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unit7单元写作练习:生日主题记叙文与邀请函写作
一、写作话题解读
本单元写作围绕生日庆祝展开,属于“生活与学习”主题,主要考查两类文体:
1. 记叙文:介绍自己/他人的生日时间、同行人员、食物、活动与感受;
2. 应用文(电子邮件):书写生日派对邀请函,说明时间、地点、活动。
行文结构通用:开篇点题 → 详述活动 → 结尾抒发感受/发出邀请,时态以一般现在时为主。
二、高分句型储备(背诵仿写)
开头句
1. My birthday is on ________.
2. I will have a wonderful birthday party on that day.
3. Next Sunday is my birthday.
4. People have different ways to celebrate birthdays.
中间句
1. My birthday party starts at ________.
2. All my good friends come to my birthday party.
3. My parents and friends prepare nice gifts for me.
4. We sing the birthday song together at the party.
5. I make a wish and blow out the candles.
6. We share the sweet birthday cake happily.
7. We eat tasty long noodles on my birthday.
结尾句
1. I really have a great time on my birthday.
2. It is a special and happy day for me.
3. How do you celebrate your birthday?
常用佳句
1. Happy birthday to you! 祝你生日快乐!
2. It's the thought that counts. 礼轻情意重。
三、典题训练 记叙文写作(介绍个人生日)
假如你是七年级二班学生周明,请根据提示写一篇英语短文,介绍你的生日庆祝方式。
写作提示
1. 你的生日在什么时候;
2. 你和谁一起庆祝生日;
3. 当天有哪些食物;
4. 生日当天的活动与心情。
要求
1. 包含全部提示内容,可适当拓展;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确,词数不少于60词。
写作提纲参考
1. 开篇:介绍姓名、年龄、生日日期
2. 主体:介绍陪伴的人、美食、派对活动
3. 结尾:表达生日的心情与感受
四、实战演练 电子邮件写作(生日派对邀请函)
假如你是林悦,在国际学校就读。你的生日即将到来,请写一封邮件邀请好友Peter来参加你的生日派对。
写作要求
1. 写明派对的时间、地点以及派对上的活动;
2. 表达你的心情与期待;
3. 词数不少于70词;邮件开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to invite you to my birthday party.
Please tell me if you can come.
Yours,
Lin Yue
五、句型仿写(夯实基础,每题5分,共20分)
仿照例句改写句子,锻炼写作常用句式。
例:My birthday is on June 16th.
1. 我的生日在7月22日。
例:We share the birthday cake together.
2. 我们一起享用美味的食物。
例:I make a wish and blow out the candles.
3. 我许愿,然后吹灭所有蜡烛。
例:I always have a good time on my birthday.
4. 我在生日那天总是过得很开心。
六、参考范文赏析
(一)记叙文参考范文
I'm Zhou Ming. I'm thirteen years old. My birthday is on July 18th. On my birthday, my parents hold a party for me at home. My good friends also come to my house. We eat delicious birthday cake and long noodles. We sing songs and play interesting games together. I make a wish and blow out the candles.
This is my birthday. I feel so happy every year.
(二)邀请函参考范文
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to invite you to my birthday party.
My birthday party will be at my home. It starts at six o'clock on Saturday afternoon. I prepare lots of delicious food and fruit for the party. We can play fun games, listen to music and watch short videos. I believe we will have great fun. I really hope you can come.
Please tell me if you can come.
Yours,
Lin Yue
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