内容正文:
人教英语九上Unit1写作讲解:
Changes in My Life(我生活中的变化)
一、写作题目
假设你是一名初中生,和小学时期相比,你的生活、学习、出行等方面都发生了很多变化。请以 Changes in My Life 为题,写一篇短文介绍这些改变,并说说始终不变的东西。80-120词。
二、写作目标
1. 能够正确区分并运用一般过去时和现在完成时描述今昔变化
2. 清晰对比过去与现在的不同生活状态
3. 表达自己对生活变化的感受,点明不变的温暖内核
三、写作分析
· 时态:描述过去用一般过去时、used to do;描述现在、至今的变化结果用一般现在时、现在完成时
· 人称:第一人称(I, my, me, my family)
· 思路点拨:
a. 开头:总起,点明如今生活和小学时相比有很大不同
b. 正文:从上学出行、居住环境、学习方式三个方面,对比过去和现在的变化
c. 结尾:总结变化带来的成长,点明不变的家人的爱与幸福
四、写作模板(表格版)
段落
写作环节
万能模板句子
开头
总起引入
Now I am a middle school student. My life has changed a lot since I was in primary school.
正文1
对比过去+现在(出行/学校)
I used to ______. But now I ______.
正文2
对比过去+现在(居住/学习)
My home/study life also changed a lot. I used to ______, however now I ______.
结尾
总结+不变的内核
Many things have changed, but one thing never changes. It is ______. I love my life.
五、范文(中英对照)
英文范文
Changes in My Life
Now I am a junior high school student. My life has changed a lot since primary school.
I used to walk to school with my parents because my primary school was near my home. Now my school is farther, so I take the bus with my friends every day. We used to live in a small flat, but we have moved into a bigger one. I also become more outgoing and confident in my study now.
Lots of things have changed, but the love and happiness from my family always stay the same. I feel lucky and happy every day.
中文翻译
我生活中的变化
现在我是一名初中生。自从小学以来,我的生活发生了很大的变化。
以前我的小学离家很近,我常常和父母走路去上学。现在学校更远了,所以我每天和朋友们一起坐公交上学。我们以前住在小小的公寓里,现在搬进了更大的房子。学习上的我也变得更加开朗、自信了。
很多事物都改变了,但家人给予我的爱与幸福始终不变。我每天都感到幸运又开心。
六、核心素材·好词佳句
好词
· used to do 过去常常
· has changed a lot 发生了巨大变化
· farther 更远的
· confident 自信的
· stay the same 保持不变
佳句
1. My life has been different from what it was before. 我的生活和过去大不相同。
2. Great changes have taken place in my life. 我的生活发生了巨大的改变。
3. No matter how much things change, love will always be there. 无论事物如何变迁,爱永远都在。
七、学生填空练习版(仿写巩固)
Changes in My Life
Now I am a junior high school student. My life ______ (change) a lot since I was in primary school.
I ______ (use to) ______ to school with my parents. But now my school is ______ (far), so I ______ (take) the bus with my classmates every day. We also ______ (move) into a new and bigger house. I am more ______ (confidence) when I study now.
Many things ______ (change), but the warm love from my family ______ (stay) the same all the time. I really enjoy my life now.
(答案:has changed;used to go;farther;take;have moved;confident;have changed;stays)
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