专题 04 分话题书面表达与仿写（期末专项复习）-2025-2026学年英语七年级下册（新教材外研版）

**基本信息** 以“分层训练+方法迁移”构建书面表达突破体系，融合话题素材积累、文体框架掌握与语言规范提升，适配期末评分标准。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |通用方法|写作四步法+提分技巧|审题立意→列提纲→动笔写作→检查修改；词汇替换、长短句结合、衔接词运用|从通用流程到细节提分，形成完整写作闭环| |分话题训练|6大话题（含基础/提升范文、仿写、自主创作）|话题专属框架（如记叙文六要素、倡议书结构）；语法考点嵌入（一般过去时、比较级等）|话题-文体-语法三维联动，通过模板积累→仿写迁移→自主创作实现能力分层进阶|

专题 04 书面表达期末专项复习 （写作技巧&分话题专项训练） 复习目标 积累话题素材：熟练掌握本册 6 大单元核心写作话题，牢记对应话题词汇、固定短语、基础句型与高分句式。 明晰文体框架：理清不同文体（记叙文、说明文、演讲稿、海报、书信等）写作格式，掌握开篇、衔接、结尾的写作方法。 规范语言表达：规避语法错误（一般过去时、比较级、as…as 句型、系动词、不定代词等），做到用词准确、句式多样。 分层提升写作：完成模板积累 — 句式仿写 — 自主创作分层训练，从 “写得出” 进阶到 “写得对、写得好”，适配期末考试评分标准。 核心考点 （一）话题考点（紧扣教材单元，期末高频） 幸福与善意：记叙幸福瞬间、助人经历，文体以记叙文为主。 体育运动与体育精神：介绍运动员、体育团队、难忘运动时刻，含演讲稿、海报类写作。 美食与饮食文化：介绍美食、饮食习惯、饮食文化，以说明文、信息表写作为主。 休闲娱乐与作息：谈论兴趣爱好、合理娱乐、拒绝沉迷电子产品，记叙文 + 议论文结合。 自然与环保：介绍自然美景、呼吁保护自然，说明文、倡议书为主。 旅行与探索：描述旅行经历、制定旅行计划，记叙文、计划类应用文。 （二）语法考点（写作必查） 全篇贯穿一般过去时（叙事主流时态）；形容词 / 副词比较级、as…as同级比较；系动词用法；不定代词；祈使句（建议、呼吁类作文高频）；名词单复数、主谓一致。 通用做题技巧 （一）写作四步法（通用流程） 审题立意：圈画题干关键词，明确话题、文体、时态、词数、写作要点，杜绝偏题。 列提纲：按照 “开头 — 正文（2-3 点）— 结尾” 梳理内容，对应单元句型、词汇。 动笔写作：优先使用熟悉句型，穿插高分句式；多用衔接词串联句子，保证逻辑连贯。 检查修改：重点核查时态、单复数、主谓一致、拼写，删减重复句子，补充细节。 （二）提分小技巧 词汇：基础词替换高级词（如happy→joyful；help→give a hand），积累话题专属短语。 句式：长短句结合，避免通篇简单句；灵活运用并列句、状语从句。 衔接：熟记递进、转折、总结类过渡词，让行文更流畅。 时态：叙事类作文统一使用一般过去时，介绍类多用一般现在时。 （三）常用衔接词 & 高分句型（通用素材） 衔接词： 递进：Firstly, Secondly, Finally, What’s more 转折：However, But 总结：In a word, All in all 举例：For example 万能高分句型： ① It is + adj. + to do sth. （做某事是…… 的） ② I think that... （我认为……） ③ As long as... （只要……） ④ ...is the key to... （…… 是…… 的关键） ⑤ Not only...but also... （不仅…… 而且……） 分话题专项训练 话题一：幸福与善意 【话题梳理】 高频题目：My Happy Moment / A Happy Experience / The Secret of Happiness 文体：记叙文（叙事为主） 写作要求：词数 60-80 词；使用一般过去时；记叙一件助人或感受幸福的小事；分段书写，语句通顺。 得分要点：1. 交代时间、人物、事件；2. 描述过程与自身感受；3. 结尾点明幸福的真谛；4. 时态统一，无语法错误。 范文 1（基础版，适合基础薄弱学生） 标题：A Happy Experience Everyone wants to be happy. I had a happy experience last week. Last Monday, my classmate Sarah didn’t have breakfast. She felt bad in class. I shared my food with her. She thanked me a lot. We talked happily later. I learned that helping others brings us happiness. Love is the key to happiness. 亮点标注 基础词汇 / 句型：share...with...（与…… 分享）；bring happiness（带来幸福）；the key to...（…… 的关键） 衔接词：later 范文 2（提升版，高分范文） 标题：The Secret of Happiness Happiness is everywhere around us. I still remember a warm story clearly. One cold morning, a classmate felt sick because she had no breakfast. I gave my bread to her. To my surprise, she was very thankful. We became good friends after that. Doing good things made me feel warm and joyful. In my opinion, happiness comes from love and kindness. If we help others, we will get great joy too. 亮点标注 亮点词汇：clearly, sick, thankful, joyful, kindness 高分句型：To my surprise（令我惊讶的是）；If we..., we will...（条件状语从句） 衔接词：In my opinion 【仿写训练】 1. 词汇句型替换（改写范文 1，替换划线词汇） Everyone wants to be joyful. I ______ a warm experience last week. Last Monday, my classmate ______ hungry. I ______ my food ______ her. She thanked me a lot. I learned that ______ others can make us joyful. Love is the secret of happiness. 2. 补全短文（根据语境续写） Happiness is simple. I once helped an old man on my way home. He ______ (carry) heavy things. I helped him. He smiled at me. ________________________（补充你的感受与感悟） 仿写参考答案 1. had; was; shared; with; helping 2. carried; I felt very happy. I know love and help bring us true happiness. 【自主创作】 题目：请以 My Happy Moment 为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求：1. 讲述一件让你感到幸福的小事；2. 词数 60-80；3. 语句通顺，时态正确；4. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。 话题二：体育运动与体育精神 【话题梳理】 高频题目：My Favorite Sport / A Great Sports Team / A Wonderful Sports Moment 文体：记叙文、演讲稿 写作要求：词数 70-90 词；介绍运动、运动员或团队；描述比赛 / 训练经历；体现体育精神。 得分要点：1. 介绍主体（运动 / 团队）；2. 描述具体事件；3. 阐述学到的精神（坚持、勇敢、永不放弃）；4. 正确使用不定代词、一般过去时。 模板积累 范文 1（基础版） 标题：My Favorite Sport My favorite sport is running. I love running very much. I run every morning. It makes me strong and confident. Last month, I took part in a running race. I fell behind at first, but I didn’t give up. Finally, I finished the race. Sports bring me joy and courage. I will keep running forever. 亮点标注 核心短语：take part in（参加）；fall behind（落后）；give up（放弃） 范文 2（提升版，演讲稿） 标题：The Steel Roses Hello everyone! Today I want to talk about the Chinese women’s football team. They are famous as the Steel Roses. In a big match, they were behind at first. But none of them lost heart. They kept fighting and won the game. They train hard every day and never give up. Their spirit moves me a lot. We should learn from them. 亮点标注 亮点短语：lose heart（灰心）；keep fighting（奋力拼搏） 衔接词：Today, But 语法考点：不定代词 none 【仿写训练】 1. 句型改写：将 I didn’t give up. 替换为同义句（用到 never） 2. 补全短文：介绍一位运动爱好者 My uncle loves marathons. He ______ (train) every day. Last year, he ______ (have) a stomachache in the race. But he chose ______ (两者都不) rest or stop. He crossed the finishing line finally. His spirit teaches me to stick to my dream. 仿写参考答案 1. I never gave up. 2. trains; had; neither 【自主创作】 题目：假设你校英语广播站正在征稿，请以 A Great Sports Moment 为题，写一篇短文介绍一个令你难忘的运动瞬间。 要求：1. 描述事件；2. 谈谈你的感受与收获；3. 词数 70-90；4. 书写规范。 话题三：美食与饮食文化 【话题梳理】 高频题目：My Favourite Food / Delicious Memories / Food and Culture 文体：说明文 写作要求：词数 60-80 词；介绍美食的外形、味道、相关回忆或文化；正确使用感官系动词。 得分要点：1. 点明最爱食物；2. 用taste/smell/look等系动词描述特点；3. 讲述回忆 / 文化内涵；4. 句式多样。 模板积累 范文 1（基础版） 标题：My Favourite Food My favourite food is porridge. It looks simple but tastes great. When I was ill, my mother always cooked porridge for me. It was warm and nice. It is not expensive, but it is the best food for me. Porridge brings me lots of sweet memories. I love it forever. 亮点标注 核心语法：系动词 look, taste, is 短语：sweet memories（甜蜜的回忆） 范文 2（提升版） 标题：Food as a Cultural Bridge Food is not just food. It is a bridge between different cultures. Ice cream was from China long ago. Later, it went to Europe. Roujiamo is popular too. Many people call it "Chinese hamburger". It tastes delicious. Different food connects people. I love delicious food and colorful cultures. 亮点标注 高分短语：a bridge between cultures（文化桥梁） 句型：not just...（不仅仅） 【仿写训练】 用系动词 look/taste/smell 补全句子 1. The dumplings ______ nice and ______ delicious. 2. The soup ______ good. It ______ simple but great. 仿写参考答案 1. look; taste 2. smells; looks 【自主创作】 题目：请你制作一份美食信息卡，并用短文介绍My Favourite Food。 要求：介绍食物的外观、味道、相关回忆；词数 60 左右。 话题四：休闲娱乐与合理作息 【话题梳理】 高频题目：My Favorite Activity / Have Fun in a Right Way 文体：议论文、短文 写作要求：词数 70-80 词；介绍娱乐活动，阐述合理娱乐、拒绝沉迷屏幕的观点；使用祈使句提建议。 得分要点：1. 介绍爱好；2. 说明过度娱乐的危害；3. 用祈使句给出建议；4. 逻辑清晰。 模板积累 范文 1（基础版） 标题：My Favorite Activity I like hiking best. It is a great way to have fun. Hiking makes me relaxed. But many students spend too much time on games. They become couch potatoes. It is bad for their health. Don’t stay in front of screens all day. Let’s go out to enjoy nature. 亮点标注 核心词汇：relaxed, couch potatoes 祈使句（考点）：Don’t... Let’s... 范文 2（提升版） 标题：Have Fun in a Balanced Way Fun is important to us, but we should have fun properly. Games and social media are fun, but they eat up our time. We may miss out on warm time with families. Firstly, do more outdoor activities. Secondly, plan your time well. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Let’s keep a balanced and healthy life. 亮点标注 短语：eat up time（消耗时间）；miss out on（错失） 谚语：All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy 【仿写训练】 将句子改为否定祈使句： 1. Spend too much time on mobile phones. → _______________ 2. Get lost in games. → _______________ 仿写参考答案 1. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones. 2. Don't get lost in games. 【自主创作】 题目：现在很多同学沉迷手机游戏，请你以 Have Fun Wisely 为题写短文，谈谈看法和建议。词数 70-80。 话题五：奇妙自然与环境保护 【话题梳理】 高频题目：Beautiful Nature / Protect Our Nature（说明文、倡议书） 文体：说明文、倡议书 写作要求：词数 70-90 词；描述自然美景，指出环境问题，呼吁保护环境；运用形容词比较级 / 最高级。 得分要点：1. 描绘自然之美（使用比较级、最高级）；2. 点明现存问题；3. 发出保护倡议；4. 用词优美。 模板积累 范文 1（基础版） 标题：Beautiful Nature Nature is amazing. There are many wonderful natural wonders. The sky is blue. The lake is calmer than the river. The grassland is one of the most beautiful places. But some natural wonders are disappearing. We must protect nature. It is our beautiful home. 亮点标注 语法考点：比较级 calmer；最高级 the most beautiful 范文 2（提升版） 标题：Let’s Protect Nature The world is full of amazing natural wonders. Quiet blue lakes, vast grasslands, tall glaciers and thick rainforests are fantastic natural wonders. They offer us fresh air, clean water and beautiful views. Now they are in danger. Glaciers are getting smaller year by year because of climate change. Lots of trees are cut down, so rainforests are disappearing fast. Many wild animals lose their homes. Nature cries for help. It’s important for us to take action in daily life. We can save water, plant more trees and cut down waste. We can also ask our friends and family to love the environment. Let’s try our best to protect our earth. 亮点标注 重点短语 be in danger 处于危险中 take action 采取行动 year by year 一年又一年 cut down 砍伐 高分句型 It’s important for us to take action in daily life. （对我们来说在日常生活中采取行动是很重要的。） 【仿写训练】 用形容词正确形式填空 1. This mountain is ______ (high) than that one. 2. This is ______ (wonder) place of all. 仿写参考答案 1. higher 2. the most wonderful 【自主创作】 题目：请以 Protect Our Nature 为题写一篇倡议书，呼吁大家保护自然。词数 80 左右。 话题六：旅行与探索 【话题梳理】 高频题目：A Wonderful Trip / My Travel Plan（记叙文、计划类应用文） 文体：记叙文、旅行计划 写作要求：词数 70-90 词；描述旅行经历或制定旅行计划；运用as…as同级比较、一般过去时。 得分要点：1. 交代旅行地点、行程；2. 描述见闻与感受（使用比较 / 同级比较）；3. 总结旅行收获。 范文 1（基础版） 标题：A Wonderful Trip Last summer, I went to Chengdu. I had a great time there. I tried Sichuan hot pot. It was much hotter than I thought. Then I visited Sanxingdui Museum. It was amazing. Travelling lets me learn new things. I love travelling. 亮点标注 语法考点：比较级 hotter than 范文 2（提升版） 标题：My Travel Plan I plan to travel to a beautiful city this holiday. I will visit a famous museum first. The buildings there are as great as old paintings. Then I will try local food. Travelling is not only fun but also educational. I’m looking forward to this wonderful trip. 亮点标注 语法考点：as...as 同级比较 短语：look forward to（期待）；not only...but also 【仿写训练】 用 as…as 改写句子 The park is very beautiful. The lake is also very beautiful. → The park is ______ beautiful ______ the lake. 仿写参考答案：as; as 【自主创作】 题目：假设假期你打算外出旅行，请以 My Travel Plan 为题，写你的旅行计划。词数 70-90。 写作通用自查清单 写完作文后，按照以下条目逐一检查，减少失分： 1. 文体格式正确（演讲稿 / 书信 / 计划格式无误） 2. 时态统一（叙事用一般过去时，介绍用一般现在时） 3. 名词单复数、动词三单 / 过去式无错误 4. 比较级、as…as、系动词使用正确 5. 要点全部覆盖，无缺漏 6. 词数在要求范围内 7. 无真实人名、校名 8. 书写工整，分段清晰 自主创作题的参考范文 话题一：幸福与善意 自主创作题目 题目：请以 My Happy Moment 为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求：1. 讲述一件让你感到幸福的小事；2. 词数 60-80；3. 语句通顺，时态正确；4. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。 参考范文 1（基础版） My Happy Moment I still remember a happy moment clearly. Last Friday, I helped a new student in my class. She didn’t know her way around the school. I showed her many places. She smiled and thanked me warmly. When I helped her, I felt so happy. I learn that love and kindness bring us true happiness. 参考范文 2（提升版） My Happy Moment Happiness is easy to find around us. One afternoon, an old man carried heavy bags on the street. I ran to help him. He was very thankful and gave me a big smile. To my surprise, I felt full of joy at that time. Doing good things makes our life warm. I believe love is always the secret of happiness. 话题二：体育运动与体育精神 自主创作题目 题目：假设你校英语广播站正在征稿，请以 A Great Sports Moment 为题，写一篇短文介绍一个令你难忘的运动瞬间。 要求：1. 描述事件；2. 谈谈你的感受与收获；3. 词数 70-90；4. 书写规范。 参考范文 1（基础版） A Great Sports Moment I have an unforgettable sports moment. Last month, we had a running race. I fell behind halfway, but I didn’t give up. I kept running hard. Finally, I finished the race. All my classmates cheered for me. This moment teaches me a lot. No matter how hard it is, we should never give up. 参考范文 2（提升版） A Great Sports Moment I will never forget a wonderful sports moment. It was our class basketball match. We were behind at first, but none of us lost heart. We kept fighting together and won the game in the end. Watching the match, I was really excited. Teamwork and courage are very important. This great moment always encourages me. 话题三：美食与饮食文化 自主创作题目 题目：请你制作一份美食信息卡，并用短文介绍 My Favourite Food。 要求：介绍食物的外观、味道、相关回忆；词数 60 左右。 参考范文 1（基础版） My Favourite Food My favourite food is dumplings. They look nice and taste delicious. My mother often makes dumplings for me on festivals. We always make dumplings together at home. I help my mum roll dough and wrap fillings. We talk and laugh while working. Every dumpling is full of my mum’s love. I hope we can make dumplings as a family every year. When I eat dumplings, I feel warm and happy. They carry my sweet family memories. I love dumplings so much. 参考范文 2（提升版） My Favourite Food Dumplings are my favourite food. They look lovely and smell good. They taste really great. Every Spring Festival, my whole family makes and eats dumplings together. My mum prepares fresh fillings of pork and cabbage first. I help roll round dough skins, and my grandma wraps them neatly. The hot steamed dumplings are white and plump. When I take a bite, tasty soup flows out, and the warm flavour fills my mouth. We chat and laugh while enjoying them around the table. Simple food brings warm memories. Dumplings are not only tasty, but also full of love. 话题四：休闲娱乐与合理作息 自主创作题目 题目：现在很多同学沉迷手机游戏，请你以 Have Fun Wisely 为题写短文，谈谈看法和建议。词数 70-80。 参考范文 1（基础版） Have Fun Wisely Many students like playing mobile games. But too much time on games is bad for us. We will become couch potatoes and miss happy time with families. Please don’t spend too much time on games. We can go hiking or do sports. Let’s have fun in a right way. 参考范文 2（提升版，78 词） Have Fun Wisely Games can bring us fun, but they are also a time-eating monster. If we get lost in games, we will have no time to study or stay with our families. Here is my advice: Do more outdoor activities and plan your time well. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Let’s have fun wisely. 话题五：奇妙自然与环境保护 自主创作题目 题目：请以 Protect Our Nature 为题写一篇倡议书，呼吁大家保护自然。词数 80 左右。 参考范文 1（基础版） Protect Our Nature Nature is beautiful and amazing. We have blue sky, clear lakes and green grasslands. But now many natural wonders are in danger. Trees are cut down and glaciers are becoming smaller. We must protect nature. Let’s take action right now and look after our lovely home. 参考范文 2（提升版） Protect Our Nature The world is full of wonderful natural wonders. However, many of them are crying for help. Rainforests are disappearing and the Dead Sea is drying up. It’s very important for us to protect nature. We should stop cutting trees and save water. Let’s work together to protect our beautiful earth. 话题六：旅行与探索 自主创作题目 题目：假设假期你打算外出旅行，请以 My Travel Plan 为题，写你的旅行计划。词数 70-90。 参考范文 1（基础版） My Travel Plan The summer holiday is coming. I plan to travel to Chengdu with my parents. First, we will try delicious Sichuan hot pot. Then we will visit Sanxingdui Museum. I think the trip will be as fun as I expect. I’m looking forward to this great trip. 参考范文 2（提升版） My Travel Plan I have a great travel plan for this holiday. I will go to Chengdu. I want to taste local food first. It is much hotter than common food. After that, I will visit the famous museum. Travelling can bring new experiences. I believe this trip will be wonderful and meaningful. 16 / 16zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司zxxk.com 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $