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该高中英语读后续写复习讲义聚焦高考核心考点，涵盖情节逻辑构建、人物心理描写、主题升华及语言表达等考查要求，按“发现—确认—保护—传承”逻辑链梳理知识点内在联系，通过考点分析（核心脉络梳理）、方法指导（续写框架与技巧）、真题训练（达州二诊真题及多版本范文）等环节，帮助学生突破续写难点，体现复习教学的系统性和针对性。 资料特色在于采用苏格拉底式提问引导学生深度分析情节与人物心理，结合高频语料积累（动作、心理描写及高级替换词）提升语言能力，通过分层续写示例培养思维品质，确保学生在有限时间内掌握续写逻辑与表达技巧，为教师精准把控复习节奏提供有力支撑，有效提升学生的应考能力。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写或好词好句）可积累文本，紫色为情绪点,绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 四川省达州市普通高中2026届第二次诊断测试（达州二诊） 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day in the early 1980s in Pennsylvania, a truck stopped in the parking lot with a load of old typewriters (打字机) from around the globe for sale. David stopped by and found a large metal disc (圆盘) very special. It weighed around 30 pounds and measured about 30 inches across, covered in thousands of precisely designed Chinese characters(过去分词做后置定语). It was nothing like anything he had ever seen before, yet David knew for sure it was part of a Chinese typewriter. He offered $17—all the cash in his wallet—and rolled the disc to his car. Back home, he kept the beloved collection in a workshop among tools, car parts and poetry magazines. Last summer, the local library was planning an exhibition of historic typewriters(故事继续推进). David remembered his disc and took it to consult Kathryn Dillon, a technician at the library. Dillon thought it was so beautiful and so unusual but she knew little about it. She realized it needed to be figured out. So she sent photos of the disc to Tom Mullaney, a professor and historian in Stanford University. It was a shocking moment for Mullaney when he saw the pictures, because he knew it was the key part of the first Chinese typewriter, MingKwai. Mullaney once wrote a book on the MingKwai so he knew the story of it quite well. The MingKwai, meaning “clear and fast” in Chinese(现在分词短语做伴随动作), was proof of a far more elegant possibility. Produced in 1947(过去分词做定语), it had only 72 keys. The typewriter’s inventor was the well-known Chinese writer, translator and linguist Lin Yutang. For some reasons, the MingKwai was never mass-produced. The MingKwai simply disappeared, but its significance lived on. It’s the great-great parent of the entire Chinese digital age, at least in terms of human-computer interaction. Now that the key part of the first Chinese typewriter was rediscovered, Mullaney wouldn’t let it disappear again. He responded at once. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Knowing the disc was on display in the library, Mullaney immediately went there. Paragraph 2: After the exhibition, David decided to donate it to Stanford for further research. 四川省达州市普通高中2026届第二次诊断测试（达州二诊） 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day in the early 1980s in Pennsylvania, a truck stopped in the parking lot with a load of old typewriters (打字机) from around the globe for sale. David stopped by and found a large metal disc (圆盘) very special. It weighed around 30 pounds and measured about 30 inches across, covered in thousands of precisely designed Chinese characters. It was nothing like anything he had ever seen before, yet David knew for sure it was part of a Chinese typewriter. He offered $17—all the cash in his wallet—and rolled the disc to his car. Back home, he kept the beloved collection in a workshop among tools, car parts and poetry magazines. Last summer, the local library was planning an exhibition of historic typewriters. David remembered his disc and took it to consult Kathryn Dillon, a technician at the library. Dillon thought it was so beautiful and so unusual but she knew little about it. She realized it needed to be figured out. So she sent photos of the disc to Tom Mullaney, a professor and historian in Stanford