摘要:
**基本信息**
聚焦小学英语书面表达基础能力,通过主题化写作任务系统构建“总-分-总”写作框架,强化语言表达与逻辑条理,提升期末备考针对性。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|动物类|Ⅰ/Ⅲ/Ⅳ|“总起(点明对象)-分述(外貌/习性/声音)-结尾(情感)”结构|从单一动物到动物群像,从静态描述到动态场景,逐步提升观察表达能力|
|运动爱好类|Ⅱ/Ⅶ|“点题(喜好)-说明(频率/同伴/益处)-升华(情感价值)”逻辑链|从固定命题到半命题补题,培养主题拓展与内容组织能力|
|日常活动类|Ⅴ/Ⅵ|“总述(活动性质)-时间顺序(具体安排)-总结(感受)”叙事法|覆盖周/周末时间维度,强化时间表达与事件逻辑关联|
内容正文:
专题10 书面表达
Ⅰ. Think and write. (想一想,以 “My favourite ______” 为题写一篇短文,可以写写你最喜欢的水果、动物、玩具等,至少 30 个单词。)
My favourite ____________
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Ⅱ.Writing. (以 “My favourite sport” 为题,写一篇短文,不少于 25 词。)
My favourite sport
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Ⅲ.Writing. (以 “Animals I like” 为题,写一篇短文,不少于 25 个单词。)
Animals I like
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Ⅳ.Writing. (以 “Animal sound” 为题,写一篇作文,不少于 25 词。) 提示:What do you hear? What’s its sound like? …
Animal sound
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Ⅴ.Writing. (以 “A busy week” 为题,写一篇短文,不少于 25 词。)
A busy week
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Ⅵ.Writing. (以 “My weekend” 为题,写一篇短文,不少于 25 词。)
My weekend
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Ⅶ.Think and write. (以 “I like playing ______” 为题,先补充完整题目,再写一篇作文,不少于 30 个单词。)
I like playing ____________
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答案加解析
Ⅰ.
My favourite cat
My favourite animal is a cat. Its name is Mimi. It has soft white fur and big round eyes. It likes eating fish and milk. It often plays with me after school. It is cute and gentle. I love it very much.
解析
开篇点明最喜欢的小动物是小猫,开门见山;
依次描写外貌(白毛、大圆眼睛)、饮食习惯、日常相处;
结尾抒发喜爱之情,逻辑完整,全部用四年级基础句型,无超纲词汇。
Ⅱ.
My favourite sport
My favourite sport is swimming. I go swimming every weekend with my father. It can make me strong and healthy. I feel relaxed in the water. I enjoy this sport a lot.
解析
第一句直接点明最爱运动是游泳;
交代运动频率、同行人;说明游泳带来的好处;
结尾表达喜爱,短句构成,语法简单,符合小学写作要求。
Ⅲ.
Animals I like
I like many lovely animals, and I like rabbits best. They have long ears and short tails. They like eating carrots and grass. They jump around happily. I want to keep a small rabbit as my pet.
解析
总起:喜欢多种动物,最爱兔子;
外貌描写 + 饮食习惯,贴合动物特征;
结尾表达想饲养兔子的心愿,内容层次清晰。
Ⅳ.
Animal sound
I can hear different animal sounds on the farm. The dog says "Woof, woof" to guard the house. The cat says "Meow, meow" when it is hungry. The chick says "Cheep, cheep". All these sounds are lively and fun.
解析
紧扣提示问题 What do you hear? 点明农场里能听到多种动物叫声;
逐个描写狗、猫、小鸡的叫声以及叫声对应的场景;
收尾评价叫声生动有趣,完全贴合题目写作提示。
Ⅴ.
A busy week
I have a very busy week. From Monday to Friday, I go to school and finish homework every night. I have piano lessons on Wednesday evening. On Saturday I read books and do housework. I am busy but happy every day.
解析
总起句点明一周很忙碌;
依次描写工作日上学、写作业,额外兴趣课,周六安排;
转折说明虽然忙碌但很充实,情感完整,时间线清晰。
Ⅵ.
My weekend
I always have a wonderful weekend. On Saturday morning, I finish my homework first. In the afternoon, I play badminton with my friend. On Sunday, I visit my grandparents and have a big family dinner.
解析
总述周末过得很棒;
按周六上午、周六下午、周日的时间顺序叙事,条理分明;
日常活动贴近小学生真实生活,句式简单,不易出错。
Ⅶ. I like playing ______
I like playing basketball
I like playing basketball very much. I play it with my classmates after school three times a week. It makes me tall and strong. When I play it, I always laugh and have great fun. It is my favourite outdoor activity.
解析
补全题目 basketball,开篇直接点题;
说明打球频率、运动带来的身体好处、玩耍时的心情;
结尾升华,点明这是最爱的户外活动,语法规范,适合考场直接抄写。
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