通顺句子，杜绝零散单词堆砌； 3. 小学初中差异：小学写作仅简单罗列单词，初一要求连贯短文，词数控制50-60词，讲究逻辑连贯、时态统一，本讲提前规范初中写作标准。 写作步骤指导 一、审题三步法 1. 圈定时态：看题目中的时间标志词（last... → 过去时；every/often → 现在时；tomorrow/next → 将来时）。 2. 列出要点：在草稿纸上用中文或单词列出3-4个要点（谁、在哪儿、做什么、感受）。 3. 确定人称：看清题目要求用第一人称（I/We）还是第三人称（He/She）。 二、成文四步法 第1步：写草稿 —— 将要点扩展成完整句子，每句一个信息点 第2步：加连词 —— 在句间加上 then / and / but / because / so 等，使段落连贯 第3步：查时态 —— 全文圈出所有动词，检查是否统一 第4步：抄正稿 —— 检查大小写、标点后工整抄写 三、七年级写作评分标准（满分15分制） 维度:内容完整 分值： 5分 要求：覆盖题目所有要点，不跑题 维度:语言准确 分值： 5分 要求：时态统一、主谓一致、拼写正确 维度:逻辑连贯 分值： 3分 要求：使用连词，句与句之间有逻辑 维度:书写规范 分值： 2分 要求：大小写、标点、词数达标（50-60词） 三大时态判断方法与时间标志词 时态:一般现在时 时间标志词: every day/week, often, usually, always, sometimes 动词形式: 动词原形 / 三单加-s 时态:一般过去时 时间标志词: yesterday, last night/week/Sunday, ...ago, just now 动词形式: 动词过去式 时态:一般将来时 时间标志词: this weekend, tomorrow, next week/month, in the future 动词形式: will + 动词原形 / be going to + 动词原形 常见错误类型汇总与修改对照 错误类型：首字母小写 错误例句： i like english. 正确写法： I like English. 错误类型：句号/问号缺失 错误例句： What time is it 正确写法： What time is it? 错误类型：时态错误 错误例句： She go to school yesterday. 正确写法： She went to school yesterday. 错误类型：主谓不一致 错误例句： He play football every day. 正确写法： He plays football every day. 错误类型：名词单复数 错误例句： I have two apple. 正确写法： I have two apples. 错误类型：冠词错误 错误例句： There is a apple. 正确写法：There is an apple. 错误类型：比较级错误 错误例句： She is tall than me. 正确写法：She is taller than me. 错误类型：代词错误 错误例句： his book is my. 正确写法：This book is mine. 错误类型：动词搭配错误 错误例句： I like play football. 正确写法：I like playing football. / I like to play football. 错误类型：There be 就近一致 错误例句： There are some milk. 正确写法：There is some milk. 常用连词与段落结构训练 一、常用连接词 表顺序： first, then, next, after that, finally 表并列： and 表转折： but 表因果： because, so 表时间： when, while, before, after 二、小作文标准三段式结构 段落：开头（1-2句） 内容：引出主题 示例句：Last weekend, I had a wonderful time. Let me introduce my daily life. 段落：中间（3-4句） 内容： 展开细节（按时间或逻辑顺序） In the morning, I... / Then I... / After that, I... 段落：结尾（1句） 内容： 总结感受或评价 I felt very happy. / It was a great day. 写作句型模板库（按话题分类） 一、介绍人物 ... is my best friend. He/She is ... years old. He/She is taller/thinner/younger than me. He/She likes ...ing. We often ... together. 二、日常活动 I usually get up at ... After school, I ... On weekends, I often ... 三、过去经历 Last ..., I went to ... with ... We ...ed there. It was ... (fun/great/unforgettable). 四、未来计划 I am going to ... / I will ... tomorrow. First, I will ... Then, I will ... I think I will have a good time. 分层训练说明 基础巩固：15道句子改错，修正大小写、标点、时态错误； 能力提升：12道根据提示写完整单句，夯实基础句式； 培优拓展：8道写作话题，完成50-60词标准小作文。 分层习题训练 一、基础巩固（15道 划出错误并改正） 1. i go to park every sunday. ___________________________________________________________________ 2. what did you do last weekend ___________________________________________________________________ 3. she ride a horse yesterday. ___________________________________________________________________ 4. my shoes are bigger than you. ___________________________________________________________________ 5. there is a apple on the desk. ___________________________________________________________________ 6. tomorrow i will visit my grandma ___________________________________________________________________ 7. he often watch tv after school. ___________________________________________________________________ 8. did you went camping last saturday. ___________________________________________________________________ 9. this bag is my. ___________________________________________________________________ 10. i like play football with my friends. ___________________________________________________________________ 11. where did you go last holiday ___________________________________________________________________ 12. mike taller than tom. ___________________________________________________________________ 13. there are some water in the cup. ___________________________________________________________________ 14. i see a film last night. ___________________________________________________________________ 15. an elephant is heavy than a dog. ___________________________________________________________________ 二、能力提升（12道 根据中文提示写完整英文句子） 1. 我每天七点起床。 ___________________________________________________________________ 2. 昨天我和家人去了海滩。 ___________________________________________________________________ 3. 明天我将要去爬山。 ___________________________________________________________________ 4. 她的书包比我的重。 ___________________________________________________________________ 5. 桌子上有三支钢笔。 ___________________________________________________________________ 6. 上周末我看了一部电影。 ___________________________________________________________________ 7. 他经常放学后打篮球。 __________________________________________________________________ 8. 冰箱里有一些牛奶。 __________________________________________________________________ 9. 你昨天去钓鱼了吗？ ___________________________________________________________________ 10. 我想要去买一些礼物。 ___________________________________________________________________ 11. 我的妈妈比我高。 ___________________________________________________________________ 12. 上周六我们去野营了。 ___________________________________________________________________ 三、培优拓展（8个写作话题，写50-60词短文，时态统一、语句连贯） 写作要求：词数50-60词，书写规范，时态统一，不堆砌单词，分段通顺 1. My Last Weekend（一般过去时） 2. My Daily Life（一般现在时） 3. My Plan for Tomorrow（一般将来时） 4. My Best Friend（一般现在时，加入比较级） 5. My Last Summer Holiday（一般过去时） 6. My Weekend Plan（一般将来时） 7. My Favourite Animal（一般现在时） 8. A Happy Trip（一般过去时） 四、附加自测练习（供有余力者训练） 一、用所给词的适当形式填空 1. My sister __________ (go) to school on foot every day. 2. We __________ (visit) the zoo last Sunday. 3. Tom __________ (watch) a film tomorrow evening. 4. There __________ (be) two cups of tea on the table. 5. She __________ (have) a new bike. It is red. 6. I __________ (not / do) my homework yesterday. 7. He __________ (be) taller than his brother. 8. They __________ (play) football in the park now. 二、将下列单词连成完整句子（注意大小写和标点） 1. last / went / I / to / zoo / Sunday / the ___________________________________________________________________ 2. does / school / she / how / to / go ___________________________________________________________________ 3. tomorrow / will / we / swimming / go ___________________________________________________________________ 4. apples / there / on / are / some / the / table ___________________________________________________________________ 5. than / sister / my / is / younger / me ___________________________________________________________________ 参考答案与范文 使用说明： 本文档独立拆分，包含句子改错答案、单句仿写标准答案、8篇标准50-60词范文，标注写作扣分点：大小写、标点、时态、单词堆砌。 一、基础巩固 改错答案 1. i → I；park前加 the；sunday → Sunday（正确：I go to the park every Sunday.） 2. what → What；句末加 ?（正确：What did you do last weekend?） 3. ride → rode（正确：She rode a horse yesterday.） 4. you → yours（正确：My shoes are bigger than yours.） 5. a → an（正确：There is an apple on the desk.） 6. tomorrow 首字母大写 → Tomorrow；句末加 .（正确：Tomorrow I will visit my grandma.） 7. watch → watches（主语he为三单）（正确：He often watches TV after school.） 8. went → go（助动词did后用原形）；saturday → Saturday；句末用 ?（正确：Did you go camping last Saturday?） 9. my → mine（正确：This bag is mine.） 10. play → playing 或 to play（正确：I like playing football with my friends.） 11. where → Where；句末加 ?（正确：Where did you go last holiday?） 12. mike后加 is；taller前加 is（正确：Mike is taller than Tom.） 13. are → is（water不可数）（正确：There is some water in the cup.） 14. see → saw（last night为过去时）（正确：I saw a film last night.） 15. heavy → heavier（比较级）（正确：An elephant is heavier than a dog.） 二、能力提升 标准单句答案 1. I get up at seven every day. 2. I went to the beach with my family yesterday. 3. I will climb mountains tomorrow. / I am going to climb mountains tomorrow. 4. Her schoolbag is heavier than mine. 5. There are three pens on the desk. 6. I saw a film last weekend. 7. He often plays basketball after school. 8. There is some milk in the fridge. 9. Did you go fishing yesterday? 10. I want to buy some gifts. 11. My mother is taller than me. 12. We went camping last Saturday. 三、培优拓展 标准范文（50-60词） 范文1：My Last Weekend（一般过去时） Last weekend I had a good time. On Saturday morning, I went shopping with my mum. In the afternoon, I rode a bike in the park. On Sunday, I visited my grandparents. We ate delicious dinner together. I felt very happy last weekend. （词数：42，建议扩展至50词。扩展版：Last weekend I had a really good time. On Saturday morning, I went shopping with my mum and we bought some food. In the afternoon, I rode a bike in the park. It was fun. On Sunday, I visited my grandparents and we ate delicious dinner together. I felt very happy.） 范文2：My Daily Life（一般现在时） I get up at six thirty every morning. Then I have breakfast and go to school. I have six classes at school. After school, I play sports with my friends. In the evening, I read books and go to bed at nine. This is my daily life.（词数：48） 范文3：My Plan for Tomorrow（一般将来时） Tomorrow is Sunday. I will get up late. In the morning, I will read English books. At noon, I will have lunch with my family. In the afternoon, I will go to the zoo. I think I will have fun tomorrow. （词数：43） 范文4：My Best Friend（一般现在时，含比较级） Lucy is my best friend. She is twelve years old. She is thinner and taller than me. She likes reading books. We often go to school together after breakfast. I like playing with her every day. She is very kind.（词数：44） 范文5：My Last Summer Holiday（一般过去时） Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. We went there by train. We swam in the sea and ate fresh fruit. I took many nice photos. It was a wonderful trip for me. I want to go there again.（词数：44） 范文6：My Weekend Plan（一般将来时） I have a great plan for this weekend. On Saturday, I will finish my homework first. Then I will go fishing with my dad. On Sunday, I will watch a new film with my sister. I am sure it will be a nice weekend.（词数：43） 范文7：My Favourite Animal（一般现在时） My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white. It is fatter than many other animals. It likes eating bamboo. Pandas live in China. They are very cute. I often go to see pandas in the zoo on holidays.（词数：44） 范文8：A Happy Trip（一般过去时） Last holiday I took a trip to a small farm. I rode a horse and fed hens there. There were many trees and flowers. I bought small gifts for my friends. It was a happy and unforgettable trip. I enjoyed it very much.（词数：43） 四、附加自测练习 参考答案 一、用所给词的适当形式填空 1. goes 2. visited 3. will watch / is going to watch 4. are 5. has 6. didn't do 7. is 8. are playing 二、连词成句 1. I went to the zoo last Sunday. 2. How does she go to school? 3. We will go swimming tomorrow. 4. There are some apples on the table. 5. My sister is younger than me. 写作核心扣分要点总结 扣分项：大小写 说明：句首字母不大写、专有名词（I, Sunday, Beijing）不大写直接扣分 扣分项： 标点符号 说明： 句号/问号/感叹号缺失或误用，英语句号为.不是。 扣分项： 时态统一 说明： 全文时态混用（如过去时中混入现在时）扣分严重 扣分项： 主谓一致 说明： 三单主语（he/she/it）后动词忘加-s/-es 扣分项： 比较级形式 说明： 比较级变形错误（heavy→heavyier 误，应为 heavier） 扣分项： 助动词后动词形式 说明： did/will 后用了过去式或三单（应为原形） 扣分项： 单词堆砌 说明： 仅罗列单词或短语，无完整主谓宾结构 扣分项： 词数不足 说明： 少于45词或超过70词均会扣分 扣分项： 逻辑混乱 说明： 句子之间无连接词，跳跃性大 扣分项：名词单复数/冠词 说明： 可数名词单数前缺冠词，不可数名词误用复数 写作自查清单（考试前逐项核对） 1.每句首字母是否大写？ 2.句末标点是否正确（. / ? / !）？ 3.全文时态是否统一（检查所有动词）？ 4.三单主语后面的动词是否加 -s/-es？ 5.助动词（did/will/do/does）后面的动词是否用原形？ 6.比较级是否使用正确形式（-er / more）？ 7.There be 句型中 be 动词是否与后面名词单复数一致？ 8.专有名词（星期、月份、人名、地名）是否大写？ 9.词数是否在50-60词之间（可以数一数）？ 10.是否用了连词（and/but/then/because/so）让文章更连贯？ 核心词汇与句型回顾（按话题分类） 话题：周末活动 常用动词短语：went shopping, rode a bike, visited grandparents, played football, watched TV 常用形容词/副词： happy, fun, great, tired 话题：日常生活 常用动词短语： get up, have breakfast, go to school, do homework, go to bed 常用形容词/副词： early, late, usually, often 话题：假期旅行 常用动词短语： went to..., swam in the sea, took photos, ate seafood, bought gifts 常用形容词/副词： wonderful, delicious, beautiful 话题：人物介绍 常用动词短语： is ... years old, likes ..., is taller than, goes to school together 常用形容词/副词： kind, friendly, thin, tall 话题：未来计划 常用动词短语： will go, am going to, want to, plan to 常用形容词/副词： busy, nice, exciting 建议考前复习：大声朗读以上短语，并用每个短语口头造一个句子，强化动词过去式和不规则变化记忆（如 go→went, eat→ate, take→took, buy→bought）。 六升七衔接总结： 小学写作普遍存在单词零散、大小写标点混乱、时态混用问题，初一严格要求50-60词连贯短文，本讲从句子纠错、单句仿写过渡到完整作文，统一初中写作评分标准，解决书面表达主要扣分点。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $