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高考英语读后续写
好心司机
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王 均艳 (王) -
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I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
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Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."
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原文简介
“我”赶着去坐大巴参加一个会议,花了很长时间打车去大巴地点,终于抵达后发现钱包里没现金,无法支付给出租车司机。作者去提款机那里取钱,但是机器出故障了。
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时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过、结果
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思路分析
Para 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Para 2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised.
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我成功登上飞机了
我要了司机的电话号
我承诺给他打电话
坏消息是什么?取款机没法取款
我的情绪:着急、担心、抱歉
我提出的解决办法:留下他的电话号,开会回来后再付钱
司机的反应:
同意我的解决方法
后续我去干什么了?
成功登上了公交车,成功登上了飞机
我的情绪?
激动、感激
我在电话里说了什么?
感谢+约定见面时间
见面的场景
主旨升华/我的感悟:善良/善意
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模板句的使用 (注意:模板句没有固定的使用段落)
(兑换不了现金的时候)焦虑和紧张在我的心里翻涌。
Anxiety and nervousness welled up in my heart.
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(我很抱歉地跟司机说了现金兑换失败的时候)我深深地吸了一口气,缓缓抬起头,眼神复杂地盯着他。
I took a deep breath, slowly raised my head and stared at him, with a complicated look in my eyes.
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模板句的使用 (注意:模板句没有固定的使用段落)
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Gunter看到我紧张得额头上全是汗,他愣了一下,告诉我先让我去开会。
Seeing the sweat beading on my forehead from nervousness, Gunter froze for a moment and told me to head to the meeting first.
(看到我的艰难处境之后)Gunter沉默了一会后,他终于开口了。他语气非常平和地说,“车费不重要,你的会议更加重要”。
After a silence, Gunter finally responded/ replied. “It is the meeting rather than the taxi fare that matters.” he said gently.
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模板句的使用 (注意:模板句没有固定的使用段落)
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(他接通电话的那一瞬间)我喉咙发紧,一时语塞。
My throat tightened, and I didn't know what to say.
My throat tightened, and words failed me at that moment.
(见面的时候)他笑了笑,握住了我的手,恭喜我成功地参加了会议。
He smiled, took my hand, and congratulated me on successfully attending the meeting.
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模板句的使用 (注意:模板句没有固定的使用段落)
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(主旨升华)在那一刻,我明白了,这段难忘的经历将会永存记忆,这给我自己上了一堂关于善良的终生难忘的珍贵一课。
At that moment, I knew that this unforgettable experience would stay in my memory forever, teaching me a precious lesson about kindness that I would never forget.
(主旨升华:期中优秀范文)那一天将永远铭刻在我的记忆里,它时刻提醒着我:善意能将绝望化作希望。
It was a day that would forever be etched in my memory, serving as a reminder that kindness can turn despair into hope.
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根据模板句写出的作文
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I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Seeing the broken cash machine, I froze for a moment, my heart trembling slightly. I took a deep breath and stared at Gunter with a complicated look. Confusion and anxiety welled up in my heart, for I feared I would miss the conference. Unconsciously, I touched my wallet, and my fingers trembled even more. Suddenly, Gunter’s voice came, making me jump in surprise. I turned around and saw him wearing a kind smile. My throat tightened, and I did not know what to say. After a long silence, Gunter spoke softly, "Go to the conference first. I believe you will call me when you come back." A wave of relief swept over me. I wiped away my sweat and stepped forward. He gave me a note with his phone number, and all my anxiety faded away. I smiled warmly, held the paper tight and rushed to the bus, boarding it just in time.
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根据模板句写出的作文
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Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Gratitude filled my heart as I thought of his help and wondered how to repay him. Soon Gunter showed up, looking friendly as usual. I felt a little awkward and could not find the right words. After a long silence, I said gently, "I’m here to pay you back and thank you." Warmth spread across his face. We shook hands, and all awkwardness disappeared. I suddenly realized that a small act of kindness can make a huge difference. I smiled brightly and invited him to dinner. This experience left me a precious lesson about kindness that I will never forget.
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Thank you!
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