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标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 江苏省南京市、盐城市2026届高三年级第一次模拟考试英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I lived in an old apartment complex where the walls were thin. For weeks, my new neighbor upstairs was keeping me awake every night between ten and midnight. What I heard was slow, forceful footsteps mixed with crying(过去分词做后置定语), as if someone were pacing with the weight of the world on shoulders. To cope with the noise, I would sink into the old rocking chair (摇椅) by the window. The rhythm somehow quieted my mind(无灵主语句). But tonight, the noise was just unbearable. I posted in the building's group chat, "Can the 3C neighbor keep it down after 10?" Almost immediately, Lena, a cashier at a local market, replied, "Same here. Haven't slept well for weeks." And Tom, who ran the secondhand shop on the corner, added, "Don't they realize how loud it is?" A few others responded, but 3C never did. I'd had enough. "That's it," I thought aloud, pulling on my slippers(现在分词短语做伴随动作). "I'm going up there!" I stormed to the third floor, playing my angry speech in my head(现在分词短语做伴随动作), "Keep it down! Some of us need to work tomorrow!" The moment the door opened, I blurted out (脱口而出), "Do you have any idea how much noise you're making?" But the rest of my prepared speech got stuck in my throat. A young woman stood there, eyes red(独立主格), swaying (摇晃) gently back and forth(现在分词短语做伴随动作) in a desperate attempt to comfort a crying baby. The apartment behind her was humble - no dining table, no chairs, not even a lamp, only a mattress (床垫) and a few empty baby food packets on the floor. "I'm so sorry, Madam," she whispered, managing a weak smile,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) "I'm just trying to get her to sleep." That was when my anger disappeared. A familiar rhythm surfaced in my mind(无灵主语句) as I saw her sway the baby tiredly. "I have a chair downstairs that might calm your baby," I smiled softly. She looked up, eyes widening in disbelief(独立主格). 注意：(1) 续写词数应为 150 个左右；(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 "Let me fetch it for you," I said and rushed downstairs. The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. 江苏省南京市、盐城市2026届高三年级第一次模拟考试英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I lived in an old apartment complex where the walls were thin. For weeks, my new neighbor upstairs was keeping me awake every night between ten and midnight. What I heard was slow, forceful footsteps mixed with crying, as if someone were pacing with the weight of the world on shoulders. To cope with the noise, I would sink into the old rocking chair (摇椅) by the window. The rhythm somehow quieted my mind. But tonight, the noise was just unbearable. I posted in the building's group chat, "Can the 3C neighbor keep it down after 10?" Almost immediately, Lena, a cashier at a local market, replied, "Same here. Haven't slept well for weeks." And Tom, who ran the secondhand shop on the corner, added, "Don't they realize how loud it is?" A few others responded, but 3C never did. I'd had enough. "That's it," I thought aloud, pulling on my slippers. "I'm going up there!" I stormed to the third floor, playing my angry speech in my head, "Keep it down! Some of us need to work tomorrow!" The moment the door opened, I blurted out (脱口而出), "Do you have any idea how much noise you're making?" But the rest of my prepared speech got stuck in my throat. A young woman stood there, eyes red, swaying (摇晃) gently back and forth in a desperate attempt to comfort a crying baby. The apartment behind her was humble - no dining table, no chairs, not even a lamp, only a mattress (床垫) and a few empty baby food packets on the floor. "I'm so sorry, Madam," she whispered, managing a weak smile, "I'm just trying to get her to sleep." That was when my anger disappeared. A familiar rhythm surfaced in my mind as I saw her sway the baby tiredly. "I have a chair downstairs that might calm your baby," I smiled softly. She looked up, eyes widening in disbelief. 注意：(1) 续写词数应为 150 个左右；(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 "Let me fetch it for you," I said and rushed downstairs. The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Part 1：续写类型与构思分析 一、文章类型判断 类型 判定 人物关系类 ✔（邻里冲突和解/善良帮助类） 情感转变类 ✔（愤怒 → 理解 → 温暖） 生活故事类 ✔（日常冲突） 社会关怀类 ✔（弱势群体、互助） 综合类型：情感转变 + 邻里互助型故事 二、续写总体思路（高分路径） 1. 核心逻辑 冲突 → 误解 → 发现真相 → 转变 → 行动 → 升华主题 2. 两段式布局 段落 任务 写作重点 第一段 行动展开 拿椅子 + 帮助母亲安抚孩子 第二段 群体参与 + 升华 邻居加入 → 温暖社区 → 主题升华 3. 情节推进模型 冲突（噪音） → 情绪升级（愤怒） → 转折（看到真相） → 行动（提供帮助） → 扩展（邻居加入） → 高潮（共同解决问题） → 结局（温暖与理解） 三、续写实施步骤 Step 1：锁定核心意象 · rocking chair（摇椅）情感纽带 · crying baby 冲突源 · thin walls 矛盾背景 Step 2：情感推进设计 阶段 情感 原文 irritation（烦躁） 转折 shock（震惊） 第一段 sympathy（同情） 第二段 warmth（温暖） Step 3：动作设计 建议加入： · carry / drag the chair · gently rock · neighbors knocking / bringing things 四、续写注意事项 1. 承接原文要点 原文信息 续写必须呼应 rocking chair 必须再次出现 rhythm 用于安抚婴儿 group chat 第二段必须用 neighbors complaints 转为帮助 3. 巧妙设计建议 ✔ 用“节奏”呼应开头 ✔ 让邻居“带东西”（食物/灯/毯子） ✔ 结尾回扣“rocking chair → 心的安抚” Part 2：故事结构与文本分析 1）故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 开端 噪音困扰 发展 群体抱怨 高潮前 上门理论 转折 发现真相 结局预设 帮助与温暖 2）关键线索分析表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 narrator（易怒→善良），母亲（疲惫无助） eyes red, weak smile 情感层次 烦躁→愤怒→震惊→同情 my anger disappeared 关键情节点 开门瞬间 the rest of my speech got stuck 语言特色 细节描写 + 心理变化 playing my angry speech 关键词分析 noise / crying / rhythm / chair rhythm somehow quieted my mind 心理描写 内心独白明显 “That's it,” I thought 动作描写 pacing / swaying / stormed swaying gently 环境描写 贫困生活 no table, no chairs 隐含主题 empathy（共情） I smiled softly 情感转折 怒→善 my anger disappeared 空间转换 apartment → 3C I stormed to the third floor 时间过渡 weeks → tonight For weeks / But tonight 3）关键句功能分类 1. 心情类 · my anger disappeared · eyes widening in disbelief 续写要延续“温和语气” 2. 动作类 · stormed to the third floor · swaying gently 续写要增加“细腻动作” 3. 转折点 · door opened moment 一切续写必须围绕这个“认知翻转” Part 3：苏格拉底式提问 一、理解冲突 1. 为什么“我”会如此愤怒？仅仅是噪音吗？ 2. 楼上声音的描写暗示了什么信息？ 二、发现转折 1. 开门后哪些细节让“我”改变了态度？ 2. 为什么“摇晃（swaying）”会触发“我”的记忆？ 三、设计第一段 1. 摇椅为什么能安抚婴儿？可以如何描写这一过程？ 2. 母亲看到帮助时可能有哪些反应？ 四、设计第二段 1. 邻居为什么会改变态度？ 2. 他们可能带来什么帮助？（食物？灯？毯子？） 五、主题升华 1. 这个故事真正想表达的是“安静”还是“理解”？ 2. 结尾如何呼应开头的“rocking chair”和“rhythm”？ Part 4-1：动作 / 心理 / 环境 描写句 一、动作描写 1. He gently lifted the chair and hurried upstairs. 他轻轻抬起椅子，匆匆上楼。 2. She rocked the baby back and forth in a steady rhythm. 她有节奏地前后摇着孩子。 3. I slowed my steps and knocked softly on the door. 我放慢脚步，轻轻敲门。 4. He hesitated for a second before stepping inside. 他犹豫了一下才走进去。 5. She adjusted the blanket around the baby carefully. 她小心地给婴儿整理毯子。 6. The neighbors gathered at the doorway one by one. 邻居们一个接一个地聚到门口。 7. He reached out and offered a reassuring smile. 他伸出手，露出安慰的微笑。 8. I dragged the rocking chair across the hallway. 我把摇椅拖过走廊。 9. She wiped her tears and nodded gratefully. 她擦了擦眼泪，感激地点头。 10. The baby gradually calmed down in her arms. 孩子在她怀里渐渐安静下来。 二、心理描写 1. My anger melted away the moment I saw her. 我一看到她，怒气就消失了。 2. A wave of guilt washed over me. 一阵愧疚涌上心头。 3. I suddenly realized I had misunderstood everything. 我突然意识到自己误会了一切。 4. My heart softened at the sight of the baby. 看到孩子，我的心软了下来。 5. I felt a deep sense of sympathy for her. 我对她产生了深深的同情。 6. Her helplessness struck me deeply. 她的无助深深触动了我。 7. I was no longer annoyed, but concerned. 我不再烦躁，而是开始担心。 8. A warm feeling spread through my chest. 一股暖意在我心中蔓延。 9. I blamed myself for being so impatient. 我责怪自己太不耐烦。 10. At that moment, I knew I had to help. 那一刻，我知道我必须帮她。 三、环境描写 1. The room was dim and nearly empty. 房间昏暗且几乎空无一物。 2. A faint light filtered through the window. 微弱的光从窗户透进来。 3. The silence was broken only by the baby’s cries. 寂静被婴儿的哭声打破。 4. The hallway echoed with hurried footsteps. 走廊回荡着匆忙的脚步声。 5. The apartment looked bare and worn. 公寓显得简陋破旧。 6. A soft breeze drifted in from the window. 微风从窗外吹进来。 7. The air was filled with tension and exhaustion. 空气中弥漫着紧张与疲惫。 8. The flickering light cast long shadows on the wall. 摇曳的灯光在墙上投下长影。 9. The night felt unusually long and heavy. 夜晚显得格外漫长沉重。 10. Gradually, the room grew quiet and peaceful. 渐渐地，房间变得安静而平和。 Part 4-2：高频词高级替换 一、情绪类 普通词 高级替换 angry irritated / furious / annoyed / frustrated / upset sad sorrowful / heartbroken / downcast / depressed / gloomy happy delighted / overjoyed / thrilled / cheerful / content 二、动作类 普通词 高级替换 walk stroll / pace / march / wander / step look glance / stare / gaze / peer / glance at say whisper / murmur / exclaim / remark / respond 三、心理类 普通词 高级替换 think realize / figure / recognize / be aware / reflect feel sense / experience / perceive / undergo / be filled with 四、环境类 普通词 高级替换 dark dim / shadowy / gloomy / faintly-lit / murky quiet silent / still / peaceful / hushed / calm Part 4-3：地道搭配 + 词法解析 + 语料积累表 核心搭配与用法 表达 词意 近义词 反义词 例句 melt away 消散 fade away, disappear build up His anger melted away quickly. / The tension melted away. a wave of 一阵… a surge of, a flood of — A wave of relief washed over me. / A wave of fear hit her. wash over 涌上 flood over, sweep over — Guilt washed over him. / Warmth washed over me. be filled with 充满 be full of, be overwhelmed by be free from She was filled with joy. / He was filled with regret. calm down 平静 settle down, quiet down get worked up The baby calmed down slowly. / He tried to calm himself down. 动作+情绪复合表达 表达 词意 近义表达 例句 hesitate for a moment 犹豫片刻 pause briefly He hesitated for a moment before speaking. / She hesitated at the door. force a smile 强颜欢笑 manage a smile She forced a smile despite her exhaustion. / He forced a smile to hide his pain. nod gratefully 感激点头 nod in appreciation She nodded gratefully. / He nodded gratefully at me. speak in a soft voice 轻声说 whisper, murmur She spoke in a soft voice. / He whispered gently. burst into tears 突然哭出来 break down She burst into tears. / He broke down suddenly. 环境+氛围表达 表达 词意 近义词 反义词 例句 break the silence 打破沉默 interrupt the silence maintain silence The baby’s cry broke the silence. / A voice broke the silence. be bathed in 沐浴在…中 be covered in — The room was bathed in soft light. / The street was bathed in sunlight. fill the air 弥漫 spread through disappear from Tension filled the air. / Laughter filled the room. fall into silence 陷入安静 become quiet become noisy The room fell into silence. / They fell into silence. 重点词汇拓展 词汇 词意 近义词 反义词 例句 exhausted 筋疲力尽 worn out, drained energetic She was completely exhausted. / He felt exhausted after work. desperate 绝望的 hopeless, helpless hopeful She looked desperate. / He was desperate for help. comfort 安慰 soothe, reassure upset She tried to comfort the baby. / He comforted her gently. relieve 缓解 ease, reduce worsen The chair relieved the baby’s crying. / It relieved my stress. gather 聚集 assemble, come together disperse People gathered quickly. / They gathered at the door. Part 5 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1 “Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs. Grabbing the old rocking chair by the armrests(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I dragged it across the hallway, its legs scraping softly against the floor(独立主格). Breathless(形容词做补语), I returned and placed it beside her mattress, where the baby’s cries still echoed in the bare room. “Try this,” I suggested gently. She sank into the chair, cradling the baby close(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and began to rock in a slow, steady rhythm. Almost magically, the desperate cries softened into broken sobs and then into quiet breathing(无灵主语句). A wave of relief washed over her tired face(无灵主语句) as she closed her eyes for a second, as if borrowing strength from the silence. Watching the room settle,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I suddenly felt ashamed of my earlier anger. Stepping back(现在分词短语做伴随动作分词), I took out my phone and typed in the group chat, hoping the others would understand what I had just witnessed.(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Paragraph 2 The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Within minutes, footsteps filled the once-quiet hallway, but this time they carried no irritation—only concern. Lena arrived first, holding a small bag of baby food(现在分词短语做伴随动作), while Tom followed with a folding chair balanced awkwardly in his arms(过去分词做后置定语). Others came quietly, bringing blankets, a lamp, and a few simple necessities(现在分词短语做伴随动作). When the door opened, the young mother froze in surprise, her eyes shining with disbelief as well as gratitude(独立主格). As we arranged the items around the rocking chair, the dim room gradually transformed into a warm shelter. The baby slept peacefully, rocked by the same gentle rhythm(过去分词短语做方式状语). In that moment, I realized the “noise” we had complained about had never been noise at all, but a silent plea for help—one that, thankfully, we had finally learned to hear. 地道搭配与替换 表达 替换/近义 用法说明 drag across pull, haul 强调费力动作 a wave of relief a surge/flood of relief 情绪爆发 settle into silence grow quiet, calm down 环境变化 take out my phone pull out my phone 日常口语升级 transform into turn into, convert into 升华场景 情绪+动作亮点 类型 表达 升级替换 情绪 ashamed of my anger regret, remorse 情绪 disbelief astonishment 动作 sank into the chair lowered herself 动作 cradling the baby holding, embracing Version 2 Paragraph 1 “Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs. Without wasting a second, I pulled the rocking chair out from the corner and hurried back upstairs, my earlier anger replaced by urgency(独立主格). Placing it carefully beside her(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I gestured for her to sit. She lowered herself slowly, exhaustion written all over her face(独立主格), and began to rock the baby with trembling arms. The steady rhythm soon filled the empty room, echoing softly against the bare walls(现在分词短语做后置定语). Gradually, the baby’s sharp cries faded into quiet whimpers, and finally into peaceful silence. The young mother let out a long breath, her shoulders finally relaxing(独立主格). Standing at the doorway,(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I realized how little I had understood before. Determined to make things right(过去分词做后置定语), I quickly described the situation in the group chat, hoping(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the complaints would turn into something more meaningful. Paragraph 2 The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. The same people who had once complained now showed up with unexpected kindness. Lena brought groceries; Tom carried a small lamp; others added blankets and baby supplies. One by one, they stepped inside quietly, careful not to wake the sleeping child(形容词做补语). The room, once empty and cold, gradually filled with warmth and life. The young mother stood there speechless(形容词做补语), tears rolling down her cheeks(独立主格) as she tried to thank everyone. No one mentioned the noise anymore. Instead, we exchanged understanding glances, realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)how easily we had judged before knowing the truth. As I listened to the soft creak of the rocking chair, I knew that what had once kept us awake had now become a comforting reminder of compassion shared among strangers. 地道搭配 表达 近义表达 说明 without wasting a second immediately 时间紧迫 fade into silence die down 声音变化 make things right fix, correct 情感修复 show up with arrive with 群体行动 exchange glances look at each other 默契表达 语料拓展 词汇 同义词 例句 exhaustion fatigue, weariness Exhaustion showed on her face. / He collapsed from exhaustion. compassion kindness, empathy Compassion changed everything. / She acted with compassion. judge misunderstand, misinterpret We judged too quickly. / Don’t judge others. Version 3 Paragraph 1 “Let me fetch it for you,” I said and rushed downstairs. I reached for the rocking chair that had comforted me so many nights, my slippers slapping against the floor(独立主格). Carrying it upstairs(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I placed it gently in her empty room, suddenly aware of how quiet everything felt except for the baby’s cries(形容词做补语). “It helped me before,” I said softly. She nodded, settling into the chair and rocking slowly(现在分词短语做伴随动作), her movements guided more by instinct than strength(独立主格). Little by little, the baby calmed down, the cries fading into soft breathing(独立主格). The rhythm, once a source of irritation to me, now felt soothing and meaningful. Watching them(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized how easily frustration and anger could blind us to someone else’s struggle. I stepped outside and typed a message in the group chat, determined to change the tone of our complaints.(形容词做补语) Paragraph 2 The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Soon, the hallway was filled again, but this time with quiet footsteps and gentle voices. Lena, Tom, and others arrived with what they could spare, placing their items carefully near the rocking chair(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The young mother stood there, overwhelmed(形容词做补语), unable to find words(形容词做补语). As we arranged everything, the once-empty room slowly took on the warmth of a home. The baby slept soundly, rocked by his mother(过去分词做后置定语). In that soft creaking sound, I found a new meaning—it was no longer a disturbance, but a reminder that behind every noise, there might be a story waiting to be understood. 高分表达 表达 替换 用法 slap against the floor hit the floor 动作细节 guided by instinct naturally 高级表达 blind us to prevent from seeing 抽象表达 take on the warmth become warm 环境升华 高阶语料 表达 同义/联想 例句 a source of irritation annoyance The noise was a source of irritation. / His behavior annoyed me. be overwhelmed be moved deeply She was overwhelmed with gratitude. / He felt overwhelmed. behind every noise hidden story There is a story behind every noise. / Every action has a reason. 第二节 “Let me fetch it for you.” I said and rushed downstairs. I dragged out the rocking chair, wrestled it upstairs, and set it down beside her. “It might work,” I encouraged her to try it. She sank into it, cradling her baby(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and just like that, the crying softened into quiet breaths(无灵主语句). Eyes glistening with tears of gratitude(独立主格), she whispered, “Thank you.” I waved back, closing the door behind me(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Returning home(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I posted a message in the group chat, explaining the young mother's difficult situation and calling on everyone to offer her simple, respectful support(现在分词短语做伴随动作). (85 words) Paragraph 2: The neighbors responded to my post and agreed to gather at 3C instantly. Lena arrived with some baby food, and Tom followed with two chairs, telling me (现在分词短语做伴随动作)he'd bring a bed frame the next day. Warm blankets, a small lamp, and toys were neatly piled up at her door. Enveloped in warmth(过去分词做方式状语), the new mum choked up, “Thank you all! Your support means the world to me.” We smiled at each other, knowing (现在分词短语做伴随动作) we'd given a helping hand. I realized the “noise” we had complained about was actually a cry for help, and our kindness had turned conflict into care. (85 words) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $