内容正文:
李华语录
求助信:请求英国笔友John帮忙提供创意短视频素材
题目呈现
假定你是李华, 下个月你准备参加主题为“中华文化世界影响力”的学校创意短视频大赛, 目前缺一些素材, 请写一封邮件给你的英国笔友John求助。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.素材要求。
一、审题
审题分析
体裁格式
求助信
主要人称
_____________(I)引出写信目的和需求;
_______________(you)直接对 John 提出请求。
主要时态
_____________(描述当前的情况和素材要求);
_______________(提及下个月参赛)。
主题语境
人与_______________:文化交流与传播
核心价值
文化传播:借助创意短视频大赛,传播中华文化,增强文化自信;
合作交流:通过向笔友求助,体现跨文化交流与合作,培养学生的沟通能力和合作意识。
二、列纲
写作要点与必备知识
问候、写作目的
1. _______________: I hope this email finds you well.
2. _______________: I'm really _______________(兴奋的) because I'll ___________________________________(参加) a creative short video competition _______________(主题为) “The Global Influence of Chinese Culture" next month.
3. _______________: I'm reaching out to you because I'm in desperate need of your assistance.
表达“需要…”的句式:I am in (desperate) need of...;I am in a bind(处于困境)
素材要求
Phrases:
· 素材内容:
Traditional festivals celebration
Traditional handicrafts making
Traditional arts appreciation
_______________(春节)
_______________(书法)
_______________(太极)
_______________(元宵)
_______________(剪纸)
_______________(武术)
_______________(中秋)
_____________(中国结)
_______________(京剧)
Critical thinking: About the content, what else can you think of?
__________________________________________________________________
· 素材形式(视频、音频、图片、文字、见解等):
高清视频 high-definition videos
清晰生动的图片clear and _______________ pictures
简短有趣的音频片段short and _______________(appeal) audio clips
生动的文字描述vivid text _______________(describe)
见解或意见 insights or opinions
表达“关于……、与……有关”的词块:about/______________________________________________________________其他要求(高清画质/音质、时长、光线、拍摄……)
1. The videos should be clear in picture and sound, and it would be better if they could be accompanied by some brief _______________(explain) about the content.
2. Please make sure the videos are at least 3 minutes in _______________(long), with good lighting and stable shooting.
3. Please try to keep the videos within 5 minutes, _______________ make sure the audio is clear.
Sentence patterns:用来“发出请求”的句式
例:I do hope you can help me collect some high-definition videos/ concerning/ traditional festivals celebration in the UK, such as the Spring Festival.
1. I do hope you can help me collect some _____________________________.
2. I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide me with __________________ ______________________________________________________________.
3. It would be great/fantastic/incredible/terrific/superb/wonderful if you could provide me with ___________________________________________________.
4. The materials I need mainly include __________________________________.
5. If you have any insights or opinions from people in the UK about Chinese culture, that would be incredibly helpful.
“确凿无疑,你的帮助将会……”
________________(deny), not only will your contribution ____________________ but also help _________________________ and appreciation of Chinese culture among my peers. 确凿无疑, 你的贡献不仅会丰富我的项目,也会帮助我的同龄人更深入地了解和欣赏中国文化。
表达感谢与期许
Translation:
1.(“经济舱”型表述)提前谢谢你。期待您的回复。
Thank you so much in advance. Looking forward to your reply.
2.(“头等舱”型表述)如果你能分享任何相关材料、见解或想法,我将不胜感激。热切期待你的迅速答复。
I would greatly appreciate it if you could share any relevant materials, insights, or ideas. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
三、成文
Salutation
Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. Next month, I will participate in a creative short video competition themed "The Global Influence of Chinese Culture." However, I am currently lacking some materials, and I'm in desperate need of your assistance.
It would be fantastic if you could provide me with British insights or opinions that highlight the impact of Chinese culture. Additionally, I do hope you can help me collect some high-definition videos concerning traditional festivals celebration in the UK, such as the Spring festival. The materials should be clear and positive, suitable for a short video presentation.
Thank you in advance for your help. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
Para.1 问候、写作目的
Para.2 素材要求
Para.3感谢与期许
Signature
四、变式
题目呈现
假定你是李华,你校English Club将举办题为“中华文化世界影响力”的学校创意短视频大赛。 请在校英文报上发布一则活动通知,内容包括:1. 大赛的目的、时间和地点;2. 参赛作品要求。
语料积累
The English Club of our school is thrilled to announce a creative short video competition themed "The Global Influence of Chinese Culture", which aims to …
参考答案
一、审题
体裁格式 求助信
主要人称 I(引出写信目的和需求);you(直接对 John 提出请求)
主要时态 现在时(描述当前情况);将来时(提及下个月参赛)
主题语境 人与社会:文化交流与传播
核心价值 文化传播、合作交流
二、列纲(写作要点与必备知识)
1. 问候、写作目的
要点 参考答案
问候 I hope this email finds you well.
写作目的 I'm really excited because I'll take part in a creative short video competition themed “The Global Influence of Chinese Culture" next month.
求助 I'm reaching out to you because I'm in desperate need of your assistance.
2. 素材要求
素材内容:
春节 Spring Festival
元宵节 Lantern Festival
中秋节 Mid-Autumn Festival
书法 calligraphy
中国结 Chinese knot
太极 Tai Chi
武术 martial arts
京剧 Peking Opera
其他创意方向(开放答案,示例):
Chinese cuisine, tea ceremony, Hanfu, Confucius Institutes, Chinese festivals celebrated abroad.
素材形式:
高清视频 high-definition videos
清晰生动的图片 clear and vivid pictures
简短有趣的音频片段 short and appealing audio clips
生动的文字描述 vivid text descriptions
见解或意见 insights or opinions
表达“关于”的词块:
about / concerning / related to / with regard to
其他要求:
简要说明 brief explanations
至少3分钟长度 at least 3 minutes in length
确保音频清晰 and make sure the audio is clear
发出请求的句式:
1. I do hope you can help me collect some high-definition videos.
2. I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide me with any relevant materials.
3. It would be fantastic if you could provide me with your insights.
4. The materials I need mainly include videos and pictures.
5. If you have any insights or opinions from people in the UK about Chinese culture, that would be incredibly helpful.
“确凿无疑,你的帮助将会……”:
Undeniably, not only will your contribution enrich my project but also help deepen the understanding and appreciation of Chinese culture among my peers.
3. 表达感谢与期许
基础表达 Thank you so much in advance. Looking forward to your reply.
高级表达 I would greatly appreciate it if you could share any relevant materials, insights, or ideas. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
3、 成文
Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. Next month, I will participate in a creative short video competition themed "The Global Influence of Chinese Culture." However, I am currently lacking some materials, and I'm in desperate need of your assistance.
It would be fantastic if you could provide me with British insights or opinions that highlight the impact of Chinese culture. Additionally, I do hope you can help me collect some high-definition videos concerning traditional festivals celebration in the UK, such as the Spring festival. The materials should be clear and positive, suitable for a short video presentation.
Thank you in advance for your help. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
四、变式(活动通知完整范文)
The English Club of our school is thrilled to announce a creative short video competition themed "The Global Influence of Chinese Culture", which aims to encourage students to explore and showcase how Chinese culture has spread and influenced the world. The competition will be held on December 20th in the school auditorium. All participants are required to submit their works to the English Club by December 15th.
The requirements for entries are as follows. The video should be 3–5 minutes in length, with clear picture and sound. Besides, content must be original and positively reflect the theme, such as Chinese traditions, arts, cuisine, or cultural exchanges. Last but not least, each video should include brief English narration or subtitles to help the audience understand.
Come and share your creative ideas! Let's celebrate the global charm of Chinese culture together.
English Club
五、重点词汇与句型速记表
参赛相关 take part in / participate in / compete in
主题表达 themed / with the theme of / on the topic of
求助表达 in desperate need of / in a bind / reach out to
素材相关 high-definition / vivid / appealing / insights
感谢表达 Thank you in advance / I would greatly appreciate it
期待回复 Looking forward to your reply / Keenly anticipate your prompt reply
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