2026年沪教牛津版 中考写作话题17 榜样的力量

该初中英语讲义聚焦中考“伟人/榜样介绍”话题作文，覆盖人物生平、事迹、品质及影响等核心写作要素。知识点按“常用词汇-话题句型-范文示范”三层架构组织，通过考点梳理（分类词汇短语）、方法指导（好句模板运用）、真题训练（范文仿写）四环节，帮助学生系统突破写作难点。 亮点在于“功能词汇分类+真实人物案例”融合教学，如用“devote oneself to”“overcome difficulties”等短语构建事迹描述框架，结合袁隆平、钟南山等范文分析培养文化意识与思维品质。设计“句型替换训练”“片段仿写”活动及分层练习，助力学生提升语言表达准确性，教师可依此把控复习节奏，实现高效备考。

(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ Studying makes me happy (≧∇≦)ﾉ – by Zoe 沪教牛津版 中考话题作文 17 伟人/榜样介绍 常用词汇/短语 人物生平 1. From an early age，... 2. When he was a small boy, 3. As a child, he... 4. During his (her) childhood, 5. … spend his childhood in… 6. As he grew older,... 7. When he grew up,... 8. At the age of,... 教育经历 1. graduate from 毕业于 2. go abroad for further study去国外进修 3. major in主修 4. be awarded 被授予…… 5. be admitted to … university 进入……大学 兴趣爱好 be interested in be fond of be crazy about 人物事迹 1. devote oneself to 将其一生投入到… 2. make up one's mind to do sth. 3. do sth. with great determination凭着巨大的决心做某事 4. fight for为……而奋斗 5. win a prize in … competition 6. win the Nobel Prize 7. make great progress in... 取得巨大进步 8. break the world record 8. win a gold/silver/ bronze medal获得金/银/铜奖 9. go through hardship经历磨难 10. have a talent for … 对……有天赋 11. realize one's dream 12. overcome many difficulties克服很多困难 13. win many honors 赢得很多荣誉 14. be famous at home and abroad 享誉国内外 15. face all the misunderstandings 面对所有的误解 16. pursue the dream 追求梦想 17. achieve such great success in 在……方面取得巨大成就 18. show a great interest in science 对科学非常感兴趣 20. deserve to be 当之无愧 21. have an influence on … 对……产生影响 22. the contribution to society 对社会的贡献 23. tolerate the difference 包容差异 24. devote oneself to public welfare activities 全身心投入公益活动 人物评价 1. set a good example for 为……树立榜样 2. be respected by everyone 受到所有人尊敬 3. a model teacher / worker 模范教师 / 工人 4. one of the best (most important) … 5. His hard work brought him great success. 他的努力带来了巨大的成功 6. be popular among people. 受到人们的喜爱 7. the spirit of unity and persistence 团结和执着的精神 8. deliver positive energy 传递正能量 9. enjoy a high reputation 享有很高的声誉 10. a household name 一个家喻户晓的名字 11. speak highly of 高度评价 12. historical figure 历史人物 13. model of the times 时代楷模 人物优秀品质 1. determined 有毅力的 2. warm-hearted热心肠的 3. generous 慷慨的 4. ambitious 雄心勃勃的 5. honest 诚实的 6. humorous 幽默的 7. independent 独立的 8. strict严格的 9. outstanding 杰出的 10. talented 有天赋的 11. brave / courageous 勇敢的 12. strong-willed / determined 坚强的 13. hardworking / diligent 勤奋的 14. persistent / persevering 坚持不懈的 15. caring / compassionate 有爱心的 16. modest 谦虚的 17. selfless / unselfish 无私的 18. optimistic 乐观的 影响 1. take…as an example / follow one’s example 以…为榜样 2. be inspired by 受到鼓舞 3. overcome difficulties 克服困难 4. set a goal 树立目标 5. strive to achieve 努力实现 6. pursue one’s dream 追求梦想 话题好句积累 开头引入 1. In our life, we all need role models — people who inspire us to become better. My hero is my mother. 在我们的生活中，我们都需要榜样，一个激励我们变得更好的人，我心中的英雄是我的妈妈。 2. As the saying goes, “A hero is someone who has given his or her life to something bigger than oneself.” That’s exactly how I see my role model. 俗话说，英雄是将生命献给更伟大事业的人。那正是我对我的榜样的看法。 3. Who is your role model? For me, it’s not a pop star or a sports celebrity. It’s someone who changed the world with their hard work and determination. 谁是你的榜样呢？对我来说，榜样不是一个流行的明星，或是一个运动名人。榜样是那些用努力和毅力去改变世界的人。 4. What makes a person a true hero? Is it fame? Is it wealth? I don’t think so. A true hero is someone who gives without expecting return. 什么才能使一个人成为真正的英雄呢？是名声吗？是财富吗？我觉得都不是。真正的英雄是那些在付出也没有期待回报的人。 心目中的英雄【伟人】 1. My hero is Yuan Longping, known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. He spent most of his life in the fields, working tirelessly to develop better rice varieties. His hybrid rice has fed millions of people in China and around the world. 我心中的英雄是袁隆平，他被誉为杂交水稻之父。大部分的人生，他都在田野里度过，不停地工作，为了培育出更好的水稻品种。他培育的杂交水稻已经让中国人和全世界人们填饱肚子。 2. Zhong Nanshan, a brave doctor, became a national hero during the fight against COVID-19. At the age of 84, he rushed to Wuhan, the hardest-hit city, and worked day and night to save lives. 钟南山，一名勇敢的医生，在抗击新冠疫情期间，他是国民英雄。在84岁的年纪，他前往武汉，疫情最严重的城市，日夜工作拯救生命。 3. Tu Youyou, the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize, discovered a life-saving medicine for malaria. What inspires me most is that she succeeded after 190 failures — and never gave up. 屠呦呦，中国首位获得诺贝尔奖的女性科学家，发现了一种可以治愈疟疾的药物。最使我受到鼓舞的是她经历了190遍的失败才成功，并且从不放弃。 4. Marie Curie is my hero. She not only discovered radium but also refused to patent her discovery so that others could use it freely. Her selflessness and devotion to science are truly admirable. 5. Yuan Longping, who was known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”, once said, “I have two dreams — one is the dream of enjoying the cool under the rice crops, and the other is the dream of hybrid rice covering the whole world.” 介绍身边的学习榜样 【父母、老师、同学、朋友】 1. My role model is not a famous person, but my mother. She works hard every day to support our family, yet she always finds time to listen to my problems and encourage me. Her strength and love have taught me what responsibility really means. 我的榜样不是一个著名的人物，而是我的妈妈。她每天努力工作养家，然而她总是找时间倾听我的困惑，并且鼓励我。她的力量和爱教会我什么是责任的真正含义。 2. My English teacher, Miss Zoe, is the person I admire most. She not only teaches us knowledge but also shows us how to be honest, kind and persevering. Whenever I feel like giving up, her words give me the power to keep going. 我的英语老师Zoe，是我最敬佩的人。她不仅把知识教给我们，还向我们展示了如何成为诚实、善良以及坚毅的人。无论在任何我想放弃的时候，她的话语给予我坚持的力量。 3. My desk mate, Xiao Wu, is my learning role model. He is not the smartest student, but he is the most hardworking. He gets up early every morning to read English and never leaves today’s homework for tomorrow. 我的同桌，小吴，是我的学习榜样。他不是最聪明的学生，但确实最努力的。他每天早起读英语，并且从不把今天的作业留到明天。 4. My mother/father is the most influential person in my life, always guiding me with her/his wisdom and kindness. 我的妈妈/爸爸是我生命中最有影响力的人，她/他总是用智慧和善良引导我。 5. Tom is considered as a creative boy because he can always come up with different ideas. Tom被认为是一个有创意的男孩，因为他总是可以想出不同的主意。 6. Peter, my good friend, is a warm-hearted boy who always goes out of his way to help others in need. Peter，我的好朋友，是一个热心肠的人，他总是不辞辛苦帮助有需要的人。 7. Lily is a person who has a great influence on me. She is always there for me when I need her, and I have learnt a lot from her. Lily是对我有巨大影响的人。当我有需要帮助的时候，她总会在那。我从她身上学到了很多。 8. My grandfather has gone through many difficulties in his life, but he never gives up and always keeps a positive attitude. He is a great inspiration to me. 我的爷爷在他的人生中已经经历了许多困难，但是他从不放弃，总是保持乐观积极的态度。对于我来说，他是个很大的激励， 9. As far as I'm concerned, my father is like a light that guides me towards a career in medicine. 就我而言，我的爸爸就像一盏明灯，指引我走向医学的事业。 10. Our English teacher is so humorous that he often makes us laugh when we are under stress. 我们的英语老师是如此幽默，当我们压力大的时候，他经常逗我们笑。 11. It goes without saying that he is the symbol of courage and we all take great pride in him. 毫无疑问，他是勇气的象征，我们都对他感到很自豪。 榜样带来的影响/从他们身上学习获得 1. His story has taught me that success does not come easily — it takes years of hard work, patience and persistence. 他的故事让我知道，成功来之不易，它需要数年的努力，耐心和坚持。 2. What I admire most about her is her courage. She faced many difficulties but never lost hope. Because of her, I have learned to face challenges bravely instead of running away. 我最佩服她的地方是她的勇气。她直面许多困难，但是从不失去希望。因为她，我学会勇敢地面对困难，而不是逃跑。 3. Whenever I feel tired or want to give up, I think of my hero. Then I tell myself: If he could make it through so many difficulties, so can I. 无论任何我感觉疲惫或者想要放弃的时刻，我想起我的英雄。然后我告诉自己，如果他可以成功面对这么多的难事，我也可以。 4. My mother has set a good example for me. She taught me that a small act of kindness can make a big difference. Now I try to help others whenever I can. 我妈妈已经为我树立了一个好榜样。她教会我，哪怕是一个小小的善行，可以产生大大的影响。 5. Only when I learned about the story of my hero， did I realize that there is no shortcut to success. 直到我了解到我这位英雄的故事后，我才意识到成功之路并无捷径可言。 结尾升华-向榜样学习的号召 1. A hero is not someone born great, but someone who chooses to do great things. We may not change the whole world, but we can start by changing ourselves — by being more hardworking, more honest and more caring. 英雄不是天生伟大的人，而是那些选择去做了不起事情的人。我们可能改变不了世界，但是我们可以从改变我们自己开始，通过成为更努力，更诚实以及更有爱心的人。 2. Let’s not just admire our heroes from afar. Let’s learn from their spirits and put their lessons into action. As the saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words.” 我们不要只是远远地仰慕我们的英雄。相反，我们要学习他们的精神，并将他们的经验教训付诸实践。 3. If we follow the example of our heroes and keep improving ourselves every day, we may one day become a hero in someone else’s eyes. 如果我们效仿我们的英雄，每天不断提升我们自己，我们某天可以成为别人眼中的英雄。 【范文 1】 In our lives, there is always someone who motivates us and fills us with hope. For me, Yuan Longping is such a person. Yuan was born in September 1930 in Beijing. As a famous agricultural scientist, he devoted his life to doing research on rice. His goal was to find a better way to grow rice and help people stay away from hunger. In order to achieve his goal, he studied farming science at university and after graduation, he spent a lot of time doing research on the farm. Thanks to his hard work, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice and increased the production of rice. He made such great achievements that he was called the “Father of Hybrid Rice”. Although Yuan passed away in May 2021, his legacy and his mission to end hunger lives on. In my opinion, Yuan was strong-minded, hard-working and creative. He made me realize the importance of dreams and hard work. I will keep working hard to make my dream come true! 【范文 2】 My Learning Role Model — My Mother My role model is not a famous scientist or a movie star. It is my mother. My mother works as a cleaner. Every day, she gets up at 5 a.m., prepares breakfast for our family, and then goes to work. She often comes home very late, tired and sweaty. But she never complains. She always says, “As long as you study hard, I am happy.” Although she didn’t get a good education herself, she values my education above anything else. She saves every penny to buy me books and pay for my tutoring classes. When I feel stressed about exams, she holds my hand and tells me, “Just do your best. I believe in you.” My mother may not be a hero to the world, but she is a hero to me. She has taught me the meaning of hard work, sacrifice and unconditional love. I want to study hard to make her proud and to become someone who can help others, just as she has helped me. 【范文3】 My Desk mate – A True Role Model Everyone has someone they look up to. For me, that person is not a famous scientist or a movie star. He is my desk mate, Li Hua. Li Hua is an ordinary boy, but he has an extraordinary spirit. He was born with a weak leg and has difficulty walking. However, he never complains or asks for special treatment. Every morning, he arrives at school earlier than anyone else. He takes part in every class activity, from cleaning the classroom to playing chess competitions. His face always wears a warm smile. What I admire most is his persistence in study. Although he sometimes needs to see a doctor after school, he never misses his homework. Last term, he caught a bad cold and the doctor asked him to stay in bed for three days. Even so, he finished all his homework in hospital and asked me to send him the notes. “I don’t want to fall behind,” he said. His hard work paid off – he got the highest score in the math exam. Li Hua has taught me that a person’s greatest strength is not in his body but in his heart. Whenever I feel like giving up because a math problem is too hard or because I am too tired, I look at him and think: If he can keep going, so can I. As the saying goes, “A role model is not someone who is perfect, but someone who tries to be better every day.” Li Hua is exactly that person. I am proud to call him my desk mate and my hero. 【范文4】 The Teacher Who Inspires Me Most In my life, many teachers have taught me knowledge, but only one has taught me how to be a better person. She is Miss Zhou, my English teacher. Miss Zhou is in her fifties, with grey hair and a pair of kind eyes. She is not the kind of teacher who only talks about exams and grades. Instead, she cares about every student’s heart. I will never forget what happened last year. I was a shy student who never dared to speak in class. One day, Miss Zhou asked me to read a passage aloud. My face turned red and my voice was so low that nobody could hear me. Some classmates laughed. I wanted to hide under the desk. But Miss Zhou stopped the laughter and said softly, “Everyone starts from somewhere. Take a deep breath and try again.” She walked to my side and read the first sentence with me. Encouraged by her, I finished the passage. She clapped and said, “Good job! Next time, you can do even better.” From that day on, I began to speak more in class. Miss Zhou never laughed at my mistakes. She always said, “Mistakes are the stairs to success.” Now I can give an English speech in front of the whole class. I owe my courage to her. What inspires me most about Miss Zhou is not her teaching skills, but her patience and kindness. She treats every student with respect and never gives up on anyone. She once told us, “A teacher’s job is not to fill a bucket, but to light a fire.” She has truly lit a fire in my heart – a fire of confidence and hope. I want to become a person like Miss Zhou when I grow up – someone who brings light to others. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $