内容正文:
人教英语九上Unit4写作讲解:
A Happy Family Memory & My Way to Improve Memory
一、写作题目
时光会流逝,但美好的记忆永远温暖人心。请你写一篇日记短文,分享一段属于你的家庭快乐回忆,同时介绍提升记忆力的好方法。词数80-120词。
二、写作目标
1. 掌握本单元核心语法:疑问词引导的宾语从句
2. 清晰叙述一段温暖的往事,有条理地分享记忆提升技巧
3. 学会记录生活点滴,懂得珍惜家人与珍贵回忆
三、写作分析
· 时态:讲述过往家庭回忆用一般过去时;介绍记忆方法、表达感悟用一般现在时
· 人称:全程第一人称(I, my, me, my family)
· 思路点拨:
a. 开头:引出记忆的意义,点明自己最难忘的一段家庭回忆
b. 正文:简单回忆事情经过,同时分享自己改善记忆力的实用小妙招
c. 结尾:抒发这段回忆带来的感受,明白铭记美好、留住温暖的意义
四、写作模板(表格版)
写作板块
段落功能
万能模板句子
开头
开篇引入,点题记忆与家庭
We have many sweet memories in life. One of my happiest memories is from a day with my family.
正文
回忆事件+分享记忆方法
I still remember what we did that day. To remember things well, I also find some good ways. For example, ...
结尾
抒发感悟、升华主旨
This warm memory always cheers me up. I hope I can keep all these happy moments forever.
五、范文(中英对照)
英文范文
A Happy Family Memory
Everyone has sweet memories, and one of my happiest ones is a trip with my family last year.
I still remember where we went and what we did together. We visited a beautiful park, had a big meal and talked happily all day. It was such warm time for me. Also, I have learned some ways to improve my memory. I try to divide things into small parts and focus on key points. I also keep a diary to write down great moments.
Good memory helps us keep love and warmth alive. This happy memory always makes me feel loved. I will hold it dear forever.
中文翻译
一段幸福的家庭回忆
每个人都有甜蜜的记忆,而我最快乐的一段回忆,是去年和家人一起出游的时光。
我依然清楚记得我们去了哪里、一起做了什么。我们去了一座漂亮的公园、一起享用丰盛的晚餐,一整天都欢声笑语,无比温暖。同时,我也学会了很多提升记忆力的方法:我会把内容拆分成小块、抓住关键点记忆,也会写日记记录美好的瞬间。
好的记忆力,能留住爱与温暖。这段幸福的回忆总能让我感受到满满的爱意,我会永远珍藏这份美好。
六、核心素材·好词佳句
高分好词
· memory 记忆
· improve 提升、改善
· divide...into 把……拆分
· focus on 集中注意力
· warm and sweet 温馨甜蜜的
· forever 永远
高分宾语从句佳句(单元核心语法)
1. I still remember what my family did that day.
我依然记得那天我的家人做了什么。
2. I wonder how we can have a good memory.
我想知道我们怎样才能拥有好记性。
3. I can’t forget when we enjoyed the happy time.
我永远忘不了我们共度欢乐时光的时刻。
加分谚语
The best memories are kept deep in the heart.
最美好的回忆,永远珍藏心底。
七、学生填空练习版(仿写巩固)
A Happy Family Memory
Everyone ______ (have) sweet memories. One of my happiest memories ______ (be) a day with my family.
I still remember ______ we went and ______ we did last holiday. We ______ (spend) a wonderful day together. To improve my memory, I ______ (find) some useful ways now. I often ______ (write) diaries and ______ (try) to remember key points first.
This warm memory always ______ (cheer) me up. I ______ (value) this happy time forever. It tells me that family love is the most warm thing in the world.
参考答案
has;is;where;what;spent;find;write;try;cheers;will value
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