浙江A9协作体2025-2026学年第二学期期中联考高二英语试题Into the wind 续写思路和语料搭建 清单

该高中英语知识清单系统整合了“逆风/挫折/成长类”读后续写指导内容，涵盖Story Mountain情节分析框架、分阶段核心词汇、四类万能句型模板及高分范文，搭建从“情节解构”到“语言积累”再到“思维升华”的递进式学习支架。 清单以“阶段功能分类”构建知识体系，将词汇按“遭遇变故-内心挣扎-积极改变-升华成长”分级，句型分情绪描写、心理转折等四类，体现完整性与条理性。设计“故事山三段法”迁移口诀（首段低落加磨难，中段转折心顿悟，尾段接纳升主题），培养语言能力与思维品质，如范文用“逆风骑行”隐喻回扣主题，助力学生掌握升华技巧，教师可据此设计分层教学，提升学生自主学习效率与课堂实效。

逆风/挫折/成长类 续写方法指导 ——Into the wind 1、 原文情节分析：故事山（Story Mountain） Main idea: Centered on the narrator, the text tells of a cycling accident leaving multiple injuries; screws and plates fixed fractured wrists and elbows. Devastated by lengthy recovery, the author shifted to a positive mindset, recovered steadily and rode again. Story Mountain: 1. Exposition：Introduce character & foreshadow theme 2. Rising Action：Happy trip turns into unexpected accident 3. Climax：Suffering & negative feelings, inner awakening 4. Falling Action：Make a life-changing positive decision 5. Resolution：Gain insight from hardship and achieve self-growth 二、成长感悟类读后续写高分词汇（可以迁移所有挫折/成长类续写） 阶段1：遭遇变故·低落崩溃（续写第一段开头专用：意外受伤、失意、绝望） 动词：devastate v.使崩溃；haunt v.萦绕心头；overwhelm v.使不知所措；drown v.淹没；doubt v.质疑 形容词：frustrated沮丧的；helpless无助的；desperate绝望的；unbearable难以忍受的；disheartened灰心的 名词：agony剧痛；despair绝望；uncertainty未知；torment煎熬；setback挫折 固定短语 be overwhelmed by negative feelings 被负面情绪裹挟 sink into deep despair 陷入深深绝望 be plagued with constant pain 饱受持续疼痛折磨 lose faith in… 对……失去信心 阶段2：内心挣扎·思想转折（两段过渡句核心词，续写从消极转积极的关键） 动词：reflect反思；realize领悟；adjust调整；abandon摒弃；awaken醒悟 短语：reflect on one’s sufferings 反思自身遭遇 break away from negative moods 摆脱消极情绪 come to a sudden realization 猛然醒悟 阶段3：下定决心·积极改变（续写第二段开头做决定、付诸行动） 动词：resolve下定决心；embrace坦然接纳；cherish珍惜；persevere坚持；cooperate配合 形容词：grateful感恩的；optimistic乐观的；steady沉稳的 短语：make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做 resolve to adjust one’s attitude 决心调整心态 cherish every small blessing 珍惜点滴美好 embrace hardships rather than resist them 接纳而非抗拒磨难 cooperate with medical treatment 积极配合治疗 阶段4：走出困境·升华成长（结尾主旨升华，所有成长类作文通用收尾词） 名词：perseverance毅力；acceptance接纳；maturity成熟；enlightenment顿悟；transformation蜕变 短语：gain inner peace 收获内心平和 polish one’s soul 磨砺心性 turn misfortune into treasure 将不幸化为财富 三、成长类续写通用高分万能句型 第一类：情绪描写万能句（第一段：崩溃失意专用） 1. A flood of anger, sorrow and helplessness washed over me, making me trapped in endless darkness. 一阵愤怒、悲伤与无助席卷全身，我深陷无尽阴霾。（情绪开篇万能） 2. Never had I expected that a pleasant bike ride would turn into such a painful disaster. 我万万没想到一次惬意骑行竟演变成一场惨痛变故。（倒装，阅卷加分句式） 3. Days filled with aching bodies and uncertain recovery robbed me of the courage to look ahead. 浑身疼痛、前途未卜的日子，磨灭了我向前看的勇气。 第二类：心理转折醒悟句（两段中间过渡，从消极→积极的关键句） 1. It suddenly dawned on me that misfortunes are out of our control, yet our attitude lies entirely in our own hands. 我忽然意识到灾祸无法掌控，但心态全权由自己主宰。（成长类续写TOP1万能转折句） 2. After being trapped in pessimism for a long time, I woke up to the truth: complaining never changes reality. 长期深陷悲观后，我幡然醒悟：抱怨无法改变现实。 第三类：下定决心+行动描写句（第二段开头：做出改变决定专用） 1. Deep inside my heart, I made up my mind to abandon resistance and greet every difficulty bravely. 我在心底下定决心摒弃抗拒，勇敢迎接所有磨难。 2. Rather than fight against the unavoidable pain, I chose to go through the healing journey patiently. 与其抗拒无法避免的痛苦，我选择耐心走完康复之路。 第四类：哲理升华回扣句（文末收尾，万能升华，所有逆风/挫折/成长类续写通用，对标原文ride into the wind） 1. Just as cycling against strong winds makes a stronger rider, hardships in life shape a tougher soul. 正如逆风骑行练就强大骑手，人生苦难磨砺坚韧灵魂。（精准回扣原文伏笔） 2. All unexpected setbacks are life’s headwinds, which eventually push us to grow into a better version of ourselves. 所有突如其来的挫折都是人生逆风，终将推动我们蜕变成更好的自己。（非限定性定语从句） 3. True growth lies not in living a smooth life, but in learning to accept difficulties and move forward. 真正的成长不在于一帆风顺，而在于学会接纳坎坷、砥砺前行。 四、高分范文 I was devastated. Having cycled for over 25 years, I could barely accept that an ordinary trip ended with multiple fractures and long-term treatment. Negative emotions including rage and hopelessness crowded into my mind constantly. Daily physical therapy brought persistent aches all over my body, and the unexpected second surgery on my shoulder four months later added another heavy blow. The thought of losing my beloved cycling forever nearly crushed my spirit. However, after long-time self-reflection, a truth struck me: I could not stop accidents from happening, yet I possessed the power to change my way of thinking. Sitting at home with my arm in a sling, I made a decision that changed my life. I resolved to stop fighting against sufferings and learn to embrace every pain during recovery. I began to be thankful for being able to walk and recover little by little. Gradually, I understood the real meaning of riding into the wind. Life is full of unpredictable headwinds, and acceptance and perseverance are the best weapons against difficulties. Though I still suffer occasional pains after five operations, I have restarted short bike rides. This tough experience has brought me precious spiritual growth, enabling me to face all life challenges calmly. Note：迁移口诀 故事山三段法：首段低落加磨难，中段转折心顿悟，尾段接纳升主题； 万能句型记四类，情绪转折行动加升华，逆风成长全套用。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $