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Unit1 Home
⭐第五课时知识点清单
一、作文《My dream home》核心知识点(范文拆解 + 写作结构)
(一)作文三段式框架(课本 Milie 范文固定结构,必考写作模板)
段落
功能
写作要点
开头 Beginning
点明房型 + 地理位置
介绍理想之家是什么房子、坐落在哪,使用:away from /near/in the centre of
主体 Main body
房屋构造 + 屋内设施 + 居家日常
1. 楼层、花园、阳台等硬件;2. 同住家人;3. 周末家庭活动
结尾 Ending
抒发情感
总结喜爱这个家,简短收尾
(二)必背写作短语(课本 Useful expressions 汇总)
1. away from the city centre 远离市中心
2. in the centre of … 在…… 中心 /near … 在…… 附近
3. lots of flowers and trees 许许多多花草树木(lots of = a lot of + 可数名词复数)
4. hear sb doing sth 听见某人正在做某事(hear the birds singing 听见小鸟鸣叫)
5. on the first/ground floor 在一楼(英式楼层表达)
6. look at the stars 看星星
7. live with sb 和某人同住
8. take good care of … 好好照顾……(= look after…well)
9. have a big dinner 吃丰盛的晚餐
10. play Chinese chess 下中国象棋(球类 / 棋类零冠词,不加 the)
11. enjoy doing sth 喜爱做某事(enjoy playing…)
12. help sb with sth 在某方面帮助某人(help Mum with cleaning 帮妈妈做家务)
(三)作文万能句型(直接套用仿写)
开头句
1. My dream home is a house with two floors, away from the busy city centre.
我理想的家是一栋两层小屋,远离喧闹市中心。
环境 & 设施句
1. It has a nice garden with lots of beautiful flowers.
它带一个种满鲜花的漂亮花园。
2. On the first floor, there is a warm balcony for us to relax.
在一楼,有一个可供我们休闲的温馨阳台。
3. There is a big study in my dream home.
我的理想之家里有一间大书房(there be 句型)。
日常活动句
1. At the weekend, my family often have a big dinner together.
周末我们一家人经常共进大餐。
2. Sometimes I help my parents with housework after dinner.
晚饭后我偶尔帮父母做家务。
结尾句
This is my warm dream home. I love it very much.
(四)Milie 原文重点单词 & 语法
1. smell /smel/v. 闻、嗅到(过去式 smelled/smelt)
2. star /stɑː(r)/n. 星星(复数 stars)
3. cleaning /ˈkliːnɪŋ/n. 打扫,清洁(动名词)
高频语法:with 表带有:a house with two floors 两层的房子;a garden with flowers 带花的花园
二、单元 Assessment(自评板块)考点梳理
1.5 项能力考点(单元全内容复盘)
1. homes around the world:世界各国民居(flat/cottage/farmhouse/ 竹楼 / 蒙古包等房型词汇)
2. 基数词 & 序数词:基数表数量、编号;序数表楼层 / 日期 / 顺序(本单元 Grammar 核心语法)
3. 话题写作:运用本单元新词谈论、写作理想之家(本课时写作目标)
4. 音节记单词:音节拆分记忆单词(拼读学习法,单词记忆技巧)
5. a good home 内涵:家不止是建筑,更是亲情陪伴(贴合单元谚语主题)
2. 自评填写万能模板(课堂示范填写)
· I am good at talking about different kinds of houses and using ordinal numbers.
我擅长谈论不同房型和使用序数词。
· I need to spend more time on writing my dream home correctly.
我需要多花时间练习理想之家写作。
三、Further study 谚语积累(写作结尾金句、口语素材)
英文谚语
中文翻译
写作用法
East or west, home is best.
金窝银窝,不如自己的狗窝。(走遍天下,家最好)
作文结尾万能点睛句,My dream home 文末收尾
A good home is made, not bought.
美好的家靠用心经营,而非金钱买来。
升华家的内涵,拓展写作立意
Home is the starting place of love, hope and dreams.
家是爱、希望与梦想起航的地方。
抒情类作文金句
拓展中文谚语英文(课堂分享任务):Home is where the heart is.(心安之处即吾家,单元开篇原句)
四、单元全册易错汇总(高频错题)
1. enjoy/help/hear 固定搭配
enjoy do ❌ → enjoy doing ✔;help sb with sth ✔;hear sb doing 听见某人正在做
2. 棋类球类冠词
play Chinese chess ✔(无 the);play basketball;play the piano(乐器加 the)
3. with 表后置定语
a house with three floors ✔(介词短语修饰名词,放在名词后)
4. 楼层介词固定搭配
on the first floor(介词只用 on,不用 in/at)
五、参考范文(My dream home,适配广西七年级考场,满分范本)
My dream home
My dream home is a warm house with three floors near a quiet lake. It is away from the noisy city centre.
There is a big garden in front of the house with many colourful flowers and tall trees. I can smell nice flowers and hear birds singing every morning. On the ground floor, we have a bright balcony. I love to sit there and enjoy the lake view at night.
I want to live with my grandparents and parents. The house is big enough for us to take good care of the old. At the weekend, we always have a big family dinner. After dinner, I enjoy playing Chinese chess with my grandpa, and sometimes I help my parents with cleaning.
This is my sweet dream home. I love it so much.
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