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Unit 1 Personal and Family Life
Letter of Introduction
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Notice
Dear students,
In order to enhance your English writing skills and provide a platform for you to express your emotions and experiences. We are excited to announce an English Wring Contest. You can choose either My friend or My family as the theme for your composition. The length of the composition should be between 150-200 words. Please submit your entries to your English teacher before September 30th.
Looking forward to reading your wonderful stories.
English Writing Club
Here is the Notice.
Dear students,
In order to enhance your English writing skills and provide a platform for you to express your emotions and experiences. We are excited to announce an English Wring Contest. You can choose either My friend or My family as the theme for your composition. The length of the composition should be between 150-200 words. Please submit your entries to your English teacher before September 30th.
Looking forward to reading your wonderful stories.
English Writing Club
the structure of the composition
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
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Sure. It usually includes three parts : Introduction, Body and Conclusion.
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Introduction
有趣的场景、概括性的句子、相关的问题,点明主题,引出下文。
在第一部分“introduction"部分,我们可以用有趣的场景、概括性的句子、相关的问题,点明主题,引出下文。
Let's take a look at the opening sections of several compositions together:
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Introduction
I still remember the day when we first met at the school art club. My friend Lily was busy painting a beautiful landscape, completely absorbed in her work.
我还记得我们第一次在学校美术俱乐部见面的那天。我的朋友莉莉正忙着画一幅美丽的风景画,完全沉浸在她的作品中。
以回忆和朋友首次见面的场景来引出文章。
1. “I still remember the day when we first met at the school art club. My friend Lily was busy painting a beautiful landscape, completely absorbed in her work.” (我还记得我们第一次在学校美术俱乐部见面的那天。我的朋友莉莉正忙着画一幅美丽的风景画,完全沉浸在她的作品中")这个作文的开头就是以回忆和朋友首次见面的场景来引出文章。
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Introduction
Have you ever had a friend who can turn any boring situation into a fun-filled adventure? Well, my friend Tom is exactly that person.
你有没有过这样的朋友,他能把任何无聊的情况变成充满乐趣的冒险?我的朋友汤姆就是这样的人。
以问题开始,引发读者的兴趣和好奇心。
2. “Have you ever had a friend who can turn any boring situation into a fun-filled adventure? Well, my friend Tom is exactly that person." (你有没有过这样的朋友,他能把任何无聊的情况变成充满乐趣的冒险?我的朋友汤姆就是这样的人"。)这个作文的开头是以问题开始,引发读者的兴趣和好奇心。
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Introduction
As the glue that holds our family together, my mother is known for her boundless patience and unconditional love. She is always there to listen and offer support.
作为维系我们家庭的粘合剂,我的母亲以其无限的耐心和无条件的爱而闻名。她总是在我们身边倾听并提供支持。
用简洁有力的句子概括妈妈的特点,直接表明主题。
3. As the glue that holds our family together, my mother is known for her boundless patience and unconditional love. She is always there to listen and offer support.( 作为维系我们家庭的粘合剂,我的母亲以其无限的耐心和无条件的爱而闻名。她总是在我们身边倾听并提供支持。)这个作文的开头直接用简洁有力的句子概括妈妈的特点,直接表明主题。
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body
先介绍写作对象的身份、性格、兴趣爱好等,再分享和朋友或家人的难忘活动或经历。
在最重要的“Body"部分,可以先介绍写作对象的身份、性格、兴趣爱好等,再分享和朋友或家人的难忘活动或经历。
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Body
介绍朋友身份:classmate, teammate, neighbor, college buddy
介绍家人身份:father, mother, sister, brother, grandparent, cousin
形容性格:outgoing, loyal, creative, humorous,
friendly, patient, optimistic, kind
在最重要的“Body"部分,可以先介绍写作对象的身份、性格、兴趣爱好等,再分享和朋友或家人的难忘活动或经历。
介绍朋友身份的常用的词:classmate, teammate,neighbor,college buddy,and so on
介绍家人身份的常用的词:father,mother, sister,brother,grandparent,cousin,and so on
形容性格常用的形容词:outgoing,loyal,creative,humorous,friendly,patient,optimistic,kind,and so on
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Body
描述兴趣爱好:be keen on, be fond of, have a passion for, take a great interest in, be crazy about
描述过往经历:go through(经历), participate in(参加), be involved in(参与),look back on(回顾)
描述兴趣爱好常用的短语:be keen on, be fond of, have a passion for, take a great interest in,be crazy about,
描述过往经历常用的短语:go through(经历), participate in(参加), be involved in(参与),look back on(回顾)and so on
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One particular event that I will always remember is ... (我永远会记住的一件特别的事情是...)
The moment that stands out in my mind is when
(在我脑海中最突出的时刻是当......)
One of the most memorable events I shared with ... (我和...一起经历的最难忘的事情之一是...)
分享难忘活动或经历可用的句型
分享难忘活动或经历可用的句型:
One particular event that I will always remember is ...(我永远会记住的一件特别的事情是...)
The moment that stands out in my mind is when (在我脑海中最突出的时刻是当......)
One of the most memorable events I shared with ...(我和...一起经历的最难忘的事情之一是...)
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Conclusion
总结自己对写作对象的感受,表达对他们的祝福。
在最重要的“Body"部分,可以先介绍写作对象的身份、性格、兴趣爱好等,再分享和朋友或家人的难忘活动或经历。
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Conclusion
总结陈述:all in all(总而言之); in a word (总之)
表达期待:look forward to doing ( 期待做某事);can‘t wait to see(迫不及待想看到......) ;anticipate more wonderful times (期待更多美好时光)
表达感受:leave a deep impression on me (给我留下深刻印象);make me feel like... (让我感觉自己是...) ;be deeply touched by (被...深深打动) ;be filled with warmth and happpiness (充满温暖和幸福)
最后"conclusion"部分,可以总结自己对写作对象的感受,表达对他们的祝福。
当进行总结陈述时,我们可以用到 all in all(总而言之),in a word (总之)等短语。
当表达期待时,我们可以用look forward to doing ( 期待做某事)can't wait to see(迫不及待想看到......)anticipate more wonderful times(期待更多美好时光)
当表达感受时,我们可以用leave a deep impression on me (给我留下深刻印象)make me feel like...(让我感觉自己是...)be deeply touched by(被...深深打动)be filled with warmth and happpiness(充满温暖和幸福)
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注意时态的运用
介绍类的作文一般用一般现在时
回忆过去经历时用过去时态
写作过程中要注意时态的运用,介绍类的作文一般用一般现在时,当回忆过去的经历时记得要运用过去时态。
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总结
如何用不同的方式导入作文、引出主题。
在介绍身份、性格、兴趣爱好、经历的有用的词、短语、句子。
在总结部分可以用到的短语。
写作过程中要注意时态的运用,介绍类的作文一般用一般现在时,当回忆过去的经历时记得要运用过去时态。
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