Unit 4 Scientists who changed the world专题续写 讲义-2025-2026学年高中英语译林版必修第三册

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学段 高中
学科 英语
教材版本 高中英语译林版必修第三册
年级 高一
章节 Unit 4 Scientists Who Changed the World
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使用场景 同步教学-单元练习
学年 2026-2027
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该高中英语单元复习讲义以“科技与人文”为主题,通过框架图系统梳理记叙文续写的知识体系,将“问题发现-解决方案-情感升华”逻辑链与话题词汇、高分句型等要点分层呈现,并用表格归纳行为类、情绪类词汇及句式模板,清晰展现重难点内在联系。 讲义亮点在于真实情境驱动的续写练习设计,如“设计提醒APP关爱他人”案例引导学生从生活问题出发,运用编程知识解决实际需求,培养语言表达与逻辑分析能力。每个真题配有高分句型解析和易错点提醒,基础学生可掌握写作框架,优秀学生能深化情感表达,助力教师实施分层教学,提升学生思维品质与自主学习能力。

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B3 U4 Scientists who changed the world 【设计提醒APP关爱他人】 ★名校真题 My name is Mae. I’ve always been passionate about exploring and solving problems — whether fixing a broken toy or figuring out how a phone app works. This led me to join our school’s Coding (编程) Club. In our first lesson, Ms. Davis told us that coding is more than writing lines of code. It is about using technology to make life easier for others. “Your project,” she announced in class one day, “is to create a simple app that solves a real-life problem.” “You have one week to prepare,” she added gently, hoping this would give us enough time to find inspiration and finish the project. The challenge stayed with me as I walked to my neighbor Mrs. Thompson’s apartment after school. She had invited me for tea, as she often did on Tuesdays. Mrs. Thompson was kind and cheerful, but lately she had been a little forgetful, often misplacing her keys or repeating the same story twice without realizing it. When I arrived, she was in the kitchen. “Mae! Good timing,” she greeted me warmly, and then stopped, glancing at the kettle. “Did I already boil water for tea?” I checked the kettle — it was still warm. We laughed about it as I poured water, and soon we were chatting. Our conversation turned to her weekly book club with friends. Mrs. Thompson smiled, talking about her two old friends. Mr. Brown arrived late for the game, and Mrs. Smith failed to bring her glasses twice. “We’re quite a group,” she said. Then her expression grew thoughtful. “We manage, of course. But sometimes I think wouldn’t it be nice if something simply reminds us? Take medicine. Water the plants. Friday for book club.” She tapped her head with a soft laugh. Her words sank in. At that moment, an idea formed in my mind. As I stood up to leave, I smiled mysteriously, “Give me a few days, and I’ll bring you a little surprise.” “Oh? I’ll try not to forget that,” she laughed. 注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 That night, I sat at my desk, notebook open and mind racing with details. I decided to design a gentle reminder app especially for the elderly. I listed simple functions: important dates, daily tasks, and warm notes. I focused on making the words big and the buttons easy to touch. Whenever I felt stuck, I thought of Mrs. Thompson’s kind smile and her wish for something to help her remember. I carefully tested every part again and again, making sure it was simple and helpful. Deep in my heart, I hoped this little app could bring convenience and warmth to her and more elderly people. A week later, I presented my project to Ms. Davis. I introduced the app’s purpose and showed how it worked. Ms. Davis praised my thoughtful idea and spoke highly of my project. After class, I brought the app to Mrs. Thompson. She was delighted and tried it at once. “This is exactly what I need,” she said happily. Watching her smile, I truly understood what Ms. Davis had meant: coding is not just code, but a way to use technology to care for others. 【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了主人公Mae加入编程俱乐部,需完成一个解决实际问题的App项目。她从健忘的邻居Mrs. Thompson的需求中获得灵感,设计了一款提醒类App,最终展示项目并理解了编程的意义 —— 用科技关爱他人。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上,我坐在书桌前,笔记本打开着,思绪在脑海中飞速运转,脑海中浮现着各种细节”可知,第一段可描写作者想专门为老人设计一款“提醒App”,并描写设计过程和决心。 ②由第二段首句内容“一周后,我向Davis女士展示了我的项目情况”可知,第二段可描写Davis女士对这款App的认可以及作者向Mrs. Thompson演示其使用方式,最后描写作者的感悟。 2.续写线索:明确设计理念,专为老人设计的一款“提醒App”—— 设计过程和决心 ——向Ms. Davis展示项目并获得认可 ——向Mrs. Thompson演示App的使用方法 —— 感悟 ★话题词汇 行为类 ①决心做:decide to do/be determined to do/make up one’s mind to do ②测试、检验:test/check/examine ③专注于:focus on/share/concentrate on ④称赞:praise/think highly of/speak highly of 情绪类 ①高兴的:delighted/pleased/cheerful ②亲切的:kind/ genial ★话题句式 【高分句型1】Whenever I felt stuck, I thought of Mrs. Thompson’s kind smile and her wish for something to help her remember.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Deep in my heart, I hoped this little app could bring convenience and warmth to her and more elderly people.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作hoped 的宾语) 【高分句型3】“This is exactly what I need,” she said happily.(运用了what引导的表语从句) 【机器狗陪伴老年痴呆者】 ★名校真题 Grandma Agnes is ninety-nine years old and still lives in the same house she’s lived in for more than sixty years. She was one of thirteen children raised on a farm, and now, she is rather set in her ways. For twelve years, Grandma Agnes enjoyed the company of her dog, Snoopy. The black-and-white spotted mutt(杂种狗) was a constant presence in her home and yard. As time went on, Grandma Agnes began showing signs of dementia(老年痴呆). My family worked together to keep her living independently yet safe. It was heartbreaking for my dad when he removed the battery from her car to prevent her from driving with her still-valid license. After that, every visit ended with Grandma insisting he buy her a new battery, claiming hers was “dead again.” Dad would no d and promise, though he knew she’d forget. Three years ago, Snoop y passed away. My dad, Aunt Carol, and Uncle Ed tried to help Grandma understand. They held a small funeral in the backyard. Uncle Ed framed a photo of Snoopy with “Rest in Peace” written below and stuck it on the fridge. Yet during daily visits, Grandma still asked about Snoopy, accusing neighbors of stealing him because she “heard his barking.” Caring for someone with dementia is emotionally exhausting. For years, Dad warned me before each visit: “She might not recognize you or your kids.” We’d patiently answer the same questions repeatedly. Grandma Agnes is still stubbornly independent, but she struggles to make sense of the world. Still, she insists on living alone and never stops asking about Snoopy. 范文1 A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with a good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Agnes. The new Snoopy looked almost the same as the old one, with black-and-white fur and a wagging tail. When Grandma touched its head, the robot barked softly and rubbed against her hand. “Oh, Snoopy! You’re back!” she cried, holding it close. From that day on, she “fed” it every morning and talked to it while sitting in the yard. Though the robotic dog couldn’t run or play, its programmed warmth seemed to comfort her. She stopped accusing the neighbors and even smiled more often. Everyone was pleased that Grandma Agnes liked “Snoopy” a lot. Last Sunday, I visited her with Dad. She didn’t recognize me, but she cheerfully introduced her “good boy” to us. The robotic dog sat beside her, its head resting on her lap as she hummed an old song. Dad whispered, “Technology may not cure her illness, but it gives her peace.” Watching Grandma gently stroke the robot’s fur, I realized how something as simple as a machine could reconnect her to lost love and memories. Science, in its own quiet way, had become a bridge between her fading world and the care we longed to provide. 范文2 A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with a good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Agnes. When the lifelike, black-and-white spotted robotic dog was placed before her, Grandma froze. Her eyes widened in shock. Then, a faint smile spread on her wrinkled face. “Snoopy?” she softly murmured, reaching to touch its head. The dog barked gently and wagged its tail. Since then, it has become a constant companion in her life. She took it for walks around the yard, chatting about farm days. Everyone was pleased that Grandma Agnes liked “Snoopy” a lot. It’s heartwarming. She showers the robotic pet with love, as if it were the real Snoopy. The empty look in her eyes has turned into a spark of joy. During visits, we often find her on the porch, the robotic dog at her feet, as she shares childhood stories. This simple yet smart idea has brought back companionship. Such is the meaning of technology, which gives us hope, showing that love and memories can shine through, even with dementia. 【导语】本文以患有老年痴呆的Agnes奶奶为线索展开,主要讲述了奶奶在爱犬Snoopy去世后不断询问狗狗下落,家人为此心力交瘁,后来叔叔买了只机器狗,让奶奶重新获得慰藉的故事。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“几个月前,Ed叔叔想出了一个好主意,给Agnes奶奶买了一只机器狗。”可知,第一段可描写机器狗的外观与功能,以及奶奶见到机器狗时的反应,还有机器狗如何让奶奶的情绪和行为发生积极变化,比如她不再指责邻居,还时常微笑。 ②由第二段首句内容“每个人都很高兴Agnes奶奶非常喜欢“Snoopy”。”可知,第二段可描写作者和爸爸去看望奶奶时的情景,奶奶向她们介绍机器狗,展现她与机器狗的亲密,以及家人对这一变化的感慨,点明科技虽不能治愈疾病,却给奶奶带来了内心的平静。 2.续写线索: Ed叔叔买机器狗——奶奶的反应——机器狗给奶奶带来的变化——作者和爸爸看望奶奶——奶奶介绍“Snoopy”——爸爸的感慨——作者的感悟 ★话题词汇 行为类 ①抱着它:hold it close/clasp it tightly ②轻抚机器人的毛:stroke the robot’s fur/gently pat the robot’s coat ③低声说:whisper/mutter softly 情绪类 ①开心地:cheerfully/happily ②平静:peace/calmness/tranquility ★话题句式 【高分句型1】When Grandma touched its head, the robot barked softly and rubbed against her hand.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Watching Grandma gently stroke the robot’s fur, I realized how something as simple as a machine could reconnect her to lost love and memories.(运用了how引导的宾语从句) 【机器人促使儿童情感和社交发展】 ★名校真题 When Cynthia was a young girl, a screening of Star Wars changed her life. The adorable R2-D2 in the movie inspired her dream of creating a robot friend. College was a challenging start. She struggled with difficult engineering courses and failed a robotics exam. Instead of giving up, she spent countless nights in the library, devoted to her studies. Eventually, she graduated with an engineering degree. After graduation, she joined a team under a famous robotics professor to develop a planet-exploring robot. They faced numerous difficulties, especially disagreements within the team on the design. Cynthia firmly insisted on her ideas and finally, they overcame the barriers. However, when the robot was completed, Cynthia realized it lacked the function of companionship she had pictured. Determined to create a truly friendly robot, Cynthia focused on a project for hospitalized children. She visited local hospitals, had in-depth discussions with medical staff and consulted several child psychologists. These experts shared their insights on children’s emotional needs during hospitalization, such as the importance of consistent companionship and the role of positive distractions(分心的事物). Equipped with them, Cynthia began the creation of Huggable, a teddy-bear-shaped robot. During its development, Cynthia faced financial shortages. She spent months presenting her project to various investors, suffering countless rejections. But her passion and determination paid off when a local tech-enthusiast learned about her vision and provided the necessary funds. A partner’s departure also left her short-handed, but she reached out to former classmates and brought in a new, devoted team member. Now, Huggable is in a local children’s hospital, bringing comfort to young patients. However, as Huggable’s influence grew, so did controversy(争议). Some people worried that relying too much on a robot for comfort might affect children’s normal emotional and social development. They argued that children needed real-human interaction to learn communication skills. Articles and comments against Huggable started appearing on the Internet. Soon, the hospital received calls from concerned parents, demanding an explanation. 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Facing controversy, Cynthia stood firm, ready to respond positively. She organized a public meeting, inviting those child psychologists she consulted, doctors, and some young patients. A psychologist stated, “Huggable is a great emotional release for children in hospital. It helps them deal with fear and loneliness.” Doctors also showed how Huggable could monitor children’s vital signs while entertaining them, which was a huge help during treatment. Some young patients came on stage, sharing how they played and talked with Huggable. Their enthusiasm convinced the audience, gradually changing their negative views. Encouraged by the successful meeting, Cynthia focused on making Huggable even better. She led her team to dive back into research, cooperating with child psychologists again. They added more interactive features, like telling personalized stories based on children’s interests. They also improved Huggable’s appearance, making it look even more like a real teddy bear. With these improvements, Huggable became even more popular in the hospital. It offered children consistent companionship and helped them grow healthily. Seeing Huggable’s positive impact, Cynthia felt a deep sense of fulfillment. Her childhood dream of creating a robot friend was steadily becoming a reality. 【导语】文章以人物为线索,主要讲述了Cynthia如何克服困难,实现梦想,创造出Huggable机器人,并面对争议,积极回应,最终使Huggable成为儿童情感和社交发展的工具。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ① 由第一段首句“面对争议,辛西娅立场坚定,准备积极回应。”可知,本段可描述Cynthia如何面对公众对Huggable的争议,并通过组织公开会议和多方合作,成功地改变了人们对机器人可能影响儿童情感和社会发展的负面看法。 ②由第二段首句“在这次成功会面的鼓舞下,辛西娅专注于把Huggable做得更好。”可知,本段可描写Cynthia在会议成功后,进一步改进Huggable,增加互动功能,促进儿童情感和社交发展。 2.续写线索:组织会议——解释设计初衷并展示数据——专家支持——父母理解——会议成功——改进Huggable——增加互动功能——促进情感和社交发展——团队受鼓舞——Huggable影响增强 ★话题词汇 行为类 ①组织:organize→arrange ②展示:show→showcase ③改善:improve→enhance 情绪类 ①消极的:negative→passive ②积极的:positive→vigorous ③成就感:a sense of fulfillment→a sense of accomplishment ★话题句式 【高分句型1】 She organized a public meeting, inviting those child psychologists she consulted, doctors, and some young patients.(运用了现在分词作状语和省略that引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】Doctors also showed how Huggable could monitor children’s vital signs while entertaining them, which was a huge help during treatment.(运用了how引导宾语从句,状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句) 【参加科学博览会感悟】 ★名校真题 The school gymnasium was transformed into a hub(中心) of innovation and excitement as students from all grades gathered for the annual science fair. Projects lined the walls, each one a testament(证明) to the hard work and creativity of the students. Among the exhibits was a particularly impressive volcano created by a group of enthusiastic freshmen, and a sophisticated solar-powered car designed by a team of seniors. In the corner of the gymnasium, a slightly nervous but determined-looking girl named Mei stood next to her project. She had spent weeks preparing for this event, working tirelessly on a device that could convert(使转变) thermal energy from the environment into electricity. Her invention was a small, compact box with a series of thermoelectric cells(热电元件) and a small fan to let heat out. Mei had named it “Eco-Power,” and she hoped it would impress the judges and her peers. As the first group of students approached her table, Mei took a deep breath and began to explain the workings of her invention. She was proud of her work, but the pressure of the science fair was starting to get to her. Her hands trembled slightly as she demonstrated how the device could power a small LED light using the heat from a warm cup of water. The crowd around Mei’s project grew, and she could feel the weight of their expectations. She noticed a few students whispering and pointing at her device, and she couldn’t tell if they were impressed or skeptical. Mei’s heart raced as she continued to answer questions and explain the scientific principles behind her invention. As the judges made their way through the gymnasium, Mei’s anxiety reached its peak. When they finally reached her table, Mei took a deep breath and began to explain the concept of “Eco-Power” once again. The lead judge, a woman with a kind smile, listened intently and asked several detailed questions about the efficiency and practical applications of her device. Mei answered with as much confidence as she could muster, her hands still trembling slightly. The judges nodded approvingly, and Mei felt a glimmer of hope as they moved on to the next project. When the awards ceremony began, Mei sat in the audience, with her hands tightly pressed together on the lap. Her heart pounded as the announcer called out the winners for various categories. Each name that wasn’t hers felt like a weighted push against her dreams. Finally, the announcement for the “Best Innovation” category echoed through the gym. “Eco-Power by Mei!” rang out, prompting an eruption of applause. Stunned but elated, Mei rose from her seat, her earlier fears melting away, as she walked up to receive her award, knowing her hard work had paid off. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Mei参加科学博览会。她为这次活动做了数周的准备,要在体育馆中展示自己的Eco-Power项目。Mei为自己的工作感到自豪,但是科学博览会的压力也开始对Mei产生影响,Mei开始心跳加速。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“当评委们穿过体育馆时,梅的焦虑达到了顶峰。”可知,第一段可描写评委听Mei介绍自己的项目并点头表示赞同。 ②由第二段首句内容“颁奖典礼开始时,梅坐在观众席上,双手紧紧地放在腿上。”可知,第二段可描写Mei获得奖励,直到自己的努力得到了回报。 2.续写线索:感觉焦虑——解释Eco-Power的概念——评委点头表示赞同——颁奖典礼开始——Mei获奖——努力得到回报 ★话题词汇 行为类 ①到达:reach/arrive ②颤抖:tremble/shake ③询问:ask/inquire 情绪类 ①震惊的:stunned/shocked/surprised ②恐惧:fear/terror ★话题句式 【高分句型1】When they finally reached her table, Mei took a deep breath and began to explain the concept of “Eco-Power” once again.(运用了When引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】The judges nodded approvingly, and Mei felt a glimmer of hope as they moved on to the next project.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句) 【机器人拯救Gabriel妈妈】 ★名校真题 Gabriel had always been fascinated by robots. His mother, however, did not think much of it. She often criticized him, urging him to focus on his schoolwork instead of those “useless machines”, as she called them. She wanted him to spend more time on his books, and less time lost in the world of robotics. He, however, always worked quietly on parts, trying to create inventions that could solve everyday problems. One day, Gabriel came back from school, bursting through the front door, holding a shining award in his hand. The gas detection robot he had built for months had just won first place in the regional competition. His heart raced as he imagined his mother would be proud this time. “Mom! Look! I won!” he cried. His mother, standing at the kitchen counter, looked briefly. She sighed, “That’s nice, Gabriel, but I still don’t see what good it will do you. It’s not going to help you with your grades or get you into college. You need to focus on something more practical.” Her voice showed no interest. Gabriel remained quiet, determined to prove that what he was doing had value. One evening, as the delicious smell of dinner floated through the house, an unexpected danger was quietly closing. Gabriel’s mother had been busy in the kitchen but had forgotten to turn off the gas. Unaware of the coming threat, she had wandered into the living room, settling down comfortably in front of the TV. The gas continued to escape, silently filling the air. The house was on the edge of a disaster. 注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly, a loud alarm rang through the house. Gabriel’s gas detection robot had sensed the leak and sprung into action. The shrill sound jolted his mother from her TV reverie, her heart pounding as she realized the danger they were in. Quickly, she rushed to the kitchen, turned off the gas, and opened all the windows to let the fresh air disperse the dangerous fumes. As the alarm ceased, she stood there, breathing a sigh of relief, suddenly understanding the significance of Gabriel’s invention. It wasn’t just a toy or a useless machine; it was a lifesaver. Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school. She couldn’t wait to tell him how his creation had prevented a potential tragedy. When Gabriel finally walked through the door, his mother greeted him with tears in her eyes and a smile on her face. “Gabriel, you were right,” she said, hugging him tightly. “This robot isn’t just a hobby; it’s something that can protect us, make our lives safer. I’m sorry I didn’t see it before.” Gabriel’s heart swelled with pride and joy. From that day on, his mother became his biggest supporter, encouraging him to pursue his passion for robotics and recognizing the value of his inventions in making the world a better, safer place. 【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述Gabriel热爱机器人却遭母亲反对,他默默努力终获机器人比赛一等奖,但母亲仍不以为意。某晚,家中煤气泄漏,母亲却全然不知。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“突然,一声响亮的警报响彻了整个房子。”可知,第一段可描写Gabriel的机器人检测到煤气泄漏并发出警报,母亲因此意识到危险并采取行动。 ②由第二段首句内容“Gabriel的妈妈轻轻地把机器人抱在怀里,等着Gabriel从学校回来。”可知,第二段可描写母亲对Gabriel的机器人态度转变,向Gabriel道歉并表达支持。 2.续写线索:机器人发出警报——母亲意识到煤气泄漏——母亲关闭煤气并打开窗户——母亲等待Gabriel回家——母亲向Gabriel道歉并表达支持 ★话题词汇 行为类 ①意识到:realize/become aware/come to realize ②拥抱:hug/embrace ③等待:wait for/await 情绪类 ①如释重负:breathe a sigh of relief/feel relieved ②快乐:joy/happiness/delight ★话题句式 【高分句型1】The shrill sound jolted his mother from her TV reverie, her heart pounding as she realized the danger they were in.(运用了独立主格结构和从属连词as引导时间状语从句和省略关系代词的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Gabriel’s mother held the robot gently in her arms, waiting for Gabriel to get back from school.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 【高分句型3】When Gabriel finally walked through the door, his mother greeted him with tears in her eyes and a smile on her face.(运用了从属连词when引导时间状语从句) 【“守护伴侣”帮助阿尔茨海默患者】 ★名校真题 In 2018, 17-year-old Hemesh spent a life-changing summer with his grandmother Anne, who had been diagnosed with Alzheimer’s disease. Witnessing the impact of the disease firsthand, Hemesh was awakened to the seriousness of the situation. One night, Hemesh walked into the kitchen only to discover that his grandmother had left the gas stove (炉) on after making tea. Shocked by the dangerous consequences Alzheimer’s disease could bring about, he couldn’t help but wonder what might have happened if he hadn’t been there. Hemesh’s worries increased as he observed his grandmother’s behavior. She would wake up in the early hours of the morning, believing she was on a train, and wander outside aimlessly. This wandering tendency could potentially lead her to get lost or put herself in risky situations. Determined to make a difference, Hemesh engaged himself in extensive research about Alzheimer’s disease and its symptomatic (症状的) progression. Through his studies, he discovered that wandering was a common problem among dementia patients, especially those with Alzheimer’s disease. Inspired by his newfound knowledge and fueled by his desire to help, Hemesh told his family, “I can’t just stand by and watch this happen. I need to do something to keep Grandma safe. I think I have an idea that might help not just her, but others in similar situations.” With firm determination, he developed an inventive answer to the wandering dilemma, a device he called the Guardian Companion. It was a wearable device, similar to a smartwatch, specifically designed for Alzheimer’s patients. It integrated advanced GPS technology and a panic button to assist those who tended to wander, ensuring their safety and well-being. After the device got its official approval, Hemesh happily went to try it on for his grandmother. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As Anne put on the Guardian Companion, Hemesh explained how it worked. He reassured her that it would help keep her safe. With a mixture of curiosity and skepticism, Anne agreed to give it a try. The device fit comfortably on her wrist. Hemesh walked his grandmother through the features, showing her how to use the panic button. Anne’s eyes lit up with a glimmer of hope, and for the first time since her diagnosis, she felt a sense of regained independence. In the next few weeks, the device made a difference to Anne and her family. Not only did it provide a sense of security for Anne, but it also relieved the constant worry for her loved ones. The device brought peace of mind to the entire family, knowing that Anne was protected even when they couldn’t be by her side. Hemesh’s creation had truly transformed dementia care, and he found himself on a new mission to make the device accessible to as many people as possible, ensuring that no one had to face the challenges of Alzheimer’s disease alone. 【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了2018年,17岁的Hemesh和被诊断患有阿尔茨海默病的祖母Anne度过了一个改变人生的夏天。Hemesh亲眼目睹了这种疾病对祖母的影响的严重性,主要表现为“闲荡”。出于对于祖母安全的考虑,凭着坚定的决心,他发明了一种可穿戴装置,类似于智能手表,专门为患有阿尔茨海默病患者设计。通过该装置的使用,祖母不仅在人身安全方面得到了保障,也在精神上有了自由保证。不仅如此,Hemesh希望可以对该装置进行跟进和改善,以适用于更多的患有阿尔茨海默病的人。 【详解】 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容“As Anne put on the Guardian Companion, Hemesh explained how it worked. (当Anne戴上“守护伴侣”时,Hemesh解释了它是如何工作的。)”可知,第一段可描写Hemesh对这个装置的具体解释和演示使用方法。 ②由第二段首句内容“In the next few weeks, the device made a difference to Anne and her family. (在接下来的几个星期里,这个装置对Anne和她的家人产生了影响。)”可知,第二段可描写这个装置对于Anne和家人的具体影响,以及Hemesh的打算。 2.续写线索:劝服Anne戴上“守护伴侣”——解释功能——点燃希望——“守护伴侣”给Anne和家人带来的积极影响——Hemesh的打算 ★话题词汇 行为类 ①演示/展示:show/display/reveal/present ②提供:provide/offer/give ③带来/导致:bring/produce/cause ④知道/了解:know/learn about/be aware of/make sure 情绪类 ①希望/信心:with a glimmer of hope/wishfully/hopefully ②担心/焦虑:constant worry/anxiety ★话题句式 【高分句型1】Not only did it provide a sense of security for Anne, but it also relieved the constant worry for her loved ones.(使用了“Not only…”置于句首的部分倒装句式) 【高分句型2】The device brought peace of mind to the entire family, knowing that Anne was protected even when they couldn’t be by her side.(“knowing that Anne was protected even when they couldn’t be by her side”为现在分词作状语,且that引导从句,作动词“knowing”的宾语从句) 【高分句型3】Hemesh’s creation had truly transformed dementia care, and he found himself on a new mission to make the device accessible to as many people as possible, ensuring that no one had to face the challenges of Alzheimer’s disease alone.(由and连接前后两个并列句;“ensuring that no one had to face the challenges of Alzheimer’s disease alone”为现在分词作状语,且that引导从句作动词“ensuring”的宾语从句) 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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