高考应用文总复习模板十四:安慰信 讲义 -2026届高三英语三轮复习专项
高考应用文总复习模板十四:安慰信
假设你是李华,你得知你校的交换生Jack在爬山时扭伤(twist)了腰部,想建议他采用一些方法进行治疗。请根据以下要点给他写一封信表示慰问,内容包括:
1.给予安慰; 2.建议中医治疗; 3.表示祝愿。
请注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
一、解题思路分析:
审题定调:
- 时态:以一般现在时为主
- 人称:以第二人称为主
谋篇布局
※★第一段:情况(对方遭遇的不幸)+目的(表达关心)
※★第二段:给予安慰 + 提供的帮助或建议
※★第三段:表达愿望和祝福
二、范文赏析
Dear Jack,
Shocked to learn that you twisted your waist(扭伤腰部) while climbing the mountain last Saturday, I’m writing to show my concern.
As far as I am concerned, under proper treatment, you can soon recover from such an injury. Therefore, it is unnecessary to worry about it. To help you get well, I strongly advise you to adopt traditional Chinese medical treatment(中医). Only by massage(按摩) and acupuncture(针灸) can the doctor relieve your pain and help you recover in about two weeks. If you need help, don’t hesitate to let me know.
I hope you will recover soon.
★三、具体分析文章亮点(一定要背下来):
1. 第一段:
①Shocked to learn that you are under great pressure now, I am writing to show my concern.
②My sorrow is beyond words for hearing that your left leg got injured in a car accident. I am writing to express my great comfort to you.
2.第二段:
给予安慰:
①It is common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further.
②However, as the saying goes, misfortune may prove a blessing in disguise.(塞翁失马焉知非福。)
提供建议:③It can’t be better if you can share your experiences with others, thus making them familiar with you in a short period of time.
3. 第三段:
①Hope you can go through the difficulty(渡过难关) and recover as soon as possible.
②Hope you can have your troubles removed soon.(希望你早日摆脱烦恼。)
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