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专题04 应用文写作(推荐信、 建议信、 邀请信、 申请信)(期末复习讲义)
内 容 导 航
考情透视·目标导航 透析期末考向,锚定备考重心
知识梳理·方法技巧 梳理核心脉络,扫除知识盲区
考场练兵·分层实战 阶梯实战演练,验收复习成效
复习目标
复习重点:
1.掌握推荐信写作技法、模板、常用表达
2.掌握建议信写作技法、模板、常用表达
3.掌握邀请信写作技法、模板、常用表达
4.掌握申请信写作技法、模板、常用表达
考情规律
应用文写作
推荐信
技法指导
写英文推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等。应提出推荐的理由,介绍自己推荐的内容的优点。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义。具体写作结构如下:
常用表达
1.I am both ...我荣幸地推荐……
2.I am writing to you to ...我给你写信是要推荐……
3.It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give...a .我很荣幸地抓住这次机会推荐……
4. the title of the Excellent Graduate,he is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality.
他获得了优秀毕业生的称号,是一位热情积极向上的年轻人,具有很强的潜力。
5. her excellence in academic study,she also performs very well in her job.
除了学术上的出色,她在工作中也表现得很出色。
6.Her academic record was constantly maintained at the top level,which her devotion to study and intelligent nature.
她的学习成绩始终保持在顶尖水平,这得益于她对学习的投入和她聪慧的天性。
7.I have found him to be hardworking, , , and reliable.
我发现他是一个勤奋、有能力、诚实、勤奋和可靠的人。
8.If he can join the company,he will give full play to his .And your company will be greatly benefited.So I strongly ...to you.
如果他能加入公司,他将充分发挥他的潜力/才能。而您的公司将会大大受益。所以我强烈推荐……给您。
9.Should this gain your favorable ,it would be highly appreciated.
如果您能考虑此推荐信,我将不胜感激。
典例展示
假定你是红星中学的李华,你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:
1.介绍你校体育课程及活动;
2.推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school on a oneyear exchange program.Since you enjoy sports,I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a traditional Chinese sport.
First of all,for each class in our school,there are two to three periods of PE class every week. Basic courses,including playing basketball and running,are offered to students.Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文内容完整,语言规范,文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式:定语从句Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.;名词性从句What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.;动名词短语作主语Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.另外文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
建议信
技法指导
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
1.开头表达写信目的常用语
(1)I am writing to .我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to my concerning...我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to here.关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2.主体部分表达建议常用语
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s better to...你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...;for another...一方面……,另一方面……
(6)If I were you,I would...如果我是你,我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3.结尾表达希望常用语
(1)I hope you will .我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will .我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be in this regard.看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
典例展示
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.I am writing to offer you some advice on which route to choose.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the one along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing,with many wellknown sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
I hope you will take my advice into account/ consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的,使用了建议信的套语I am writing to offer you some advice...。
2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议,使用了过渡性词语:Personally,Moreover;高级词汇:highly, recommend,prefer,civilization,amazing,wellknown, sightseeing;还使用了复杂结构why引导的表语从句。
3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.表达了希望。
邀请信
技法指导
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高,只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式,语气要热情有礼,态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
1.It is a great you to participate in...to be held in...on...我很荣幸邀请您参加……在……举行的……
2.I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to in...我很荣幸代表……邀请您参加……
3.Would you give the of doing...at...您能赏光和我们在……做……吗?
4.You can reach me through my phone number...at your .您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话,号码是……
5.I would feel much if you could come.如果您能来,我将深感荣幸。
6.If you are interested in it,please let me know and I’ll .如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我会给你发送更多的信息。
典例展示
假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封信,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间;
2.演讲话题;
3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear George,
It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners at my school on March 1st,2021.
The theme of the upcoming speech is British Culture which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Brain.Undoubtedly,your fluent Chinese,excellent public speaking skills,and especially profound knowledge will not fail to impress and inspire the audience.If you accept our invitation,we will be more than pleased to welcome you to register at the Student Organization Office.
We are looking forward to your stunning performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信目的,表达邀请对方参加的愿望。使用了邀请信的套句:It is a great privilege for me to invite you to...,而且还自然地介绍了要点1:比赛时间。
2.文章主体部分介绍了演讲主题和报名方式。使用了一些亮点词汇theme,upcoming,sincerely,especially,profound,impress,inspire,more than和高级句式:定语从句which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Brain和条件状语从句If you accept our invitation。
3.信的结尾使用了邀请信的套语We are looking forward to...,表达了希望对方接受邀请的愿望。
申请信
技法指导
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
1.Having learned that your office needs...,I would like to the post.得知贵公司需要……,我想申请这个职位。
2.I’m a job as...and would be grateful if you would me for such a post in your firm.
我正在找一份……的工作,如果你能考虑我在贵公司担任这个职位,我将不胜感激。
3.I’m an student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.My grades are the best ones in my department.我是个优秀的学生,在我班50名学生中名列前五。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。
4.I feel I meet the requirements you have listed.我觉得我有能力满足你所列的要求。
5.With good academic and working experience,I feel I’m the right person you’re looking for.我有很好的学习成绩和工作实践经验,我觉得我是你要找的人。
6.I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good of oral and written English,which me to communicate/interact with foreign friends fluently.
我已经学了10多年英语,口语和书面语都很好,这使我能够流利地与外国朋友交流。
7.Being outgoing warmhearted,I’m always ready to help those in need,which makes me feel good return.我性格开朗,心地善良,随时准备帮助有需要的人,这让我感觉很好。
8.Not only am I able to help others but also I can .我不仅能帮助别人,而且能积累社会经验。
9.I’m firmly that by doing this,I can my oral English and communication skills together with opening up a new range of vision.
我坚信通过这样做,我可以提高我的英语口语和沟通能力,同时开拓新的视野。
10.It would be if you could take my application into ,looking forward to your earliest 如能考虑我的申请,不胜感激,期待您的早日/认真回复。
典例展示
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua,a student from China,who is studying in London during the summer holiday. Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month,I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages.First of all,I speak English fluently,which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. Second,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a lot about this art form.If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,which can help them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.信的开头扼要地做了自我介绍,了解到要举办画展,表示有意要申请志愿者。使用了复杂结构定语从句和分词作状语。还使用了申请信的套语I am writing to apply to...。
2.信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势,使用了过渡性词语:First of all,Second。使用了复杂结构非限制性定语从句和条件状语从句的省略结构。
3.信的结尾使用了申请信的套语I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.表达了感谢和希望。
基础通关练(测试时间:40分钟)
(1)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.推荐他上哪所大学;
3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
假定你是李华,在你校学习的英国交换生Frank想参加中国诗词电视大赛(Chinese Poetry TV Competition),特地给你写邮件寻求建议。请你给他回一封邮件,要点如下:
1.乐意帮助;
2.具体建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Frank,
It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part.
Yours,
Li Hua
(3)
假定你是李华,你的家人想邀请你校的英国交换生Peter到你家聚餐。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表明意图;
2.阐述邀请的原因;
3.告知时间、地点和乘车方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I sincerely hope you can come.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(4)
假如下学期即将到你校工作的外教Alice正在寻找一名学生助手,你有意承担这一工作,请给Alice写一封申请信介绍自己的优势:电脑操作;交际能力;英语口语等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua,a senior 2 student,aged 17.It is great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
综合拓展练(测试时间:40分钟)
(1)
(24-25高一下·江苏南京·期末)假设你校将举办国际文化交流周,请你以 “The Taste of China” 为主题,向国际学生推荐一道你最喜欢的中国传统美食。
你的投稿需包括:
(1)推荐的美食及理由(如独特风味、文化内涵等)
(2)与美食相关的个人经历
(3)发出品尝邀请
注意: 1.词数100词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear international friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
(24-25高一下·云南玉溪·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Eric对中国传统文化很感兴趣,想要学习或培养一项与之相关的技巧或特长,发邮件征求你的意见,请你回信给他提供建议,内容包括:
1.你的建议及理由;
2.祝愿他学有所成。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:speciality 特长
Dear Eric,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
(3)
(24-25高一下·天津河西·期末)假设你是李津。市图书馆将于下周举办一场中国书画展,你想邀请正在天津交流学习的美国朋友 Chris周六上午十点一起去参观。请按以下提示写一封电子邮件:
Activity
go to Chinese painting and calligraphy exhibition
Time
10 a. m. Saturday
Place
at the gate of Tianjin Library
Significance
enjoy the beauty of Chinese painting and calligraphy
...
注意:
1.请自拟至少一条参观书画展的意义;
2.短文不少于100词,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(4)
(24-25高二下·河北邯郸·期末)假定你是李华,GlobalTongues网站正为Global Youth Poetry Festival招募“中华诗词推广志愿者”,请给负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件,申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.希望获准。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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专题04 应用文写作(推荐信、 建议信、 邀请信、 申请信)(期末复习讲义)
内 容 导 航
考情透视·目标导航 透析期末考向,锚定备考重心
知识梳理·方法技巧 梳理核心脉络,扫除知识盲区
考场练兵·分层实战 阶梯实战演练,验收复习成效
复习目标
复习重点:
1.掌握推荐信写作技法、模板、常用表达
2.掌握建议信写作技法、模板、常用表达
3.掌握邀请信写作技法、模板、常用表达
4.掌握申请信写作技法、模板、常用表达
考情规律
应用文写作
推荐信
技法指导
写英文推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等。应提出推荐的理由,介绍自己推荐的内容的优点。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文义。具体写作结构如下:
常用表达
1.I am both honoured and pleased to recommend...我荣幸地推荐……
2.I am writing to you to recommend...我给你写信是要推荐……
3.It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to give...a recommendation.我很荣幸地抓住这次机会推荐……
4.Awarded with the title of the Excellent Graduate,he is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with high potentiality.
他获得了优秀毕业生的称号,是一位热情积极向上的年轻人,具有很强的潜力。
5.In addition to her excellence in academic study,she also performs very well in her job.
除了学术上的出色,她在工作中也表现得很出色。
6.Her academic record was constantly maintained at the top level,which resulted from her devotion to study and intelligent nature.
她的学习成绩始终保持在顶尖水平,这得益于她对学习的投入和她聪慧的天性。
7.I have found him to be hardworking,competent,honest,diligent and reliable.
我发现他是一个勤奋、有能力、诚实、勤奋和可靠的人。
8.If he can join the company,he will give full play to his potential/talent.And your company will be greatly benefited.So I strongly recommend...to you.
如果他能加入公司,他将充分发挥他的潜力/才能。而您的公司将会大大受益。所以我强烈推荐……给您。
9.Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration,it would be highly appreciated.
如果您能考虑此推荐信,我将不胜感激。
典例展示
假定你是红星中学的李华,你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动,他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件,主要内容包括:
1.介绍你校体育课程及活动;
2.推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school on a oneyear exchange program.Since you enjoy sports,I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a traditional Chinese sport.
First of all,for each class in our school,there are two to three periods of PE class every week. Basic courses,including playing basketball and running,are offered to students.Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文内容完整,语言规范,文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式:定语从句Besides,the school sports meeting is held annually,which students can take part in according to their interests.;名词性从句What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu,a traditional sport in China.;动名词短语作主语Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.另外文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
建议信
技法指导
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
1.开头表达写信目的常用语
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
2.主体部分表达建议常用语
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s better to...你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...;for another...一方面……,另一方面……
(6)If I were you,I would...如果我是你,我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
3.结尾表达希望常用语
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
典例展示
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.I am writing to offer you some advice on which route to choose.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the one along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing,with many wellknown sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
I hope you will take my advice into account/ consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的,使用了建议信的套语I am writing to offer you some advice...。
2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议,使用了过渡性词语:Personally,Moreover;高级词汇:highly, recommend,prefer,civilization,amazing,wellknown, sightseeing;还使用了复杂结构why引导的表语从句。
3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.表达了希望。
邀请信
技法指导
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高,只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式,语气要热情有礼,态度要诚恳。邀请信的末尾都要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
1.It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in...to be held in...on...我很荣幸邀请您参加……在……举行的……
2.I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to participate in...我很荣幸代表……邀请您参加……
3.Would you give the pleasure of doing...at...您能赏光和我们在……做……吗?
4.You can reach me through my phone number...at your convenience.您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话,号码是……
5.I would feel much honored if you could come.如果您能来,我将深感荣幸。
6.If you are interested in it,please let me know and I’ll send you more information.如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我会给你发送更多的信息。
典例展示
假定你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封信,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间;
2.演讲话题;
3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear George,
It is a great privilege for me to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreigners at my school on March 1st,2021.
The theme of the upcoming speech is British Culture which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Brain.Undoubtedly,your fluent Chinese,excellent public speaking skills,and especially profound knowledge will not fail to impress and inspire the audience.If you accept our invitation,we will be more than pleased to welcome you to register at the Student Organization Office.
We are looking forward to your stunning performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信目的,表达邀请对方参加的愿望。使用了邀请信的套句:It is a great privilege for me to invite you to...,而且还自然地介绍了要点1:比赛时间。
2.文章主体部分介绍了演讲主题和报名方式。使用了一些亮点词汇theme,upcoming,sincerely,especially,profound,impress,inspire,more than和高级句式:定语从句which we sincerely expect to know from a native of Brain和条件状语从句If you accept our invitation。
3.信的结尾使用了邀请信的套语We are looking forward to...,表达了希望对方接受邀请的愿望。
申请信
技法指导
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示,写作时除应注意格式上的要求外,也应注意审题全面,不能遗漏要点,并要注意人称和时态的变化,避免出现逻辑混乱。具体写作结构为:
常用表达
1.Having learned that your office needs...,I would like to apply for the post.得知贵公司需要……,我想申请这个职位。
2.I’m looking for a job as...and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm.
我正在找一份……的工作,如果你能考虑我在贵公司担任这个职位,我将不胜感激。
3.I’m an excellent student,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.My grades are among the best ones in my department.我是个优秀的学生,在我班50名学生中名列前五。我的成绩在系里名列前茅。
4.I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.我觉得我有能力满足你所列的要求。
5.With good academic performance and working practical experience,I feel I’m the right person you’re looking for.我有很好的学习成绩和工作实践经验,我觉得我是你要找的人。
6.I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written English,which enables me to communicate/interact with foreign friends fluently.
我已经学了10多年英语,口语和书面语都很好,这使我能够流利地与外国朋友交流。
7.Being outgoing as well as warmhearted,I’m always ready to help those in need,which makes me feel good in return.我性格开朗,心地善良,随时准备帮助有需要的人,这让我感觉很好。
8.Not only am I able to help others but also I can accumulate social experience.我不仅能帮助别人,而且能积累社会经验。
9.I’m firmly convinced that by doing this,I can enhance my oral English and communication skills together with opening up a new range of vision.
我坚信通过这样做,我可以提高我的英语口语和沟通能力,同时开拓新的视野。
10.It would be appreciated if you could take my application into account/consideration,looking forward to your earliest/earnest reply.如能考虑我的申请,不胜感激,期待您的早日/认真回复。
典例展示
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua,a student from China,who is studying in London during the summer holiday. Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month,I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages.First of all,I speak English fluently,which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. Second,as a Chinese painting lover,I know a lot about this art form.If accepted,I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors,which can help them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.信的开头扼要地做了自我介绍,了解到要举办画展,表示有意要申请志愿者。使用了复杂结构定语从句和分词作状语。还使用了申请信的套语I am writing to apply to...。
2.信的主体部分介绍了自身的优势,使用了过渡性词语:First of all,Second。使用了复杂结构非限制性定语从句和条件状语从句的省略结构。
3.信的结尾使用了申请信的套语I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.表达了感谢和希望。
基础通关练(测试时间:40分钟)
(1)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.推荐他上哪所大学;
3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter.First I’d like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture,I suggest you apply for Peking University.Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture.As for preparation,some reading in advance is needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
If you have further questions,please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
假定你是李华,在你校学习的英国交换生Frank想参加中国诗词电视大赛(Chinese Poetry TV Competition),特地给你写邮件寻求建议。请你给他回一封邮件,要点如下:
1.乐意帮助;
2.具体建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Frank,
It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Frank,
It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part.I’m delighted to offer you some tips.
First of all,you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it.The resources are available on many relevant websites.Secondly,you’d better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers.Additionally,knowing how to enter your name for the competition and watching previous events will make you well prepared.
Hope these suggestions above will help you get started.Good luck in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
(3)
假定你是李华,你的家人想邀请你校的英国交换生Peter到你家聚餐。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表明意图;
2.阐述邀请的原因;
3.告知时间、地点和乘车方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I sincerely hope you can come.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going?On behalf of my family and myself,I’d like to invite you to have dinner with us.
I invite you not only because we are good friends and I want to treat you to dinner but also because my brother has some difficulty in learning English,which upsets him very much.Therefore,I hope that you can have a talk with him about English learning after dinner.
If it is convenient for you,please come to my home at 6 o’clock this Sunday afternoon.You can take the No.666 bus at the west gate of our school and get off at Daxing Road,where I will pick you up.
I sincerely hope you can come.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(4)
假如下学期即将到你校工作的外教Alice正在寻找一名学生助手,你有意承担这一工作,请给Alice写一封申请信介绍自己的优势:电脑操作;交际能力;英语口语等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua,a senior 2 student,aged 17.It is great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Alice,
I’m Li Hua,a senior 2 student,aged 17.It is great to learn that you are coming to teach in our school next semester.On knowing that you are seeking for one student assistant,I’m eager to introduce myself.
As a diligent person,I always deal with what I encounter in my daily life independently.Having a good knowledge of computer,I believe I can accomplish all the tasks you want me to finish.Additionally,I have a gift for communicating with others,which will help me to get on well with others.Apart from that,I can speak English fluently so that I have no difficulty communicating with you.
I’m confident that I can be helpful in your work and life.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
综合拓展练(测试时间:40分钟)
(1)
(24-25高一下·江苏南京·期末)假设你校将举办国际文化交流周,请你以 “The Taste of China” 为主题,向国际学生推荐一道你最喜欢的中国传统美食。
你的投稿需包括:
(1)推荐的美食及理由(如独特风味、文化内涵等)
(2)与美食相关的个人经历
(3)发出品尝邀请
注意: 1.词数100词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear international friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear international friends,
I’m happy to recommend dumplings to you. Dumplings are made by wrapping dough around various fillings, from pork and chives to vegetarian mixes, and can be boiled, steamed, or fried. During festivals like Chinese New Year, families gather to make them. Dumplings are not just food, but also a symbol of family unity and happiness.
When I was a child, I often made dumplings with my family, which left me with many happy memories. We often hide a coin in a dumpling for good luck.
I sincerely hope that you can come to China. We’ll make dumplings together and enjoy this delightful experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封推荐信,向国际学生推荐一道你最喜欢的中国传统美食。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→glad
各种各样的:various→a variety of
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely
令人愉快的:delightful→pleasant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During festivals like Chinese New Year, families gather to make them.
拓展句:During festivals like Chinese New Year, families gather to make them, which is a traditional Chinese custom.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was a child, I often made dumplings with my family, which left me with many happy memories.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that you can come to China.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(2)
(24-25高一下·云南玉溪·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Eric对中国传统文化很感兴趣,想要学习或培养一项与之相关的技巧或特长,发邮件征求你的意见,请你回信给他提供建议,内容包括:
1.你的建议及理由;
2.祝愿他学有所成。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:speciality 特长
Dear Eric,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Eric,
Hearing that you’re interested in learning a skill of Chinese culture, I’m writing to share my opinion with you.
I strongly recommend learning Chinese calligraphy, which is a unique art form with a long-standing history. By practicing it, not only can you appreciate the beauty of Chinese characters but you can also cultivate your patience and concentration. I bet you will never regret learning it. By the way, if you need more information about Chinese calligraphy, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Wish you great success in your learning!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生的英国朋友Eric对中国传统文化很感兴趣,想要学习或培养一项与之相关的技巧或特长,发邮件征求意见,请回信给他提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
强烈推荐:strongly recommend→highly suggest
独特的:unique→distinctive
培养:cultivate→develop
犹豫:hesitate→waver
2.句式拓展:
同义句
原句:Hearing that you’re interested in learning a skill of Chinese culture, I’m writing to share my opinion with you.
拓展句:When I heard that you were interested in learning a skill of Chinese culture, I decided to write to share my opinion with you.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I strongly recommend learning Chinese calligraphy, which is a unique art form with a long - standing history.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型 2】By practicing it, not only can you appreciate the beauty of Chinese characters but you can also cultivate your patience and concentration.(运用了not only...but also... 结构)
(3)
(24-25高一下·天津河西·期末)假设你是李津。市图书馆将于下周举办一场中国书画展,你想邀请正在天津交流学习的美国朋友 Chris周六上午十点一起去参观。请按以下提示写一封电子邮件:
Activity
go to Chinese painting and calligraphy exhibition
Time
10 a. m. Saturday
Place
at the gate of Tianjin Library
Significance
enjoy the beauty of Chinese painting and calligraphy
...
注意:
1.请自拟至少一条参观书画展的意义;
2.短文不少于100词,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Chris,
How is it going these days? A Chinese painting and calligraphy exhibition will be held next week in Tianjin Library. Considering you are rather interested in learning Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to come with me.
I’m certain that you will enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters and paintings, which present the unique charm of Chinese culture. Moreover, it can enrich your cultural knowledge and improve your understanding of the Chinese people by appreciating the artistic works, which reflect the living conditions and good will of the people in ancient and modern China. We will meet at the library gate at 10:00 on Saturday morning.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封电子邮件邀请正在天津交流学习的美国朋友 Chris周六上午十点一起去参观一场中国书画展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣:be interested in→take interest in
展示:present→show
理解:understanding→comprehension
欣赏:appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A Chinese painting and calligraphy exhibition will be held next week in Tianjin Library.
拓展句:There will be a Chinese painting and calligraphy exhibition which will be held next week in Tianjin Library.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Considering you are rather interested in learning Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to come with me.(运用了现在分词作状语和省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m certain that you will enjoy the beauty of Chinese characters and paintings, which present the unique charm of Chinese culture. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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(24-25高二下·河北邯郸·期末)假定你是李华,GlobalTongues网站正为Global Youth Poetry Festival招募“中华诗词推广志愿者”,请给负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件,申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.希望获准。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a student who is passionate about Chinese poetry. I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position at Global Youth Poetry Festival.
My qualifications meet your requirements precisely. First, I’ve learned many classic Chinese poems and understand their meanings and beauty. Second, I run a social media account where I share poems using simple videos and posts, making them easy for people to enjoy. Finally, my English proficiency ensures accurate translation and interpretation.
I believe I can help more people around the world discover the beauty of Chinese poetry. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给GlobalTongues网站的负责人Mr. Smith写一封邮件,申请成为“中华诗词推广志愿者”的一员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职位:position→post
最后:finally→ultimately
确保:ensure→guarantee
考虑某事:consider sth.→take sth. into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position at Global Youth Poetry Festival.
拓展句:I’m writing to apply for the volunteer position, which is available at Global Youth Poetry Festival.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am Li Hua, a student who is passionate about Chinese poetry.(运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, I run a social media account where I share poems using simple videos and posts, making them easy for people to enjoy.(运用了where引导的限定性定语从句以及现在分词作状语)
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