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人教版九上Unit 2作文
Unit 2: What makes people admirable?
题目一:推荐信(Letter of Recommendation)
题目: 你校正在评选“校园榜样人物”。请你给评选委员会写一封推荐信,推荐你的同学张伟。内容包括:
1. 你推荐的人是谁;
2. 他/她的感人事迹或优秀品质(至少两点);
3. 你推荐他/她的理由及对他/她的评价。
教师思路精讲
推荐信的目的是让评选委员会对被推荐人产生深刻的印象和认可。第一段要开门见山地说明推荐谁。第二段是关键,要用具体的事例来支撑推荐理由,切忌空泛地赞美。事例要有细节、有画面感,让人信服。第三段要总结被推荐人的品质和对大家的影响,表达希望他被选中的愿望。整封信要真诚、有说服力。
写作要点分析
第一段: 表明写信目的,清楚写出被推荐人的姓名和推荐的项目。
第二段: 用具体事例展示被推荐人的优秀品质。至少写两点,每一点配合一个小故事或细节。例如他如何帮助同学、如何面对困难等。
第三段: 总结被推荐人给大家带来的正面影响,说明他为什么值得成为榜样,最后表达希望他被选中的愿望。
重要句型与词组
开头:
· I am writing to recommend... for the role of...
· I strongly believe that... would be an excellent choice for...
描述品质与事例:
· What makes him/her truly admirable is that...
· He/She is the kind of person who always...
· I will never forget the time when he/she...
总结与推荐:
· He/She sets a great example for all of us.
· I cannot think of anyone more deserving of this honour.
· I sincerely hope you will consider my recommendation.
高分范文(156词)
Dear Selection Committee,
I am writing to strongly recommend my classmate Zhang Wei for the title of "School Role Model". I believe he is fully deserving of this honour.
What makes Zhang Wei truly admirable is his kindness and his perseverance. Last term, one of our classmates fell seriously ill and missed many lessons. Zhang Wei spent two hours every day after school helping him catch up, and he never complained once. Thanks to his selfless help, that classmate passed all his exams. Also, Zhang Wei is the kind of person who never gives up. In the school sports meet, he hurt his foot but still finished the 1500-metre race, encouraging everyone around him.
Zhang Wei sets a great example for all of us. He teaches us that a real hero is not someone famous, but someone who makes others' lives better. I sincerely hope you will consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
题目二:感谢信(Thank-you Letter)
题目: 在你的成长过程中,一定遇到过让你敬佩的人。请给你最敬佩的一位老师写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 感谢他/她对你的帮助;
2. 具体描述一件让你印象深刻的事情;
3. 表达你从他/她身上学到了什么,以及对他/她的祝福。
教师思路精讲
感谢信的核心是真诚。第一段要直接表达感谢,让老师感受到你的心意。第二段是信的主体,要用一个具体的故事来展现老师对你的影响。故事要有时间、地点、经过和结果,越具体越感人。第三段要升华主题,说明你从老师身上学到了什么品质,最后表达祝福。整封信要避免套话,用真情实感打动读者。
写作要点分析
第一段: 开门见山表达感谢,说明写信的目的和感激的心情。
第二段: 详细讲述一件老师帮助你的往事。可以是一个失败的瞬间、一次困难的经历,老师的鼓励和帮助如何改变了你。要有细节和心理活动的描写。
第三段: 总结从老师身上学到的宝贵品质,表达这对你未来的影响,最后送上真诚的祝福。
重要句型与词组
表达感谢:
· I am writing to express my deepest gratitude to you.
· Words cannot fully express how thankful I am for your help.
回忆往事:
· I still remember the day when I was feeling completely lost.
· You stayed with me until I understood the problem.
· What you said to me that day has stayed in my heart ever since.
表达学到的东西与祝福:
· From you, I learned that a good teacher can change a student's life.
· You taught me not only knowledge but also how to be a better person.
· I wish you good health and happiness.
高分范文(158词)
Dear Mr Li,
I am writing to express my deepest gratitude to you. You are the person I admire most in my entire school life, and I have never forgotten your kindness.
I still remember the day when I failed my math exam and felt completely lost. I thought I was stupid and wanted to give up on math forever. You noticed my sadness and came to talk to me after class. You said, “Failure is not the end. It is the beginning of real learning.” Then you patiently explained every mistake I made and stayed with me every day after school for an entire month. Thanks to you, I not only passed the next exam but also became more confident in myself.
From you, I learned that a good teacher can change a student's life. You taught me that kindness and patience are more important than anything else. I wish you good health and happiness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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