暑假作业13 书信写作20篇（江苏省联考真题）（巩固培优）高一英语译林版

**基本信息** 20篇江苏联考真题书信写作专项，聚焦高一学生生活情境，强化实用表达与应试规范 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |情境应用|20篇（江苏多地阶段检测真题）|涵盖建议信、安慰信、咨询回复等高频类型，80-100词规范写作|以“问题解决”为主线，构建“情境理解-要点覆盖-得体表达”逻辑链，培养语言运用与思维品质|

西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 完成时间： 月日 今日打卡：口已完成 用时： min 自评勋章： 图恩罗图 暑假作业13书信写作20篇（江苏联考真题） 1.(2025高一上江苏常州阶段检测)假定你是高一新生李华，你的好友Peter发来邮件，询问你暑假 的活动，并想了解你对高中生活的感受。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1.假期中你做了什么有意义的事情： 2.你对新学校和新同学的印象； 3.你对未来高中学习的计划或期望。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How are you doing?I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life.As for me,everything is a new start. 2.(2025高一上·江苏南京阶段检测)假定你是中学生李华，你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张，发 邮件向你咨询如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的 2.分析与父母关系紧张的常见原因并提出建议 3.表达美好愿望 Dear Rebecca, 3.(2025高一上江苏镇江·阶段检测)假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mik发来邮件，说他因为学业繁重， 很少运动，最近总是感到疲惫和精力不足。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.向迈克表示安慰 2.针对他的问题，提出关于运动的建议。 1/10 西学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, 4.(2025高一上·江苏南京·阶段检测)近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节能型社会献一计”主题活动， 同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿，内容 包括： 1.不浪费粮食和纸张； 2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋： 3.节约用电、用水。 注意： 1.词数80左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇： 节能型社会：an energy-saving society 5.(2025高一上·江苏准安·阶段检测)假定你是李华，你的好友Jm进入高中后，学习压力增大，情绪 (ood)低落，难以适应高中生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他缓解压力，提升能力。内容包括： 1.表示理解： 2提出建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2/10 西学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 2请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, Yours truly, Li Hua 6.(2025高一上·江苏镇江阶段检测)假定你是李华，你的好友Tom最近身体较差总是感冒，经常缺课。 他写信告诉你他非常担心即将到来的考试。请你给Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示安慰；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, Yours, Li Hua 7.(2025高一上：江苏宿迁·阶段检测)假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给 该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下： 1.你对该杂志的看法；2提出你的建议。 参考以下词汇： 1.magazine杂志 2.learning materials学习材料 3.add an interactive part添加互动性的部分4.extended reading提高 5.set up a column设立一个专栏6.further improvement进一步提高 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, 3/10 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Yours, Li Hua 8.(2025高一上·江苏南京·阶段检测)假设你是晨光中学的李华，英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期 一周的交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Cis将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生 的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件： (1)你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）： (②)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容： (3)希望从中有何收获。 注意： (1)词数不少于100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯： (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Hua,a student at Chenguang High School Thank you for your time. Yours, LiHua 9.(2025高一上：江苏常州阶段检测)假如你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Jane的来信。她在信中说， 她刚进入高中，不能适应新的环境，不知如何去结交新的朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她写一封回信，回 信内容应包括如下要点： 1.向Jane表示理解和安慰 2.针对她的问题提出以下建议：（至少三点） (1)同学们遇到麻烦时，要去帮助他们 (2)放学后邀请同学们一起参加课外活动 (3)其他建议 3.表达美好祝愿 4/10 西学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jane, Yours truly Li Hua 10.(2025高一上·江苏镇江阶段检测)假如你是李华，你的朋友Robt因为琐事与父亲发生了争吵，好 几天没有说话。为此他感到非常苦恼，不知如何是好。请你表达安慰并提供建议。 注意：1.词数80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Robert, I'm sorry to hear that Yours, Li Hua 11.(2025高一上·江苏苏州阶段检测)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom将作为交换生来你校学 习，他担心未知的环境和生活。来信询问如何快速适应新的校园生活。请你给他写一封建议信。 注意：1.给出针对上述问题的建议（至少两点）。 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯： 3.词数80左右。 Dear Tom, 5/10 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Yours, Li Hua 12.(2025高一上·江苏苏州阶段检测)假定你是中学生李华，你的朋友Eic最近和父母关系紧张，发邮 件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1写信目的；2提出建议并说明理由：3.表达美好希望。 注意： 1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Eric, Yours, Li Hua 13,(2025高一上·江苏阶段检测)假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件，想知道你进入高中 后的生活情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.描述你高中生活的新变化（如课程、老师、朋友等）； 2.分享你遇到的一个挑战及你是如何应对的： 3.谈谈你对未来高中生活的期待。 注意：词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 14.(2025高一上·江苏苏州阶段检测)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chis在邮件中提到最近经 常因手机使用和父母争吵，请你就此情况给他回一封邮件。内容包括： (1)表示理解： (②)就合理使用手机提出建议。 6/10 西学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (②)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, Yours, Li Hua 15.(2025高一上江苏宿迁·阶段检测)假设你是报社编辑Cynthia,高一新生李华在进入高中后， 在学习上遇到困难，和父母的关系也变得紧张，故写信向你求助。请你写一封回信给予帮助。(80字左 右) 内容包括：1.表示安慰及写信目的： 2.提出具体建议及原因； 3.表达美好祝愿。 Dear Li Hua, Yours, Cynthia 16.(2025高一上·江苏扬州阶段检测)假定你是高一学生李华，你校即将举行以“How to Use the Internet Wisely”为主题的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1.网络的重要性： 2.如何合理使用网络。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 7/10 西学科网·上好课 www zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, 17.(2025高一上·江苏常州阶段检测)假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom刚上高中，感觉学习生活遇到 了很多挑战。他写信向你寻求建议，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1表示理解； 2给出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 要求：字数100字左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, Yours, Li Hua 18.(2025高一上·江苏常州阶段检测)假定你是李华，你最近收到了美国朋友Eic的来信，下学期他打 算来中国做交换生。但是，由于文化差异，他担心无法与中国同学友好相处，希望你能给他一些建议。请 你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。 内容包括： 1.表达理解； 2.提出建议（至少两条）。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80词左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Eric, 8/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Yours truly, Li Hua 19.(2025高一上·江苏南通阶段检测)假如你是李华，你在学校英语角的“心灵驿站”上看到同学张亮 的留言，他说刚跨进高中，对学习生活比较迷茫，请你从“制订学习目标”的角度给他写一封建议信，助 他走出困境，内容包括： 1.制订目标的必要性： 2.如何制订目标。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文相关。 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Zhang Liang. Yours, Li Hua 20.(2025高一上江苏常州·阶段检测)假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim最近因为沉迷于手机游戏被父 母没收手机，从而与父母发生争执，他写信向你抱怨此事。请你就此给他回信，劝他与父母和好。要点包 括： 1.给予安慰并指出Jim的错误： 2.给出建议（至少两条）。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, Yours, 9/10 函学科网·上好课 www.zxxk.com 上好每一堂课 Li Hua 10/10 完成时间： 月 日 今日打卡：☐ 已完成 用时： min 自评勋章： 暑假作业13 书信写作20篇（江苏联考真题） 1．（2025高一上·江苏常州·阶段检测）假定你是高一新生李华，你的好友 Peter 发来邮件，询问你暑假的活动，并想了解你对高中生活的感受。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1. 假期中你做了什么有意义的事情； 2. 你对新学校和新同学的印象； 3. 你对未来高中学习的计划或期望。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter， How are you doing? I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Dear Peter, How are you doing? I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start. This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, teaching English to primary school students. It was rewarding to see their progress. My new school has a beautiful campus with modern facilities, and my classmates are all friendly and hardworking. We’ve already formed study groups to help each other. For my high school plan, I aim to build a solid foundation in all subjects while developing my interest in physics. I also want to join the debate club to improve my critical thinking. What about your recent life? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes,   Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高一新生李华的身份，回复好友Peter关于暑假活动和高中生活感受的询问，需涵盖假期经历、对新环境的印象及未来学习规划。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 暑假：summer vacation → summer holiday 勤奋的：hardworking → diligent 提高：improve → enhance 期待：looking forward to → anticipate 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, teaching English to primary school students. 拓展句：This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, where I taught English to primary school students. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, teaching English to primary school students. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】For my high school plan, I aim to build a solid foundation in all subjects while developing my interest in physics. (运用了时间状语从句中的省略结构) 2．（2025高一上·江苏南京·阶段检测）假定你是中学生李华，你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你咨询如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的 2. 分析与父母关系紧张的常见原因并提出建议 3. 表达美好愿望 Dear Rebecca, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Rebecca, I’m writing to offer you some advice on improving your relationship with your parents. The reasons for the tension may be that you and your parents have distinct views on things, which often leads to disagreements. Besides, a lack of communication is also a factor. I suggest you actively talk with them, sharing what’s on your mind. What matters is that you should let them know you respect and love them, which can help build a closer bond. I sincerely hope you can resolve the issues and enjoy a harmonious relationship with your parents. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以中学生李华的身份，给朋友Rebecca回邮件，针对她与父母关系紧张的问题，说明写信目的、分析原因并提建议，最后表达美好愿望。 【详解】1.词汇积累 改善：improve → enhance 因素：factor → element 缺乏：lack → shortage 尊重：respect → esteem 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to offer you some advice on improving your relationship with your parents. 拓展句：I’m writing to offer you some advice, which is about improving your relationship with your parents. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reasons for the tension may be that you and your parents have distinct views on things, which often leads to disagreements.（运用了that引导的表语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】What matters is that you should let them know you respect and love them, which can help build a closer bond.（运用了what引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句） 3．（2025高一上·江苏镇江·阶段检测）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike发来邮件，说他因为学业繁重，很少运动， 最近总是感到疲惫和精力不足。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.向迈克表示安慰， 2. 针对他的问题，提出关于运动的建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mike, I am sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling tired and low on energy recently. I believe that a lack of physical activity might be a key reason. So, I’d like to offer some suggestions. To begin with, it is highly recommended that you should set aside at least 30 minutes a day for physical activities. In addition, you can start with some simple exercise, such as jogging, swimming or playing badminton. They can effectively refresh your mind and increase your energy level. Last but not least, it makes sense to join a sports club, which is a great way for you to stay motivated. I’ll be more than glad if these suggestions can be beneficial to you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mike回信，对他因学业繁重少运动而感到疲惫、精力不足表示安慰，并提出相关运动建议。 【详解】词汇积累 疲惫的：tired → exhausted 提供：offer → afford 留出（时间）：set aside → spare 提升：increase → boost 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In addition, you can start with some simple exercise, such as jogging, swimming or playing badminton. 拓展句：In addition, you can start with some simple exercise, which can include jogging, swimming or playing badminton. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】To begin with, it is highly recommended that you should set aside at least 30 minutes a day for physical activities.（运用了that连接的宾语从句和虚拟语气） 【高分句型 2】Last but not least, it makes sense to join a sports club, which is a great way for you to stay motivated.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 4．（2025高一上·江苏南京·阶段检测）近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节能型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿，内容包括： 1.不浪费粮食和纸张； 2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋； 3.节约用电、用水。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇： 节能型社会：an energy-saving society ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Our school recently launched an activity asking for ideas to build an energy-saving society. Students have put forward many practical suggestions. Some students advise that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper. Other students think it is advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Additionally, saving water and electricity is essential. In fact, there’s still quite a lot that we can easily do like taking buses or riding bicycles instead of driving cars. All of these will be definitely helpful to build an energy-saving society. Small efforts from everyone will make a big difference. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇文章向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿，介绍“为建设节能型社会献一计”主题活动上同学们提出的一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 发起：launch→initiate 提出：put forward→come up with 重要的：essential→vital 肯定：definitely→without doubt 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：All of these will be definitely helpful to build an energy-saving society. 拓展句：There is no doubt that all of these will be helpful to build an energy-saving society. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Some students advise that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】 In fact, there’s still quite a lot that we can easily do like taking buses or riding bicycles instead of driving cars.（运用了that引导的定语从句） 5．（2025高一上·江苏淮安·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你的好友Jim进入高中后，学习压力增大，情绪（mood）低落，难以适应高中生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他缓解压力，提升能力。内容包括： 1.表示理解； 2.提出建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I was sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling down due to the pressure of adjusting to high school. I understand that it can be challenging, but remember that you are not alone. First, try to actively engage in various school activities, such as clubs or sports teams. This will give you a chance to meet new friends. Secondly, it is crucial to develop good study habits. Maintaining a positive mindset and believing in your abilities will help you overcome obstacles. Lastly, don’t hesitate to seek help when facing difficulties. Keep striving for improvement, and with time and effort, things will get easier. If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to contact me. Yours truly, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复朋友Jim的来信，需向情绪低落的他表示理解，针对难以适应高中生活的问题，提出相应的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 低落的：down→downhearted, discouraged 适应：adjust to→adapt to, get used to 有挑战性的：challenging→demanding, taxing 参与：engage in→participate in, take part in 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：First, try to actively engage in various school activities, such as clubs or sports teams. This will give you a chance to meet new friends. 拓展句：First, try to actively engage in various school activities, such as clubs or sports teams, which will give you a chance to meet new friends. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I was sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling down due to the pressure of adjusting to high school. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句) 6．（2025高一上·江苏镇江·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你的好友Tom最近身体较差总是感冒，经常缺课。他写信告诉你他非常担心即将到来的考试。请你给Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议；3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Tom, I am sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well and often catch colds, which makes you miss many classes. It’s completely understandable to feel worried about the upcoming exams, but health should always be your priority. To help you, I would like to offer a few suggestions. First and foremost, maintaining a balanced diet, ensuring sufficient sleep and taking regular exercise are essential for building up your body. Additionally, of equal importance is a positive attitude, which will enable you to rise to the challenges. Last but not least, it is a good idea to turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help. I do hope the above advice will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your recovery and success in the exams! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给好友Tom写一封电子邮件，需首先安慰他，再就他的情况提出具体的建议，最后表达祝愿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 可以理解的：understandable → acceptable 即将到来的：upcoming → forthcoming, imminent 确保：ensure → guarantee, secure 充足的：sufficient → enough, adequate, ample 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Last but not least, it is a good idea to turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help. 拓展句：Last but not least, it is a good idea that you can turn to your teachers as well as classmates for help. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well and often catch colds, which makes you miss many classes. (运用了that引导宾语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Additionally, of equal importance is a positive attitude, which will enable you to rise to the challenges. (运用了完全倒装、which引导非限制性定语从句) 7．（2025高一上·江苏宿迁·阶段检测）假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下： 1.你对该杂志的看法；2.提出你的建议。 参考以下词汇： 1. magazine 杂志        2. learning materials 学习材料 3. add an interactive part 添加互动性的部分    4. extended reading 提高 5. set up a column 设立一个专栏    6. further improvement 进一步提高 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, your regular reader. Your magazine is truly wonderful, as it provides various valuable learning materials and interesting articles, and helps me a lot with my English study. To make further improvement, I’d like to share the following suggestions. Personally, it would get better to cover some extended reading related to our textbooks, which will surely assist us to be better equipped for our English studies. What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently. I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your magazine will become even more popular. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一封建议信。要求以李华的身份给某英语学习杂志编辑部写邮件，表达对杂志的看法并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 有价值的：valuable → precious 帮助：help → assist 建议：suggestion → recommendation 希望：hope → desire 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your magazine will become even more popular. 拓展句：It is my earnest expectation that my proposals shall be embraced by your editorial team, thereby enhancing the widespread influence and readership of your distinguished publication. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To make further improvement, I’d like to share the following suggestions.（使用了动词不定式短语做目的状语） 【高分句型2】What is equally necessary is to set up a column sharing study experience from top students and add an interactive section to help us communicate more efficiently.（使用了连接代词what引导的主语从句） 8．（2025高一上·江苏南京·阶段检测）假设你是晨光中学的李华，英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件： (1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)； (2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； (3)希望从中有何收获。 注意： (1)词数不少于100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, a student at Chenguang High School. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, a student at Chenguang High School. As far as I am concerned, a lecture about western art will be given in the coming one-week exchange activity. I’m writing to give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture. As a music lover, I’m greatly fond of classic music. Therefore, I would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced. I believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art. Last but not least, I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and wish you a wonderful trip to our school. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Hua One possible version Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, a student at Chenguang High School. I’m excited to hear about your upcoming lecture on Western art and would like to share my thoughts on the topic. I particularly hope you will focus on art, which has always been an attractive subject for me. Art is a powerful way to understand different cultures, and I’m interested in learning about famous Western artists like Van Gogh and da Vinci, as well as the stories behind their masterpieces such as Starry Night and Mona Lisa. I’d love to know more about their creative stories and experiences. I’m also curious about how Western art differs from traditional Chinese art, like ink painting, in terms of techniques and expressions. I hope this lecture will help me gain a deeper understanding of Western art history. It would also be wonderful to hear about your own experiences with art, as your opinions could encourage us to explore our creativity. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Hua One possible version Dear Chris, I’m Li Hua, a student at Chenguang High School. Thank you for coming to our school. I am very excited about your lecture on Western art. I hope you can talk about Western dance. I choose this topic because dance is a beautiful way to express culture and feelings. It helps us understand different traditions and stories. I especially want to learn about classical ballet and modern dance, such as how dancers use movements and music to show joy, sadness, or hope. Also, I wish to know how dance styles changed over time in the West. Through your lecture, I want to discover how dance connects people across cultures. This will help me appreciate Western art more deeply. I also hope to feel inspired to explore dance as part of my own life. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写邮件，就其关于西方艺术的讲座内容提出自己喜欢的话题、选择原因、感兴趣的内容以及希望从中收获什么。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 就我而言：as far as I am concerned → in my opinion 非常喜欢：be very fond of → be crazy about 起源：origin → beginning 建议：suggestion → proposal/advice 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture. 拓展句：I’m writing in order that I can give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Last but not least, I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and wish you a wonderful trip to our school. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句) 9．（2025高一上·江苏常州·阶段检测）假如你是李华，最近收到了你的朋友Jane的来信。她在信中说，她刚进入高中，不能适应新的环境，不知如何去结交新的朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给她写一封回信，回信内容应包括如下要点： 1. 向Jane表示理解和安慰 2. 针对她的问题提出以下建议：（至少三点） （1）同学们遇到麻烦时，要去帮助他们 （2）放学后邀请同学们一起参加课外活动 （3）其他建议 3. 表达美好祝愿 注意：词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jane, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jane, I am really sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school. I’d like to give you some suggestions. In fact, your classmates are also new students and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation. Firstly, help your classmates when they are in trouble. Then, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some after-class activities together, which will help you understand each other better. Finally, communicate with your classmates about your life and study now and then. I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there. Yours truly, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给朋友Jane回信，就她的遇到的困难表示安慰并提供一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 进入高中：enter  high school→ attend high school 参与：take part in → participate in 面临：face→ confront 交流：communicate → exchange 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：In fact, your classmates are also new students and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. 拓展句：In fact, it is because your classmates are also new students and facing the same problem that you don’t have to worry too much about it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am really sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school.（运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 Then, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some after class activities together, which will help you understand each other better. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 10．（2025高一上·江苏镇江·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你的朋友Robert因为琐事与父亲发生了争吵，好几天没有说话。为此他感到非常苦恼，不知如何是好。请你表达安慰并提供建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Robert, I’m sorry to hear that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Robert,     I’m sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and that you two haven’t spoken for days. It’s tough to be caught in such silence, especially with someone so close.     Arguments over trivial things happen to every family. I’m sure your father is feeling upset too — perhaps even waiting for a chance to reconnect. Why not take that first step? You could offer a sincere apology when the moment feels right. A small gesture, like making him a cup of tea, could also gently open the door to talking again.     I’m certain he’ll meet your kindness with forgiveness. With patience and courage, you two will soon bridge the distance and grow even closer.                                                                                                                                                             Yours,                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向因与父亲争吵而苦恼的朋友表达安慰并提供解决问题的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 争吵，分歧：quarrel → argument/ disagreement/ dispute 苦恼的，心烦的：upset → distressed 重建联系，消除隔阂：reconnect → bridge the distance/ gap 真诚的，由衷的：sincere → genuine/ heartfelt 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Why not take that first step? 拓展句：Why don’t you consider taking that first step when you think the time is appropriate? 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and that you two haven’t spoken for days. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】It’s tough to be caught in such silence, especially with someone so close. (运用了it作形式主语) 11．（2025高一上·江苏苏州·阶段检测）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom将作为交换生来你校学习，他担心未知的环境和生活。来信询问如何快速适应新的校园生活。请你给他写一封建议信。 注意： 1.给出针对上述问题的建议（至少两点）。 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.词数80左右。 Dear Tom, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I’m excited to hear you’re coming! Don’t worry about the new environment. Here are some tips to help you settle in quickly. First, actively participate in campus activities and clubs. This is a great way to meet people who share your interests and learn about school life. Don’t be shy! Second, find a “buddy” or partner, perhaps a friendly classmate. They can show you around, help with daily routines, and answer your questions. This makes everything less overwhelming. Remember that I’m always here for you too! Looking forward to your arrival. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom写一封建议信，就他询问如何快速适应新的校园生活提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：tip→suggestion 参加：participate in→take part in 担心：worry about→be concerned about 记住：remember→keep in mind 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Here are some tips to help you settle in quickly. 拓展句：Here are some tips that can help you settle in quickly. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This is a great way to meet people who share your interests and learn about school life.（运用了who引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】Remember that I’m always here for you too!（运用了that引导宾语从句） 12．（2025高一上·江苏苏州·阶段检测）假定你是中学生李华，你的朋友Eric最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的；2.提出建议并说明理由；3.表达美好希望。 注意： 1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Eric, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Eric, I’m sorry to hear that you have a tense relationship with your parents. Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, communicate with them more. Let them know your thoughts and feelings. Secondly, try to understand their perspective. They may have different concerns and expectations. Finally, show your appreciation and love for them. Do something nice for them, such as cooking a meal or giving them a hug. I hope these suggestions can help you improve your relationship with your parents. Remember, family is the most important thing in life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Eric回复邮件，就如何改善与父母的关系提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 紧张的：tense → strained 建议：suggestion → advice 理解：understand → comprehend 感激：appreciation → gratitude 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Firstly, communicate with them more. Let them know your thoughts and feelings. 拓展句：Firstly, communicate with them more, which can let them know your thoughts and feelings. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you have a tense relationship with your parents. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] I hope these suggestions can help you improve your relationship with your parents. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句) 13．（2025高一上·江苏·阶段检测）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom给你发来邮件，想知道你进入高中后的生活情况。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 描述你高中生活的新变化（如课程、老师、朋友等）； 2. 分享你遇到的一个挑战及你是如何应对的； 3. 谈谈你对未来高中生活的期待。 注意：词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Dear Tom, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you about my new life in senior high school. Life here is quite different. We have more subjects and the teachers encourage us to be independent. I’ve also made some new friends. However, I faced a challenge too. I found it hard to balance study and club activities. To solve this, I made a detailed schedule and stuck to it. Now I feel less anxious. I believe the next three years will be challenging but wonderful. I hope to learn more and make lasting memories. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求作者给英国笔友Tom写信分享自己在高中的新生活。 【详解】1.词汇积累 困难的：hard →tough 鼓励：encourage→motivate 独立的：independent→self-reliant 平衡：balance→equilibrate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’ve also made some new friends. 拓展句：I’ve also made some new friends who share the same interests with me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I found it hard to balance study and club activities.（运用了it做形式宾语） 【高分句型2】I believe the next three years will be challenging but wonderful.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句） 14．（2025高一上·江苏苏州·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris在邮件中提到最近经常因手机使用和父母争吵，请你就此情况给他回一封邮件。内容包括： (1)表示理解； (2)就合理使用手机提出建议。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Sample writing: Dear Chris, I’m sorry to hear that you are having arguments with your parents about your phone use. I totally understand why you feel upset—it’s a common problem for many of us. Here are some practical suggestions. First, you could make a simple plan for your phone time, like using it for only 30 minutes after finishing homework. This shows your parents you can manage your time well. Also, it might help if you talk to them calmly. You’d better explain that you need your phone to relax and stay connected with friends, but also let them know you understand their worries. Finally, you could suggest a family rule, such as no phones at the dinner table. I believe that by showing your responsibility and willingness to communicate, things will get better soon. Yours, LI Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Chris回邮件，针对Chris最近经常因手机使用和父母争吵的情况，表示理解并就合理使用手机提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 争执：arguments → disagreements 完全地：totally → completely 平静地：calmly → peacefully 担心：worry → concern 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Finally, you could suggest a family rule, such as no phones at the dinner table. 拓展句：Finally, you could suggest that they should set a family rule, such as no phones at the dinner table. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you are having arguments with your parents about your phone use.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Also, it might help if you talk to them calmly.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 15．（2025高一上·江苏宿迁·阶段检测）假设你是报社编辑Cynthia，高一新生李华在进入高中后，在学习上遇到困难，和父母的关系也变得紧张，故写信向你求助。请你写一封回信给予帮助。（80字左右） 内容包括：  1. 表示安慰及写信目的； 2. 提出具体建议及原因； 3. 表达美好祝愿。 Dear Li Hua, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Cynthia 【答案】Dear Li Hua,      I’m sorry to hear about your struggles you have met after entering the high school. As an editor, I’d like to offer some advice.      Firstly, create a study plan to manage time efficiently, which can help you to reduce stress. Secondly, talk openly with your parents about your feelings and they’ll understand if you explain calmly. Finally, join school clubs to make friends and you can gain support from them. High school challenges are normal, and things will improve, so don’t worry too much.      Wish you confidence and happiness! Yours, Cynthia 【导语】本篇书面表达属于慰问信。要求考生给高一新生李华回信，就他在求助信中提到的进入高中后所遇到的学习和与父母关系问题上的困难，表示安慰，说明写信目的、提出具体建议及原因，并表达美好祝愿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 提供：offer→provide 高效地、有效地：efficiently→effectively 减少：reduce→decrease 获得：gain→attain 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句： I’m sorry to hear about your struggles you have met after entering the high school. 拓展句： I’m sorry to hear about your struggles you have met after you entered the high school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Firstly, create a study plan to manage time efficiently, which can help you to reduce stress.（运用了以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 【高分句型2】Secondly, talk openly with your parents about your feelings and they’ll understand if you explain calmly. （运用了以连词if引导的条件状语从句。） 16．（2025高一上·江苏扬州·阶段检测）假定你是高一学生李华，你校即将举行以“How to Use the Internet Wisely”为主题的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1.网络的重要性； 2.如何合理使用网络。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear fellow students, Good morning. I’m Li Hua, a 10th-grade student. I’m greatly honored to deliver a speech themed “How to Use the Internet Wisely”. The Internet contains a huge amount of information, which is extensive and relatively easy to access. It provides us with an excellent resource to gain knowledge. While the Internet is beneficial, it is essential to use it wisely. To begin with, you’re supposed to use it for research and skill development, not just entertainment. Next, it is recommended to limit your screen time, taking breaks once in a while. Last but not least, you should ensure the safety of the websites you visit. Have fun with the Internet. Thank you for your listening. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高一学生李华的身份，写一篇以“如何明智地使用互联网”为主题的演讲稿参赛，需涵盖网络的重要性及如何合理使用网络。 【详解】1.词汇积累 巨大的：huge → enormous 明智地：wisely → sensibly 建议：recommend → suggest 确保：ensure → guarantee 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m greatly honored to deliver a speech themed “How to Use the Internet Wisely”. 拓展句：I’m greatly honored to deliver a speech, whose theme is “How to Use the Internet Wisely”. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The Internet contains a huge amount of information, which is extensive and relatively easy to access.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】While the Internet is beneficial, it is essential to use it wisely.（运用了While引导的让步状语从句） 17．（2025高一上·江苏常州·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中，感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战。他写信向你寻求建议，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1.表示理解; 2.给出建议; 3.表达祝愿。 要求：字数100字左右，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom,     I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about the challenges in your high school life, and you don't know how to deal with them. However, I want you to know that it’s completely normal to feel this way. Here are some suggestions for you.     Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. This will help you make new friends and have fun experiences. Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge. I know it might be difficult right now, but I believe you have the strength to overcome this.     Keep your head up and remember that things can always get better. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中，感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战并向你寻求建议，写一封回信表示理解，提出你的建议并表达祝愿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 焦虑的：worried → anxious 然而：however → nevertheless 建议：suggest → advise/propose 困难的：difficult → tough 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge. 拓展句：Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time so that you can give yourself enough time to rest and recharge. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about the challenges in your high school life. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气) 18．（2025高一上·江苏常州·阶段检测）假定你是李华，你最近收到了美国朋友Eric的来信，下学期他打算来中国做交换生。但是，由于文化差异，他担心无法与中国同学友好相处，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 表达理解； 2. 提出建议（至少两条）。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Eric, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear from you. It’s normal for you to worry about the cultural differences and how to get along with your Chinese classmates. Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, take the initiative to communicate with your classmates. Chinese people are friendly and they are willing to make friends with foreigners. Secondly, learn some basic Chinese words and phrases. This will help you communicate with your classmates better. Lastly, try to understand and respect the Chinese culture, which will help you to blend in with the Chinese society. Looking forward to your coming to China.                                                                     Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Eric写一封信，就他提出的问题给出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 建议：suggestion→advice 首先：firstly→to begin with 帮助：help→assist 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Secondly, learn some basic Chinese words and phrases. This will help you communicate with your classmates better. 拓展句：Secondly, learn some basic Chinese words and phrases, which will help you communicate with your classmates better. 【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s normal for you to worry about the cultural differences and how to get along with your Chinese classmates.（运用了It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语，“疑问词+动词不定式”结构”作宾语） [高分句型2] Lastly, try to understand and respect the Chinese culture, which will help you to blend in with the Chinese society.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 19．（2025高一上·江苏南通·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你在学校英语角的“心灵驿站”上看到同学张亮的留言，他说刚跨进高中，对学习生活比较迷茫，请你从“制订学习目标”的角度给他写一封建议信，助他走出困境，内容包括： 1. 制订目标的必要性： 2. 如何制订目标。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右： 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文相关。 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Zhang Liang. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Zhang Liang, After reading your message at the “Soul Station”, where you expressed your confusion about high school, I wanted to share with you the importance of setting learning goals. Setting goals can provide clarity and direction to your studies, helping you stay focused and motivated. Make sure they’re specific and realistic, such as aiming to improve a subject score by a certain amount. By breaking these goals into smaller, achievable tasks and celebrating your progress, you’ll create a sense of achievement and determination. Remember, high school is a marathon, not a sprint. Keep pushing forward with your goals, and don’t hesitate to reach out if you need help. I’m here for you. Stay positive, and you’ll find your way through this journey. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你在学校英语角的“心灵驿站”上看到同学张亮的留言，他说刚跨进高中，对学习生活比较迷茫，要求考生从“制订学习目标”的角度给他写一封建议信，助他走出困境。 【详解】1.词汇积累 困惑：confusion→puzzlement 重要性：importance → significance 精神集中的：focused→concentrated 积极的：positive→ active 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Setting goals can provide clarity and direction to your studies, helping you stay focused and motivated. 拓展句：Setting goals can provide clarity and direction to your studies, which can also help you stay focused and motivated. 【点睛】【高分句型1】After reading your message at the “Soul Station”, where you expressed your confusion about high school, I wanted to share with you the importance of setting leaning goals.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Setting goals can provide clarity and direction to your studies, helping you stay focused and motivated.（运用了现在分词作状语） 20．（2025高一上·江苏常州·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim最近因为沉迷于手机游戏被父母没收手机，从而与父母发生争执，他写信向你抱怨此事。请你就此给他回信，劝他与父母和好。要点包括： 1. 给予安慰并指出Jim的错误； 2. 给出建议(至少两条)。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jim, I’m sorry to hear you are upset about the argument between you and your parents. To be honest, this time it is your fault for being so obsessed with the mobile-phone. Attractive as mobile phones are, they do cost you too much time and energy, which does harm to your health and study. Thus, it is advisable to focus more on study and reduce the time spent on the mobile phone. Besides, having an honest communication calmly can help you to improve the relationship between you and your parents. I sincerely hope that you can go through this and enjoy your high school life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给沉迷于手机游戏的美国朋友Jim回一封信，劝他与父母和好。 【详解】1.词汇积累 不安的：upset→troubled/confused 集中于：focus on→concentrate on/fix on 此外：besides→ what’s more /furthermore/in addition 提高：improve→enhance/boost/raise 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m sorry to hear you are upset about the argument between you and your parents. 拓展句：Hearing you are upset about the argument between you and your parents, I am sorry. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Attractive as mobile phones are, they do cost you too much time and energy, which does harm to your health and study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。) 【高分句型2】Thus, it is advisable to focus more on study and reduce the time spent on the mobile phone. (运用了it作形式主语，to do为真正的主语以及过去分词作后置定语。) 1 / 5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $