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专题 09 写作 (期末复习专项训练)
类型一: 应用文
Passage 1
Dear Harry,
I’m so excited for your upcoming trip to dive into Chinese culture! A must-see is “The Drunken Concubine,” a very well-known Peking Opera. This engaging story highlights Yang Guifei, celebrated as one of China’s greatest beauties historically. Alone, she finds herself patiently waiting in her lovely garden for the emperor, who disappointingly never arrives. To manage her feelings of sadness, she turns to drinking.
The opera stands out for its incredible singing, powerful acting, and beautiful costumes and makeup. It beautifully captures a slice of China’s rich history and arts. This opera serves as a perfect example of traditional Chinese performance art, combining history, culture, and art in a way that I believe you’ll truly appreciate and thoroughly enjoy.
Can’t wait to see you here!
Best,
Li Jin
Passage 2
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, our planet is facing severe environmental problems. Extreme weather like storms and droughts is becoming more frequent, glaciers are melting, and many species are in danger of extinction. These issues are largely caused by human activities that harm the environment.
As students, we can take action in our daily lives. For example, we can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth, reduce waste by using reusable bags instead of plastic ones, and choose to walk or ride bikes to school to cut down on carbon emissions. Even small acts like planting a tree or picking up litter can make a difference.
Protecting the environment is not just a slogan but a responsibility we all share. Let’s start from ourselves and encourage those around us to join in. Only through our joint efforts can we reduce natural disasters and build a better future for our planet.
Li Jin
Passage 3
Dear Mike,
Hope this email finds you well! Last Thursday morning, our school organized all Senior One students to visit the City Artificial Intelligence Lab. We gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. and arrived at the lab after a 20-minute bus ride. The sunny day added to our excitement for the tech tour.
In the lab, we first heard a lecture by Professor Chen, who showed AI robots in heart surgeries. He explained how they make precise moves—smaller than a hair! Next, we watched a self-driving car simulation avoid virtual obstacles. The best part was trying AI painting: I typed “a panda in space,” and the app made a funny image with a spacesuit-wearing panda. Everyone laughed at the cute result.
The visit completely shifted my understanding of AI. What struck me most was how AI can turn imagination into reality. It inspired me to learn programming during summer break. Do you think AI will change the way we study in the future? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 4
Dear friends,
I’m Li Jin. Today, I’d like to talk about the recent extreme windy weather in our city and how we can stay safe during natural disasters.
The strong winds caused serious problems. Traffic was delayed for hours due to fallen trees blocking roads. Many neighborhoods faced power cuts and water shortages, and even our school had to close for safety reasons. Moreover, some buildings had broken windows, and street signs were blown away.
To stay safe during such weather, remember these tips. First, close all windows and doors tightly to prevent debris from entering. Second, stay indoors and avoid going outside unless absolutely necessary. If you’re outdoors, stay away from tall trees or unstable structures. Also, keep flashlights and emergency supplies ready in case of power outages.
This experience reminds us that climate change is real and dangerous. We must take action by reducing pollution and learning disaster survival skills. Let’s work together to protect our community and build a safer future.
类型二: 读后续写
Passage 1
When Jack gave Tom a new uniform and an envelope the next day, Tom’s eyes widened. “We didn’t just get the uniform,” Jack said, explaining there was extra money for his mom’s medicine. Tom felt that his throat tightened. He knew that, in the envelope, there was not just money, but the love of his teammates. “Why are you doing this?” he asked, his voice shaking. “Because we’re a team,” Jack said with a smile. “And teammates take care of each other.” For the first time in months, Tom felt a warm, strong hope — not just for the game, but for the family he had found on the field.
The day of the match came, and Tom walked onto the field confidently. Wearing the new uniform, he felt the support from his teammates. The game was intense but full of warmth. Tom and his teammates fought together, and their perfect cooperation and hard work made the ball fly freely on the field. Though the opponents were strong, they never gave up. Finally, with a beautiful teamwork goal, they won the game. After the match, Tom stood with his teammates, looking at the cheering crowd. He realized he was not alone. With the care and help of his teammates, he could overcome any difficulty.
Passage 2
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying. Panic at first, I then realized that it was just a car passing by. But she felt uneasy, her mouth wide opening, arms waving, and legs kicking. I thought she might be scared too, so I held out my hand to hold hers, patting her on the back with the other. I even moved a bit closer to her little bed, whispering my favorite song to her ears, just as my mum did when I got scared. Surprisingly, she seemed to understand me and stopped crying. Looking into her big eyes, I breathed a sigh of relief.
After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me. The sense of loneliness was replaced by the responsibility of being an elder brother. Even though her arrival took over the center of the whole family initially, she started to become the center of my attention too. With her cute round face and sparkling eyes, she also won my love and care for her. I looked around and found my parents, awake, smiling at me. With a shadow of a happy family cast on the window, I felt my little sister was the best gift I'd ever got.
Passage 1
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
The exhibition displayed various forms of traditional art, including landscape paintings, calligraphy, and clay sculptures, which helped me gain a deep insight into the abundant Chinese culture. I was particularly amazed by a delicate porcelain vase from the Ming Dynasty, whose patterns were impressive! Not only did this visit enrich my life and broaden my horizons, but also it helped me better appreciate China’s artistic heritage.
Since you have a great passion for the profound Chinese culture, I highly recommend you to visit it.
Yours,
Li Jin
Passage 2
How Music Has Changed My Life
Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students! My name is Li Hua. I feel incredibly honored to stand here today, ready to share with you my story, which was completely transformed by music. Once too shy to speak in public, I decided to join the school choir, hoping to overcome my fear. There, singing together with classmates, I finally felt a strong sense of belonging that I had never experienced before.
Music, becoming my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently. Gradually, encouraged by my newfound confidence, I started taking part in more activities and making new friends. Thanks to music, I’ve grown from a timid person into someone full of energy and passion, making my life brighter than ever.
So, let’s all embrace music, for it has the power to change our lives, just as it changed mine!
Thank you!
Passage 3
Dear fellow students,
As we all know, our school is launching a campaign to build a green campus. This is not only beneficial to our health but also contributes to environmental protection.
Therefore, I would like to propose some specific initiatives. Firstly, let’s save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights when not in use. Secondly, we should reduce waste by recycling and reusing materials whenever possible. Lastly, let’s plant more trees and flowers to beautify our campus.
I sincerely hope that everyone can actively participate in this campaign. Together, we can create a greener, more beautiful campus for ourselves and future generations.
Passage 4
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. Our school will invite an expert to deliver a speech about ways of escaping from a disaster. I’d like to invite you to take part.
The speech will take place in the school hall at 8:00 next Monday morning. It mainly involves how to avoid harm when disasters like a landslide, a typhoon or a blizzard happen. Besides, ways of rescuing oneself or others in an emergency will also be provided. This will help improve our capabilities of escaping from a disaster.
I wonder if you can come and join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
My Favorite Scientist
My favorite scientist is Marie Curie, a brilliant physicist and chemist. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win it in two different fields. Her discovery of radium revolutionized science and made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry. .
Her perseverance inspires me deeply. Despite facing numerous difficulties, she never gave up on her research. Her story teaches me that hard work and dedication can lead to great achievements and overcome any obstacle. I hope to follow her example in my studies.
Passage 6
I am sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope you will soon cheer up. The following are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
First, try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the college entrance examinations is a long-term and complicated process and confidence plays an important role in it. So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens. Second, you should find out your own strengths and weaknesses in your study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates in face of difficulties and stress. Last but not the least, you are supposed to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourselves. Always remember “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.
Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Passage 7
Having carefully chosen language, I went forward. With a firm but polite look, I found Stan and expressed my thoughts calmly. I told him that I was willing to take responsibility for cooking, but it was unfair to keep pushing extra work onto me. My voice trembled slightly with anxiety and annoyance, for I feared our group would fall into chaos if duties were not divided properly. I also mentioned that every member should do their own job instead of leaving everything to one person, hoping he could arrange tasks reasonably.
After hearing all those words, Stan said he understood my point and admitted his mistakes. He scratched his head in embarrassment and apologized sincerely for his thoughtlessness. He immediately rearranged the tasks, making sure everyone had clear duties. Relieved and grateful, I smiled and shook hands with him. Finally, we worked together efficiently and our Spanish food stand turned out to be a great success at the fair, filling our hearts with pride and joy.
Passage 8
Paragraph 1:
The man was surprised. He was touched by Ashwin’s conscience and said he wanted to meet his family. Ashwin took the man home and introduced him to his family. The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s house and his children and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. Ashwin refused, but the man was insistent and said, “I would like to take the responsibility for educating your children.” Ashwin could not refuse the assistance since he wanted the children to become someone important. He agreed to send them to the city.
Paragraph 2:
Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well. Each vacation they went home to visit their parents. Ashwin often reminded them, “Never do anything at the cost of someone else.” The children remembered the advice and followed it. Years later, they became successful. When the poor man’s children had children of their own, they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins.
Passage 9
After lunch, I was on my own when, out of nowhere, there’s Mr. Jackson. As I walked toward the barn, I thought about how he might still be upset with me for the goat incident, which happened because I accidentally unlatched the gate, letting the goats wander into his garden and devour everything in sight. Despite this, I couldn’t help but feel a bit relieved that he was the first person I saw. I hoped that he had forgiven me for the chaos that I had unintentionally caused.
Instead, Mr. Jackson yelled, “Great to see you here, Alex! I need your help with a lamb’s birth.” Surprised by his enthusiasm, I wondered if he had forgotten about the damage that I had caused or if he genuinely needed assistance. As I approached him, I noticed the urgency in his eyes, which suggested that he really did require my help. Since I had always been good with technology and coding, assisting with something as organic as helping a lamb be born felt like a completely new challenge, one that I was unexpectedly eager to take on, despite my initial reluctance to be at the farm.The experience of helping bring a new life into the world was both challenging and rewarding, and it helped ease some of the tension between Mr. Jackson and me.
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专题 09 写作 (期末复习专项训练)
类型一: 应用文
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·天津西青·期末)你的英国笔友 Harry在社交平台看到中国京剧表演视频,对其华丽的戏服和独特的唱腔产生浓厚兴趣,想趁暑假来华时观看,但不知如何选择剧目,特来询问你的建议。
戏剧名
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主要情节
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推荐理由
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要求:
1. 短文内容不少于 100词;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数;
3. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
Dear Harry,
I’m so excited for your upcoming trip to dive into Chinese culture!
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Can’t wait to see you here!
Best,
Li Jin
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·天津南开·期末)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津,近期你校正在举办“Green Actions, Better Future”主题英语征文活动。请以“自然灾害与环境保护”为主题,写一篇倡议书,旨在号召全校同学从我做起,贡献自己的一份力量。内容需包含:
1.目前面临的主要环境问题(参见参考内容中图片);
2.日常生活中可行的环保行动;
3.呼吁大家共同参与环保。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名;
参考内容:
Dear fellow students,
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Li Jin
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·天津·期末)假定你是晨光中的学生李津,你们学校上周组织参观了市人工智能实验室(City Artificial Intelligence Lab)。此次参观活动让你收获颇丰,所以你想写一封邮件给你的英国的笔友Mike,分享自己这次经历,内容包括:
1.参观时间与地点;
2.活动内容:
①听专家讲座;
②现场观摩实验操作;
③体验科技产品,如机器人、AI绘画(AI painting)
3.此次经历对你的启发。
注意:
(1).词数不少于100;
(2)适加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Lijin
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·天津·期末)假设你是晨光中学的李津。近期你所在的城市经历了一次极端大风天气,给市民的生活带来了诸多影响。学校英语社团计划举办一次主题为“Natural Disasters and Safety”的分享会。请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)描述极端大风天气的影响(如交通延误、树木倾倒、停水停电停学等);
(2)分享应对极端天气的经验或建议(如关门闭窗、留在室内等);
(3)呼吁大家关注气候变化,增强安全意识。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:延误 delay 倾倒 fall down 停电 power cut
Dear friends,
I’m Li Jin. Today, I’d like to talk about the recent extreme windy weather in our city and how we can stay safe during natural disasters.
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Thank you for your attention!
类型二: 读后续写
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·海南·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom was a regular figure on the school football field, and his skills were so impressive despite the worn-out sports shoes he wore. Off the field, his life was hard for various reasons. His mother had been ill in bed for several years, and his father recently lost his job, leaving the family even poorer. However, Tom never let his difficult situations reduce his love for football.
One day, the coach announced to the players that there would be a football match, and all players were required to wear proper sports uniforms (制服). Tom was worried. He stared at his worn shoes, wondering how he could possibly ask his parents for money they didn’t have. That night, he lay awake, practicing making excuses in his head—maybe he’d pretend to be sick. But deep inside, he knew he couldn’t do that. However, the thought of missing the game and letting his team down troubled him.
During a break the next day. Tom just sat alone, staring at the ground, while the others talked excitedly with each other. Jack, the team captain, finally cornered him after practice. “What’s up. Tom? There seems to be something wrong with you.” At first, Tom hesitated, but Jack’s genuine (真诚的) concern broke through his pride. “It’s the uniform,” he said in a low voice. “I can’t afford it.” And more than that, he explained to Jack the difficult situation his family was in. Hearing that, Jack just patted (轻拍) him on the shoulder without saying a word.
That day, the team gathered without Tom after practice. “We can’t let this happen,” Jack said. “Tom’s the best player we’ve got; we must do something to help him and his family.” They tried their best to come up with ideas to collect money and decided on a car wash.
On Saturday morning, the school parking lot was totally changed. Signs reading “Football for Tom — Wash a Car. Change a Life” were everywhere, and the team worked tirelessly on the cars and shared Tom’s story with anyone who’d listen. By evening, the team had raised more than enough for the uniform.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Jack gave Tom a new uniform and an envelope the next day, Tom’s eyes widened.
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The day of the match came, and Tom walked onto the field confidently.
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Passage 2
(24-25高一下·四川宜宾·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I still remember the day when we decorated the house, I was ten and it was two weeks before Christmas. I was looking forward to my presents. Since I’m the youngest in the family, all of the family members would give me a gift one way or another. Sometimes it was a cookie or a hug but it was always there. I was the only center of attention and it was feeling good.
My uncles usually would ask me what I wanted before Christmas and that year I knew what I wanted. It was the spaceship I saw in the ads. I was dreaming of opening a big gift box, and it was there. But that year it came in a way that I wasn’t expecting.
It was two weeks before Christmas. Just two weeks. She couldn’t wait. My dear mother told my father that it was time, and then we went to the hospital. After an hour, they told me that I had a sister now. But I didn’t want a sister. I wanted a spaceship. The next few days went so fast. No one was caring about me. Everyone was talking about her and I knew that my life is never going to be the same ever again. I wasn’t ready to grow up, to be a big brother. But it just happened in an instant.
On the day before Christmas, everyone was in our home, talking only about my newborn sister. My family was becoming hers. Even my uncles didn’t ask me anything about the gift. She stole everything I’d ever had, my life and my presents. Thinking about this, I cried to sleep. I had a nightmare (噩梦) and woke up at the middle of the night. Shadows were all around me, and I was defenseless and so weak. I ran into my parents’ bedroom but couldn’t wake up my poor parents who were just too worn out. I was standing near their bed, trying not to cry when I saw her. She was awake and looking at me with her big eyes in her small bed.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·天津·期末)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你的英国笔友Henry目前作为交换生在天津大学学习。你最近参观了一场“中国艺术展”(Exhibition of Chinese Art),收获颇丰。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍参观的时间、地点及同行人员;
2. 描述展览中的艺术形式(如绘画、书法、雕塑等)并分享参展收获;
3. 推荐Henry去观展。
参考词汇:书法calligraphy;雕塑sculpture
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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Passage 2
(24-25高一下·内蒙古赤峰·期末)假定你是李华,学校将举办以“How Music Has Changed My Life”为题的英语演讲比赛。请结合自己的经历撰写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1.你的经历;
2.音乐对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How Music Has Changed My Life
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Passage 3
(24-25高一下·内蒙古呼和浩特·期末)假设你是李华,你所在的学校正在开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你代表学生会,用英语写一封倡议信,呼吁同学们积极参与到绿色校园建设中来。内容包括以下几点:
1. 说明倡议背景;
2. 提出具体倡议;
3. 呼吁同学们积极参与,并表达对绿色校园建设的期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 4
(24-25高一下·黑龙江绥化·期末)假设你是李华,为了培养学生的灾害应急处理能力,你校将邀请专家就灾害逃生进行演讲。请你写一封邮件,邀请你的英国交换生朋友Jim参加,内容包括:
①演讲时间与地点;②演讲内容;③询问意向。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
(24-25高一下·黑龙江鸡西·期末)假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办主题为“My Favorite Scientist”的征文活动,请写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 人物介绍;
2. 你受到的启发。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Scientist
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Passage 6
(24-25高一下·黑龙江牡丹江·期末)假如你是李华,你收到了你的同学的来信,听说她因学习压力太大,非常烦恼。请你给她写封回信,建议她如何减压。内容包括:
1. 给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Linda:
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Yous,
Li Hua
Passage 7
(24-25高一下·四川宜宾·期末)阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It all started with the Food Fair, where groups of students prepared food representing different countries, in my school. I was excited to be in Group Spain. The group leader, Stan, designed a sign-up sheet for different tasks. There was a cooking task. I could do far better in cooking. So, I chose to cook Spanish dishes on the very day of the fair.
Yet, the first few weeks slipped away quickly, and no one seemed to be starting their jobs — probably because they were tired by their studies, or they were simply not in the mood. I was worried that we might present a bad Spain because of our slow progress. After telling other members in Group Spain about my worries and encouraging them to make preparations, we finally started the preparation work.
When we made preparations for the fair, I received a message from Stan. “How many cups of drink do you plan to prepare?” he asked. Maybe forty? I wasn’t sure. I asked the group members in charge of the planning about the number of people who would be at the fair, but they said they didn’t know. Out of other solutions, I answered Stan with my count and explained that I might need to confirm (确定) with the organizer of the fair to know the exact number.
Then one day later, another demand came, “By the way, can you tell me the price for the food?” Sending him the rough price of the food, I frowned. This was supposed to be the task of others. Why did I have to do it? Again, for the progress of our group, I did not think much.
Then came the third, “I mean I need specific numbers, the Unit price for each, and the total cost. Make a table and list all the things, will you?” Before I could do the market research for him, the fourth appeared. I tried to hold my manner as I felt rather dissatisfied when I realized that he was assigning (分派) others’ jobs to me. “That’s it. Enough is enough,” I said to myself.注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Having carefully chosen language, I went forward.
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After hearing all those words, Stan said he understood my point and admitted his mistakes.
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Passage 8
(24-25高一下·四川泸州·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long, long ago, in a little village lived a humble(谦虚的) man named Ashwin. He went about making ends meet by pulling a rickshaw(人力 车) and transporting passengers from one destination to another. Times were hard and he had to take the responsibility for supporting his family.
One day, while returning from work, a man who looked like a wealthy person coming from the city stopped his rickshaw. He quickly told Ashwin the place he wanted to visit. His car had broken down and he desperately needed to get to the mentioned address urgently. After an uneventful ride, they reached the destination, and the passenger paid the fare.
Ashwin, on returning home, found to his surprise that his passenger just then had dropped a small bag in his rickshaw. On opening it, he found 50 gold coins in it. He showed it to his family who couldn’t believe their luck. His wife said with joy, “Thank goodness. Now we find a solution to our problems.”
That night, Ashwin couldn’t sleep. His conscience(良心) kept troubling him. At the crack of dawn, he woke his wife up. He said, “Lalita, I think it’s wrong to keep someone else’s gold coins. I am going to search for the man and hand over the coins to him.” Lalita was shocked and cried, but Ashwin stuck to his word. He tried hard to find the man, but nothing seemed to work.
Eventually when he was about to give up, he saw that wealthy passenger. Ashwin ran to him and thrust(塞) the bag in his hand, “Sir, you left this bag in my rickshaw. I have been looking for you since then and I am so relieved to find you. Please take this,” he said.
注意:1.续写词数应为150字左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1;
The man was surprised.
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Paragraph 2:
Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well.
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Passage 9
(24-25高一下·四川广安·期末)
I inhaled deeply, expelling the breath against the rear window of the vehicle, and with a finger, I etched the word ‘DREADFUL’ into the misty surface of the glass, creating a temporary inscription that mirrored my inner turmoil.
My father, casting a brief glance in my direction through the reflective surface of the rearview mirror, offered a comforting remark, “Alex, this journey presents itself as an auspicious occasion for you to reconnect with your maternal and paternal elders.”
The vehicle made a deliberate turn onto a well-trodden dirt path, one that I recognized all too well. We were progressively distancing ourselves from the urban confines, moving further away from the digital tendrils of the Internet, and even more so from the stimulating environment of the computer camp.
“Brighten up, Alex!” exclaimed my mother, her voice carrying a note of optimism. “There is every likelihood that another opportunity to immerse yourself in the world of coding will arise shortly, perhaps even within this very summer season.”
As the car continued its journey, I was acutely aware that all my companions in the realm of programming would be engaged in the act of coding at the computer camp this week, while I, on the other hand, was to be ensconced in the rural setting of a farm. I uttered not a single syllable, and in due course, the vehicle came to a halt in the driveway of my grandparents’ abode. A slender row of trees materialized into view, their presence a stark contrast to the urban landscape I was leaving behind.
I had once taken pleasure in visiting the farm during the spring intermissions before my immersion into coding camps... and before the realization of the extent to which my actions could lead to chaos and disorder.
The engine of the car had not yet ceased its hum when my grandmother, with an agility that belied her years, sprang towards us. From my vantage point in the backseat, I observed as my father and mother embraced my grandmother. I, in turn, reluctantly extracted myself from the vehicle, feeling as though the very force of gravity had grown unusually intense.
“You both are certainly deserving of a respite,” my grandmother was saying, her words directed towards my parents. “Alex will be in good stead — he has always held a fondness for the farm.” She spoke in the past tense, implying that Alex had once cherished the farm.
During the midday meal, my grandmother inquired, “Why such a somber countenance, Alex?” I maintained my silence. Why indeed? It seemed as though they were acting in ignorance of the events that had transpired during my previous visit. For a fleeting moment, my gaze met with my grandmother’s. Could I muster the courage to question her regarding the goats’ destruction of all the flora belonging to our neighbor, Mr. Jackson, an incident that occurred because I had inadvertently lifted the latch and allowed the goats to roam free? Was Mr. Jackson still seething with anger towards me for the considerable damage I had inadvertently caused him?
“I am quite alright,” I muttered, my voice barely audible. “It is merely the absence of the coding camp this week that I am lamenting. Coding is an activity at which I excel.”
My mother offered a nod of understanding. “Ah, that does sound disheartening, but the farm will undoubtedly offer you a different kind of experience.”
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
After lunch, I was on my own when, out of nowhere, there’s Mr. Jackson.
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Instead, Mr. Jackson yelled, “Great to see you here, Alex! I need your help with a lamb’s birth.”
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专题 09 写作 (期末复习专项训练)
类型一: 应用文
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·天津西青·期末)你的英国笔友 Harry在社交平台看到中国京剧表演视频,对其华丽的戏服和独特的唱腔产生浓厚兴趣,想趁暑假来华时观看,但不知如何选择剧目,特来询问你的建议。
戏剧名
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主要情节
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推荐理由
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要求:
1. 短文内容不少于 100词;
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数;
3. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
Dear Harry,
I’m so excited for your upcoming trip to dive into Chinese culture!
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Can’t wait to see you here!
Best,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Harry,
I’m so excited for your upcoming trip to dive into Chinese culture! A must-see is “The Drunken Concubine,” a very well-known Peking Opera. This engaging story highlights Yang Guifei, celebrated as one of China’s greatest beauties historically. Alone, she finds herself patiently waiting in her lovely garden for the emperor, who disappointingly never arrives. To manage her feelings of sadness, she turns to drinking.
The opera stands out for its incredible singing, powerful acting, and beautiful costumes and makeup. It beautifully captures a slice of China’s rich history and arts. This opera serves as a perfect example of traditional Chinese performance art, combining history, culture, and art in a way that I believe you’ll truly appreciate and thoroughly enjoy.
Can’t wait to see you here!
Best,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Harry推荐适合其暑假来华观看的京剧剧目,包括戏剧名、主要情节和推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:well-known → famous
迷人的:engaging → fascinating
难以置信的:incredible → amazing
强大的:powerful → strong
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A must-see is “The Drunken Concubine,” a very well-known Peking Opera.
拓展句:A must-see is “The Drunken Concubine,” which is a very well-known Peking Opera.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Alone, she finds herself patiently waiting in her lovely garden for the emperor, who disappointingly never arrives.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句、现在分词waiting作宾补)
【高分句型2】To manage her feelings of sadness, she turns to drinking.(运用了不定式To manage作目的状语)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·天津南开·期末)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津,近期你校正在举办“Green Actions, Better Future”主题英语征文活动。请以“自然灾害与环境保护”为主题,写一篇倡议书,旨在号召全校同学从我做起,贡献自己的一份力量。内容需包含:
1.目前面临的主要环境问题(参见参考内容中图片);
2.日常生活中可行的环保行动;
3.呼吁大家共同参与环保。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名;
参考内容:
Dear fellow students,
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Li Jin
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Nowadays, our planet is facing severe environmental problems. Extreme weather like storms and droughts is becoming more frequent, glaciers are melting, and many species are in danger of extinction. These issues are largely caused by human activities that harm the environment.
As students, we can take action in our daily lives. For example, we can save water by turning off the tap when brushing teeth, reduce waste by using reusable bags instead of plastic ones, and choose to walk or ride bikes to school to cut down on carbon emissions. Even small acts like planting a tree or picking up litter can make a difference.
Protecting the environment is not just a slogan but a responsibility we all share. Let’s start from ourselves and encourage those around us to join in. Only through our joint efforts can we reduce natural disasters and build a better future for our planet.
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于近期你校正在举办“Green Actions, Better Future”主题英语征文活动这一情况,以“自然灾害与环境保护”为主题,写一篇倡议书,旨在号召全校同学从我做起,贡献自己的一份力量。
【详解】1.词汇积累
严重的:severe→ serious
减少:reduce→ decrease
问题:issues→ problems
创造,建立:build→ create
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Even small acts like planting a tree or picking up litter can make a difference.
拓展句:Even small acts like planting a tree or picking up litter, which can make a difference, are worth doing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】These issues are largely caused by human activities that harm the environment.
(运用了that引导的定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Only through our joint efforts can we reduce natural disasters and build a better future for our planet.(运用了Only+介词短语位于句首,句子需要使用部分倒装。)
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·天津·期末)假定你是晨光中的学生李津,你们学校上周组织参观了市人工智能实验室(City Artificial Intelligence Lab)。此次参观活动让你收获颇丰,所以你想写一封邮件给你的英国的笔友Mike,分享自己这次经历,内容包括:
1.参观时间与地点;
2.活动内容:
①听专家讲座;
②现场观摩实验操作;
③体验科技产品,如机器人、AI绘画(AI painting)
3.此次经历对你的启发。
注意:
(1).词数不少于100;
(2)适加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Lijin
【答案】Dear Mike,
Hope this email finds you well! Last Thursday morning, our school organized all Senior One students to visit the City Artificial Intelligence Lab. We gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m. and arrived at the lab after a 20-minute bus ride. The sunny day added to our excitement for the tech tour.
In the lab, we first heard a lecture by Professor Chen, who showed AI robots in heart surgeries. He explained how they make precise moves—smaller than a hair! Next, we watched a self-driving car simulation avoid virtual obstacles. The best part was trying AI painting: I typed “a panda in space,” and the app made a funny image with a spacesuit-wearing panda. Everyone laughed at the cute result.
The visit completely shifted my understanding of AI. What struck me most was how AI can turn imagination into reality. It inspired me to learn programming during summer break. Do you think AI will change the way we study in the future? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国的笔友Mike写一封邮件,分享自己参观学校上周组织的市人工智能实验室的经历与感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
集合:gather→get together
到达:arrive→reach/get to
改变:shift→change/transform
现实:reality→fact/actuality
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Thursday morning, our school organized all Senior One students to visit the City Artificial Intelligence Lab.
拓展句:Last Thursday morning, our school organized all the students who were Senior One to visit the City Artificial Intelligence Lab.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the lab, we first heard a lecture by Professor Chen, who showed AI robots in heart surgeries. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】What struck me most was how AI can turn imagination into reality. (运用了what引导的主语从句以及how引导的表语从句。)
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·天津·期末)假设你是晨光中学的李津。近期你所在的城市经历了一次极端大风天气,给市民的生活带来了诸多影响。学校英语社团计划举办一次主题为“Natural Disasters and Safety”的分享会。请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)描述极端大风天气的影响(如交通延误、树木倾倒、停水停电停学等);
(2)分享应对极端天气的经验或建议(如关门闭窗、留在室内等);
(3)呼吁大家关注气候变化,增强安全意识。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:延误 delay 倾倒 fall down 停电 power cut
Dear friends,
I’m Li Jin. Today, I’d like to talk about the recent extreme windy weather in our city and how we can stay safe during natural disasters.
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Thank you for your attention!
【答案】Dear friends,
I’m Li Jin. Today, I’d like to talk about the recent extreme windy weather in our city and how we can stay safe during natural disasters.
The strong winds caused serious problems. Traffic was delayed for hours due to fallen trees blocking roads. Many neighborhoods faced power cuts and water shortages, and even our school had to close for safety reasons. Moreover, some buildings had broken windows, and street signs were blown away.
To stay safe during such weather, remember these tips. First, close all windows and doors tightly to prevent debris from entering. Second, stay indoors and avoid going outside unless absolutely necessary. If you’re outdoors, stay away from tall trees or unstable structures. Also, keep flashlights and emergency supplies ready in case of power outages.
This experience reminds us that climate change is real and dangerous. We must take action by reducing pollution and learning disaster survival skills. Let’s work together to protect our community and build a safer future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为主题为“Natural Disasters and Safety”的分享会写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推迟:delay→put off
保护:protect→preserve
记住:remember→keep in mind
此外:moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To stay safe during such weather, remember these tips.
拓展句:Remember these tips, which can help you stay safe during such weather.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To stay safe during such weather, remember these tips.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】If you’re outdoors, stay away from tall trees or unstable structures.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
类型二: 读后续写
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·海南·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom was a regular figure on the school football field, and his skills were so impressive despite the worn-out sports shoes he wore. Off the field, his life was hard for various reasons. His mother had been ill in bed for several years, and his father recently lost his job, leaving the family even poorer. However, Tom never let his difficult situations reduce his love for football.
One day, the coach announced to the players that there would be a football match, and all players were required to wear proper sports uniforms (制服). Tom was worried. He stared at his worn shoes, wondering how he could possibly ask his parents for money they didn’t have. That night, he lay awake, practicing making excuses in his head—maybe he’d pretend to be sick. But deep inside, he knew he couldn’t do that. However, the thought of missing the game and letting his team down troubled him.
During a break the next day. Tom just sat alone, staring at the ground, while the others talked excitedly with each other. Jack, the team captain, finally cornered him after practice. “What’s up. Tom? There seems to be something wrong with you.” At first, Tom hesitated, but Jack’s genuine (真诚的) concern broke through his pride. “It’s the uniform,” he said in a low voice. “I can’t afford it.” And more than that, he explained to Jack the difficult situation his family was in. Hearing that, Jack just patted (轻拍) him on the shoulder without saying a word.
That day, the team gathered without Tom after practice. “We can’t let this happen,” Jack said. “Tom’s the best player we’ve got; we must do something to help him and his family.” They tried their best to come up with ideas to collect money and decided on a car wash.
On Saturday morning, the school parking lot was totally changed. Signs reading “Football for Tom — Wash a Car. Change a Life” were everywhere, and the team worked tirelessly on the cars and shared Tom’s story with anyone who’d listen. By evening, the team had raised more than enough for the uniform.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Jack gave Tom a new uniform and an envelope the next day, Tom’s eyes widened.
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The day of the match came, and Tom walked onto the field confidently.
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When Jack gave Tom a new uniform and an envelope the next day, Tom’s eyes widened. “We didn’t just get the uniform,” Jack said, explaining there was extra money for his mom’s medicine. Tom felt that his throat tightened. He knew that, in the envelope, there was not just money, but the love of his teammates. “Why are you doing this?” he asked, his voice shaking. “Because we’re a team,” Jack said with a smile. “And teammates take care of each other.” For the first time in months, Tom felt a warm, strong hope — not just for the game, but for the family he had found on the field.
The day of the match came, and Tom walked onto the field confidently. Wearing the new uniform, he felt the support from his teammates. The game was intense but full of warmth. Tom and his teammates fought together, and their perfect cooperation and hard work made the ball fly freely on the field. Though the opponents were strong, they never gave up. Finally, with a beautiful teamwork goal, they won the game. After the match, Tom stood with his teammates, looking at the cheering crowd. He realized he was not alone. With the care and help of his teammates, he could overcome any difficulty.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。Tom热爱足球但家境贫寒,面临比赛需穿统一制服却无力购买的问题。队友得知后,自发组织洗车活动筹款,最终成功为Tom筹得制服费用。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“第二天Jack给了Tom一套新制服和一个信封,Tom的眼睛睁得大大的。”可知,第一段可以描写Jack给Tom新队服和装有额外钱的信封时Tom的反应,Tom的感动与疑惑,以及Jack解释原因后Tom感受到的团队温暖和希望。
②由第二段句首内容“比赛的那天到了,Tom自信地走上了球场。”可知,第二段可以描写比赛当天Tom的状态,比赛过程中团队的协作与拼搏,最终获胜的结果,以及赛后Tom意识到自己并非孤身一人、能在队友帮助下克服困难的感悟。
2.续写线索:Jack赠予队服和钱 ——Tom感动疑惑 ——Jack解释团队精神 ——Tom重拾希望 —— 比赛中团队协作拼搏 —— 获胜后Tom感悟团队力量
3.词汇激活
行为类
①解释:explain/clarify
②发现:find/spot
③使得:make/let
情绪类
①颤抖的(声音):voice shaking/voice trembling/voice quivering
②欢呼:cheering/acclaiming/applauding
【点睛】【高分句型1】Tom felt that his throat tightened. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Though the opponents were strong, they never gave up.(运用了Though引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·四川宜宾·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I still remember the day when we decorated the house, I was ten and it was two weeks before Christmas. I was looking forward to my presents. Since I’m the youngest in the family, all of the family members would give me a gift one way or another. Sometimes it was a cookie or a hug but it was always there. I was the only center of attention and it was feeling good.
My uncles usually would ask me what I wanted before Christmas and that year I knew what I wanted. It was the spaceship I saw in the ads. I was dreaming of opening a big gift box, and it was there. But that year it came in a way that I wasn’t expecting.
It was two weeks before Christmas. Just two weeks. She couldn’t wait. My dear mother told my father that it was time, and then we went to the hospital. After an hour, they told me that I had a sister now. But I didn’t want a sister. I wanted a spaceship. The next few days went so fast. No one was caring about me. Everyone was talking about her and I knew that my life is never going to be the same ever again. I wasn’t ready to grow up, to be a big brother. But it just happened in an instant.
On the day before Christmas, everyone was in our home, talking only about my newborn sister. My family was becoming hers. Even my uncles didn’t ask me anything about the gift. She stole everything I’d ever had, my life and my presents. Thinking about this, I cried to sleep. I had a nightmare (噩梦) and woke up at the middle of the night. Shadows were all around me, and I was defenseless and so weak. I ran into my parents’ bedroom but couldn’t wake up my poor parents who were just too worn out. I was standing near their bed, trying not to cry when I saw her. She was awake and looking at me with her big eyes in her small bed.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying. Panic at first, I then realized that it was just a car passing by. But she felt uneasy, her mouth wide opening, arms waving, and legs kicking. I thought she might be scared too, so I held out my hand to hold hers, patting her on the back with the other. I even moved a bit closer to her little bed, whispering my favorite song to her ears, just as my mum did when I got scared. Surprisingly, she seemed to understand me and stopped crying. Looking into her big eyes, I breathed a sigh of relief.
After having comforted her, something slowly changed inside me. The sense of loneliness was replaced by the responsibility of being an elder brother. Even though her arrival took over the center of the whole family initially, she started to become the center of my attention too. With her cute round face and sparkling eyes, she also won my love and care for her. I looked around and found my parents, awake, smiling at me. With a shadow of a happy family cast on the window, I felt my little sister was the best gift I'd ever got.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者每年都会收到家里人的圣诞节礼物,而且作者是家里的唯一焦点,这种感觉很好,但是那一年的圣诞节似乎不一样,作者的妹妹在离圣诞节两周的时候出生了,于是在圣诞节的前一天,所有人的关注点都转移到了妹妹身上,没人问作者礼物的事情,作者很伤心,于是哭着睡着了,做了噩梦,在半夜醒来,跑进父母卧室却叫不醒父母,结果发现妹妹醒了,正用她的大眼睛看着作者。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,一个长长的影子走进卧室,她哭了起来。”可知,第一段可描写作者的妹妹被长长的影子吓到害怕的哭了起来,作者安慰妹妹的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“安慰了她之后,我的内心慢慢发生了变化。”可知,第二段可描写作者的内心变化,有了当哥哥的责任感并且开始关心妹妹。
2.续写线索:妹妹被吓哭——安抚——妹妹停止哭泣——感到作为哥哥的责任感——关心妹妹——感到幸福
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.经过:pass by /go through
②.低声说:whisper/ murmur
③.代替:replace /take place of
情绪类
①.可爱的:cute / lovely
②.不安的:uneasy /disturbed/upset
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I thought she might be scared too, so I held out my hand to hold hers, patting her on the back with the other.(省略连词的宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. I even moved a bit closer to her little bed, whispering my favorite song to her ears, just as my mum did when I got scared.(现在分词作状语和连词when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型3]. Even though her arrival took over the center of the whole family initially, she started to become the center of my attention too.(Even though连接的让步状语从句)
Passage 1
(24-25高一下·天津·期末)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你的英国笔友Henry目前作为交换生在天津大学学习。你最近参观了一场“中国艺术展”(Exhibition of Chinese Art),收获颇丰。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍参观的时间、地点及同行人员;
2. 描述展览中的艺术形式(如绘画、书法、雕塑等)并分享参展收获;
3. 推荐Henry去观展。
参考词汇:书法calligraphy;雕塑sculpture
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文:
Dear Henry,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
The exhibition displayed various forms of traditional art, including landscape paintings, calligraphy, and clay sculptures, which helped me gain a deep insight into the abundant Chinese culture. I was particularly amazed by a delicate porcelain vase from the Ming Dynasty, whose patterns were impressive! Not only did this visit enrich my life and broaden my horizons, but also it helped me better appreciate China’s artistic heritage.
Since you have a great passion for the profound Chinese culture, I highly recommend you to visit it.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Henry写封电子邮件,跟他分享你最近参观的一场“中国艺术展”的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
各种各样的:various→a variety of
帮助:help→assist
热情:passion→enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
拓展句:I’m writing to share with you my recent visit with my friends to the Exhibition of Chinese Art, which was held at the Tianjin Art Museum last weekend.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The exhibition displayed various forms of traditional art, including landscape paintings, calligraphy, and clay sculptures, which helped me gain a deep insight into the abundant Chinese culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I was particularly amazed by a delicate porcelain vase from the Ming Dynasty, whose patterns were impressive! (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25高一下·内蒙古赤峰·期末)假定你是李华,学校将举办以“How Music Has Changed My Life”为题的英语演讲比赛。请结合自己的经历撰写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1.你的经历;
2.音乐对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
How Music Has Changed My Life
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【答案】范文
How Music Has Changed My Life
Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students! My name is Li Hua. I feel incredibly honored to stand here today, ready to share with you my story, which was completely transformed by music. Once too shy to speak in public, I decided to join the school choir, hoping to overcome my fear. There, singing together with classmates, I finally felt a strong sense of belonging that I had never experienced before.
Music, becoming my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently. Gradually, encouraged by my newfound confidence, I started taking part in more activities and making new friends. Thanks to music, I’ve grown from a timid person into someone full of energy and passion, making my life brighter than ever.
So, let’s all embrace music, for it has the power to change our lives, just as it changed mine!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How Music Has Changed My Life”为题结合自己的经历撰写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定:decide→resolve
荣幸:honored→privileged
表达:express→convey
由于:thanks to→due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Music, becoming my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently.
拓展句:Music, which has become my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel incredibly honored to stand here today, ready to share with you my story, which was completely transformed by music.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】So, let’s all embrace music, for it has the power to change our lives, just as it changed mine!(运用了for引导原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25高一下·内蒙古呼和浩特·期末)假设你是李华,你所在的学校正在开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你代表学生会,用英语写一封倡议信,呼吁同学们积极参与到绿色校园建设中来。内容包括以下几点:
1. 说明倡议背景;
2. 提出具体倡议;
3. 呼吁同学们积极参与,并表达对绿色校园建设的期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear fellow students,
As we all know, our school is launching a campaign to build a green campus. This is not only beneficial to our health but also contributes to environmental protection.
Therefore, I would like to propose some specific initiatives. Firstly, let’s save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights when not in use. Secondly, we should reduce waste by recycling and reusing materials whenever possible. Lastly, let’s plant more trees and flowers to beautify our campus.
I sincerely hope that everyone can actively participate in this campaign. Together, we can create a greener, more beautiful campus for ourselves and future generations.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义写一封倡议信,呼吁同学们积极参与“创建绿色校园”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发起:launch → initiate
有益的:beneficial → advantageous
建议:propose → suggest
真诚地:sincerely → genuinely
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:This is not only beneficial to our health but also contributes to environmental protection.
拓展句:Not only is this beneficial to our health but also it contributes to environmental protection.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, our school is launching a campaign to build a green campus.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, let’s save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights when not in use.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略)
Passage 4
(24-25高一下·黑龙江绥化·期末)假设你是李华,为了培养学生的灾害应急处理能力,你校将邀请专家就灾害逃生进行演讲。请你写一封邮件,邀请你的英国交换生朋友Jim参加,内容包括:
①演讲时间与地点;②演讲内容;③询问意向。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. Our school will invite an expert to deliver a speech about ways of escaping from a disaster. I’d like to invite you to take part.
The speech will take place in the school hall at 8:00 next Monday morning. It mainly involves how to avoid harm when disasters like a landslide, a typhoon or a blizzard happen. Besides, ways of rescuing oneself or others in an emergency will also be provided. This will help improve our capabilities of escaping from a disaster.
I wonder if you can come and join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件,邀请英国朋友Jim参加有关灾害逃生的演讲。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发表讲话:deliver a speech→ give a speech
参与:take part→ participate
举行:take place→ be held
改善:improve → sharpen
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, ways of rescuing oneself or others in an emergency will also be provided. This will help improve our capabilities of escaping from a disaster.
拓展句:Besides, ways of rescuing oneself or others in an emergency will also be provided, which will help improve our capabilities of escaping from a disaster.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It mainly involves how to avoid harm when disasters like a landslide, a typhoon or a blizzard happen. (使用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, ways of rescuing oneself or others in an emergency will also be provided. (使用了动名词充当宾语)
Passage 5
(24-25高一下·黑龙江鸡西·期末)假定你是李华,你校英文报正在举办主题为“My Favorite Scientist”的征文活动,请写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 人物介绍;
2. 你受到的启发。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favorite Scientist
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My Favorite Scientist
My favorite scientist is Marie Curie, a brilliant physicist and chemist. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win it in two different fields. Her discovery of radium revolutionized science and made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry. .
Her perseverance inspires me deeply. Despite facing numerous difficulties, she never gave up on her research. Her story teaches me that hard work and dedication can lead to great achievements and overcome any obstacle. I hope to follow her example in my studies.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于征文投稿类应用文。要求考生以李华的身份介绍自己最喜爱的科学家,并阐述从中获得的启发。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
杰出的:brilliant → distinguished
开创性的: groundbreaking → pioneering
坚持不懈:perseverance → persistence
奉献,投入: dedication → devotion
2. 句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:Her discovery of radium revolutionized science and made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry.
拓展句:Her discovery of radium revolutionized science ,which made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry.
【点睛】【高级句型1】She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win it in two different fields.(运用了不定式作后置定语)
【高级句型2】Her story teaches me that hard work and dedication can lead to great achievements and overcome any obstacle.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25高一下·黑龙江牡丹江·期末)假如你是李华,你收到了你的同学的来信,听说她因学习压力太大,非常烦恼。请你给她写封回信,建议她如何减压。内容包括:
1. 给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Linda:
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Yous,
Li Hua
【答案】
I am sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope you will soon cheer up. The following are some suggestions for you to relieve stress.
First, try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the college entrance examinations is a long-term and complicated process and confidence plays an important role in it. So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens. Second, you should find out your own strengths and weaknesses in your study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates in face of difficulties and stress. Last but not the least, you are supposed to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourselves. Always remember “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.
Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对同学因学习压力大而烦恼的情况,写一封回信给予安慰,并提出减压建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
扮演角色:play a role in → play a part in
减压:relieve stress → alleviate pressure
优势:strengths → advantages
锻炼:do physical exercise → work out
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last but not the least, you are supposed to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax yourselves.
拓展句:Last but not the least, you are supposed to do more physical exercise so that you can keep fit as well as relax yourselves.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But I hope you will soon cheer up.(运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens.(运用了no matter+疑问词引导的让步状语从句)
Passage 7
(24-25高一下·四川宜宾·期末)阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It all started with the Food Fair, where groups of students prepared food representing different countries, in my school. I was excited to be in Group Spain. The group leader, Stan, designed a sign-up sheet for different tasks. There was a cooking task. I could do far better in cooking. So, I chose to cook Spanish dishes on the very day of the fair.
Yet, the first few weeks slipped away quickly, and no one seemed to be starting their jobs — probably because they were tired by their studies, or they were simply not in the mood. I was worried that we might present a bad Spain because of our slow progress. After telling other members in Group Spain about my worries and encouraging them to make preparations, we finally started the preparation work.
When we made preparations for the fair, I received a message from Stan. “How many cups of drink do you plan to prepare?” he asked. Maybe forty? I wasn’t sure. I asked the group members in charge of the planning about the number of people who would be at the fair, but they said they didn’t know. Out of other solutions, I answered Stan with my count and explained that I might need to confirm (确定) with the organizer of the fair to know the exact number.
Then one day later, another demand came, “By the way, can you tell me the price for the food?” Sending him the rough price of the food, I frowned. This was supposed to be the task of others. Why did I have to do it? Again, for the progress of our group, I did not think much.
Then came the third, “I mean I need specific numbers, the Unit price for each, and the total cost. Make a table and list all the things, will you?” Before I could do the market research for him, the fourth appeared. I tried to hold my manner as I felt rather dissatisfied when I realized that he was assigning (分派) others’ jobs to me. “That’s it. Enough is enough,” I said to myself.注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Having carefully chosen language, I went forward.
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After hearing all those words, Stan said he understood my point and admitted his mistakes.
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【答案】
Having carefully chosen language, I went forward. With a firm but polite look, I found Stan and expressed my thoughts calmly. I told him that I was willing to take responsibility for cooking, but it was unfair to keep pushing extra work onto me. My voice trembled slightly with anxiety and annoyance, for I feared our group would fall into chaos if duties were not divided properly. I also mentioned that every member should do their own job instead of leaving everything to one person, hoping he could arrange tasks reasonably.
After hearing all those words, Stan said he understood my point and admitted his mistakes. He scratched his head in embarrassment and apologized sincerely for his thoughtlessness. He immediately rearranged the tasks, making sure everyone had clear duties. Relieved and grateful, I smiled and shook hands with him. Finally, we worked together efficiently and our Spanish food stand turned out to be a great success at the fair, filling our hearts with pride and joy.
【导语】本文以学校美食节为背景,讲述了“我”作为西班牙小组的成员,原本选择烹饪任务,却因组内进度缓慢和组长斯坦不断分派他人任务给“我”而感到焦虑和不满。随着斯坦接连提出关于饮品数量、食物价格及具体清单等额外要求,“我”意识到任务分配不公,最终决定向斯坦表达自己的想法并希望他能合理分配任务。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我仔细斟酌了措辞后,走了过去。”可知,第一段可描写我向斯坦表达自己的想法,告诉他不应该把额外的工作一直推给我,并希望他可以合理分配任务。
②由第二段首句内容“听了我的话后,斯坦说他理解我的意思,并承认了自己的错误。”可知,第二段可描写斯坦重新安排任务,最终我们的小组在美食节上取得了成功。
2.续写线索:找到斯坦——表达想法——斯坦理解并道歉——重新安排任务——取得成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①表达:express/convey
②颤抖:tremble/shiver
③道歉:apologize/make an apology
情绪类
①冷静地:calmly/dispassionately
②真诚地:sincerely/genuinely
【点睛】【高分句型1】I also mentioned that every member should do their own job instead of leaving everything to one person, hoping he could arrange tasks reasonably.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】He immediately rearranged the tasks, making sure everyone had clear duties.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
Passage 8
(24-25高一下·四川泸州·期末)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long, long ago, in a little village lived a humble(谦虚的) man named Ashwin. He went about making ends meet by pulling a rickshaw(人力 车) and transporting passengers from one destination to another. Times were hard and he had to take the responsibility for supporting his family.
One day, while returning from work, a man who looked like a wealthy person coming from the city stopped his rickshaw. He quickly told Ashwin the place he wanted to visit. His car had broken down and he desperately needed to get to the mentioned address urgently. After an uneventful ride, they reached the destination, and the passenger paid the fare.
Ashwin, on returning home, found to his surprise that his passenger just then had dropped a small bag in his rickshaw. On opening it, he found 50 gold coins in it. He showed it to his family who couldn’t believe their luck. His wife said with joy, “Thank goodness. Now we find a solution to our problems.”
That night, Ashwin couldn’t sleep. His conscience(良心) kept troubling him. At the crack of dawn, he woke his wife up. He said, “Lalita, I think it’s wrong to keep someone else’s gold coins. I am going to search for the man and hand over the coins to him.” Lalita was shocked and cried, but Ashwin stuck to his word. He tried hard to find the man, but nothing seemed to work.
Eventually when he was about to give up, he saw that wealthy passenger. Ashwin ran to him and thrust(塞) the bag in his hand, “Sir, you left this bag in my rickshaw. I have been looking for you since then and I am so relieved to find you. Please take this,” he said.
注意:1.续写词数应为150字左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1;
The man was surprised.
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Paragraph 2:
Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
The man was surprised. He was touched by Ashwin’s conscience and said he wanted to meet his family. Ashwin took the man home and introduced him to his family. The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s house and his children and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. Ashwin refused, but the man was insistent and said, “I would like to take the responsibility for educating your children.” Ashwin could not refuse the assistance since he wanted the children to become someone important. He agreed to send them to the city.
Paragraph 2:
Ashwin’s children then got educated and did well. Each vacation they went home to visit their parents. Ashwin often reminded them, “Never do anything at the cost of someone else.” The children remembered the advice and followed it. Years later, they became successful. When the poor man’s children had children of their own, they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了贫穷的Ashwin以拉人力车为生,一天一个有钱人乘他的车去某地时,把一个装有50个金币的包忘在了车上。妻子想把这些金币据为己有,但Ashwin的良心过意不去,他决定去寻找失主。就在多次寻找无果,准备放弃时,Ashwin看到了这个有钱人,并把包还给他。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“这个人很吃惊”可知,第一段可描写他被Ashwin的良知感动了,准备登门道谢。看到他们贫穷的生活后,有钱人准备给他们提供帮助。但被善良的Ashwin拒绝了。在有钱人的再三坚持下,Ashwin终于同意他帮助自己的孩子接受良好的教育。
②由第二段首句内容“Ashwin的孩子们得到了很好的教育,并且学习很好”可知,第二段可描写Ashwin经常教育孩子,孩子们也谨记父亲教诲,并把他的事迹讲给子孙后代听。
2.续写线索:吃惊——发现Ashwin生活贫困——提供帮助——拒绝——提出负责孩子教育——同意——孩子学成归来——经常教育孩子——孩子以父亲为榜样
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助:help/do sb. a favor/ offer help to sb.
②拒绝 :refuse/decline
③拜访:visit/ pay a visit to
④遵守:follow/ observe/ respect
情绪类
①感动:touch/move
【点睛】[高分句型1] The man looked at the poor condition of Ashwin’s house and his children and told Ashwin that he would like to help his family. 句中使用that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Ashwin could not refuse the assistance since he wanted the children to become someone important.句中使用since引导原因状语从句。
[高分句型3] When the poor man’s children had children of their own, they often told them the story about the small bag with 50 gold coins.句中when引导时间状语从句。
Passage 9
(24-25高一下·四川广安·期末)
I inhaled deeply, expelling the breath against the rear window of the vehicle, and with a finger, I etched the word ‘DREADFUL’ into the misty surface of the glass, creating a temporary inscription that mirrored my inner turmoil.
My father, casting a brief glance in my direction through the reflective surface of the rearview mirror, offered a comforting remark, “Alex, this journey presents itself as an auspicious occasion for you to reconnect with your maternal and paternal elders.”
The vehicle made a deliberate turn onto a well-trodden dirt path, one that I recognized all too well. We were progressively distancing ourselves from the urban confines, moving further away from the digital tendrils of the Internet, and even more so from the stimulating environment of the computer camp.
“Brighten up, Alex!” exclaimed my mother, her voice carrying a note of optimism. “There is every likelihood that another opportunity to immerse yourself in the world of coding will arise shortly, perhaps even within this very summer season.”
As the car continued its journey, I was acutely aware that all my companions in the realm of programming would be engaged in the act of coding at the computer camp this week, while I, on the other hand, was to be ensconced in the rural setting of a farm. I uttered not a single syllable, and in due course, the vehicle came to a halt in the driveway of my grandparents’ abode. A slender row of trees materialized into view, their presence a stark contrast to the urban landscape I was leaving behind.
I had once taken pleasure in visiting the farm during the spring intermissions before my immersion into coding camps... and before the realization of the extent to which my actions could lead to chaos and disorder.
The engine of the car had not yet ceased its hum when my grandmother, with an agility that belied her years, sprang towards us. From my vantage point in the backseat, I observed as my father and mother embraced my grandmother. I, in turn, reluctantly extracted myself from the vehicle, feeling as though the very force of gravity had grown unusually intense.
“You both are certainly deserving of a respite,” my grandmother was saying, her words directed towards my parents. “Alex will be in good stead — he has always held a fondness for the farm.” She spoke in the past tense, implying that Alex had once cherished the farm.
During the midday meal, my grandmother inquired, “Why such a somber countenance, Alex?” I maintained my silence. Why indeed? It seemed as though they were acting in ignorance of the events that had transpired during my previous visit. For a fleeting moment, my gaze met with my grandmother’s. Could I muster the courage to question her regarding the goats’ destruction of all the flora belonging to our neighbor, Mr. Jackson, an incident that occurred because I had inadvertently lifted the latch and allowed the goats to roam free? Was Mr. Jackson still seething with anger towards me for the considerable damage I had inadvertently caused him?
“I am quite alright,” I muttered, my voice barely audible. “It is merely the absence of the coding camp this week that I am lamenting. Coding is an activity at which I excel.”
My mother offered a nod of understanding. “Ah, that does sound disheartening, but the farm will undoubtedly offer you a different kind of experience.”
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
After lunch, I was on my own when, out of nowhere, there’s Mr. Jackson.
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Instead, Mr. Jackson yelled, “Great to see you here, Alex! I need your help with a lamb’s birth.”
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【答案】
After lunch, I was on my own when, out of nowhere, there’s Mr. Jackson. As I walked toward the barn, I thought about how he might still be upset with me for the goat incident, which happened because I accidentally unlatched the gate, letting the goats wander into his garden and devour everything in sight. Despite this, I couldn’t help but feel a bit relieved that he was the first person I saw. I hoped that he had forgiven me for the chaos that I had unintentionally caused.
Instead, Mr. Jackson yelled, “Great to see you here, Alex! I need your help with a lamb’s birth.” Surprised by his enthusiasm, I wondered if he had forgotten about the damage that I had caused or if he genuinely needed assistance. As I approached him, I noticed the urgency in his eyes, which suggested that he really did require my help. Since I had always been good with technology and coding, assisting with something as organic as helping a lamb be born felt like a completely new challenge, one that I was unexpectedly eager to take on, despite my initial reluctance to be at the farm.The experience of helping bring a new life into the world was both challenging and rewarding, and it helped ease some of the tension between Mr. Jackson and me.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了少年Alex因之前的过失而被父母安排到祖父母的农场度过一周,而非参加他热爱的编程夏令营。在农场里,Alex面对着内心的不安和对过往事件的记忆,同时也在尝试适应乡村生活。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“午饭后,我独自一人时,突然间,Mr. Jackson出现了。”可知,第一段可描写Alex独自一人时偶遇Mr. Jackson的情景及Alex当时的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“相反,Mr. Jackson喊道,“很高兴在这里见到你,Alex!我需要你帮忙接生一只小羊。””可知,第二段可描写Mr. Jackson的态度转变以及Alex帮助Mr. Jackson的过程。
2.续写线索:续写线索:独自一人——偶遇——帮助接生——关系转变——成长和反思。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走向:walk toward/move toward/head toward/walk in the direction of
②思考: think about/ponder over
③接受,开始:take on/embark on/undertake
情绪类
①感到宽慰:feel relieved/feel eased/get some relief
②惊讶的:surprised/amazed/shocked
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hoped that he had forgiven me for the chaos that I had unintentionally caused.(由第一个that引导宾语从句作hoped的宾语;由第二个that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】As I approached him, I noticed the urgency in his eyes, which suggested that he really did require my help.(由as引导的时间状语从句;由which引导的非限制性定语从句;由that引导的宾语从句作suggested的宾语)
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