University. It was a shocking moment for Mullaney when he saw the pictures, because he knew it was the key part of the first Chinese typewriter, MingKwai. Mullaney once wrote a book on the MingKwai so he knew the story of it quite well. The MingKwai, meaning “clear and fast” in Chinese, was proof of a far more elegant possibility. Produced in 1947, it had only 72 keys. The typewriter’s inventor was the well-known Chinese writer, translator and linguist Lin Yutang. For some reasons, the MingKwai was never mass-produced. The MingKwai simply disappeared, but its significance lived on. It’s the great-great parent of the entire Chinese digital age, at least in terms of human-computer interaction. Now that the key part of the first Chinese typewriter was rediscovered, Mullaney wouldn’t let it disappear again. He responded at once. 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Knowing the disc was on display in the library, Mullaney immediately went there. Paragraph 2: After the exhibition, David decided to donate it to Stanford for further research. Part 1 读后续写分析 一、文章类型分类 + 续写整体构思分析 （一）文章类型判断 分类维度 类型 题材类型 人物故事类（人与历史文化遗产） 情节类型 偶然发现类 + 文物重现类 + 价值升华类 情感主题 珍贵发现、文化传承、历史价值、责任担当 续写模式 “发现—确认—保护—传承”型 核心主题 小人物守护大历史，偶然收藏成就文化传承 这类续写属于： 高考高频类型：“偶然发现 + 文物价值 + 情感升华”类续写 其核心不是“冲突”，而是：“认知升级 + 价值升华” 即：David：普通收藏者 → 历史守护者 Mullaney：研究者 → 文物保护推动者 二、续写思路如何构思 （二）续写核心逻辑链 原文核心脉络： 偶然买下圆盘 → 收藏多年 → 图书馆展览 → 专家识别 → 确认重大历史价值 →（续写）实地查看 → 讲述其真正意义 → David被触动 → 捐赠研究 → 文物获得新生命 所以续写不是： ❌ 再制造新冲突 而是： 顺势完成： “价值确认 + 情感升华 + 完美落点” 这是本题最高分关键。 三、两段续写如何布局 Paragraph 1 核心任务：“确认价值” 必须写： · Mullaney立刻赶到图书馆 · 激动地查看圆盘 · 向David解释其真正价值 · David震惊、感动、自豪 情感走向： 惊讶 → 激动 → 敬畏 → 自豪 本段关键词： recognize/history/rare/significance/treasure/priceless/amazed/proud Paragraph 2 核心任务：“完成传承” 必须写： · 展览结束后 · David认真思考 · 决定捐赠 · Stanford继续研究 · 文物真正回归历史 情感走向： 思考 → 决定 → 不舍 → 欣慰 → 升华 本段关键词： donate/preserve/research/future generations/legacy/continue/meaningful 四、续写框架提炼 高分万能框架： 第一段 专家赶来 → 确认文物身份 → 讲述历史意义 → 主人公震撼 第二段 经过思考 → 主人公主动捐赠 → 文物被妥善保存 → 主题升华 五、续写实施技巧 （一）承接原文必须注意 1. 必须回扣细节 原文伏笔： · $17 only · workshop · beloved collection · beautiful and unusual · key part · first Chinese typewriter · MingKwai · never disappear again 续写必须反向回扣这些。 例如：David never expected his $17 purchase would turn out to be priceless. 2. 必须突出人物变化 不是写事件：而是写：David的认知变化 3. 必须体现主题升华 最后必须上升到： cultural preservation historical responsibility 六、如何巧妙设计续写 技巧1： 用“17美元”形成巨大反差 最容易拿高分。 What cost only $17 had become a priceless treasure. 技巧2： 用“never disappear again”回扣原文 神来之笔。 This time, the MingKwai would never disappear again. 技巧3： 用“from workshop to Stanford”形成象征意义 非常高级。 From a dusty workshop to Stanford University, the disc finally found its true home. Part 2 故事核心脉络 + 关键线索梳理 （一）故事核心脉络 阶段 内容 开端 David偶然花17美元买下圆盘 发展 圆盘多年被收藏在工作室 转折 图书馆展览引发关注 高潮 专家确认其为第一台中文打字机核心部件 续写高潮 Mullaney亲自赶来确认价值 结局 David决定捐赠，文物被永久保护 （二）关键线索分析总表 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 David：普通收藏者；Mullaney：历史守护者 David stopped by… 情感层次 好奇→惊讶→震撼→责任感 It was a shocking moment 关键情节点 买下圆盘、图书馆展览、专家确认 He offered $17 语言特色 平实叙述中暗藏巨大价值反转 It was nothing like… 关键词分析 disc, typewriter, MingKwai, disappear key part of the first Chinese typewriter 心理描写 David的惊讶；Mullaney的震惊 shocking moment 动作描写 stopped, found, offered, rolled, took rolled the disc to his car 环境描写 parking lot, workshop, library in the parking lot 隐含主题 历史传承、文化保护 wouldn’t let it disappear again 情感转折 普通收藏 → 国家级文物 proof of a far more elegant possibility 空间转换 停车场→工作室→图书馆→Stanford workshop → library 时间过渡 early 1980s → last summer → now One day in the early 1980s Part 3 苏格拉底式提问 第一段引导问题（Paragraph 1） 关于情节 1. 为什么Mullaney会“immediately”赶去图书馆？ 2. 他看到圆盘时第一反应会是什么？ 3. 他会如何确认这就是MingKwai的核心部件？ 4. 他会对David说些什么？ 关于人物心理 1. David得知自己17美元买来的东西如此珍贵时，会有什么感受？ 2. 他会后悔当年没有更早发现它的价值吗？ 3. 他会感到幸运、震惊还是自豪？ 关于细节回扣 1. 如何巧妙回扣“$17”这个细节？ 2. 如何呼应“wouldn’t let it disappear again”？ 3. 为什么这一句特别重要？ 第二段引导问题（Paragraph 2） 关于转折 1. 为什么David最终决定捐赠，而不是自己继续收藏？ 2. 他做这个决定时，最重要的考虑是什么？ 3. 是“钱”重要，还是“意义”重要？ 关于升华 1. Stanford为什么是更好的归宿？ 2. 文物真正的价值是什么？ 3. 如何让结尾体现“文化传承”而不是“个人得失”？ 关于结尾高级句 1. 如何写出一个让阅卷老师眼前一亮的结尾？ 2. “From workshop to Stanford”为什么是神句？ 3. 怎样让结尾既自然又高级？ 4. 如果你是David，你会怎么做？为什么？ Part 4读后续写高频语料积累 一、动作描写 英文例句 中文翻译 Mullaney rushed into the library the moment he heard the news. Mullaney一听到消息就立刻冲进了图书馆。 He bent down carefully and ran his fingers across the metal disc. 他小心地弯下腰，用手指轻轻划过金属圆盘。 David stood beside him, watching silently with curiosity. David站在旁边，安静而好奇地看着。 Mullaney nodded repeatedly, unable to hide his excitement. Mullaney不断点头，难掩激动之情。 He took a deep breath and explained the history behind the disc. 他深吸一口气，开始解释圆盘背后的历史。 David stared at the disc, speechless for a moment. David盯着圆盘，一时说不出话来。 He gently lifted the disc as if holding a priceless treasure. 他轻轻托起圆盘，仿佛捧着无价之宝。 After a long silence, David finally made up his mind. 沉默良久之后，David终于下定了决心。 He signed the donation papers with a firm hand. 他坚定地签下了捐赠文件。 The disc was carefully packed and sent to Stanford University. 圆盘被小心包装好，送往斯坦福大学。 二、心理描写 英文例句 中文翻译 David was completely shocked by what he had just heard. David被刚刚听到的一切彻底震惊了。 He could hardly believe that his $17 purchase was so valuable. 他几乎不敢相信自己17美元买来的东西竟如此珍贵。 A strong sense of pride rose in his heart. 一股强烈的自豪感涌上心头。 Mullaney felt both excited and deeply moved. Mullaney既激动又深受触动。 David suddenly realized the true meaning of his collection. David突然意识到了自己收藏的真正意义。 He hesitated for a moment, torn between keeping and donating it. 他犹豫了一会儿，在保留和捐赠之间挣扎。 In the end, responsibility outweighed personal attachment. 最终，责任感战胜了个人的不舍。 He felt relieved after making the decision. 做出决定后，他感到如释重负。 Looking at the disc, he was filled with respect for history. 看着圆盘，他心中充满了对历史的敬意。 He knew he had made the right choice. 他知道自己做出了正确的选择。 三、环境描写 英文例句 中文翻译 The quiet library was filled with soft afternoon sunlight. 安静的图书馆里洒满了柔和的午后阳光。 The old metal disc lay silently in the center of the exhibition hall. 那枚古老的金属圆盘静静地躺在展厅中央。 Dust floated in the warm light above the display table. 灰尘在展台上方温暖的光线中轻轻漂浮。 Visitors stopped from time to time, drawn by its unusual appearance. 游客们不时停下脚步，被它独特的外形吸引。 The workshop smelled of old books, tools and machine oil. 工作室里弥漫着旧书、工具和机油的味道。 A sense of history seemed to fill the entire room. 整个房间仿佛都弥漫着历史感。 The library grew even quieter as Mullaney spoke. 随着Mullaney的讲述，图书馆变得更加安静。 Outside the window, the summer sunlight was bright and warm. 窗外，夏日阳光明亮而温暖。 The disc reflected a soft golden light under the lamp. 圆盘在灯光下反射出柔和的金色光芒。 It felt as if history itself was standing before them. 仿佛历史本身就站在他们面前。 四、高级替换词 1. 表示“高兴” 普通词 高级替换 happy delighted happy thrilled happy overjoyed happy pleased happy joyful 2. 表示“惊讶” 普通词 高级替换 surprised astonished surprised amazed surprised stunned surprised shocked surprised speechless 3. 表示“重要” 普通词 高级替换 important significant important meaningful important valuable important vital important priceless 4. 表示“决定” 普通词 高级替换 decide determine decide make up one’s mind decide resolve decide settle on decide commit to 5. 表示“看” 普通词 高级替换 look gaze at look stare at look glance at look fix one’s eyes on look observe 五、地道搭配 + 固定搭配 + 词法解析 短语 词义 近义词 反义词 例句1 例句2 make up one’s mind 下定决心 determine, decide hesitate He made up his mind to donate it. She finally made up her mind to apologize. be filled with 充满 be full of, be crowded with be empty of His heart was filled with pride. The room was filled with laughter. a sense of 一种……感 feeling of, awareness of ignorance of A sense of duty pushed him forward. She felt a sense of relief. priceless treasure 无价之宝 invaluable object worthless item The disc became a priceless treasure. Family memories are priceless treasures. be torn between A and B 在A和B之间挣扎 hesitate between decide firmly He was torn between keeping and donating it. She was torn between duty and love. beyond words 难以言表 indescribable expressible His excitement was beyond words. Her gratitude was beyond words. preserve history 保存历史 protect heritage destroy history Museums help preserve history. We should preserve cultural heritage. pass down 传承 hand down, inherit abandon Traditions should be passed down. Stories were passed down for generations. with a firm hand 坚定地 resolutely hesitantly He signed with a firm hand. She wrote her name with a firm hand. disappear again 再次消失 vanish again remain The artifact should never disappear again. We hope the tradition won’t disappear again. 六、可积累高分语料 黄金句1 What cost only $17 turned out to be a priceless treasure. 仅仅17美元买来的东西，竟成了无价之宝。 黄金句2 For the first time, David realized he was not just a collector, but also a guardian of history. David第一次意识到，自己不仅是一位收藏者，更是一位历史的守护者。 黄金句3 From a dusty workshop to Stanford University, the disc finally found its true home. 从布满灰尘的工作室到斯坦福大学，这枚圆盘终于找到了真正的归宿。 黄金句4 This time, the MingKwai would never disappear again. 这一次，明快打字机再也不会消失了。 黄金句5 Sometimes, the greatest discoveries begin with the smallest choices. 有时候，最伟大的发现始于最微小的选择。 Part 5 Possible Versions Version 1 Paragraph 1: Knowing the disc was on display in the library, Mullaney immediately went there. The moment he entered the exhibition hall, his eyes were fixed on the large metal disc lying quietly under the glass case(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He walked closer, almost holding his breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and gently touched the edge of the display table, as if greeting an old friend. Looking at the thousands of Chinese characters(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he could hardly hide his excitement. He turned to David and explained that this was the core part of the MingKwai, the first Chinese typewriter invented by Lin Yutang in 1947(过去分词短语做后置定语). What amazed David most was that the strange disc he had bought for only $17 was actually a priceless witness to history. Standing there in silence(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he suddenly felt that the disc deserved a better place than his dusty workshop. Paragraph 2: After the exhibition, David decided to donate it to Stanford for further research. He called Mullaney and told him that such an important treasure should belong where it could be protected and studied. Mullaney was deeply touched and thanked him again and again for his generosity and vision. David smiled and said he had simply done what was right. Keeping it in his workshop meant preserving an object, but donating it meant preserving history. Soon, the disc was carefully packed and sent to Stanford University. From an old parking lot in Pennsylvania to one of the world’s leading universities, the disc had finally found its true home. This time, the MingKwai would never disappear again. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Knowing the disc was on display in the library, Mullaney immediately went there. He almost rushed through the library doors, afraid(adj做主语补语) that even one more minute of waiting would be too long. When he finally stood before the disc, he stared at it for a long time without saying a word. Then a smile slowly spread across his face(无灵主语句). He told David that this was not just an old machine part, but the key to understanding the birth of Chinese modern typing. He described how Lin Yutang had spent years designing the MingKwai, hoping to make Chinese typing clearer and faster(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hearing this(现在分词短语做伴随动作), David felt both surprised and proud. Never had he imagined that his beloved collection hidden among tools and car parts carried such extraordinary historical value. Paragraph 2: After the exhibition, David decided to donate it to Stanford for further research. The thought had stayed with him for days, and the more he considered it, the clearer his answer became. He told Mullaney that history should not stay forgotten in a private workshop but should be shared with the world. Mullaney nodded with respect, knowing how difficult such a decision could be(现在分词短语做伴随动作). David admitted that he would miss seeing the disc every day, yet he felt relieved because he knew it would now serve a greater purpose. As the disc left for Stanford, David watched quietly, feeling(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that he was not losing a possession, but helping history continue its journey. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Knowing the disc was on display in the library, Mullaney immediately went there. Seeing it placed in the center of the exhibition room(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he stopped for a moment, deeply moved by the sight(现在分词短语做伴随动作). He leaned closer and carefully examined every line of Chinese characters on it, his face full of admiration(独立主格). He then told David and Dillon that this was the missing heart of the MingKwai typewriter, a remarkable invention far ahead of its time. He explained that although the machine was never mass-produced, it opened the door to the future of Chinese digital input. David listened in astonishment, unable to believe(adj做主语补语) that something he had kept for years beside old tools could be connected to such an important chapter of history. At that moment, he began thinking seriously about its future. Paragraph 2: After the exhibition, David decided to donate it to Stanford for further research. He believed the disc should be where people could truly understand its value instead of remaining a silent object in his workshop. When Mullaney heard the news, he shook David’s hand warmly and promised that the university would treasure it with the respect it deserved. David felt a little sad to let it go, but even more satisfied to know it would help future generations learn about Lin Yutang’s vision. As the disc was sent away, he looked at the empty space in his workshop and smiled. Sometimes, letting go is the best way to make something last forever. One possible version: Knowing the disc was on display in the library, Mullaney immediately went there. As soon as he saw the metal disc shining under the light, he stepped forward gently, his eyes filled with excitement and admiration(独立主格). He pointed at the characters on the disc and explained to David and Dillon in detail how it worked with the MingKwai typewriter. He talked about Lin Yutang’s efforts to create a practical Chinese typewriter, overcoming countless difficulties(现在分词短语做方式状语). David and Dillon listened carefully, shocked by the disc’s great significance(过去分词做后置定语) they had never realized before. Mullaney also took many photos, eager to share the good news with his colleagues(adj做主语补语). After the exhibition, David decided to donate it to Stanford for further research. When he told Mullaney his decision, Mullaney was deeply moved and thanked him sincerely. David said with a smile that the disc belonged not just to him, but to the world, as it carried the wisdom of Lin Yutang and the history of Chinese typewriting. The disc was then sent to Stanford, where Mullaney and his team studied it carefully. It helped them uncover more details about the MingKwai, letting this great invention shine again in the public eye(现在分词短语做结果状语). 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $