期末书面表达过关24篇（Units 1-8）-2025-2026学年七年级英语下册单元模块满分必刷题（新教材译林版）

**基本信息** 聚焦七年级下册8大主题（家/社区/家乡等），通过24篇书面表达题构建"主题情境-语用功能-语言输出"的系统性训练，融合期末真题与模拟，强化语言能力与文化意识。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |家/社区/家乡等8单元|每单元3篇，共24篇|应用文（书信/演讲稿/申请信）、提示类写作（要点/表格/思维导图）|按"个人生活→社会环境→文化自然"主题递进，覆盖描述性语言、应用文格式及主题词汇，培养思维品质与学习能力|

2025-2026学年七年级英语下册单元模块满分必刷题（新教材译林版） 期末书面表达过关24篇(Units 1-8) 期末真题+名校模拟 Unit 1 家 1．假设你是李华，请以“My Dream House”为题，写一篇短文描述你梦想中的房子。 要点提示： 1. 房子建在哪里？（山里、湖边、城市等） 2. 房子有什么特点？（材料、颜色等） 3. 房子有什么亮点？（科技或传统元素等） 4. 你喜欢它的原因。 要求：词数70左右，语句通顺，语法正确。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．某学校为了激发中学生的创意和灵感，提高中学生学习英语的热情，举办了主题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。 房子大 有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园 房间多 一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房…… 很舒适 可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房里做作业；早上在花园读书 其他 …… 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 须包括表格中的所有信息，但不要使用真实姓名； 3. 不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Ladies and Gentlemen, I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 3．假如一家报社正在举行题目为“My Dream Home”的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。要求必须包括所有要点提示，并作适当发挥；词数80左右；不得使用真实姓名、校名等。 My Dream Home ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 2 社区 4．假如你是Amy，你的美国朋友Mike来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示, 写一封电子邮件回复他。 周围环境 位于市中心；有……； 离社区1公里处有一个公园, …… 内部设施 有一个客厅、一个厨房、一间浴室和3间卧室。 最爱……, 因为…… 社区情况 社区里有很多志愿者, 能帮助我解决各种各样的问题, …… 居住感受 …… 要求： 1. 词数100左右。（不包括开头和结尾） 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Mike, I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．我校的英语角正在举行一场英语演讲比赛，请你以My ideal home and neighbourhood为题，写一篇英语演讲稿，介绍你的理想家园，以及你理想中的社区与邻里生活。 要点包括： 1．理想家园的基本布局、你最喜欢的家中区域； 2．理想社区的环境、邻里相处的场景。 注意事项： 1．短文须涵盖以上要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、语意连贯、符合题意； 2．词数不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．短文中不得使用真实的个人信息。 Hi, guys! I’d like to tell you about my ideal home and neighbourhood. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 6．假设你是王明，你所在的社区正在招募 “邻里互助小志愿者”，请你根据以下提示写一封申请信，表达你想加入的愿望。 提示： 你的个人信息 (年龄、身份) ； 你想加入的原因 (喜欢帮助他人，热爱社区) ； 你能做的事情 (至少两点，如：帮助老人、整理社区图书角等) ； 你的联系方式 (电话：136XXXX2345) 。 要求： 词数 80-100 词； 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Wang Ming Unit 3 家乡 7．请以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍你的家乡。内容包括： 1. 你的家乡在哪里？ 2. 你的家乡有什么著名的地方或特产？ 3. 你最喜欢家乡的什么？ 4. 你家乡的人们怎么样？ 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥。 My Beautiful Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter计划来南京旅游，想了解你的家乡南京。请你根据以下提示，给Peter写一封邮件，向他介绍南京。提示： 基本信息：位于中国东部，江苏的省会，历史悠久，有许多名胜古迹； 景点推荐：夫子庙、中山陵、玄武湖等； 美食推荐：盐水鸭、鸭血粉丝汤等； 邀请他来南京，并表示愿意做他的向导。 要求： 词数80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 语句通顺，语法正确，包含所有提示要点； 可适当发挥，使内容更丰富。 Dear Peter,     I’m very happy to hear that you are going to visit Nanjing. I’d like to introduce my hometown to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．假如你是李华，你正给来自英国的交换生Ben写一份英文邮件，向他介绍你的家乡无锡以及你在无锡的生活，请根据下图完成电子邮件。 注意事项： 1.邮件须根据大纲自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.大纲中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Ben, How is everything going? I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 4 民间艺术 10．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，学校为响应南京市政府“保护非物质文化遗产 (Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage)”的号召，计划举办一场“家乡文化传承主题日 (Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival)”的活动。作为志愿者，你需要向Peter写一封信介绍以下内容： 1.家乡南京的景点及历史文化； 2.活动中的民间艺术体验。 注意： 1.语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当发挥，书写规范； 2.词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．保护和传承中华民族的传统工艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近我校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统工艺”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的一种或两种我国传统的工艺以及它们的使用场景，并分享你的感受。 My favourite traditional Chinese craft What 介绍一种传统工艺（剪纸，惠山泥人，徽州墨条等）， 及它的基本信息 Special things 1. 制作材料 2. 制作方法 3.……（请你补充1-2点） Cultural value 1. ……是中国文化的重要部分…… 2. ……（请你补充1点） 注意：1.词数：90-100左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）： 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite traditional Chinese craft As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive. 12．题目：假设你是李华，你的外国朋友John对中国民间艺术很感兴趣。请根据以下要点，给他写一封邮件介绍一种你喜欢的中国民间艺术（词数80左右）。 1. 介绍你喜欢的中国民间艺术形式（如剪纸、中国结等）； 2. 描述它的特点（如材料、形状等）； 3. 阐述你喜欢它的原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 5 动物 13．学校英语征文比赛正在征稿，请你以“Protect Lovely Animals”为题写一篇短文参赛。 提示要点： 1. 动物是人类的朋友，让大自然充满生机； 2. 如今不少野生动物生存面临威胁； 3. 谈谈我们该如何爱护动物、守护自然。 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当拓展； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯； 3. 词数60—80词； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物, 关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请根据思维导图的提示信息, 以“My Favorite Animal”为题, 用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。 写作要求： （1）须包含思维导图的所有信息, 可适当拓展； （2）不少于100词； （3）不得出现真实个人信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．请你根据下面的思维导图用英文写一篇短文，介绍一个你的动物朋友。 注意事项：(1)短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；- (2)词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)书写工整，无语法错误，严禁出现真实地名与人名 I have an animal friend________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 6景观 16．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Ben想要了解中国的美丽地貌。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的自然地貌。 提示要点： 1. 地貌的名称和位置； 2. 地貌的特点； 3. 你喜欢它的原因； 4. 一次难忘的经历。 要求： 1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear Ben, I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite natural landscape. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 17．学校举办“生态科普周”活动，鼓励同学们利用假期，参与走近自然、感受生态景观的实践活动。假设你是李华，假期和家人去了九寨沟，请写一篇文章记录实践心得。 写作要点： 1. 景观名称及地点； 2. 该地貌的主要特点（有美丽的湖泊、瀑布和森林）； 3. 你观察到的自然现象或动植物（湖水清澈、有蓝有绿，是大熊猫栖息地）； 4. 你的感受或建议。 注意：需包含写作要点，篇幅不低于80词，可适当发挥，使行文流畅。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．随着“240小时过境免签”政策的推出，吸引了越来越多的外国年轻人来华旅游。假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom对中国的自然之美很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件向他介绍一种中国的野生动物及一处地貌景观。邮件要点如下： Word bank: 金丝猴 golden snub-nosed monkeys 大熊猫 giant pandas 丹顶鹤 red-crowned crane 注意事项： 1.邮件须包含所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，句意连贯。 2.字数80词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 3.邮件中不得出现真实姓名与学校信息。 Dear Tom, I’m glad you are interested in the natural beauty of China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you can come and enjoy the beauty soon! Yours, Li Hua Unit 7户外活动 19．题目：My Favorite Outdoor Fun 写作要求： 1. 介绍自己最喜欢的一项户外活动，描述一次相关经历； 2. 写明这项活动带来的收获与乐趣； 3. 正确使用一般过去时，运用单元重点短语与句型； 4. 词数60-80，语句通顺，语法规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20．假设你是李华，你和你的朋友计划本周六去郊外露营。请你根据以下提示，给你班上的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他一起去。 提示： 1. 时间：本周六上午8点在校门口集合 2. 活动：徒步、野餐、观星 3. 需要准备的物品：运动鞋、外套、食物和水 要求： 邮件格式正确，包含所有要点; 语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥; 词数80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 21．假设你是张丽，上周日你和家人一起去郊外野餐，度过了非常愉快的一天。你想感谢爸爸妈妈带你走进大自然，享受户外时光。请你给爸爸妈妈写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 回忆那天去了哪里，做了什么有趣的事（至少2件）； 2. 描述户外活动带给你的快乐和收获； 3. 表达对父母的感谢，并希望以后还能一起去户外玩。 Dear Mom and Dad, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Zhang Li Unit 8故事 22．假设你是李明，你刚刚读完了《爱丽丝梦游仙境》这本书。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的读后感。 提示： 1. 故事的主要内容； 2. 你最喜欢的部分； 3. 你从故事中学到了什么。 要求： 1. 语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数80词左右； 3.不得出现具体学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 23．今年你校读书节的主题是“Read and Share”，为此你所在的英语俱乐部开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书或一个故事。请根据以下问题写一篇短文参加活动。 1. What is your favourite book or story? 2. What does the book or story talk about? 3. Why do you like the book or story? 注意事项： 1. 短文内容须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 短文80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favourite book is ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 24．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在昨天的e-mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封e-mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并写出从这个故事中得出的感悟。 要求: 1.文章须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息； 3. 70～90词 (邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇: tortoise 乌龟 catch up with 赶上 look down upon 看不起 compete 竞赛 The Rabbit and the Tortoise Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Let me share the story “The Rabbit and the Tortoise” with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年七年级英语下册单元模块满分必刷题（新教材译林版） 期末书面表达过关24篇(Units 1-8) 期末真题+名校模拟 Unit 1 家 1．假设你是李华，请以“My Dream House”为题，写一篇短文描述你梦想中的房子。 要点提示： 1. 房子建在哪里？（山里、湖边、城市等） 2. 房子有什么特点？（材料、颜色等） 3. 房子有什么亮点？（科技或传统元素等） 4. 你喜欢它的原因。 要求：词数70左右，语句通顺，语法正确。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Dream House My dream house is near a lake. The house is made of wood and stone. It has a brown roof and white walls. Around the house, I will grow many flowers and trees. My house has a smart robot that helps me clean the room and cook dinner. There’s also a small study with many books. I like my dream house because it is quiet and comfortable. I can read by the lake and enjoy the nature every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：话题作文。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：围绕梦想房子的位置、特点、亮点及喜欢原因展开描述。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍房子位置及基本特点。 第二步：描述亮点。 第三步：说明喜欢原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be made of由……制成 ②smart robot智能机器人 ③by the lake湖边 [高分句型] ①My house has a smart robot that helps me clean the room and cook dinner. (定语从句) ②I like my dream house because it is quiet and comfortable. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．某学校为了激发中学生的创意和灵感，提高中学生学习英语的热情，举办了主题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。 房子大 有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园 房间多 一层有厨房、卧室……；二层有浴室、书房…… 很舒适 可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房里做作业；早上在花园读书 其他 …… 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 须包括表格中的所有信息，但不要使用真实姓名； 3. 不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Ladies and Gentlemen, I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】例文 Ladies and Gentlemen, I’d like to tell you something about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house. There are many rooms in it. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the first floor, there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study. My dream home is very comfortable. After school, I do my homework in the study. In the morning, I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great fun! I love my dream home. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于“我的梦想之家”的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。以“我想告诉你们一些关于我的梦想之家的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“房子的大小、结构、功能、舒适性”等几个方面重点介绍梦想之家的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家都喜欢我的梦想之家”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①live together 住在一起 ②do my homework 做我的家庭作业 ③invite...to... 邀请……到…… ④watch films 看电影 [高分句型] ①I can invite my friends to my parties, watch films or play games together in the house. (并列谓语结构) 3．假如一家报社正在举行题目为“My Dream Home”的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。要求必须包括所有要点提示，并作适当发挥；词数80左右；不得使用真实姓名、校名等。 My Dream Home ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Home My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city centre, so I need take a bus or drive there. There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a home cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. We often help each other. This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：根据思维导图，描述梦想家园的位置、环境、内部设施、邻居以及交通方式等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述梦想家园的位置和环境； 第二步，介绍家园的内部设施及邻居等； 第三步，总结并表达对家园的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①at the foot of a hill在山脚下 ②house cinema家庭影院 ③friendly and helpful友好且乐于助人 [高分句型] ①There are many trees and flowers around it.（there be句型） ②I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful.（and连接并列句） Unit 2 社区 4．假如你是Amy，你的美国朋友Mike来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示, 写一封电子邮件回复他。 周围环境 位于市中心；有……； 离社区1公里处有一个公园, …… 内部设施 有一个客厅、一个厨房、一间浴室和3间卧室。 最爱……, 因为…… 社区情况 社区里有很多志愿者, 能帮助我解决各种各样的问题, …… 居住感受 …… 要求： 1. 词数100左右。（不包括开头和结尾） 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Mike, I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Mike,     I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood. It’s located in the city centre.     There is a big supermarket and a modern hospital near my home, so it’s very convenient for daily life. There is a beautiful park. I often take a walk there with my parents on weekends. There are many volunteers in our community. They often help us solve different problems.     My flat has a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms. I love my bedroom most because it’s quiet and sunny. I can read books and listen to music there.      I feel very happy and safe living here. I hope you can visit my neighbourhood one day. Yours, Amy 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：社区环境(位置、配套设施、社区服务)，居住的公寓(布局、最喜爱的房间及原因) 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：语言简洁明了，贴合日常表达，突出对社区的喜爱之情 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明社区的位置 主体段：分别介绍社区配套设施、社区服务，以及居住的公寓布局和最喜爱的房间 结尾段：总结居住在社区的感受，发出邀请 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：社区环境及配套 地点选择：supermarket (超市)/hospital (医院)/park (公园) /community (社区) 位置描述：in the city centre (市中心)/near my home (我家附近) 活动内容：take a walk with parents (和父母散步)/volunteers help solve problems (志愿者帮忙解决问题) 作用效果：it’s very convenient for daily life (方便日常生活)/makes the community warm (让社区更温暖) 要点二：居住的公寓 公寓布局：living room (客厅)/kitchen (厨房)/bathroom(浴室)/three bedrooms(三间卧室) 喜爱原因：quiet and sunny (安静又向阳)/can read books and listen to music there (可以在那里读书、听音乐) 具体说明：突出个人感受，体现对卧室的偏爱，呼应对整个社区的喜爱 5．我校的英语角正在举行一场英语演讲比赛，请你以My ideal home and neighbourhood为题，写一篇英语演讲稿，介绍你的理想家园，以及你理想中的社区与邻里生活。 要点包括： 1．理想家园的基本布局、你最喜欢的家中区域； 2．理想社区的环境、邻里相处的场景。 注意事项： 1．短文须涵盖以上要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、语意连贯、符合题意； 2．词数不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3．短文中不得使用真实的个人信息。 Hi, guys! I’d like to tell you about my ideal home and neighbourhood. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】 例文 My ideal home and neighbourhood My ideal home is on the first floor of a small house. It has a bright living room, a cozy kitchen, and my favorite is the small garden with green grass and beautiful flowers. I like reading books on the grass there.       My ideal neighbourhood is clean and quiet. There are many tall trees and lovely flowers. The neighbours are kind and friendly. We often help each other and play together in the garden. We always have a good time.     I love my ideal home and neighbourhood very much. I hope I can live in such a nice place one day. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍理想家园的布局、最喜欢的区域，以及理想社区的环境和邻里相处场景 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：不得出现真实信息，开头结尾已给出   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头，引出对理想家园与社区的畅想 主体段：分述理想家园的布局、最喜欢的区域，以及理想社区的环境和邻里相处场景 结尾段：表达对理想家园的喜爱与期待，承接已给结尾   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：理想家园的布局与喜爱区域 家园布局：“My ideal home is on the first floor of a small house. It has a bright living room, cozy kitchen” 最喜欢的区域：“my favorite is the small garden with green grass and beautiful flowers. I like reading books on the grass there”   要点二：理想社区的环境与邻里相处 社区环境：“My ideal neighbourhood is clean and quiet. There are many tall trees and lovely flowers” 邻里相处：“The neighbours are kind and friendly. We often help each other and play together in the garden. We always have a good time”   要点三：对理想家园的期待 期待：“I love my ideal home and neighbourhood very much. I hope I can live in such a nice place one day” 6．假设你是王明，你所在的社区正在招募 “邻里互助小志愿者”，请你根据以下提示写一封申请信，表达你想加入的愿望。 提示： 你的个人信息 (年龄、身份) ； 你想加入的原因 (喜欢帮助他人，热爱社区) ； 你能做的事情 (至少两点，如：帮助老人、整理社区图书角等) ； 你的联系方式 (电话：136XXXX2345) 。 要求： 词数 80-100 词； 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Wang Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam,      I’m Wang Ming, a 13-year-old Grade 7 student. I’m eager to join the “Little Volunteers for Neighbourhood Mutual Help” team because I love helping others and deeply care about our community. I can do several things for the community. I often visit elderly neighbours, chat with them to reduce their loneliness and help them buy daily necessities. Besides, I’m good at arranging books, so I can tidy the community library corner to make it more orderly. If I’m accepted, I’ll try my best to fulfill the volunteer duties. You can contact me at 136XXXX2345. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Wang Ming 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是书信作文。 ②时态：一般现在时为主。 ③提示：需包含个人信息、申请原因、能做的具体事情及联系方式，按提示顺序组织内容。 【写作步骤】第一步：开头表明身份和写信目的（申请加入）。 第二步：中间段落说明申请原因（热爱帮助他人、关心社区）和具体能做的两件事（帮助老人、整理图书角）。 第三步：结尾表达愿望，提供联系方式并礼貌结束。 【亮点词汇】①eager to渴望 ②join加入 ③community社区 ④elderly neighbours老年邻居 ⑤loneliness孤独 ⑥daily necessities日用品 ⑦be good at擅长 ⑧arrange整理 ⑨orderly整洁的 ⑩fulfill duties履行职责 ⑪contact联系 ⑫look forward to期待 【高分句型】①I’m eager to join the “Little Volunteers for Neighbourhood Mutual Help” team because I love helping others and deeply care about our community.（原因状语从句） ②If I’m accepted, I’ll try my best to fulfill the volunteer duties.（条件状语从句） Unit 3 家乡 7．请以“My Beautiful Hometown”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文，介绍你的家乡。内容包括： 1. 你的家乡在哪里？ 2. 你的家乡有什么著名的地方或特产？ 3. 你最喜欢家乡的什么？ 4. 你家乡的人们怎么样？ 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥。 My Beautiful Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Beautiful Hometown My hometown is a small village in Jiangsu Province. It is near a big lake. It is famous for its beautiful scenery and fresh fish. I like the lake best because I can go fishing and boating there in summer. The people in my hometown are very kind and friendly. They always help each other. I love my beautiful hometown. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍家乡位置环境、家乡特色、家乡人民 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：语句通顺，语法正确 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：总起句，概括家乡整体情况与感受 主体段：分别介绍家乡特色和最喜爱的地方 结尾段：总结家乡人文，升华对家乡的热爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡位置与特色 地点选择：a small village/riverside/park等 位置描述：near a big lake/in front of my house/ near my hometown等 特色事物：beautiful scenery and fresh fish/quiet environment/green trees等 个人活动：go fishing and boating there in summer/take a walk/breathe fresh air等 要点二：家乡的人们 特点描述：kind and friendly/polite and helpful/warm and welcoming等 具体表现：They always help each other/They share things with each other/They live happily together等 情感升华：I love my beautiful hometown/I feel proud of my hometown/My hometown is a lovely place等 8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter计划来南京旅游，想了解你的家乡南京。请你根据以下提示，给Peter写一封邮件，向他介绍南京。提示： 基本信息：位于中国东部，江苏的省会，历史悠久，有许多名胜古迹； 景点推荐：夫子庙、中山陵、玄武湖等； 美食推荐：盐水鸭、鸭血粉丝汤等； 邀请他来南京，并表示愿意做他的向导。 要求： 词数80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 语句通顺，语法正确，包含所有提示要点； 可适当发挥，使内容更丰富。 Dear Peter,     I’m very happy to hear that you are going to visit Nanjing. I’d like to introduce my hometown to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I’m very happy to hear that you are going to visit Nanjing. I’d like to introduce my hometown to you. Nanjing is in eastern China. It is the capital of Jiangsu Province and has a long history with many places of interest. You can visit Confucius Temple, Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum and Xuanwu Lake here. They are all great places to have fun. For food, you can try Nanjing salted duck and duck blood vermicelli soup. They are very delicious and popular with local people. I’m looking forward to your coming. I will be your guide and show you around Nanjing. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：文章围绕“介绍家乡南京”展开，包含基本信息、景点推荐、美食推荐和发出邀请四部分，内容完整，逻辑连贯，符合书信格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍南京的基本信息，包括地理位置、省份、历史和名胜古迹； 第二步，推荐夫子庙、中山陵、玄武湖等景点； 第三步，推荐南京特色美食盐水鸭和鸭血粉丝汤，最后表达对Peter到来的期待，并主动提出做向导，收束全文。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②be popular with受……欢迎 ③look forward to期待 ④show around带领参观 [高分句型] ①It is the capital of Jiangsu Province and has a long history with many places of interest.（and表并列） ②They are all great places to have fun.（不定式作后置定语） 9．假如你是李华，你正给来自英国的交换生Ben写一份英文邮件，向他介绍你的家乡无锡以及你在无锡的生活，请根据下图完成电子邮件。 注意事项： 1.邮件须根据大纲自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.大纲中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。 Dear Ben, How is everything going? I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Dear Ben, How is everything going? I’m so glad that you are interested in my hometown. My hometown Wuxi is a beautiful city in the south of Jiangsu Province. In Wuxi, I live in a flat with my family. Our flat is not very big, but it’s warm and comfortable. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. They often greet me with smiles and help each other. There are many places of interest here, such as the Taihu Lake and Lingshan Grand Buddha. I like to go boating on the lake and take photos. Wuxi is also famous for Huishan clay figurines. They are traditional folk art. I recommend you to buy some as gifts. I hope you can visit Wuxi one day! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③提示：需涵盖居住房屋类型、邻居特点、名胜古迹及推荐理由、民间艺术及推荐原因，结构清晰，语言亲切。   [写作步骤]   第一步，问候并表达对笔友兴趣的欣喜，介绍家乡地理位置； 第二步，描述居住情况（与家人住公寓，温馨舒适）； 第三步，介绍邻居特点（友好、乐于助人）； 第四步，列举名胜古迹（太湖、灵山大佛）及活动（划船、拍照）； 第五步，介绍民间艺术（惠山泥人）并推荐购买作为礼物； 第六步，表达对笔友来访的期待。   [亮点词汇]   ①be famous for以……闻名 ②live in a flat住公寓 ③warm and comfortable温馨舒适 ④friendly and helpful友好且乐于助人 ⑤places of interest名胜古迹 [高分句型]   ①There are many places of interest here, such as the Taihu Lake and Lingshan Grand Buddha. (There be句型列举景点，such as引出例子) ②I recommend you to buy some as gifts. (recommend sb. to do sth.结构提出建议) Unit 4 民间艺术 10．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，学校为响应南京市政府“保护非物质文化遗产 (Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage)”的号召，计划举办一场“家乡文化传承主题日 (Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival)”的活动。作为志愿者，你需要向Peter写一封信介绍以下内容： 1.家乡南京的景点及历史文化； 2.活动中的民间艺术体验。 注意： 1.语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当发挥，书写规范； 2.词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How’s everything going? Recently our school is planning to hold a “Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival” to respond to the government’s call “Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage”. I am more than glad to tell you something about it. Nanjing is my hometown which is famous for many places of interest. For example, you can have a good view of the whole city on the top of Zijin Mountain. Nanjing is also famous for Nanjing Ming City Wall, the Nanjing Presidential Palace. During the festival, you can experience paper cutting and try to use the paper to make some works of art as gifts. You can also learn to make the Nanjing salted duck, and have a chance to taste it. By the way, I will show you around our hometown then. Hope to see you soon in our hometown! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“景点及历史文化”和“民间艺术体验”两个要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，保证书信的格式正确。注意开头称呼、问候语、简要引出话题、结尾落款； 第二步，具体介绍写作重点。从紫金山和明城墙等名胜古迹到剪纸和盐水鸭等民间艺术及美食几个方面重点介绍南京的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望尽快见到对方”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而出名 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③for example例如 ④have a good view of sth有很好的视野 ⑤works of art艺术作品 [高分句型] ①Recently our school is planning to hold a “Hometown Cultural Heritage Festival” to respond to the government’s call “Protecting Intangible Cultural Heritage”.（不定式作目的状语） ②Nanjing is my hometown which is famous for many places of interest.（which引导的定语从句） 11．保护和传承中华民族的传统工艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近我校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统工艺”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的一种或两种我国传统的工艺以及它们的使用场景，并分享你的感受。 My favourite traditional Chinese craft What 介绍一种传统工艺（剪纸，惠山泥人，徽州墨条等）， 及它的基本信息 Special things 1. 制作材料 2. 制作方法 3.……（请你补充1-2点） Cultural value 1. ……是中国文化的重要部分…… 2. ……（请你补充1点） 注意：1.词数：90-100左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）： 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My favourite traditional Chinese craft As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive. 