Unit 3 What makes a great team？（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材外研版八年级下册

本讲义聚焦外研版八年级下册“团队合作”主题写作，系统覆盖如何做一名好团队成员、合作经历及感受、团队合作意义三大核心内容。通过审题指导明确主题、体裁、时态等要点，结合写作框架梳理结构，搭配词汇句型积累（如“take responsibility”“communicate with each other”）构建学习支架，助力学生从话题理解到规范输出。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，提供丰富素材与参考范文助力准确表达，通过审题分析和框架设计培养思维品质中的逻辑组织能力。设置多样化变式训练（书信、演讲稿、日记等）提升学习能力中的迁移应用，课中辅助教师系统教学，课后帮助学生自主练习查漏补缺。

Unit 3 What makes a great team？ 同步写作课讲义-外研版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 本单元的话题是“团队合作”，主要围绕团队管理、团队协作、什么造就一个优秀团队等方面展开。与此相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：①如何做一名好的团队成员；②介绍一次与他人合作的经历及感受；③团队合作的意义。 在写如何做一名好的团队成员时，应用一般现在时态，开头引出话题；主体部分具体说明做一名好队员的方法；结尾概括团队合作的重要性。 ( 写作任务 ) ①如何做一名好的团队成员； ②介绍一次与他人合作的经历及感受； ③团队合作的意义。 ( 审题指导 ) 你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。 Be a Good Team Member 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Be a Good Team Member _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审主题：团队合作 审体裁：说明文 审时态：一般现在时 审人称：第一人称 审要点：团队合作的重要性、做一名好队员的方法 ( 写作框架 ) ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 团队活动类型 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 mountaineering 登山运动 go camping 去露营 do social practice 做社会实践 take part in a football match 参加足球比赛 make a poster 做海报 do voluntary work 做志愿工作 prepare for a party 为聚会做准备 go for a picnic 去野餐 give a presentation 做展示 make a survey 做调查 成为好队员的方法 take/shoulder responsibility 承担责任 deal with 处理 listen to 倾听 communicate with each other 互相交流 trust each other 互相信任 work out problems together 共同解决问题 know your strengths and weaknesses 知道自己的优缺点 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Unity is strength. 团结就是力量。 Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。 By working together in a team, we can work out better ideas. 通过团队合作，我们可以想出更好的主意。 中间句 To achieve effective teamwork, we should... 为实现有效的团队合作，我们应该…… It is important for team members to... 对团队成员来说，做……非常重要。 We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. 我们应当积极倾听他人，勇敢表达自我。 A good team member should be kind and helpful. 一名好的团队成员应该友善且乐于助人。 It is very important to trust our teammates and take responsibility for the team. 信任队友并为团队承担责任至关重要。 结尾句 In conclusion/To sum up/In summary, good teamwork is the key to success. 总之，良好的团队合作是成功的关键。 Without teamwork, it would be difficult/impossible to... 没有团队合作，……会很困难/将不可能。 Teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. 团队合作在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用。 Let’s work together to make our team great. 让我们一起合作，打造一支优秀的团队。 ( 参考范文 ) Be a Good Team Member As an old saying goes，“Many hands make light work.” It shows the great importance of teamwork. By working together in a team, we can work out better ideas. But how to be a good team member? Firstly, communicate more with each other. This way, we can know each other better. We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. Secondly, a good team member should be kind and helpful. Help our teammates in need. Finally, it is very important to trust our teammates and take responsibility for the team. All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. Let’s work together to make our team great. ( 写作拓展 ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （25-26八年级下·辽宁大连·期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John遇到了一个烦恼。他很难与他人很好地沟通，交不到好朋友。他向你咨询如何与朋友进行有效沟通，请你给他写封回信。 内容要点： 1. 表达同情理解； 2. 提出沟通建议； 3. 表达祝福期待。 注意事项： 1. 词数为80—100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear John, I have known your problem in the letter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua （2） （25-26八年级下·辽宁沈阳·期中）假定你是李辉，你们学校英文报正在举行“团队合作”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“How to Achieve Effective (有效的) Teamwork”为题写一篇英文短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。 内容要点： 1．分析团队合作的重要性; 2．提出两到三个实现良好团队合作的具体方法。 注意： (1)词数80-100; (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 How to Achieve Effective Teamwork ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （25-26八年级下·内蒙古呼和浩特·期中）一个团队的力量远远大于一个人的力量。合作是团队的根基，是团队成功的关键。某英文网站正在开展以“团队合作”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和别人合作做过什么事情，以及你的感受。提示问题：·What do you think of teamwork? ·What did you do with others? ·How did you feel?要求：1. 词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥。 I think teamwork is very important in our life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （25-26八年级下·北京·期中）假定你是李辉，即将在以“如何培养团队精神”为主题的英语论坛中发言，请根据下面的内容要点写一篇演讲稿。 内容要点： 1. 团队精神的重要性；   2. 结合自身的经历并谈谈你对团队精神的看法；    3. 表达希望。 注意：词数为80—100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：important（重要的），team spirit（团队精神），work together（合作），help each other（互相帮助），achieve goals（实现目标），teammate（队友），trust（信任），develop（培养） Dear friends, I feel so honored to make a speech about how to develop team spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. （5） （25-26八年级下·北京·期中）有一首歌叫《团结就是力量》。团队合作是我们在成长过程中需要不断学习的一项重要能力。本月，学校将开展以“The Power of Teamwork”为主题的英文征文活动，请你结合自身经历，讲述一次团队合作的经历，如班级联赛、班级合唱、艺术墙绘画、小组合作学习等，分享你的感受以及这次经历给你的收获。词数不少于60词，参考词汇供选用，文段开头已给出。 提示问题： ● What was your teamwork experience? ● How did you feel about it? ● What have you learned from the experience? 提示词汇： singing competition, basketball match, art wall painting, discuss, trust, respect, communicate, take responsibility, proud, strength, confident Teamwork is a basic skill for us to learn as we grow up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期末）作为一名中学生，我们要有团队合作意识。请你以“How to Work as a Team”为主题写一篇演讲稿，从be friendly，discuss和share三个方面阐述我们应该怎么做。 注意： （1）演讲稿须包含三方面的内容，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 （3）词数80个左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My topic today is how to work as a team. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my advice. Thank you! （7） （25-26八年级下·天津蓟州·期中）假如你是李华，非常喜欢踢足球。上周六，你们班的足球队和八班的球队进行了一场比赛。请你以一名参赛队员的身份，用英文写一篇日记，并发表你对团队合作的看法。 （1）上周六，我们班与八班足球队进行了一场足球比赛。 （2）刚上场时，我们有些紧张，所以踢的并不太好，比分落后于对手。 （3）这时，队长勇敢承担起了责任，帮助我们找到了优势并互相合作。 （4）队长鼓励我们，团队精神是很重要的，并教会我们如何更好地合作。 （5）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数：70-80个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 开头： A football match My name’s Li Hua, I love playing football very much. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $ Unit 3 What makes a great team？ 同步写作课讲义-外研版八年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 本单元的话题是“团队合作”，主要围绕团队管理、团队协作、什么造就一个优秀团队等方面展开。与此相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：①如何做一名好的团队成员；②介绍一次与他人合作的经历及感受；③团队合作的意义。 在写如何做一名好的团队成员时，应用一般现在时态，开头引出话题；主体部分具体说明做一名好队员的方法；结尾概括团队合作的重要性。 ( 写作任务 ) ①如何做一名好的团队成员； ②介绍一次与他人合作的经历及感受； ③团队合作的意义。 ( 审题指导 ) 你校英语报就“团队合作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Be a Good Team Member”为题投稿。 Be a Good Team Member 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Be a Good Team Member _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审主题：团队合作 审体裁：说明文 审时态：一般现在时 审人称：第一人称 审要点：团队合作的重要性、做一名好队员的方法 ( 写作框架 ) ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 团队活动类型 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 mountaineering 登山运动 go camping 去露营 do social practice 做社会实践 take part in a football match 参加足球比赛 make a poster 做海报 do voluntary work 做志愿工作 prepare for a party 为聚会做准备 go for a picnic 去野餐 give a presentation 做展示 make a survey 做调查 成为好队员的方法 take/shoulder responsibility 承担责任 deal with 处理 listen to 倾听 communicate with each other 互相交流 trust each other 互相信任 work out problems together 共同解决问题 know your strengths and weaknesses 知道自己的优缺点 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Unity is strength. 团结就是力量。 Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。 By working together in a team, we can work out better ideas. 通过团队合作，我们可以想出更好的主意。 中间句 To achieve effective teamwork, we should... 为实现有效的团队合作，我们应该…… It is important for team members to... 对团队成员来说，做……非常重要。 We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. 我们应当积极倾听他人，勇敢表达自我。 A good team member should be kind and helpful. 一名好的团队成员应该友善且乐于助人。 It is very important to trust our teammates and take responsibility for the team. 信任队友并为团队承担责任至关重要。 结尾句 In conclusion/To sum up/In summary, good teamwork is the key to success. 总之，良好的团队合作是成功的关键。 Without teamwork, it would be difficult/impossible to... 没有团队合作，……会很困难/将不可能。 Teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. 团队合作在我们的日常生活中发挥着重要作用。 Let’s work together to make our team great. 让我们一起合作，打造一支优秀的团队。 ( 参考范文 ) Be a Good Team Member As an old saying goes，“Many hands make light work.” It shows the great importance of teamwork. By working together in a team, we can work out better ideas. But how to be a good team member? Firstly, communicate more with each other. This way, we can know each other better. We should listen to other people actively and express ourselves bravely. Secondly, a good team member should be kind and helpful. Help our teammates in need. Finally, it is very important to trust our teammates and take responsibility for the team. All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our daily life. Let’s work together to make our team great. ( 写作拓展 ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （25-26八年级下·辽宁大连·期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John遇到了一个烦恼。他很难与他人很好地沟通，交不到好朋友。他向你咨询如何与朋友进行有效沟通，请你给他写封回信。 内容要点： 1. 表达同情理解； 2. 提出沟通建议； 3. 表达祝福期待。 注意事项： 1. 词数为80—100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear John, I have known your problem in the letter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear John, I have known your problem in the letter. I totally understand how you feel. Many people have trouble communicating at first, and it’s nothing to worry about. Here are some simple tips for you. First, be a good listener—when others talk, just listen carefully and don’t interrupt. Second, try to talk about common interests, like hobbies or school life, it’s easy to start a conversation. Third, be kind and friendly, a warm smile always helps. I believe these small steps will work. I hope my advice can help you make more friends soon. Looking forward to your good news! Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信 (应用文)，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：表达对John的同情与理解；给出具体的有效沟通建议；表达祝福与期待 确定人称：第一人称 (I)、第二人称 (you) 注意事项：词数80—100，不透露真实姓名/学校信息，开头结尾已给出不计入词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接来信，表达共情，消除John的焦虑情绪 主体段：分点给出3条沟通建议，贴合学生生活场景，逻辑清晰 结尾段：表达祝福，期待反馈 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：同情理解 核心表达：I totally understand how you feel./Many people have trouble communicating at first, and it’s nothing to worry about./It’s totally normal to feel stuck when it comes to making friends—lots of people go through this./I know it can feel really hard to open up to others at first, but you’re not alone in this.等 要点二：沟通建议 做个好倾听者：be a good listener—when others talk, just listen carefully/don’t interrupt/pay full attention when others speak/don’t rush to share your own stories right away等 聊共同话题：talk about common interests, like hobbies or school life/ask simple questions about their hobbies, favorite subjects, or weekend plans/mention things you both might enjoy, like sports, music, or movies等 保持友好态度：be kind and friendly/a warm smile always helps/be patient and polite, even if you feel nervous/keep a positive attitude等 要点三：祝福期待 核心表达：I hope my advice can help you make more friends soon./Looking forward to your good news!/I believe you’ll find it easier to connect with others soon./I can’t wait to hear how it goes!等 （2） （25-26八年级下·辽宁沈阳·期中）假定你是李辉，你们学校英文报正在举行“团队合作”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“How to Achieve Effective (有效的) Teamwork”为题写一篇英文短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。 内容要点： 1．分析团队合作的重要性; 2．提出两到三个实现良好团队合作的具体方法。 注意： (1)词数80-100; (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 How to Achieve Effective Teamwork ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】      例文                                                                     How to Achieve Effective Teamwork     Teamwork is very important in our study and life. It helps us finish tasks better. How can we achieve effective teamwork? First, communication is key. We should listen to others carefully and speak clearly. Second, sharing ideas is necessary. Everyone’s opinion matters, so we need to respect different views. Third, trust and help are important. We should support each other when facing difficulties. And this is exactly the power of teamwork that we should always cherish and apply in our future study and life. In a word, if we work together well, we can succeed easily and make progress together. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 明确文体：说明文，一般现在时 明确要点：开篇点题，说明团队合作在学习和生活中的重要性、列出具体的合作方法（沟通、分享、信任）、总结全文，表达共同努力取得成功的愿望 确定人称：第一人称(we) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，说明团队合作在学习和生活中的重要性 主体段：列出具体的合作方法（沟通、分享、信任） 结尾段：总结全文，表达共同努力取得成功的愿望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：开篇点题，说明团队合作在学习和生活中的重要性：Teamwork is very important/in our study and life/helps us finish tasks better/makes work easier/saves time/improves quality of work等 要点二：列出具体的合作方法（沟通、分享、信任） 沟通：communication is key/listen to others carefully/speak clearly/ask questions when unsure/give helpful feedback/discuss problems openly等 分享：sharing ideas is necessary/everyone’s opinion matters/respect different views/brainstorm together/learn from each other等 信任：trust and help are important/support each other when facing difficulties/believe in teammates/do one’s part well/offer help when someone is stuck/celebrate success together等 要点三：总结全文，表达共同努力取得成功的愿望：work together// succeed easily/make progress together/achieve more than working alone/build strong friendships等 （3） （25-26八年级下·内蒙古呼和浩特·期中）一个团队的力量远远大于一个人的力量。合作是团队的根基，是团队成功的关键。某英文网站正在开展以“团队合作”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和别人合作做过什么事情，以及你的感受。提示问题：·What do you think of teamwork? ·What did you do with others? ·How did you feel?要求：1. 词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3. 必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥。 I think teamwork is very important in our life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I think teamwork is very important in our life. Working with others perfectly is the key to success. Last year I was on our school football team. One day, we had a match. Although all members played well, we lost the first match. We felt disappointed, but we didn’t know why we lost the match. Our coach said that we didn’t know how to work together. With his help, we focused on teamwork. Finally, we won the second match. Through this experience, I realized that teamwork helps me do things more effectively. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时为主 明确要点：对合作的看法、与他人合作的经历、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明主题 主体段：详细介绍自己与他人合作的经历 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：对合作的看法 看法说明：Working with others perfectly is the key to success/A team is stronger than a person/Unity creates great power/No one can achieve success alone… 要点二：与他人合作的经历 经历介绍：focused on teamwork/joined hands to finish tasks/communicated and helped each other/stuck together to overcome difficulties… 要点三：个人感悟 感悟说明：teamwork helps me do things more effectively/gain better results with joint efforts/learn to understand and trust partners/improve efficiency through cooperation… （4） （25-26八年级下·北京·期中）假定你是李辉，即将在以“如何培养团队精神”为主题的英语论坛中发言，请根据下面的内容要点写一篇演讲稿。 内容要点： 1. 团队精神的重要性；   2. 结合自身的经历并谈谈你对团队精神的看法；    3. 表达希望。 注意：词数为80—100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：important（重要的），team spirit（团队精神），work together（合作），help each other（互相帮助），achieve goals（实现目标），teammate（队友），trust（信任），develop（培养） Dear friends, I feel so honored to make a speech about how to develop team spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 【答案】 例文： Dear friends, I feel so honored to make a speech about how to develop team spirit. Team spirit is very important because it helps us work together and achieve goals more easily. Last term, our class took part in a basketball game. At first, everyone wanted to score alone, and we lost the first half. Then our captain said, “Trust each other and pass the ball.” We helped and encouraged each other and finally won. From this, I learned that team spirit means supporting teammates and sharing success. To develop team spirit, we should communicate more, respect others, and always lend a hand. I hope everyone can build strong team spirit and enjoy working together. Thanks for listening. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（演讲稿），用一般现在时（阐述重要性和看法）和一般过去时（叙述经历） 明确要点：团队精神的重要性、自身经历、看法、希望 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，开头结尾已给出，词数80—100，注意演讲稿的号召力 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明演讲主题，阐述团队精神的重要性 主体段：结合自身经历表达对团队精神的看法 结尾段：表达希望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：团队精神的重要性 重要性表达：Team spirit is very important because it helps us work together and achieve goals more easily/Team spirit brings people together and makes success possible等 要点二：自身经历 背景：Last term, our class took part in a basketball game/We joined a basketball match last semester等 起初情况：everyone wanted to score alone, and we lost the first half/At first, each player tried to shine alone, so we fell behind等 转折：Then our captain said, “Trust each other and pass the ball”/Our leader reminded us to believe in one another and share the ball等 行动：We helped and encouraged each other and finally won/We supported and lifted each other up, and at last we won the game等 学到：I learned that team spirit means supporting teammates and sharing success/Team spirit is about lifting others and celebrating victory together等 要点三：对团队精神的看法及希望 看法：we should communicate more, respect others, and always lend a hand/To build team spirit, we need open talk, mutual respect, and a helping heart等 希望：I hope everyone can build strong team spirit and enjoy working together/May we all develop great team spirit and find joy in teamwork等 （5） （25-26八年级下·北京·期中）有一首歌叫《团结就是力量》。团队合作是我们在成长过程中需要不断学习的一项重要能力。本月，学校将开展以“The Power of Teamwork”为主题的英文征文活动，请你结合自身经历，讲述一次团队合作的经历，如班级联赛、班级合唱、艺术墙绘画、小组合作学习等，分享你的感受以及这次经历给你的收获。词数不少于60词，参考词汇供选用，文段开头已给出。 提示问题： ● What was your teamwork experience? ● How did you feel about it? ● What have you learned from the experience? 提示词汇： singing competition, basketball match, art wall painting, discuss, trust, respect, communicate, take responsibility, proud, strength, confident Teamwork is a basic skill for us to learn as we grow up. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Teamwork is a basic skill for us to learn as we grow up. Last month, our class took part in a singing competition. We practiced hard after school. We once had different opinions but reached an agreement through communication. We learned to trust and respect one another. Finally, we won the prize. I felt proud and excited when we finally stood on the stage. This experience taught me the power of teamwork. Working together helps us beat difficulties and gain success. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] • 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主，讲述一次团队合作的经历 • 明确要点：结合自身经历，讲清合作事件、过程中的沟通与解决、感受及收获，体现“团队合作的力量” • 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/our） • 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；词数不少于60词，需包含提示问题的全部内容     [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： • 开头段：以题目给出的句子引入主题，点明团队合作的重要性 • 主体段：具体讲述一次团队合作的经历（事件、遇到的分歧、如何通过沟通解决、最终结果） • 结尾段：总结感受与收获，升华主题，呼应开头     [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：团队合作的经历（事件过程） • 事件选择：singing competition, basketball match, art wall painting, group project, sports meeting, drama performance • 过程描述：practiced hard, discussed ideas, had disagreements, communicated with each other, worked together, supported one another • 解决分歧：reached an agreement, learned to trust and respect, listened to different opinions, compromised to move forwar   要点二：当时的感受 • 表达感受：proud, confident, excited, happy, 拓展：relieved, grateful, satisfied • 具体情境：when we won the prize, when we finished the work together, when we finally made it, when we overcame difficulties 要点三：经历带来的收获与感悟 • 核心感悟：learned the strength of teamwork, teamwork helps us overcome challenges, achieve success, understand the importance of cooperation, realize that united we stand • 行动收获：take responsibility, work with others, improve my communication skills, build trust with teammates （6） （25-26九年级上·河北唐山·期末）作为一名中学生，我们要有团队合作意识。请你以“How to Work as a Team”为主题写一篇演讲稿，从be friendly，discuss和share三个方面阐述我们应该怎么做。 注意： （1）演讲稿须包含三方面的内容，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 （3）词数80个左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My topic today is how to work as a team. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my advice. Thank you! 【答案】 例文 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My topic today is how to work as a team. First of all, we should be friendly to each other. A warm greeting or kind help can build a positive team spirit. Second, we need to discuss ideas together. Listen carefully and respect different opinions. What’s more, share your thoughts and help others. When we share, we learn more and work better. Remember, teamwork is like a boat. We all need to row in the same direction. Let’s practice these steps and become great team players! That’s all for my advice. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示要求进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头问候并引出主题； 第二步，从“be friendly, discuss, share”三个方面阐述如何进行团队合作； 第三步，总结团队合作的重要性，并发出号召； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be friendly to对……友好 ②each other互相 ③positive积极的 [高分句型] ①When we share, we learn more and work better. (when引导时间状语从句) ②Let’s practice these steps and become great team players! (and连接的并列结构) （7） （25-26八年级下·天津蓟州·期中）假如你是李华，非常喜欢踢足球。上周六，你们班的足球队和八班的球队进行了一场比赛。请你以一名参赛队员的身份，用英文写一篇日记，并发表你对团队合作的看法。 （1）上周六，我们班与八班足球队进行了一场足球比赛。 （2）刚上场时，我们有些紧张，所以踢的并不太好，比分落后于对手。 （3）这时，队长勇敢承担起了责任，帮助我们找到了优势并互相合作。 （4）队长鼓励我们，团队精神是很重要的，并教会我们如何更好地合作。 （5）你认为…… 要求： （1）词数：70-80个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 开头： A football match My name’s Li Hua, I love playing football very much. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A football match My name’s Li Hua, I love playing football very much. Last Saturday, our class football team had a match against Class Eight. At first, we were a bit nervous and didn’t play well, so we fell behind. Then, our captain bravely took responsibility. He helped us find our strengths and cooperate with each other. He encouraged us and said teamwork was very important. Finally, we worked as a team and won the match. I think teamwork is the key to success. It not only helps us win games but also makes us stronger as a team. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文（日记），用一般过去时为主 明确要点：比赛背景→开局落后→队长带领合作→团队精神感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we/our），以参赛队员身份叙述 注意事项：70-80个；开头已给出，不计入总词数；要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥 [第二步：构思布局] 单段式结构： 开头：承接题目给出的句子，引入比赛背景 主体：按时间顺序描述比赛过程：开局紧张落后→队长承担责任、鼓励大家合作 结尾：表达对团队合作的看法，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：上周六和八班比赛 参考表达：had a match against Class Eight/played against Class Eight/competed against Class Eight/took part in a match against Class Eight等 要点二：开局紧张、踢得不好、比分落后 参考表达：a bit nervous/fell behind/felt stressed at the beginning/played poorly in the first half/trailed behind the other team/were not at our best等 要点三：队长承担责任、帮助合作 参考表达：took responsibility/took charge of the team/stepped into the role of leader/helped us find our strengths/pulled us together等 要点四：队长鼓励团队精神、教我们合作 参考表达：reminded us of the importance of teamwork/told us cooperation was the key to success/taught us how to work with each other等 要点五：个人看法 参考表达：teamwork is the key to success/teamwork makes the dream work/unity is strength/cooperation leads to victory等 $