内容正文:
英语应用文写作讲解与练习
一、分享信:一次劳动课
假定你是李华,你校每周开设一节劳动课,请你给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件分享其中的一次经历,内容包括:1.活动过程;2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段交代写作目的——分享一节劳动课;第二段介绍活动内容(要点1)和感想(要点2);第三段表达期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to share with you a class of labor education.
On the campus farm,we took on different tasks to maximize efficiency -- some digging holes, some sowing seeds, and others watering. We began by loosening the soil and digging shallow furrows with small shovels. What followed was scattering the seeds into the furrows with great care. We ended up covering the seeds with a thin layer of soil and watering them. Tired and muddy though we were, a smile spread across our faces at the sight of the neat furrows. Not only did this labor class make me realize that food really doesn't come easily, but it also taught me the significance of teamwork.
I was wondering if you have anything fun to share. Looking forward to your reply! (119 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的麦克:
我写信想和你分享一节劳动课。
上周的劳动课上,老师带我们去校园农场学种菠菜。我们先翻松土壤,接着用小铲子挖出浅浅的沟槽,然后小心翼翼地把种子撒进去,最后盖上一层薄土并浇水。大家分工合作,有的挖坑,有的撒种,有的负责浇水。忙了整整一节课,虽然手上沾满了泥,鞋子也弄脏了,但看着整整齐齐的菜畦,我们都开心地笑了。这次劳动不但让我体会到食物真的来之不易,也让我明白了团队合作的重要性。
你最近有什么有趣的事吗?期待你的回信!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为分享信;
(2)因两人是朋友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为分享一节劳动课并介绍活动过程和感想,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
02
本文亮点
(1)maximize efficiency使效率最大化
(2)What followed was scattering主语从句
(3)with great care=carefully
(4)ended up covering最后做了模式
(5)Tired and muddy though we were用as和though引导部分倒装结构
(6)at the sight of一看见
(7)Not only did this labor class make否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构
(8)I was wondering if委婉客气的表达法
二、分享信:乡村越剧表演
假定你是李华。上周六,你回到农村老家,观看了一场在乡村戏台上演出的越剧。请你给英国笔友Charles写一封邮件,分享这次文化体验,内容包括:1.现场见闻;2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Charles,
How is everything going?
Yours,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段描述现场见闻(要点1);第二段发表感想(要点2);第三段表达期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Charles,
How is everything going? The moment I went back to my hometown last Saturday, a Yue Opera performance was starting on the village stage. The actors, dressed in exquisite costumes and performing The Butterfly Lovers, sang melodiously while their long water sleeves fluttered in the air. While some of the singing and recitation were beyond my full comprehension, I was captivated by the gentle, flowing charm of the performance, and the audience kept bursting into applause.
It wasn't a fancy theater that greeted me, but rather the warmth of the local people and a distinctive rural charm. I think rural culture finds its life right there -- on the stage, and in the memory of every villager.
I was wondering if you had anything fun to share? Looking forward to your reply. (128 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的查尔斯:
一切安好?上周六我回了趟农村老家,正好赶上村里戏台上的越剧演出。演员们穿着精美戏服,唱腔婉转,水袖翻飞,演的是《梁祝》。虽然有些唱腔和念白我听得不是很懂,但那份婉转悠扬的韵味让我着迷,台下更是掌声不断。
没有华丽剧场,却有淳朴的人情和浓厚的地方韵味。我觉得乡村文化就是这样活着——在戏台上,也在每个人的记忆里。
你有什么有趣的事情值得分享吗?期待你的回复。
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为分享信;
(2)因两人是笔友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为分享上周六在农村老家观看的越剧表演,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
02
本文亮点
(1)The moment连接时间状语从句 I went back to my hometown last Saturday
(2)While尽管,连接让步状语从句 some of the singing and recitation were beyond my full comprehension无法理解, I was captivated by被...吸引 the gentle
(3)It wasn't a fancy theater that强调句型 greeted me
(4)I was wondering if委婉表达的语气运用 you had anything fun to share?
三、介绍词:“我眼中的美”摄影作品
某英文杂志“Beauty Through My Eyes”专栏正在向读者征集原创摄影作品,同时要求配有作品介绍。假设你已准备好作品应征,请写一篇短文介绍你的作品,内容包括:1.作品主题简述;2.作品如何体现“你眼中的美”。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:二段论。第一段简述作品主题(要点1);第二段表述作品如何体现“你眼中的美”(要点2)。
【参考范文】
This photo, titled "Old Cane Chair at Dusk," was taken in the corner of my hometown yard, where an empty cane chair is bathed in the sunset glow.The back of the chair has come loose, and on its armrests are several scratches, some shallow and some deep.
In my eyes, beauty is more the gentle accumulation of time and memory than delicacy or perfection. Light and shadow outline the silhouette of the cane chair, and every worn mark tells a story. Resting silently in the corner, it looks as if someone has just risen and departed. In this very "absence," warmth becomes visible -- beauty is old, beauty is slow, beauty is the deep affection hidden in the everyday. (120 words)
【中文翻译】
《黄昏下的旧藤椅》,这张照片拍于老家院角,一把空藤椅沐浴在落日余晖中。椅背已松动,扶手上留着几道深浅不一的刻痕。
我眼中的美,不是精致与完美,而是时间与记忆的温柔沉淀。光影勾勒出藤椅的轮廓,每一道磨损都是一个故事。它安静地搁在角落里,仿佛刚有人起身离开。这种“缺席”,恰恰让温暖被看见——美,是旧的,是慢的,是日常里藏着的深情。
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为介绍词;
(2)因文本是给学校英文杂志介绍自己的原创摄影作品,故作者身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为题简述作品主题及作品如何体现“你眼中的美”,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1) is bathed in沐浴在...
(2)on its armrests are several scratches介宾短语置于句首产生完全倒装结构
(3)beauty is more ... than ...与其说...倒不如说...
(4)beauty is old, beauty is slow, beauty is the deep affection hidden in the everyday.运用修辞性排比结构
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