【答案】 My favourite traditional Chinese craft As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important. My favourite craft is paper-cutting. It has a history of over 1,500 years and was popular with ordinary people. It is easy to start paper-cutting. With just scissors and red paper, artists can create animals, flowers or Chinese characters. Paper cuts have special meaning. For example, at the Spring Festival people usually put them up on windows and doors for good luck.   I love the craft because it is an important part of Chinese culture. It can bring beauty to daily life. Every time I see them, I feel proud of our rich cultural heritage.   Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：传统工艺基本情况、制作要求、文化价值 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 、第三人称（It） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，引出话题 主体段：详细介绍剪纸的相关信息 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：传统工艺基本情况 传统工艺选择：paper-cutting/Chinese knot/Clay figurine/Embroidery… 历史背景：has a history of over 1,500 years/thousands of years of history/long ancient history/more than 2000 years old… 要点二：制作要求 制作材料：scissors and red paper/red silk rope/common clay/silk cloth and colorful threads… 制作方法：create animals/weave different shapes/shape lively figures/sew beautiful patterns… 特殊含义：for good luck/stands for peace and warmth/records local folk life/symbolizes happiness and health… 要点三：文化价值 价值说明：an important part of Chinese culture/carries traditional best wishes/shows folk art wisdom/treasure of Chinese fine art… 12．题目：假设你是李华，你的外国朋友John对中国民间艺术很感兴趣。请根据以下要点，给他写一封邮件介绍一种你喜欢的中国民间艺术（词数80左右）。 1. 介绍你喜欢的中国民间艺术形式（如剪纸、中国结等）； 2. 描述它的特点（如材料、形状等）； 3. 阐述你喜欢它的原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear John, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese folk art. I’d like to introduce paper-cutting to you. Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese folk art. It’s usually made of red paper. People use scissors to cut the paper into various shapes, such as flowers, animals and characters. These shapes carry good wishes. I like paper-cutting because it’s not only beautiful but also shows the wisdom of Chinese people. It’s a great way to experience Chinese culture. I hope you can have a chance to learn more about it. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需介绍一种中国民间艺术，说明其特点及个人喜欢的原因，词数80左右。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头问候，点明写作目的——介绍剪纸。 第二步：描述剪纸的材料、常见形状及特点。 第三步：用并列结构说明喜欢的原因，结尾表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①folk art 民间艺术 ②such as 例如 ③wisdom 智慧 [高分句型] I like paper-cutting because it’s not only beautiful but also shows the wisdom of Chinese people.（原因状语从句） Unit 5 动物 13．学校英语征文比赛正在征稿，请你以“Protect Lovely Animals”为题写一篇短文参赛。 提示要点： 1. 动物是人类的朋友，让大自然充满生机； 2. 如今不少野生动物生存面临威胁； 3. 谈谈我们该如何爱护动物、守护自然。 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当拓展； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯； 3. 词数60—80词； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Protect Lovely Animals Animals are our friends. They make nature full of life. However, many wild animals are in danger now. People cut down trees and kill them. We should take action to protect them. First, stop killing animals for fur. Second, plant more trees to build homes for them. Let’s work together to guard nature. If we try our best, the world will become more beautiful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：动物的重要性、面临的威胁、保护动物的建议 确定人称：第一人称(We) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明主题 主体段：介绍动物面临的危险并给出相应的建议 结尾段：发出呼吁，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：动物的重要性 动物的重要性说明：make nature full of life/keep the balance of nature/offer people useful food/bring joy and warmth to human life等 要点二：面临的威胁 威胁说明：in danger/be caught for illegal trade/lose their living homes/suffer from serious water and air pollution等 要点三：保护动物的建议 建议说明：stop killing animals/set up more nature reserves/refuse to buy goods made from wild animals/learn more knowledge about wildlife protection等 14．动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物, 关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请根据思维导图的提示信息, 以“My Favorite Animal”为题, 用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。 写作要求： （1）须包含思维导图的所有信息, 可适当拓展； （2）不少于100词； （3）不得出现真实个人信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Favorite Animal Animals play an important role in our lives. My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are black and white. They have fat bodies, round faces and big black eyes. They look very cute and funny. I like them best because they are not only lovely but also friendly to people. They are a symbol of peace. However, pandas are in danger now. We must do something to help them. First, we should protect their living environment and plant more bamboo. Second, we shouldn’t cut down trees. Finally, we can make rules to stop people from killing them. Let’s work together to protect animals. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    1. 确定文体：介绍性说明文，全文以一般现在时为主。 2. 明确要点：核心介绍对象：最喜欢的动物（熊猫）、外貌特征、喜欢它的理由、动物现状、我们能为动物做的保护行动 3. 确定人称：第一人称 I/my 4. 注意事项:不得透露任何真实个人、学校信息。        [第二步：构思布局] 1. 开头段：总起句开篇，点明动物的重要性+直接亮出自己最喜欢的动物。 2. 主体段：分层展开描写熊猫的外貌外形 ，阐述喜爱熊猫的具体原因，说明濒危现状+分点给出具体保护做法 3. 结尾段：总结升华，发出保护动物的倡议，升华文章主题        [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：动物外貌与特点。 外形描述： black and white/fat bodies/round faces and big black eyes 整体观感：look very cute and funny 要点二：喜爱的原因：lovely/friendly to people/symbol of peace 要点三：行动与升华。 现存问题：are in danger now 分点行动：protect living environment, plant more bamboo/shouldn’t cut down trees/make rules to stop killing 结尾升华：Let’s work together to protect animals. 15．请你根据下面的思维导图用英文写一篇短文，介绍一个你的动物朋友。 注意事项：(1)短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；- (2)词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 (3)书写工整，无语法错误，严禁出现真实地名与人名 I have an animal friend________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   I have an animal friend. Her name is Mimi, a lovely white cat. She has big round eyes and soft fluffy fur, which makes her look very cute.   Mimi loves eating fish best. She also likes sleeping on my lap when I do homework. She is very clever and can understand my words. When I feel sad, she always stays with me quietly.   Mimi is not just a pet, but also my best friend. I will love and take good care of her forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：动物朋友（姓名、外貌、喜好、特点、其他补充） 确定人称：第三人称（it/he/she/its）+第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出动物朋友 主体段：分别介绍动物朋友的外貌、喜好和特点 结尾段：总结感受，升华情感 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息（Name） 名字选择：Mimi/Doudou/Lucky等 所属类别：cat/dog/rabbit等 来源说明：got from my uncle/adopted from a shelter/kept as a pet等 要点二：外貌特征（Looks） 外形描述：small/cute/fluffy等 颜色选择：white/brown/yellow等 细节描写：long ears/big eyes/soft fur等 要点三：喜好习惯（Likes） 食物选择：fish/meat/carrots等 活动内容：sleep/play fetch/run around等 陪伴行为：sit on my lap/follow me everywhere/wait for me at the door等 要点四：特殊之处（Special） 技能特长：can catch mice/can understand my words/can shake hands等 性格特点：friendly/clever/loving等 情感作用：makes me happy/keeps me company/relieves my stress等 要点五：其他补充（……） 相处日常：play together every day/feed it every morning/take it for a walk等 未来愿望：keep it forever/take good care of it/be with it all the time等 Unit 6景观 16．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Ben想要了解中国的美丽地貌。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的自然地貌。 提示要点： 1. 地貌的名称和位置； 2. 地貌的特点； 3. 你喜欢它的原因； 4. 一次难忘的经历。 要求： 1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 Dear Ben, I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite natural landscape. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Ben, I’m glad to tell you something about my favourite natural landscape. It is Mount Huangshan in Anhui Province. It is famous for its strange pine trees, beautiful rocks and the sea of clouds. I climbed it with my parents last year. When we got to the top, we saw the most amazing sunrise. It was so beautiful that I couldn’t believe my eyes. I love Mount Huangshan because it shows the beauty of nature. Hope you can visit it one day! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主，描述难忘经历时用一般过去时 明确要点：地貌名称和位置、地貌特点、喜欢它的原因、一次难忘经历 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数80左右（开头结尾已给出） [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头，直接引出最喜欢的地貌名称和位置 主体段：依次介绍地貌特点、喜欢原因、难忘经历（可将喜欢原因与经历融合叙述） 结尾段：表达邀请或祝愿，呼应开头 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：地貌的名称和位置 名称选择：Mount Huangshan（黄山）/Zhangjiajie（张家界）/Jiuzhaigou（九寨沟）/Guilin（桂林）/The Li River（漓江） 位置描述：in Anhui Province/in Hunan Province/in Sichuan Province/in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region 要点二：地貌的特点 特点描述：strange pine trees（奇松）/beautiful rocks（怪石）/sea of clouds（云海）/towering sandstone pillars（高耸的砂岩柱）/colorful lakes（五彩池）/karst landscape（喀斯特地貌）/limestone peaks（石灰岩峰林） 要点三：你喜欢它的原因 原因表达： I love Mount Huangshan because it shows the beauty of nature./It makes me feel peaceful and amazed./I enjoy the fresh air and amazing views./It reminds me how wonderful our world is. 要点四：一次难忘的经历 经历描述：I climbed it with my parents last year./We saw the most amazing sunrise at the top./I took many photos./We walked along the path and enjoyed the views./I will never forget the moment when... 17．学校举办“生态科普周”活动，鼓励同学们利用假期，参与走近自然、感受生态景观的实践活动。假设你是李华，假期和家人去了九寨沟，请写一篇文章记录实践心得。 写作要点： 1. 景观名称及地点； 2. 该地貌的主要特点（有美丽的湖泊、瀑布和森林）； 3. 你观察到的自然现象或动植物（湖水清澈、有蓝有绿，是大熊猫栖息地）； 4. 你的感受或建议。 注意：需包含写作要点，篇幅不低于80词，可适当发挥，使行文流畅。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： I went to Jiuzhaigou in Sichuan during the National Day holiday. It is a valley with colourful lakes, waterfalls, and forests. The water in the lakes looks blue or green because of special minerals. Huge trees grow along the paths. I saw a waterfall that was over 20 metres high. The air was so fresh. What a clean place! Some pandas live in the nearby forest. It’s the best time to visit in October when the leaves turn golden and red. The nature is the best artist. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:记叙文，一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主 明确要点:描述旅游景点及心得 确定人称:第一人称（I） 注意事项:包含写作要点，篇幅不低于80词 [第二步:构思布局] 一段式结构:开篇点明主题，接着介绍景点以及自然现象或动植物，最后写出自己的感受 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一: 景点描述 时间地点：Jiuzhaigou/in Sichuan/during the National Day holiday 自然景观：colourful lakes/waterfalls/forests/ huge trees/pandas 景观特点：looks blue or green/grow along the paths/over 20 metres high/so fresh/in the nearby forest/the leaves turn golden and red. 感受建议：It’s the best time to visit in October/The nature is the best artist. 18．随着“240小时过境免签”政策的推出，吸引了越来越多的外国年轻人来华旅游。假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom对中国的自然之美很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件向他介绍一种中国的野生动物及一处地貌景观。邮件要点如下： Word bank: 金丝猴 golden snub-nosed monkeys 大熊猫 giant pandas 丹顶鹤 red-crowned crane 注意事项： 1.邮件须包含所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，句意连贯。 2.字数80词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。 3.邮件中不得出现真实姓名与学校信息。 Dear Tom, I’m glad you are interested in the natural beauty of China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you can come and enjoy the beauty soon! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad you are interested in the natural beauty of China. I’d like to tell you something about Giant pandas. With black and white fur and round faces, they look very cute! Giant pandas eat bamboo. And they only live in China, so millions of visitors around the world come to China to see them. If you come to China, Mount Huangshan is worth visiting! It lies in Anhui Province and is famous for pine trees and rocks in strange shapes. Many people come and climb up to the top to enjoy the fantastic sunrise or sunset. Hope you can come and enjoy the beauty soon! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（邮件），以一般现在时为主； 明确要点： 介绍一种中国的野生动物（含外形、特点、特殊之处）； 介绍一处地貌景观（含位置、特色、可参与的活动）； 呼应开头，表达欢迎对方来华体验的期待； 确定人称：第一人称（I）介绍信息，以第二人称（you）面向笔友 Tom； 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名与学校信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 开头句：承接题目给出的开头 I’m glad you are interested in the natural beauty of China.，直接引出第一个介绍对象：野生动物大熊猫； 主体句 1（介绍动物）：用 I’d like to tell you something about Giant pandas. 点明介绍对象，再依次补充外形、习性 、特殊之处； 主体句 2（介绍景观）：用 If you come to China, Mount Huangshan is worth visiting! 过渡到地貌景观，依次说明位置、特色、可参与的活动； 结尾句：承接题目给出的结尾 Hope you can come and enjoy the beauty soon! [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍野生动物（Giant pandas） 细节呈现： 是什么：Giant pandas（大熊猫）                      外形特点：black and white fur and round faces, look very cute                      特殊之处：only live in China 要点二：介绍地貌景观（Mount Huangshan） 细节呈现： 是什么：Mount Huangshan（黄山）                      位置：lies in Anhui Province                      特色：famous for pine trees and rocks in strange shapes（奇松怪石）                      可参与的活动：climb up to the top to enjoy the fantastic sunrise or sunset（登山看日出 / 日落） Unit 7户外活动 19．题目：My Favorite Outdoor Fun 写作要求： 1. 介绍自己最喜欢的一项户外活动，描述一次相关经历； 2. 写明这项活动带来的收获与乐趣； 3. 正确使用一般过去时，运用单元重点短语与句型； 4. 词数60-80，语句通顺，语法规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Outdoor Fun My favorite outdoor activity is camping. Last summer, I went camping with my parents by a lake. We put up a tent and made a fire. I learned to cook food by myself. At night, we sat around the fire and told stories. I felt close to nature and really relaxed. Camping taught me to be brave and independent. It also brought my family closer. I can’t wait to go camping again! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 明确文体：记叙文（材料作文），以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：点明最喜爱的户外活动是露营，回忆一次露营经历，讲述活动过程、自身感受，说明收获并表达再次参与的期待 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：叙事条理清晰，情感自然，时态使用准确 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：直接点题，说明自己最喜欢的户外活动是露营 主体段：回忆去年夏天和父母在湖边露营的经历，介绍具体活动与当下感受 结尾段：总结露营带来的成长与家庭变化，表达期待再次露营的心情 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：点明喜爱的活动 favorite outdoor activity is camping/like camping best among outdoor activities/climbing/hiking等 要点二：相关经历 出行背景与地点：went camping with parents by a lake/last summer/spent a camping trip with family near a lake in summer/went out for an outdoor trip with family/enjoyed leisure time in the wild 露营具体活动：put up a tent/made a fire/cook food alone/sit around fire and tell stories/set up a tent/lit a fire/prepared meals on my own/shared stories together/do various outdoor tasks/learn new life skills/enjoy group leisure time 当下内心感受：close to nature/feel relaxed/get in touch with nature/feel comfortable and peaceful/enjoy the beauty of nature/release tiredness and stress 要点三：活动收获和期待 活动收获：be brave and independent/get family closer/become courageous and self-reliant/strengthen family bond/gain personal growth/deepen the relationship with family 内心期待：can’t wait to go camping again/look forward to another camping trip/hope to experience it once more/expect the next outdoor activity 20．假设你是李华，你和你的朋友计划本周六去郊外露营。请你根据以下提示，给你班上的交换生Tom写一封邮件，邀请他一起去。 提示： 1. 时间：本周六上午8点在校门口集合 2. 活动：徒步、野餐、观星 3. 需要准备的物品：运动鞋、外套、食物和水 要求： 邮件格式正确，包含所有要点; 语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥; 词数80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Tom, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, How is everything going? My friends and I are going camping in the countryside this Saturday. Would you like to join us? We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. We plan to go hiking, have a picnic, and watch the stars at night. It will be great fun! Please wear sports shoes and a warm coat. Don’t forget to bring some food and water. I really hope you can come. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：电子邮件，用一般将来时为主 明确要点：邀请Tom去露营，详细说明见面的时间地点，要做的活动和需要准备的物品 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：邮件格式正确，包含所有要点，80词左右 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构： 开头段：开头点明邀请Tom周六去露营 主体段：详细说明见面具体时间地点，要做的活动和需要准备的物品 结尾段：表达期望，希望Tom能来参加 第三步：要点展开 要点一： 见面时间地点：meet/see each other/get together/at the school gate/the front of school等 要做的活动：plan to do/intend to do/go hiking/have a picnic/watch the stars/chat with friends等 需要准备的物品：wear sports shoes/wear warm coat/don’t forget to do/remember to do/bring food and water等 要点二： 表达期望：have a good time/look forward to your reply等 21．假设你是张丽，上周日你和家人一起去郊外野餐，度过了非常愉快的一天。你想感谢爸爸妈妈带你走进大自然，享受户外时光。请你给爸爸妈妈写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 回忆那天去了哪里，做了什么有趣的事（至少2件）； 2. 描述户外活动带给你的快乐和收获； 3. 表达对父母的感谢，并希望以后还能一起去户外玩。 Dear Mom and Dad, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Zhang Li 【答案】例文 Dear Mom and Dad, I will never forget the wonderful day we spent together last Sunday. We went to Nanshan Park for a picnic. We put a blanket on the grass. Mom made delicious sandwiches, and Dad brought juice and fruit. After eating, we flew a kite. The kite went so high in the blue sky. I was so happy that I jumped and laughed. Dad also taught me how to take photos of the flowers and the birds. I felt so happy and relaxed in the great outdoors. The fresh air made me feel fresh and strong. Looking at the green trees and the blue sky, I forgot all my worries from school. And being with you, just the three of us, made me feel so loved. Thank you for taking me to enjoy nature. I love the great outdoors, and I love being with you. I hope we can go out again soon—maybe to climb a hill or walk by a river. I am looking forward to our next outdoor adventure. Love, Zhang Li 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意 确定文体：感谢信，用一般过去时为主 明确要点：回忆去了哪里、做了什么有趣的事、描述户外活动带来的快乐和收获、表达感谢，并希望以后还能一起去户外玩 确定人称：第一人称(I/we) 注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：回忆去的地方和做的事 主体段：介绍有趣的事和快乐收获 结尾段：表达感谢和希望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：回忆去的地方和做的有趣的事 时间词汇：last Sunday 地点词汇：Nanshan Park 活动词汇：a picnic/put a blanket/made delicious sandwiches/brought juice and fruit/flew a kite. 拓展词汇：chase butterflies/play frisbee/take a walk by the lake/watch the clouds 拓展句式：We went to … where we …/What I enjoyed most was …/I was so happy that I 要点二：快乐收获 快乐的感受：happy/jumped and laughed/relaxed/forgot worries from school/fresh air made me feel fresh and strong 情感收获：being with you made me feel so loved 拓展词汇：feel relaxed/at ease/feel energetic/ get close to nature/feel loved /cared for/enjoy family time/cheer up / feel happy 拓展句式：The fresh air and sunshine made me feel …/Looking at the green trees and blue sky, I …/Being with you, just the three of us, made me … 要点三：表达感谢和希望 表达感谢：Thank you for taking me to enjoy nature./I love being with you. 表达希望：I hope we can go out again soon—maybe to climb a hill or walk by a river. 表达期待：I am looking forward to our next outdoor adventure. 拓展短语：go to the beach/go cycling/go camping 拓展句式：I really appreciate that you …/It would be great if we could …/I can’t wait for our next … Unit 8故事 22．假设你是李明，你刚刚读完了《爱丽丝梦游仙境》这本书。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的读后感。 提示： 1. 故事的主要内容； 2. 你最喜欢的部分； 3. 你从故事中学到了什么。 要求： 1. 语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数80词左右； 3.不得出现具体学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland is a wonderful story. Alice follows a white rabbit and falls into a magical world. There she meets many strange characters like the Mad Hatter and the Cheshire Cat. She also changes her size many times. My favorite part is when Alice drinks the magic liquid and becomes very small. It is so funny and interesting. From this story, I learn that we should be brave when we face difficulties. Just like Alice, we should never give up, even when things seem confusing. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：故事主要内容、最喜欢的部分、读书收获 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：不得出现具体学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，点明本书是精彩的奇幻故事 主体段：介绍故事梗概、自己最喜欢的情节 结尾段：写读后收获，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：故事主要内容 故事主线：Alice follows a white rabbit and falls into a magical world/Alice runs after a white rabbit/gets into a fantastic magic land等 要点二：最喜欢的部分 内容：drinks magic liquid and becomes very small/tastes strange magic drink and turns tiny/has some special potion and shrinks suddenly等 理由：It is so funny/It makes me laugh a lot/It’s full of surprises and magic等 要点三：读书收获 感悟：be brave when facing difficulties/never give up easily/stick to our way in difficult moments等 23．今年你校读书节的主题是“Read and Share”，为此你所在的英语俱乐部开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书或一个故事。请根据以下问题写一篇短文参加活动。 1. What is your favourite book or story? 2. What does the book or story talk about? 3. Why do you like the book or story? 注意事项： 1. 短文内容须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 短文80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favourite book is ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite book is Alice in Wonderland. It is a wonderful fantasy story. One day, Alice sees a white rabbit passing by. She runs after it and falls down a rabbit hole. Then she enters a magical world and has many amazing adventures there. I love this story because it is full of magic and surprises. As we know, fantasy stories allow us to take a break from daily worries and relax. Besides, Alice is brave and never gives up when facing difficulties. It teaches me to be brave in our daily life. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：最喜爱的书或故事（书名、内容概述、喜欢原因） 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（she） 注意事项：短文须包含全部三个问题要点，80词左右，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：接已给出的开头，点明书名及类型 主体段：概述故事内容（情节概要） 结尾段：说明喜欢原因，升华感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：书名及类型 书名选择：Alice in Wonderland/Journey to the West/Cinderella/The Little Prince/Harry Potter等 类型描述：a wonderful fantasy story/a fairy tale/an adventure story/a science fiction book等 要点二：故事内容 情节：One day, .../Once upon a time, .../The story begins with.../sees...passing by/runs after/falls down/enters a magical world/has many amazing adventures/meets strange characters/goes on a long journey/finds a treasure/solves a mystery等 要点三：喜欢原因 原因I love this story because.../I like it because.../My favourite part is../full of magic and surprises/interesting/exciting/meaningful/allows us to take a break from daily worries and relax/teaches me to be brave/helps me learn a lesson/the main character is brave and never gives up when facing difficulties/the character is kind/the ending is touching等 感悟升华：It teaches me to be brave in our daily life/It makes me want to try new things/I learn that we should never give up等 24．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在昨天的e-mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封e-mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并写出从这个故事中得出的感悟。 要求: 1.文章须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息； 3. 70～90词 (邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇: tortoise 乌龟 catch up with 赶上 look down upon 看不起 compete 竞赛 The Rabbit and the Tortoise Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Let me share the story “The Rabbit and the Tortoise” with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Let me share the story “The Rabbit and the Tortoise” with you. One day, the rabbit and the tortoise decided to compete in a race. The rabbit ran very fast, but the tortoise walked slowly. The rabbit was so proud that he thought he would surely win. So he fell asleep under a big tree. Meanwhile, the tortoise kept moving without stopping. When the rabbit woke up, the tortoise had already won the game. This story tells us that pride leads to failure. We should never look down upon others and always keep trying. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 记叙文 明确要点： 根据四幅图讲述故事（兔子和乌龟决定比赛；兔子跑得快，乌龟走得慢；兔子睡着了；乌龟赢了比赛）；写出从故事中得出的感悟。 确定人称： 第一人称（I, my），故事角色用第三人称（the rabbit, the tortoise） 注意事项： 文章须包括所有图画的内容，可适当发挥使全文连贯；文中不得出现真实信息；70~90词（邮件开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段： 已给出（Dear Tom,... share the story... with you.）直接接续讲述故事。 主体段： 按照四幅图顺序讲述故事。第一句介绍兔子和乌龟决定比赛；第二句写兔子跑得快而乌龟走得慢，形成对比；第三句写兔子中途骄傲睡着；第四句写乌龟坚持前进，最终获胜。 结尾段： 写出感悟（如：骄傲使人落后，坚持不懈才能成功等），并表达希望Tom喜欢这个故事。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：比赛决定（图一） decided to compete/had a race/agreed to run/started the competition/challenged each other等 要点二：速度对比（图二） rabbit ran very fast/tortoise walked slowly/hurried ahead/moved at a steady pace/quick vs slow等 要点三：兔子睡着了（图三） fell asleep/took a nap/stopped to rest/lay down under a tree/got too proud and careless等 要点四：乌龟赢了（图四及感悟） won the game/got to the finish line first/succeeded/kept moving without stopping/crossed the finish line等 感悟词汇：pride leads to failure/never look down upon others/keep going/steady wins the race/hard work pays off/stay humble等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $