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外研版七年级下册Unit 1-Unit 6作文提分秘籍
Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
写作要求
短文 What Makes Me Happy(80–110 词)
要点:1. 两件让你感到幸福的小事;
2. 解释为什么这些事带给你快乐;
3. 你的感悟:幸福藏在日常小事里
核心语法:一般现在时、一般过去时、并列连词 and/but
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What Makes Me Happy
Many little things bring me happiness. First, staying with my family makes me warm. We talk and watch movies together every evening. Second, helping my classmates with study brings me joy. When they solve problems, I feel proud. Happiness does not come from expensive things. It hides in small warm moments around us. I will cherish these simple happy days every day.
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What Makes Me Happy
In my opinion, happiness lies in ordinary little moments in daily life. Spending quiet time with my family always fills my heart with warmth. We share stories over dinner and encourage each other when we meet trouble. Besides, giving others a hand also brings me great pleasure. Whenever my classmates meet difficulties in English, I try my best to help them. True happiness has nothing to do with wealth. It is these gentle small moments that make my life bright and meaningful.
Unit 2 Go for it!
写作要求
短文 Never Give Up(写一次你克服困难的经历,80–110 词)
要点:1. 遇到的困难;
2. 你如何坚持努力;
3. 收获与感悟
核心语法:一般过去时、转折连词 though/however
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Never Give Up
Last term, I was bad at running. I always fell behind in PE class and wanted to give up. My PE teacher told me to keep practicing. I ran for 20 minutes every morning. Day by day, I became faster. At the sports meeting, I finished the race successfully. This experience teaches me: if you keep trying, you will make progress. Never give up when facing difficulties.
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Never Give Up
I once met a big challenge in long-distance running last term. I ran slowly and always finished last, so I felt upset and planned to stop practicing. My PE teacher encouraged me not to lose heart. From then on, I kept running every morning after school, even on cold days. Slowly, my speed improved a lot. Finally, I finished the running race well in the school sports meeting. This experience leaves me a deep lesson: as long as you stick to your goal, you will beat all difficulties.
Unit 3 Food matters
写作要求
短文 My Favorite Food & Healthy Eating(80–110 词)
要点:1. 你最爱的一道食物;
2. 简单介绍它的味道与来历;
3. 谈谈健康饮食习惯
核心语法:可数 / 不可数名词、提建议句型
基础范文
My Favorite Food and Healthy Eating
My favorite food is tomato and egg noodles. My mom cooks it for me every weekend. It tastes fresh and warm. I know healthy eating is important. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. Too much junk food is bad for our bodies. We need three regular meals every day. I will keep good eating habits to stay strong and healthy.
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My Favorite Food and Healthy Eating
Among all food, tomato and egg noodles are my favourite. It is a simple home-cooked dish made by my mother every weekend. The sweet tomatoes mix well with soft eggs, bringing me full warmth. However, delicious food is not enough. We need to form healthy eating habits. We should take plenty of vegetables and fruit and stay away from junk food. Regular meals help us keep fit and full of energy for study.
Unit 4 The art of having fun
写作要求
短文 My Best Way to Relax(80–110 词)
要点:1. 你的休闲爱好;
2. 什么时候会做这件事;
3. 这项爱好带给你的放松与收获
核心语法:动名词作主语、情态动词
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My Best Way to Relax
Reading is my best way to relax. When I finish my homework on weekends, I read storybooks in my room. Reading takes me to different wonderful worlds. It helps me forget tiredness after school. I also learn many new words from books. I think everyone needs a good hobby to relax and enjoy free time.
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My Best Way to Relax
Reading is the perfect way for me to relax myself after busy school days. Whenever I finish all school tasks on weekends, I will sit by the window and read different kinds of storybooks quietly. Reading carries me to various amazing worlds and washes away my tiredness. Besides, it enriches my knowledge and improves my writing skills. It is necessary for us to own a suitable hobby to balance study and rest.
Unit 5 Amazing nature
写作要求
短文 Protect Our Beautiful Nature(80–110 词)
要点:1. 大自然的美好;
2. 现在自然面临的问题;
3. 我们能做哪些小事保护环境
核心语法:there be 句型、情态动词表建议
基础范文
Protect Our Beautiful Nature
Nature is full of beauty. We have green trees, clear rivers and lovely wild animals. Now pollution breaks our nature. Rubbish and dirty water hurt plants and animals. We should do something to change it. We can save water, plant more trees and pick up rubbish outside. Small actions can protect our amazing nature.
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Protect Our Beautiful Nature
Nature offers us amazing views: green forests, clean rivers and all kinds of lively animals make our world wonderful. However, serious pollution is destroying our environment. Dirty water and waste rubbish harm wildlife and break the balance of nature. It’s time for us to take action. We can save water in daily life, plant more trees and stop throwing rubbish everywhere. Small efforts together will guard our beautiful natural world.
Unit 6 Hitting the road
写作要求
书信:给笔友介绍一次你的短途旅行 My Happy Trip(80–110 词)
要点:1. 旅行地点、同行人;
2. 途中做了什么;
3. 旅行感受
核心语法:一般过去时、出行类短语
基础范文
Dear Tom,
Last Sunday I went to a mountain park with my parents. We took the bus there. We climbed mountains, watched beautiful flowers and took many photos. We also had nice lunch near the lake. The air was fresh and quiet. I had a wonderful time on this trip. Travelling lets me enjoy great nature and relax myself.
Hope you can come and visit here one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
高分范文
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to share my unforgettable short trip with you. Last Sunday, I visited a mountain park together with my parents by bus. We climbed green hills, enjoyed colourful wild flowers and took lots of photos. At noon, we had delicious local food by the clear lake. The fresh air made us relaxed completely. This trip brought me great joy. Travelling not only lets me admire amazing natural views but also gives me a chance to stay with my family.
Wish you can travel here soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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