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2026届武汉市高三四月调研考试英语
应用文和读后续写讲义
一、写作题目
第一节(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,在上周五的英语课上,外教 Chris 利用人工智能 (AI) 评价了同学们写的演讲稿,这引发了你的思考。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:(1) 你的看法;(2) 你的建议。
注意:(1) 写作词数应为 80 左右;(2) 可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Hua from Class 1. ____________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、写作思路
1. 开头段:自然引入话题
题目已给出开头:Dear Chris, I'm Li Hua from Class 1.
衔接句示例:
I'm writing to share my thoughts on the AI evaluation of our speeches you did last Friday. I’ve been thinking about the AI tool you used to grade our speeches last Friday, so I want to share my ideas with you.
2. 主体段 1:辩证表达看法
核心逻辑:先肯定 AI 的优点,再温和指出局限性,避免全盘否定或盲目吹捧。
肯定AI的优势:聚焦 “效率、客观、基础错误纠正”,比如:
AI is really helpful — it quickly points out our grammar and spelling mistakes, which saves a lot of time.
指出局限性:聚焦 “演讲稿的人文属性”,比如情感、语气、个人风格,AI 无法判断:
However, it can’t fully understand the emotional expression or personal style in our speeches.
主体段 2:给出具体建议
建议要和前面的局限性对应,给出 “AI + 人工结合” 的可落地方案,比如:
建议采用 “AI + 人工” 结合的方式:先用 AI 完成基础错误的快速筛查,再由老师做补充评价,重点点评演讲的感染力、表达逻辑和个人特色。
也可以补充:比如希望能保留老师的课堂点评环节,AI 只作为辅助工具,而不是唯一的评价方式。
3. 结尾段:礼貌收尾(简洁得体)
简介即可,不用复杂:
Thank you for your hard work. Looking forward to your reply.
That’s all my ideas. Best wishes!
三、写作高级表达
开头段
高级短语
· share my thoughts on分享我对…… 的看法
· reflect on反思 / 思考
· regarding the AI evaluation关于这次 AI 评价
· it has been on my mind这件事一直萦绕在我心头
· reach out to you写信联系你
高级句子
1. I'm writing to share my thoughts on the AI evaluation of our speeches you conducted last Friday.我写信是想和你分享一下,关于你上周五用 AI 评价我们演讲稿这件事的看法。
2.I've been reflecting on the AI tool you used to grade our speeches last Friday, so I'd like to reach out to you with my ideas.我一直在思考你上周五用来给我们演讲稿打分的 AI 工具,因此想写信和你交流一下我的想法。
3.It has been on my mind since last Friday's class, and I'd love to share my perspective with you.从上周五的课结束后,这件事就一直萦绕在我心头,我很想和你分享一下我的看法。
主体段
高级短语
· a double-edged sword一把双刃剑
· correct grammatical and spelling errors efficiently高效纠正语法和拼写错误
· ensure objectivity in grading保证评分的客观性
· fail to capture无法捕捉
· emotional nuances and personal style情感的细微差别与个人风格
· lack the ability to judge缺乏判断…… 的能力
· adopt a combined approach采用结合的方式
· provide targeted, human-centered feedback提供针对性的、以人为本的反馈
高级句子
1.AI is a double-edged sword: it can efficiently correct our grammatical and spelling errors, ensuring objectivity in grading. AI 是一把双刃剑:它能高效纠正我们的语法和拼写错误,保证评分的客观性。
2.While AI is fast and objective, it fails to capture the emotional nuances and personal style that make a speech truly impactful.尽管 AI 高效且客观,但它无法捕捉那些让一篇演讲真正有感染力的情感细节和个人风格。
3.It also lacks the ability to judge the logical flow and persuasive power of our speeches, which are key to public speaking.它也缺乏判断我们演讲稿的逻辑流畅度和说服力的能力,而这些正是演讲的关键。
4.I suggest we adopt a combined approach: use AI for basic checks first, then you give us face-to-face feedback on our delivery.我建议我们采用结合的方式:先用 AI 做基础检查,再由你给我们提供关于演讲表现的面对面反馈。
5.Maybe we can let AI handle simple mistakes, and then you comment on the emotional and persuasive parts to help us improve.或许我们可以让 AI 处理简单的错误,再由你点评演讲的情感与说服力部分,帮助我们进步。
6.This way, we get both the efficiency of AI and the targeted, human-centered feedback that only you can provide.这样一来,我们既能享受到 AI 的高效,也能得到只有你才能提供的、针对性的人性化反馈。
结尾段
高级短语
· thank you for your time and consideration感谢你的时间与考量
· appreciate your hard work感谢你的辛勤付出
· look forward to your reply期待你的回复
· value your guidance珍视你的指导
· best wishes for your class祝你的课程一切顺利
高级句子
1.Thank you for your time and consideration. I truly appreciate your hard work, and I look forward to your reply.感谢你的时间与考量。我非常感谢你的辛勤付出,期待你的回复。
2.These are just my thoughts, and I really value your guidance. Thank you again for your patience.这些只是我的一些想法,我非常珍视你的指导。再次感谢你的耐心。
3.Best wishes for your class, and I hope my ideas can be helpful to you.祝你的课程一切顺利,也希望我的想法能对你有所帮助。
四、范文赏析
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Hua from Class 1. I’m writing to share my thoughts on the AI evaluation of our speeches last Friday.
As far as I’m concerned, AI serves as a helpful tool. It can quickly spot spelling and grammatical mistakes and offer fair evaluations. However, it is unable to understand the emotional expression and personal style contained in our speeches, which are vital to a wonderful speech.I suggest we combine AI with your professional instruction. Let AI check basic errors first, and you can give us targeted advice on our expression and speech delivery.
Thank you for your devotion to our class. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
译文
亲爱的克里斯老师:
我是一班的李华。我写信想和您分享我对上周五人工智能评价我们演讲稿这件事的看法。
在我看来,人工智能是一款很实用的工具。它可以快速找出拼写和语法错误,并给出客观公正的评价。但它无法体会我们演讲稿中蕴含的情感表达与个人风格,而这些恰恰是一篇优秀演讲不可或缺的部分。我建议我们将人工智能与您的专业指导相结合。先用人工智能排查基础错误,再由您针对我们的表达和演讲表现给出针对性建议。
感谢您为班级的辛勤付出,期待您的回复。
范文赏析要点:
一、结构赏析
全文三段式布局,逻辑清晰:开篇点明写信目的,中间辩证阐述利弊并给出合理建议,结尾礼貌收尾。贴合邮件写作格式,行文连贯,层次分明,完全符合高考写作要求。
二、亮点高级短语及例句
1.share my thoughts on
对…… 发表看法
例句:I’m writing to share my thoughts on the AI evaluation of our speeches last Friday.
2.serve as a helpful tool
充当实用的工具
例句:As far as I’m concerned, AI serves as a helpful tool.
3.spot spelling and grammatical mistakes
发现拼写和语法错误
例句:It can quickly spot spelling and grammatical mistakes and offer fair evaluations.
4. be vital to
对…… 至关重要
例句:Emotional expression is vital to a wonderful speech.
5.combine...with...
把…… 与…… 相结合
例句:I suggest we combine AI with your professional instruction.
6.targeted advice
针对性建议
例句:You can give us targeted advice on our expression and speech delivery.
三、句式亮点
1.让步转折句式:However, it is unable to understand the emotional expression and personal style contained in our speeches...
语气委婉自然,适合向老师提观点,句式高级不生硬。
2.定语从句:...which are vital to a wonderful speech.
衔接自然,补充说明演讲内涵,提升文章文采。
3.祈使句连用:Let AI check basic errors first, and you can give us targeted advice...
建议委婉得体,符合和外教沟通的礼貌语气。
读后续写讲义
一、续写材料
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Adam loved football. He loved the smell of the grass as he slid across it. And he loved the excitement when he shot the ball into the net. There was nothing in this world that could weigh the same as football in his heart. He dreamed of growing up to be a professional footballer.
Every day Adam would go to the field and practise with his friends. He still remembered when he asked to join the older boys, they teased (取笑) him, “You’re too small. Football is for big, tough players, not for someone your size.” Then when they saw he could run, kick, and shoot as well as they could, the teasing stopped. Adam played hard and really had a gift. He even became the only one in the group who could do the bicycle kick (倒挂金钩)!
One day after school, Adam went to the playground to practise as usual. The boys were talking quietly, casting excited glances at a man who was watching the field. As Adam joined the group, Captain Harold told him the man, called Mr. Smith, was looking for players for his football camp and there would be a tryout match the next day.
Adam could hardly contain his excitement. The camp meant there would be professional coaches to train him! He would do anything to join it.
After the practice, Mr. Smith approached and Adam crowded close so he could see him. “Who wants to come to my football camp and really learn to play this game?” Mr. Smith asked. Excited hands shot up. Mr. Smith shook them all and shook Adam’s hand last.
“Little man, I saw you run fast,” he said. “But you are far too thin and short for my camp. You’ll get knocked down in a second.”
Adam looked down so no one would see his disappointment. “It’s not fair! Adam’s been practising with us and he’s the only one who ever did the bicycle kick!” Harold argued.
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为 150 左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Inspired, Adam decided to seize the opportunity.
Paragraph 2: The next day Adam came to the tryout.
二、故事情节梳理
人物背景:亚当从小深爱足球,梦想成为职业球员,尽管身材瘦小,却通过刻苦练习练就了过人的球技,甚至是队里唯一会倒挂金钩的人,曾用实力打破了大男孩们的偏见。
事件触发:足球教练史密斯先生来到学校,为他的专业足球营选拔球员,次日将举办选拔赛。亚当本以为这是实现梦想的机会,却被史密斯先生以 “太矮太瘦、不适合对抗” 为由直接否定。
转折铺垫:队长哈罗德为亚当据理力争,点明他的努力与天赋,这让亚当重新燃起斗志,决心抓住这次机会证明自己。
二、续写思路
第一段(开头:Inspired, Adam decided to seize the opportunity.)
核心任务:承接哈罗德的鼓励,写亚当为选拔赛做准备的行动与决心
关键情节点:亚当向哈罗德道谢,坚定了 “用实力打破偏见” 的信念
连夜加练:反复打磨自己的优势项目(带球、射门、倒挂金钩),针对性练习对抗中的护球技巧
体现他的心理变化:从失落转为斗志昂扬,决心在选拔赛上证明自己
第二段(开头:The next day Adam came to the tryout.)
核心任务:写选拔赛的高光时刻与最终结果,完成人物成长弧光
关键情节点:
初登场的不被看好:其他选手身材高大,史密斯先生依旧对他持怀疑态度
赛场高光表现:在对抗赛中,亚当凭借灵活的跑位、精准的传球和一记惊艳的倒挂金钩破门,彻底征服了史密斯先生
结局升华:史密斯先生承认了自己的偏见,邀请亚当加入训练营,点明 “天赋与热爱比体型更重要” 的主题
续写整体主题
通过亚当的经历,传递 “热爱与坚持能打破外界偏见,实力永远比先天条件更有说服力” 的核心思想,同时呼应开头亚当对足球的纯粹热爱,让故事前后呼应、完整闭环。
四、续写高级表达
情感表达类
高级短语
· be consumed by disappointment 满心失望
· brim with renewed determination 重燃坚定的决心
· hold back tears of frustration 强忍着沮丧的泪水
· thump with nervous excitement 因紧张又激动而怦怦直跳
· let out a sigh of relief 松了一口气
· fill one's heart with unshakable faith 心中充满不可动摇的信念
高级句子
1.Grateful for Harold’s kind words, Adam thanked him earnestly, his resolve hardening to let his talent and effort speak louder than any prejudice about his size.感激哈罗德的鼓励,亚当真诚地道谢,他的决心愈发坚定,要用天赋和努力盖过所有对他体型的偏见。
2.That night, he practiced long after everyone had left, drilling his quick dribbles, sharp shots, and the bicycle kick, while repeatedly practicing shielding the ball to hold his ground against bigger players.那天晚上,所有人都离开后,他还在练习:打磨快速带球、精准射门和倒挂金钩,反复练习护球技巧,好让自己在高大的对手面前站稳脚跟。
3.What had once been a heavy heart of disappointment now beat with fierce excitement, every breath filled with the drive to prove his worth at the tryout.原本沉重失望的心,此刻因强烈的兴奋而跳动,每一次呼吸都充满了在选拔赛上证明自己的动力。
4.Though his eyes stung with unshed tears, Adam refused to let his disappointment show. 尽管眼眶里噙着泪水,亚当还是不愿流露半分失望。
5.Inspired by Harold's words, a fierce determination welled up inside him, pushing aside all self-doubt. 哈罗德的话给了他鼓舞,一股强烈的决心在他心中涌起,驱散了所有自我怀疑。
6.His heart raced with a mix of nervousness and excitement as he stepped onto the pitch for the tryout. 踏上选拔赛球场时,他的心因紧张与激动交织而怦怦直跳。
动作描写类
高级短语
· dash past defenders 带球突破防守队员
· curl the ball into the top corner 将球弧线踢入球门上角
· execute a perfect bicycle kick 完成一记完美的倒挂金钩
· shield the ball from opponents 护球摆脱对手
· sprint down the wing 沿边路高速冲刺
· pivot sharply to change direction 急停转身变向
· power through tackles 扛住铲抢继续推进
· leap into the air to meet the cross 跃起争顶传中球
高级句子
1.With lightning speed, Adam weaved through three defenders, his feet moving so fast that they were a blur. 亚当如闪电般晃过三名防守队员,脚下动作快得只剩残影。
2.He launched himself into the air, twisting his body to execute a flawless bicycle kick that sent the ball flying into the net. 他纵身跃起,扭转身体,一记完美的倒挂金钩将球送入网窝。
3.Adam planted his feet firmly, shielded the ball with his body, and powered past the much larger opponent. 亚当稳稳站住,用身体护住球,硬是从比他高大得多的对手身边突破过去。
4.As the cross came in, he sprinted forward, leaped high, and headed the ball past the stunned goalkeeper. 传中球飞来时,他快速前插,高高跃起,一记头球攻破了守门员的防线,令其错愕不已。
5.He dribbled down the wing, his eyes locked on the goal, before curling the ball into the far corner with pinpoint accuracy. 他沿边路带球推进,目光紧锁球门,随后一脚精准的弧线球将球送入远角。
6.Even when knocked off balance, Adam quickly regained his footing and kept control of the ball, never letting it slip away. 即使被撞得失去平衡,亚当也迅速稳住脚步,始终牢牢控制着球,不让它脱手。
场景描写类
高级短语
· the sun-drenched football pitch 洒满阳光的足球场
· the buzz of the tryout crowd 选拔赛现场人群的嘈杂声
· fall silent in awe 因惊叹而安静下来
· the crisp sound of boots on grass 球鞋踩在草地上清脆的声响
· the sea of towering opponents 一群身材高大的对手
· the coach's sharp, assessing gaze 教练锐利审视的目光
高级句子
1.The football pitch glowed golden under the morning sun, with boys in jerseys warming up and the crowd chattering excitedly. 足球场在晨光下泛着金光,穿球衣的男孩们在热身,人群兴奋地交谈着。
2.When Adam lined up for the match, the other players towered over him, and the air hummed with the tension of the tryout. 亚当排好队准备比赛时,其他球员都比他高出一大截,空气中弥漫着选拔赛的紧张气息。
3.As the ball hit the net, the field fell silent for a heartbeat before erupting into cheers of surprise and admiration. 球入网的瞬间,球场先是静了一瞬,随即爆发出惊喜又赞叹的欢呼声。
主旨升华类
高级短语
· prove one's worth 证明自己的价值
· break through prejudice 打破偏见
· talent and passion over size 天赋与热爱胜于体型
· hard work pays off 努力终有回报
· the true spirit of football 足球的真正精神
· let one's skills speak for themselves 用实力说话
高级句子
1.In that moment, Adam proved that true talent and passion could outshine any disadvantage of size. 在那一刻,亚当证明了真正的天赋与热爱,足以盖过任何体型上的劣势。
2.Mr. Smith realized that heart and skill mattered far more than height and build when it came to football. 史密斯先生终于明白,对于足球而言,热情与球技远比身高体型重要得多。
3.Adam's journey showed that with unwavering determination, even the smallest player could make the biggest impact. 亚当的经历证明,只要有坚定不移的决心,哪怕是最瘦小的球员,也能创造最耀眼的成绩。
五、范文赏析
Inspired, Adam decided to seize the opportunity. He thanked Harold sincerely for standing up for him. Deeply determined, he made up his mind to break others’ prejudice with his real strength. That night, he stayed alone on the football field to practice overtime. He kept polishing his dribbling and shooting skills, and repeatedly practiced the bicycle kick. Besides, he specially trained himself to shield the ball and compete against taller players. Disappointment faded away, replaced by full fighting spirit. He was fully prepared to prove himself in the coming tryout.
The next day Adam came to the tryout. Surrounded by many tall and strong boys, he looked tiny among them. Mr. Smith still wore a doubtful look. However, Adam stayed calm and focused. He dashed past defenders flexibly, controlled the ball steadily and delivered precise passes. Eventually, he accomplished a stunning bicycle kick and scored a brilliant goal. All the people present were struck with admiration. Mr. Smith spoke highly of his superb skills and firm will. He realized that ability and passion mattered more than physical size and warmly invited Adam to join his football camp.
译文
受此鼓舞,亚当决定把握住这次机会。他真诚感谢哈罗德为自己挺身而出。他内心信念坚定,下定决心用自身实力打破别人的偏见。那天晚上,他独自留在足球场加练。他反复打磨带球、射门技巧,不断练习倒挂金钩。除此之外,他专门练习护球,以便和高大球员抗衡。失落渐渐散去,满心都是昂扬的斗志。他做好万全准备,要在即将到来的选拔赛上证明自己。
第二天,亚当来到选拔赛现场。周围都是高大健壮的男孩,他显得格外瘦小。史密斯先生依旧面露怀疑。但亚当沉着冷静、专心应战。他灵活甩开防守球员,稳稳控球,送出精准传球。最后,他完成一记惊艳的倒挂金钩,漂亮破门。在场所有人都由衷赞叹。史密斯先生高度认可他精湛的球技和坚定的意志,明白能力与热爱远比身形高矮更重要,并热情邀请亚当加入足球训练营。
范文赏析要点:
一、整体结构
两段严格贴合续写开头,情节完整连贯。第一段写内心立志、连夜特训、心态蜕变;第二段写选拔赛场面、赛场高光、教练改观与圆满结局,紧扣原文人设,主题突出,词数标准。
二、好词短语 + 例句赏析
1.stand up for him
为他挺身而出
例句:He thanked Harold sincerely for standing up for him.
赏析:地道高级表达,精准写出朋友仗义相助的情节,替换普通表达,文采更佳。
2.polish one’s skills
打磨技艺
例句:He kept polishing his dribbling and shooting skills.
赏析:高级书面搭配,比简单 practise 更有层次感,贴合刻苦训练的语境。
3.fade away
渐渐消散
例句:Disappointment faded away, replaced by full fighting spirit.
赏析:生动刻画情绪转变,用词细腻,画面感强。
4.speak highly of
高度称赞
例句:Mr. Smith spoke highly of his superb skills and firm will.
赏析:正式得体,适合人物评价场景,符合书面续写表达要求。
三、高分句式 + 例句赏析
1.分词独立结构
例句:Disappointment faded away, replaced by full fighting spirit.
赏析:用过去分词作伴随状语,句式精简高级,避免简单句堆砌,是高考续写加分句式。
2.分词作状语
例句:Surrounded by many tall and strong boys, he looked tiny among them.
赏析:开篇用分词结构交代环境与处境,句式凝练,对比感强烈,铺垫后文逆袭情节。
3.宾语从句主旨句
例句:He realized that ability and passion mattered more than physical size.
赏析:结尾用宾语从句升华主旨,点明 “实力与热爱胜过外形” 的核心立意,立意深刻,收尾点题。
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