内容正文:
11 Fantastic Chinese Culture
UNIT
灿烂的中国文化
In this unit,you will learn to:
introduce Chinese culture.
·介绍中国文化。
understand Chinese culture and be confident about it.
·理解中国文化并对其充满自信.
use a chart to understand the characters'motives.
·运用图表理解角色的动机。
use the reading strategy of monitoring and clarifying.
·运用观察与梳理的阅读策略。
make a collection of posters of Chinese culture.
·制作一本中国文化海报集。
Big Question:What should we do with tradition?
大问题:我们应该如何对待传统?
Lesson 7 Reading for Writing
Traditional Food inMy Hometown
Unit 11 Fantastic Chinese Culture
写作课
仁爱版八年级下册
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Learning Objectives 🎯
01
READING
能读懂关于北京烤鸭的书信内容
02
STRUCTURE
掌握美食写作结构:背景、过程、感受
03
WRITING
能撰写介绍家乡传统食物的短文
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GRAMMAR
正确使用一般过去时和描写性语言
Warm-up: Look and Say
Good morning, class! Look at these pictures. What are they? Can you name them in English? Let's say them together!
Beijing roast duck
北京烤鸭
dumplings
饺子
noodles
面条
zongzi
粽子
moon cake
月饼
Delicious!
Which one do you like?
1.7.2013
Let's start with a fun warm-up! Look at the screen. I have some pictures of delicious Chinese food. I'll show you the picture, and you tell me the English name. Ready? Let's go! First one... Yes, it's Beijing roast duck! Great! Next... Dumplings! Perfect! Keep going, noodles, zongzi, and moon cake! You all know your food vocabulary very well.
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Think & Share 🤔
Question 1
What is your favorite traditional food in your hometown?
When and where do you eat it?
Question 2
Reading for Writing
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Activity 1 — Talk About Your Favorite Food
Pair work. Write down your answers to the following questions, and then talk
about your favorite traditional food.
01
What food?
What favorite food do you want to write about?
02
When & Where?
When and where did you eat the food?
03
How?
How do people cook or eat the food?
Pair Work: Discuss with your partner. Take notes — you will use them for your writing later!
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Activity 2 — Read Li Mei's Letter
Dear Jane,
How are you doing these days? Last weekend, my cousin visited us, and we took him to have Beijing roast duck — one of the most famous traditional foods in my hometown.
When we sat down in a nice restaurant, a waiter came up to take the order. He told us that people use wood fire to roast the duck in a big oven. The wood fire makes the duck smell nice and taste special. After some time, the duck came to our table. It looked golden and beautiful.
Then my father showed my cousin how to eat it. He put some duck meat, duck skin, cucumber, spring onion and sweet sauce on a small pancake, rolled it up and gave it to him. My cousin tasted it and couldn't stop smiling.
I hope you can visit China one day. I will take you to eat Beijing roast duck too! I'm sure you'll love it.
Take care,
Li Mei
Key Vocabulary
roast duck 烤鸭
wood fire 柴火
oven 烤炉
golden 金黄的
pancake 薄饼
cucumber 黄瓜
spring onion 葱
sweet sauce 甜面酱
take the order 点餐
taste special 味道特别
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Activity 2 — Complete the Chart
Analyze the characters in the story. What did they do? Why did they do it?
Characters Character's Actions Character's Motives
The Waiter Came up to take the order
Told them how the duck was roasted To serve the customers
To explain the cooking method
Li Mei's Father Showed cousin how to eat the duck
Put ingredients on the pancake and
rolled it To share the tradition
To help cousin enjoy the food
Li Mei's Cousin Tasted the duck and couldn't stop smiling
Rolled two more pancakes Enjoyed the food very much
Wanted to share with Li Mei
Thinking Skill: Identifying characters' motives helps us understand the story better. When you write, think about why people do things!
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Text Structure Analysis
How is Li Mei's letter organized?
PARAGRAPH 1
Introduction
Introduce the topic — took cousin to have Beijing roast duck
PARAGRAPH 2
Body
Describe the experience — how cooked, how it looked, how they ate it
PARAGRAPH 3
Conclusion
Express feelings and hopes — hope Jane can visit China
Writing Framework
1.Introduce the food & setting
2. Describe the experience
3. Express feelings & hopes
Remember: A good essay has a clear structure — Introduction → Body → Conclusion
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How to Organize Your Writing 📐
Opening
Last weekend, my cousin visited us, and we took him to have Beijing roast duck...
问候 + 引入美食
Background
When we sat down in a nice restaurant, a waiter came up to take the order...
背景信息,餐厅、点餐
Process
People use wood fire to roast the duck... He put some duck meat on a small pancake, rolled it up... 烹饪方式 + 食用过程
Feelings
He couldn't stop smiling. He enjoyed it so much... 感受
Ending
I hope you can visit China one day. I will take you to eat Beijing roast duck too! I'm sure you'll love it. 邀请 + 祝愿
Useful Phrases & Sentence Patterns 📚
Useful Phrases
come up to
走近,来到跟前
take the order
点菜,记录订单
taste special
尝起来很特别
couldn't stop ...
忍不住……,无法停止……
Sentence Patterns
He told us that ...
他告诉我们……
It looked …
它看起来……
I hope you …
我希望你……
I'm sure …
我确信……
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Activity 3 — Plan Your Writing
Draw a chart about your experience of eating a traditional Chinese food, then draft your essay.
While-writing · Plan Before You Write
写作构思卡 —— 先构思,再动笔
Food name
When & Where
How to cook / eat
How it looks / tastes
My feeling / Invitation
提示:Think in Chinese, write key words in English!
Task 任务说明
Write a letter / email(about 80 words)
Introduce your favorite traditional food
Use the writing frame & useful language
Include at least: 1 object clause, 1 sensory description
Writing Frame 写作支架
Dear______, How are you doing these days? Last______, I...
I hope you can visit my hometown one day. I'm sure you'll love it!
Take care,______
Peer Review 🤝 同伴互评
1
交换作文,阅读同伴的作品
仔细阅读,带着欣赏的眼光发现闪光点 ✨
2
给出至少一条优点
I like your writing because...
3
给出一条改进建议
Maybe you can add... / Check the tense of...
时间:
5
分钟
Share & Learn 🌟
让文字在朗读中鲜活,让感悟在交流中生长
分享朗读
邀请2~3名学生
朗读自己的作文
或精彩段落
交流点评
全班交流讨论
教师点评亮点
互相启发提升
What have we learned today?
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美食写作结构
开头 · 背景 · 过程
感受 · 结尾
02
实用短语描述
描述烹饪过程
与食用体验
03
一般过去时
用过去时态
分享美食经历
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自评与互评
通过评价与反馈
提升写作能力
Language Points 语言点
1 one of + the + 形容词最高级 + 可数名词复数
Beijing roast duck is one of the most famous traditional foods in my hometown.
2 couldn't stop doing sth. 忍不住做某事
My cousin tasted it and couldn't stop smiling.
3 show sb. how to do sth. 向某人示范如何做某事
My father showed my cousin how to eat it.
4 enjoy... so much that... 如此喜欢……以至于……
He enjoyed it so much that he rolled two more pancakes.
5 roll up 卷起来
He put some duck meat on a small pancake and rolled it up.
Board Design 板书设计参考
Writing Frame 写作框架
TOP · INTRO
what food? ·
with whom?
· when?
MIDDLE · BODY
order → cook → serve → eat
BOTTOM · END
feel? + hope / invitation
Key Sentences
Useful Linkers
... is one of the most famous traditional foods.
He told us that people use... to...
It looked golden and beautiful.
He couldn't stop smiling.
I hope you can visit... I'm sure you'll love it!
when
after some time
then
so...that...
写下你的故事,分享你的味道
Every dish has a story. Every story connects cultures.
每道菜都有故事,每个故事连接文化
Write Your Story.
Share Your Flavor.
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