内容正文:
假定你是李华。你得知“大美漳州”推介活动组委会正在招募英语义务讲解员,为来访的外国友人进行讲解,请你给相关负责人写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 介绍相关经验和优势; 2. 希望被录用。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir / Madam,
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
一、审题定位
体裁
起草者
阅读者
语体
情景
内容
写作意图
写作期待
申请信
李华
“大美漳州” 推介活动组委会负责人
正式、礼貌
申请英语义务讲解员职位,为外国友人讲解漳州
1. 介绍自身相关经验和优势;2. 表达希望被录用的意愿
成功申请该职位
获得组委会认可,收到录用回复
· 明确文体:申请信(需体现诚恳态度和正式语气)
· 确定时态:以一般现在时为主,描述过往经验时可用一般过去时
· 划出关键词:招募英语义务讲解员、介绍经验和优势、希望被录用、外国友人、漳州推介
二、结构搭建
Para 1:礼貌问候 + 自我介绍 + 写信目的(表明得知招募信息,申请该职位)
Para 2:主体内容 —— 介绍自身优势(英语能力、对漳州的了解、沟通经验等),体现与职位的匹配度
Para 3:表达希望被录用的愿望 + 承诺(若被录用会认真负责)+ 期待回复
三、常用开头与结尾
开头(正式场合):
1. I am writing to apply for the position of...... in the...... activity, which I learned about recently.
2. Having heard that you are recruiting...... for ......, I am eager to apply for this position.
3. With great enthusiasm, I am writing to express my interest in the..... position for...... activity.
结尾:
1.I would be grateful if you could give me this opportunity. I am looking forward to your positive reply.
2.I believe I can be a qualified....and would appreciate your consideration. Please feel free to contact me if needed.
3.Hoping to contribute my efforts to ...., I sincerely wish to be accepted. Thank you for your time and consideration.
四、高分技巧
语言得体:使用正式、礼貌的表达,避免口语化词汇(如 “really want” 可改为 “am eager to”)
细节具体化:避免笼统描述优势,例如:
错误:My English is good.
正确:I have a good command of English, having won the first prize in the school English speech contest and communicated fluently with foreign teachers.
突出匹配度:结合 “推介漳州” 和 “为外国友人讲解” 的需求,强调对漳州文化、景点的了解(如 “I am familiar with Zhangzhou's history, scenic spots like Tulou and local customs”)
五、常见错误避雷
格式错误:称呼后用逗号(Dear Sir / Madam,),结尾署名 “Sincerely Yours,” 后另起一行写 “Li Hua”
信息缺失:未具体说明自身经验(如只说 “有经验”,未提及相关经历)
语气不当:避免过于随意(如 “Let me join you”)或过于自负(如 “I'm sure I'm the best”)
内容偏离:围绕 “英语讲解” 和 “漳州推介” 展开,不提及无关优势
六、本文可替换语句
· 可替换开头:
1. Having noticed the recruitment for English volunteer guides in the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion activity, I am writing to wholeheartedly apply for this rewarding position.
2. I am extremely excited to write this application letter upon learning that your organization is seeking English volunteer guides for the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" event from ...[具体信息来源,如 school notice/online platform 等].
3. This letter is in response to your advertisement for English volunteer guides in the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion. As an enthusiastic and qualified applicant, I am eager to submit my application.
· 可替换经验与优势:
1. I have been actively involved in various English-speaking competitions at school, winning several awards, which has significantly enhanced my English proficiency and public-speaking skills.
2. I have completed an English - immersion summer camp, during which I had extensive conversations with native English speakers, greatly improving my language practical ability.
3. In terms of knowledge about Zhangzhou, I have done in-depth research on its historical evolution and cultural heritage as part of my school project.
4. Also, I have volunteered in local tourism service before, helping domestic tourists navigate around Zhangzhou, which gives me an edge in dealing with various situations during guiding.
5. I have been a member of the school's culture club, where I have organized multiple cultural events related to Zhangzhou, such as traditional music performances and local handicraft exhibitions. This experience has equipped me with strong communication and organizational skills.
· 可替换结尾:
1. I sincerely hope that you will take my application into consideration. If granted this opportunity, I will spare no effort to promote Zhangzhou and provide the best service to foreign guests. Thank you for your time and I am looking forward to your favorable reply.
2. I would be extremely grateful if you could consider my application. I am fully committed to making this promotion activity a great success and presenting the charm of Zhangzhou to the world. Your prompt response would be highly appreciated.
3. I am confident that I can be a valuable asset to this activity. I earnestly request you to consider my application. Should I be selected, I will definitely live up to your expectations. Thank you and I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
七、范文赏析
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that you are recruiting English volunteer guides for the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion event, I am eager to apply for this position.
I have a good command of English, especially in speaking and listening, as I often chat with foreign exchange students in our school. What's more, I have read a lot about Zhangzhou's culture, including its unique food, ancient buildings and folk arts, and once wrote an English article about our city's intangible cultural heritage. I am patient and enthusiastic, which I believe are essential qualities for a guide.
I sincerely hope to be accepted. I would spare no effort to introduce Zhangzhou to foreign visitors and help them better understand this beautiful city.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the English volunteer guide position for the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion event.
As an active member of the school English Club, I often host foreign visitors, which has polished my fluent oral English and communication skills. Born and raised in Zhangzhou, I’m well-versed in its history, scenic spots like the Tulou, and folk customs. Last year, I volunteered to assist foreign tourists during the city’s flower festival, receiving praise for clear explanations.
I would be honored to contribute to introducing Zhangzhou’s charm. Please confirm my application, and I’ll spare no effort to do a good job. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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