读后续写（五大高级句式）——A Bowl of Noodles 课件-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“读后续写”题型，依据高考评价体系梳理了情节逻辑、情感表达、语言运用三大考查维度，通过文本分析明确续写中“情绪描写”“句式多样性”等高频考点，构建了从基础信息提取到高级句式运用的完整备考体系。 课件亮点在于“文本解构+句式激活+实战升格”策略，如以“A Bowl of Noodles”为案例，详解无灵主语、分词作状语等高分句式，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。结合学生易错作文示例，针对性突破“情感表达生硬”等问题，教师可借此开展精准训练，助力学生高效提升续写得分率。

Continuation Writing 语言储备(句式)激活 —以A Bowl of Noodles为例 By Cherry Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel(争吵)with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping(哭泣) sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding(责骂) from her mother. Having wandered(徘徊) aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand(摊位) for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes...but I don’t have money on me...” she replied. “That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today," said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?”, asked the man kindly. 原文再现 “Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!”, said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless(残忍的) compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb(呆滞的) with shock; she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted(感激的), but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 原文再现 Task1: read for basic information/plot Basic elements of a story who where when what why how I, mom, the seller the street, at home that night Stormed out of home-- no money-- treat noodles--decided to apologize quarreled with my mother apologize to Mom Task2: read for emotion 1. Beginning 2. Rising part 5. Ending 3. Climax 4. Falling part angry sad touched by the seller regretful grateful happy How to describe feelings of regret/shame? Task3: brainstorming (words→phrases→sentences) 对你“I”不完？ Students’ compositions Students’ compositions 话说三字半？ Students’ compositions Sentence pattern1: 无灵主语 (inanimate subject) A wave of joy and excitement swept over her，when she saw the strawberries. 2.当她看到草莓的时候，一种快乐和激动的感觉席卷了她。(sweep over) 1.当我听到这个好消息的那一刻,一种强烈的喜悦感涌上了我的心头。 (wash over) As/When sb did sth, 情绪名词+固定动词+sb Conclusion: . When I heard the good news, a strong sense of delight washed over me. Sentence pattern1: 无灵主语 (inanimate subject) a wave of/ a flush of 情绪名词 固定动词 seize 抓住 catch (过去式caught) wash over 涌上心头 surround 围绕着 take hold of 控制 come over 包围/支配 envelop 笼罩 overwhelm 使难以承受 tear...into pieces把...撕碎 sb +as/when sb do sth Sentence pattern2:分词作状语(v.-ing & v.-ed as adverbial) 1. I was feeling a strange sense of guilt. 2. I regret over what I had done. 3. I was filled with guilt. 4. I rushed out to apologize to Tom. I was feeling a strange sense of guilt, regretting over what I had done. Filled with guilt, I rushed out to apologize to Tom. Sentence pattern2:分词作状语(v.-ing & v.-ed as adverbial) Determined and inspired, he raised his head , looking at me with gratitude. 5. I was determined and inspired. 6. He raised his head. 7. He looked at me with gratitude. Relieved and delighted, David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude. 8. David felt relieved and delighted. 9. David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line. 10. David conveyed his happiness and gratitude. Sentence pattern3: 倒装句(Inversion) adj.＋ as/though sb.+ be 动词, 主语＋句子 1.尽管我很尴尬，我还是下定决心向妈妈道歉。 Extremely embarrassed as/though I was , I made up my mind to apologize. 2.尽管很紧张，彼得还是鼓起勇气走上了舞台。 Nervous though he was, Peter still plucked up courage and made his way to the stage. Conclusion:情绪形容词＋as/though sb. ＋ be动词，主语＋句子 Sentence pattern4: 强调句 It is/was+…+who/that+… 原句：But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Translation: 是家人的爱治愈所有的伤痛，使一个人重新变得完整。 It was the love of family that could heal all the wounds and make one whole again. Sentence pattern5: 定语从句 原句：The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. Translation: Jenny看着妈妈的眼睛，妈妈的眼里饱含着欣慰和爱。 Task4: read for theme In the long river of life, maternal love is like a gentle stream, silently nourishing the heart of every child. A mother’s love is the most precious gift that we can ever receive. It’s something that we always be grateful for and never take for granted. A mother’s love is like water, moistening things silently! Summary 参考答案 Para.1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she pushed the door open and entered the house, she found her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sank down onto the sofa. “Where could my mother be?” she wondered. “Was she still angry with me?” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks. 参考答案 Para.2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. “Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother's arms. “Mum, I'm so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently. With a bright light streaming through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling, they hugged together and too thrilled to say anything. Lavf57.62.100 vid:v0200fg10000cd41e4jc77u5326uqju0 $