内容正文:
专题08 书面表达
基础必练
主题01 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁抚顺顺城区·期末)
动物是人类的好朋友,学校英语社团正在举行主题为“My favorite animal”的演讲比赛,假设你是李华,请写一篇演讲稿来介绍你最喜欢的动物吧!
内容包含:
(1)介绍你最喜爱的动物,如性格,外貌等。
(2)描述你与它之间的特别的或者幸福的相处经历。
(3)动物是人类的好朋友,呼吁人类保护动物。
注意:
(1)词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal.
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Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳铁西区·期末)
在我们成长的道路上,总会遇到一些闪闪发光的人。请准备一篇约80词的演讲稿,在班级活动中向全体同学介绍一位你由衷敬佩的榜样人物。
内容包括:
1. 榜样身份 (如:家人、老师、朋友、公众人物等) ;
2. 详述至少两点你敬佩该人物的原因;
3. 这位榜样人物带给你的影响。
写作要求:
1. 层次清晰,语言准确、流畅,语法规范,拼写及标点正确。
2. 紧扣主题,完整覆盖上述三点内容要求。
My role model
Dear classmates,
On our growth journey, we meet shining stars.
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Thank you for listening.
Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳沈河区·期末)
假如你是李辉,Teen Life Magazine邀请你写一篇以 “我最喜欢的爱好” (My Favourite Hobby) 为题目的演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的爱好是什么;
2. 为什么喜欢这个爱好;
3. 对未来的期待。
注意:
1. 词数80-100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
My Favourite Hobby
Hello! I am Li Hui.
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主题02 主题征文
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳辽中区·期末)
假设你是李华,参加学校举办的以“It is important to save water”为题的征文比赛,请你用英文写一篇征文。
内容包括:
(1) 水的重要性;
(2) 如何节约用水;
(3) 发出号召。
注意:
(1) 词数80~100;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
It is important to save water
Water is important in our lives.
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Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁丹东凤城·期末)
学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Special Day”的英文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你写一篇英语征文,讲述你的故事,并分享它对你的特殊意义。
内容要点:
1. What happened on that day?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. How does the day affect you?
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2. 需包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
3. 词数80—100.
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Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁大连西岗区·期末)
爱是付出,是陪伴,是支持,是分享。在生活中, 我们付出爱: 学校里随时向老师同学提供帮助,社区、敬老院里参加志愿者活动……在生活中,我们也收获爱: 享受家人制作的美味佳肴,得到父母、师长的各种关爱和帮助,假日里家人朋友陪伴我们的休闲出游……假如你是李辉,学校英文网站正在开展以“My memory of love”为题目的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文,积极参与投稿,分享你的爱的记忆。
内容包括:
(1)分享你的爱的记忆;
(2)介绍你的感悟。
注意::
(1)词数 80 左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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Passage 4
(24-25七下·辽宁大连中山区·期末)
假设你是李辉,正在参加市文旅局主题为“大连之夏,山海与你”的短视频文案征集活动。请你聚焦山海,为夏日大连撰写短视频文案。
(一)内容提示:
1. 介绍夏日大连;
2. 表达真实情感;
3. 发出诚挚邀请。
(二)要求:
1. 词数60左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名,人名;
3. 要包含所给全部信息,可适当发挥。
Hello, I’m Li Hui. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 5
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳浑南区·期末)
央视《榜样》节目持续热播,节目中那些平凡而伟大的时代楷模,用他们的实际行动诠释着责任与担当,感动并激励着无数人。假设你是李辉,请以《The Power of the Role Model》为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 介绍他/她的事迹;
2. 谈谈他/她对你的影响;
3. 分享你的感悟。
注意:
1. 字数80~100词;
2. 条理清晰,层次分明;
3. 不得出现真实人名、校名。
The Power of the Role Model
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 6
(24-25七下·辽宁大连瓦房店·期末)
每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。旅行可以给我们带来新奇的体验,帮助我们开阔眼界,了解和探索世界。回顾以往,哪一次旅行给你留下了难忘的印象呢?请你以 “An Unforgettable Trip” 为题,根据以下导图提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行,词数80词左右。
An Unforgettable trip
When
Where
Activities
Feeling
注意事项:
必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
1. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
2. 不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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主题03 分享信
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁丹东东港·期末)
假如你是李辉,你的英国笔友Peter想了解你近期参加的一次学校组织的旅行的经历。请你根据下面的思维导图给Peter写一封回信介绍一下你的学校旅行经历。
注意:1. 60字左右。
2. 可以在思维导图的基础上适当增加细节。
3. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
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Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳皇姑区·期末)
假设你是李辉,你的国外笔友David发来邮件想与你交流有关对未来职业的看法,请你根据以下提示,给David回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)未来职业的重要性;
(2)选择未来职业的建议;
(3)你的期望。
写作要求:
(1)短文需包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,逻辑清晰;
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息;
(3)词数:60-80词;
(4)邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:
career ( 职业),skill,subject (科目),interest
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁葫芦岛兴城·期末)
和家人的每次旅行都是一段值得一生珍藏的美好记忆。假设你是李辉,现在正在和家人在某地度假,请根据下列内容提示,给你的笔友 Steve写一封电子邮件,分享一下你难忘的家庭旅行时光。
内容提示:
(1)介绍你和家人度假的地点及天气情况;
(2)描述此时你和你的家人正在进行的活动;
(3)表达你本次旅行的感受或想法。
写作要求:
(1)词数70-90,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)内容应包括以上所有要点提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得出现任何真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Steve,
How is it going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
Passage 4
(24-25七下·辽宁阜新太平区·期末)
假定你是宋扬,最近正和英国笔友Charlie通过邮件谈论各自旅行的经历。请你用英文向他介绍你的一次旅行经历。内容包括:
(1)时间地点;
(2)具体做的事:
(3)旅行的感受。
注意:
(1)词数80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Charlie,
I’m very glad to tell you about one of my trips. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please write to me and tell me about your trip too.
Yours,
Song Yang
Passage 5
(24-25七下·辽宁抚顺新抚区·期末)
假如你是李华,正值暑假,今天和家人正在黄山旅行。请你根据提示内容,给你的朋友David写一封电子邮件,告诉他你现在的暑假生活。
内容:
(1) 昨天的天气;做过的事;
(2) 今天的天气;正在做的事;
(3) 你的旅行感受。
要求:
(1) 词数60-80;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear David,
How is it going? I’m here at Mount Huangshan with my family now.
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Yours,
Li Hua
进阶提升
主题01 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁大连·期末)
丰富多彩的体育运动给我们的生活增添了许多生机和活力,游泳可以塑身,跑步可以培养耐力,打篮球可以增强团队精神……作为一名中学生,你最喜欢的运动是什么?请给校园专栏写一篇英语稿,介绍你的体育活动情况。
内容提示:
(1) What’s your favourite sport?
(2) Why do you like that kind of sport?
(3) What can you get from the sport?
要求:
1.中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 100词左右。
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Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁大连沙河口区·期末)
假定你是李辉,你校英语社团将举办主题为“_______ makes me happy”的英文演讲活动。请你用英文写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)什么使你快乐;
(2)讲述快乐的经历;
(3)分享收获和感悟。
注意:
(1)词数为60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
_______ makes me happy
Hello everyone! I’m happy to be here, and share my story of happiness. For me, _______ makes me happy.
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That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
主题02 主题征文
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁本溪·期末)
亲爱的同学,七年级的学校生活接近尾声了。假设你的英语老师近期想要开展一个“English Day”活动,她想让大家回顾自己刚进入中学第一天时的见闻和感受,请你以“My First Day in Middle School”为题,写一篇英语文章并在活动中与大家分享。
注意:
(1)词数为 60~80 词;
(2)文中不能出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
My First Day in Middle School
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Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁抚顺东洲区·期末)
“国家喊你减肥了”。近期,国家卫健委宣布,将持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动。同学们,你的生活习惯健康吗?你喜欢吃什么食物?你喜欢什么运动?请你根据以下提示内容,以“My habits”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点包括:
1. What’s your eating habit?
2. What’s your favorite sport and how often do you play it?
3. What do you think of good habits?
要求:
1. 必须包含提示中所给的内容,并进行相应拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于 60词。
My habits
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Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳于洪区·期末)
同学们好,《中学生英语报》的学生生活栏目正在征集学生学习爱好方面的文稿,请同学们以“My Hobby”为题,向报社投稿。词数:60左右。
要求:
1. 围绕主题,进行叙述;
2. 鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分;
3. 字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范。
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Passage 4
(24-25七下·辽宁鞍山·期末)
每个人的个人经历不同,每天的感受也不同,或兴奋、快乐,或沮丧、懊恼。在你的记忆中,一定会有那么特别的一天,给你带来特殊的感受与回忆。请根据以下要点和要求,以“My Most Special Day”为题,写一篇英语作文。
写作要点:
1. 哪一天对你来说最特别;
2. 这一天发生了什么特别的事情;
3. 你的感受。
写作要求:
1. 参考以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息 (校名、姓名和地名等);
4. 词数:80-100词。
My Most Special Day
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Passage 5
(24-25七下·辽宁营口·期末)
健康就是财富。为了呼吁全体同学积极参与健康行动,学校将举行主题为“与健康同行”的征文活动。请你根据内容提示,以“My healthy life”为题,向同学们介绍一下你的健康生活。
内容提示:
我的健康生活
1. 平衡饮食
(1)吃多种食物(fruit, vegetables…);
(2)远离垃圾食品(too much fat, oil…);
2. 运动
(1)介绍你的日常运动;
(2)运动对你的影响;
3. 保持乐观心态,消除不良情绪
健康生活的重要性
(1)60—80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My healthy life
Health is wealth. Today, more and more people pay much attention to health. Let me share my healthy life with you.
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Passage 6
(24-25七下·辽宁锦州·期末)
请以“A Day to Remember”为题,写一篇英语短文,描述你生活中难忘的一天。
提示:
1. 简要说明这是怎样的一天(时间、天气等);
2. 描述这一天发生的主要事情;
3. 阐述为什么这一天让你难以忘怀。
要求:
1. 文中要包含所给的提示信息,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数70—80词;
3. 要求字迹工整,语句通顺,条理清晰;
4. 文中不得出现真实的学校,班级和姓名。
A Day to Remember
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主题03 游记
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁盘锦兴隆台区·期末)根据要求完成作文,并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
Please write a diary about your last school trip.
要求:
1. 文中不可以出现真实的姓名;
2. 60词左右。
Friday, 30 May
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Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁盘锦双台子区·期末)
每个城市都有其特有的文化。假如你是李华,你们班安排了半天的“City Culture”探寻活动。请你根据以下提示和写作要求,写一篇英语短文, 介绍探寻我们的城市盘锦文化的一个经历,再谈谈对这项活动的感受。
提示:
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do/see there?
3. How did you feel?
4. What did you learn?
要求:
1. 词数:80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 写作内容包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 语言准确,层次清晰,书写规范;
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Last week, my class took part in an activity—“City Culture” in Panjin.
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专题08 书面表达
基础必练
主题01 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁抚顺顺城区·期末)
动物是人类的好朋友,学校英语社团正在举行主题为“My favorite animal”的演讲比赛,假设你是李华,请写一篇演讲稿来介绍你最喜欢的动物吧!
内容包含:
(1)介绍你最喜爱的动物,如性格,外貌等。
(2)描述你与它之间的特别的或者幸福的相处经历。
(3)动物是人类的好朋友,呼吁人类保护动物。
注意:
(1)词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal.
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is my dog, Coco. She has big eyes and soft fur. She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me. Also, Coco brings me lots of happiness. When I feel sad, she sits beside me quietly. Every weekend, we play together in the park. I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.
Animals are our best friends. They make our lives colorful. So let’s protect them and give them warm homes. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,介绍自己最喜欢的动物;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍它的性格,外貌,以及与它之间的相处经历;
第三步,呼吁人类保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②in the park在公园
[高分句型]
①She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me.(时间状语从句)
②I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.(and连接并列句)
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳铁西区·期末)
在我们成长的道路上,总会遇到一些闪闪发光的人。请准备一篇约80词的演讲稿,在班级活动中向全体同学介绍一位你由衷敬佩的榜样人物。
内容包括:
1. 榜样身份 (如:家人、老师、朋友、公众人物等) ;
2. 详述至少两点你敬佩该人物的原因;
3. 这位榜样人物带给你的影响。
写作要求:
1. 层次清晰,语言准确、流畅,语法规范,拼写及标点正确。
2. 紧扣主题,完整覆盖上述三点内容要求。
My role model
Dear classmates,
On our growth journey, we meet shining stars.
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】One possible version
My role model Dear classmates,
On our growth journey, we meet shining stars. My role model is my math teacher, Mr. Wang.
I admire him for two main reasons. First, he is extremely patient. Whenever we have difficult problems, he explains them again and again until we fully understand. Second, he makes math interesting. He uses games and real-life examples in class.
Because of Mr. Wang, I’ve become more interested in math. I also learn to be patient and try different ways to solve problems.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,直接点明主题,引出自己的榜样人物;
②第二步,分别阐述敬佩的原因和榜样带来的影响;
③第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①admire钦佩
②again and again一次次
③because of由于
[高分句型]
①Whenever we have difficult problems, he explains them again and again until we fully understand. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②I also learn to be patient and try different ways to solve problems. (不定式表目的)
Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳沈河区·期末)
假如你是李辉,Teen Life Magazine邀请你写一篇以 “我最喜欢的爱好” (My Favourite Hobby) 为题目的演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 你最喜欢的爱好是什么;
2. 为什么喜欢这个爱好;
3. 对未来的期待。
注意:
1. 词数80-100,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
My Favourite Hobby
Hello! I am Li Hui.
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【答案】范文:
My Favourite Hobby
Hello! I am Li Hui. My favourite hobby is reading books. I love reading because it takes me on exciting adventures and helps me learn new things. Every day, I read for half an hour after school. It makes me relax and improves my English skills. For example, I enjoy mystery stories and science books. In the future, I hope to travel to places I read about and write my own stories. I also want to join a book club to share ideas with friends. Reading will always be a special part of my life. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出作者最喜欢的爱好;
第二步,介绍作者喜欢该爱好的原因;
第三步,介绍自己对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②hope to do希望做某事
③for example举例
[高分句型]
①I love reading because it takes me on exciting adventures and helps me learn new things. (原因状语从句)
②In the future, I hope to travel to places I read about and write my own stories.(定语从句)
主题02 主题征文
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳辽中区·期末)
假设你是李华,参加学校举办的以“It is important to save water”为题的征文比赛,请你用英文写一篇征文。
内容包括:
(1) 水的重要性;
(2) 如何节约用水;
(3) 发出号召。
注意:
(1) 词数80~100;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
It is important to save water
Water is important in our lives.
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【答案】范文:
It is important to save water
Water is important in our lives. Without water, neither plants nor animals could survive. Yet many regions face severe shortages due to waste and pollution. To save water, simple actions matter. Turn off taps tightly, collect rainwater for plants, and shorten shower time. Schools can install water-saving devices and educate students.
Let’s start today! Every drop saved protects our future. Together, we can ensure this precious resource lasts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为一般现在时(陈述事实)和一般将来时(号召行动);
③提示:需涵盖水的重要性、节水措施及号召三部分,注意逻辑衔接与语言简洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开篇点题(水的重要性);
第二步:列举节水方法(家庭/校园场景);
第三步:发出倡议(呼吁行动)。
[亮点词汇]
①precious resource珍贵资源
②due to由于
③severe shortages严重的缺乏
[高分句型]
①Without water, neither plants nor animals could survive.(neither... nor... 句式)
②Together, we can ensure this precious resource lasts.(宾语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁丹东凤城·期末)
学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Special Day”的英文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你写一篇英语征文,讲述你的故事,并分享它对你的特殊意义。
内容要点:
1. What happened on that day?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. How does the day affect you?
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2. 需包含所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
3. 词数80—100.
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【答案】例文:
My Special Day
Last summer, I had a really special day—my first time cooking for my family.
In the morning, I decided to make breakfast. I tried to fry eggs and make sandwiches. Though the eggs were a bit burnt and the sandwiches looked messy, my family ate them happily. Their smiles made me so proud.
This day is special because it taught me responsibility and the joy of giving. Now, I often help in the kitchen. It has made me more independent and brought our family closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”,描述事件经过和感受,结尾部分可涉及一般现在时,说明该事件对现在的影响;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括事件描述、个人感受以及事件对自己的影响。考生应注意包含所有内容要点,适当发挥以使行文连贯,并突出该事件对自己的特殊意义。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。简要介绍要分享一个对自己有特殊意义的日子;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述那天发生了什么事件、自己的感受以及该事件对自己的影响;
第三步,书写结语。总结该事件对自己的重要性,或表达对未来的积极展望。
[亮点词汇]
①a bit 有点儿
②help in 在……方面帮忙
③bring...closer 使……更亲近
[高分句型]
①This day is special because it taught me responsibility and the joy of giving. (because引导原因状语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁大连西岗区·期末)
爱是付出,是陪伴,是支持,是分享。在生活中, 我们付出爱: 学校里随时向老师同学提供帮助,社区、敬老院里参加志愿者活动……在生活中,我们也收获爱: 享受家人制作的美味佳肴,得到父母、师长的各种关爱和帮助,假日里家人朋友陪伴我们的休闲出游……假如你是李辉,学校英文网站正在开展以“My memory of love”为题目的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文,积极参与投稿,分享你的爱的记忆。
内容包括:
(1)分享你的爱的记忆;
(2)介绍你的感悟。
注意::
(1)词数 80 左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【答案】例文
My Memory of Love
Love is everywhere in our life. One of my most precious memories of love happened during my illness. I had a high fever and had to stay in bed. My parents took turns taking care of me. They made delicious porridge for me and watched over me day and night. My classmates also came to visit me, bringing me schoolwork and sharing funny stories to cheer me up. This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force. It gives us strength and courage in difficult times. We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分享你的爱的记忆;
第二步,书写结语,介绍你的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①had a high fever 发高烧
②stay in bed躺在床上
③cheer up振作起来
[高分句型]
①This experience made me realize that love is the most powerful force.(宾语从句)
②We should cherish the love we receive and also spread love to others.(and连接的句子)
Passage 4
(24-25七下·辽宁大连中山区·期末)
假设你是李辉,正在参加市文旅局主题为“大连之夏,山海与你”的短视频文案征集活动。请你聚焦山海,为夏日大连撰写短视频文案。
(一)内容提示:
1. 介绍夏日大连;
2. 表达真实情感;
3. 发出诚挚邀请。
(二)要求:
1. 词数60左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名,人名;
3. 要包含所给全部信息,可适当发挥。
Hello, I’m Li Hui. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, I’m Li Hui. Summer in Dalian is magical! The golden beaches sparkle under the sun, while the cool breeze carries the scent of salt and pine. Here, you can hike lush trails by day and watch sunset hues paint the ocean by night. Every wave whispers adventure and every peak invites exploration. My heart belongs to this coastal paradise, where nature’s beauty feels like a warm embrace.
Come and explore Dalian’s beauty—where mountains and sea welcome you with open arms!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:题目要求根据提示介绍夏日的大连,写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍大连的夏日有魔力;
第二步,根据所给要点,介绍夏日大连的魅力,表达对大连的热爱;
第三步,书写结语,发出真挚的邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①golden beaches金色的海滩
②cool breeze凉爽的微风
③belong to属于
[高分句型]
My heart belongs to this coastal paradise, where nature’s beauty feels like a warm embrace. (where引导的定语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳浑南区·期末)
央视《榜样》节目持续热播,节目中那些平凡而伟大的时代楷模,用他们的实际行动诠释着责任与担当,感动并激励着无数人。假设你是李辉,请以《The Power of the Role Model》为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 介绍他/她的事迹;
2. 谈谈他/她对你的影响;
3. 分享你的感悟。
注意:
1. 字数80~100词;
2. 条理清晰,层次分明;
3. 不得出现真实人名、校名。
The Power of the Role Model
Dear editor,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】参考范文:
The Power of the Role Model
Dear editor,
Among the inspiring role models featured on CCTV’s Role Models program, Ms. Zhang, a rural teacher, has left the deepest impression on me. She has devoted her life to helping girls get an education. Though in poor health, she worked hard to build a school, letting many girls from poor families go to college. Her story touches me deeply. When I want to give up studying, I think of her. It encourages me to keep going.
From her, I learn that small actions can make a big difference. Everyone can be a light to others by doing their best.
Yours
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,简要说明榜样身份;
第二步,详细介绍榜样的品质、具体事例等;
第三步,谈谈从榜样那里学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
devote one’s life to doing sth奉献一生做某事
give up放弃
think of想到
make a big difference起到很大作用
[高分句型]
①When I want to give up studying, I think of her. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②From her, I learn that small actions can make a big difference. (that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25七下·辽宁大连瓦房店·期末)
每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。旅行可以给我们带来新奇的体验,帮助我们开阔眼界,了解和探索世界。回顾以往,哪一次旅行给你留下了难忘的印象呢?请你以 “An Unforgettable Trip” 为题,根据以下导图提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行,词数80词左右。
An Unforgettable trip
When
Where
Activities
Feeling
注意事项:
必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
1. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
2. 不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
An Unforgettable Trip_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
An Unforgettable Trip
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip with my parents. We went to Hangzhou, a beautiful city in the south of China. We visited the West Lake, rode bikes around it, and tasted many delicious local foods.
The weather was sunny and the air was fresh. I took lots of photos to remember the happy moments. This trip not only brought me joy but also helped me learn more about Chinese culture. I really enjoyed it and hope to visit it again one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,讲述一次难忘的旅行经历。
② 时态:主要使用一般过去时,描述过去具体发生的事情。
③ 提示:围绕“时间、地点、活动、感受”四个方面展开,内容真实具体,情感自然流露。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明旅行的时间和人物;
第二步:具体说明去的地点,并展开介绍活动内容;
第三步:描述天气、环境及个人感受;
第四步:总结旅行带来的收获和印象。
[亮点词汇]
① take photos 拍照
② learn more about 了解更多关于……
③ not only...but also... 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
This trip not only brought me joy, but also helped me learn more about Chinese culture. (not only...but also...结构)
主题03 分享信
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁丹东东港·期末)
假如你是李辉,你的英国笔友Peter想了解你近期参加的一次学校组织的旅行的经历。请你根据下面的思维导图给Peter写一封回信介绍一下你的学校旅行经历。
注意:1. 60字左右。
2. 可以在思维导图的基础上适当增加细节。
3. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
Last Saturday, we went on a school trip to the zoo by bus. We started at 8 am and arrived at about 8:30. There are many animals in the zoo like pandas, monkeys, giraffes and so on. We felt very excited to see them. The pandas looked so lovely, and the monkeys were very lively. We took many photos. In the afternoon, we also watched a bear show. It was wonderful.
This trip is really a great experience for me. Animals make our world colourful and we should protect them. Do you think so?
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:本文以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:题目要求根据提示向笔友介绍近期参加的一次学校组织的旅行的经历,包括时间、地点、具体活动以及自己的收获和感想。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题(已给出);
第二步,根据所给要点,依次介绍参观动物园的时间、地点和具体活动;
第三步,最后谈自己的收获和感想。
[亮点词汇]
①go on a trip to 到……去旅行
②and so on 等等
③take photos 拍照
[高分句型]
①There are many animals in the zoo like pandas, monkeys, giraffes and so on.(用there be句型表示某地有某物)
②We felt very excited to see them.(动词不定式作原因状语)
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳皇姑区·期末)
假设你是李辉,你的国外笔友David发来邮件想与你交流有关对未来职业的看法,请你根据以下提示,给David回一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)未来职业的重要性;
(2)选择未来职业的建议;
(3)你的期望。
写作要求:
(1)短文需包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,逻辑清晰;
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息;
(3)词数:60-80词;
(4)邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:
career ( 职业),skill,subject (科目),interest
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】 Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email. Choosing a future career is very important because it affects our happiness and life goals. My advice is to consider your interests and skills. For example, if you love science, you might become a researcher. Also, think about which subjects you are good at. Personally, I hope to be a teacher because I enjoy helping others. I believe finding a career you love will bring success.
Yours, Li Hui
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:邮件(建议类);
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:需涵盖职业重要性、选择建议、个人期望三要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步:开篇回应邮件,点明职业选择的重要性(影响幸福感和人生目标);
第二步:给出具体建议(兴趣+技能+擅长科目结合)并举例说明;
第三步:表达个人职业期望(教师)并总结核心观点。
【亮点词汇】
①for example例如
②be good at擅长
【高分句型】
①Choosing a future career is very important because it affects our happiness and life goals.(原因状语从句,动名词作主语)
②I believe finding a career you love will bring success.(宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁葫芦岛兴城·期末)
和家人的每次旅行都是一段值得一生珍藏的美好记忆。假设你是李辉,现在正在和家人在某地度假,请根据下列内容提示,给你的笔友 Steve写一封电子邮件,分享一下你难忘的家庭旅行时光。
内容提示:
(1)介绍你和家人度假的地点及天气情况;
(2)描述此时你和你的家人正在进行的活动;
(3)表达你本次旅行的感受或想法。
写作要求:
(1)词数70-90,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)内容应包括以上所有要点提示,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得出现任何真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Steve,
How is it going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Steve,
How is it going? I’m on a vacation in Sanya with my family. We come here by plane. The weather is sunny and hot. Many places here are very beautiful. It’s 3 o’clock in the afternoon right now. I am writing to you. My father is swimming in the sea. My brother is playing beach volleyball with some children, and my mother is taking photos of him. All of us are having fun.
I enjoy my vacation in Sanya. I feel very happy and relaxed here.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时和现在进行时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍你和家人度假的地点及天气情况。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,描述此时你和你的家人正在进行的活动。
第三步,书写结语,表达你本次旅行的感受或想法。
[亮点词汇]
①on a vacation度假
②by plane乘飞机
③play beach volleyball打沙滩排球
[高分句型]
①My brother is playing beach volleyball with some children, and my mother is taking photos of him.(and连接的句子)
②My father is swimming in the sea.(现在进行时的句子)
Passage 4
(24-25七下·辽宁阜新太平区·期末)
假定你是宋扬,最近正和英国笔友Charlie通过邮件谈论各自旅行的经历。请你用英文向他介绍你的一次旅行经历。内容包括:
(1)时间地点;
(2)具体做的事:
(3)旅行的感受。
注意:
(1)词数80-100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Charlie,
I’m very glad to tell you about one of my trips. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please write to me and tell me about your trip too.
Yours,
Song Yang
【答案】范文:
Dear Charlie,
I’m very glad to tell you about one of my trips. Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. We visited the Great Wall first. It was so long and amazing. Climbing it made me feel the wisdom of ancient people. Then we went to the Palace Museum. There were many old and beautiful things. At last, we visited Tian’anmen Square. It was so grand. We also tried Beijing Duck, which was delicious. I felt very excited and happy. It was a great and unforgettable trip.
Please write to me and tell me about your trip too.
Yours,
Song Yang
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:书信体记叙文,分享旅行经历 ;
②时态:一般过去时(描述过去旅行经历);
③提示:涵盖旅行时间、地点、同行人员、具体活动以及感受。
【写作步骤】
第一步:开篇点明写信目的,引出要分享的旅行经历;
第二步:按顺序描述旅行中具体做的事;
第三步:表达旅行感受,总结旅行是美好且难忘的。
【亮点词汇】 ①the Great Wall长城
②the Palace Museum故宫博物馆
【高分句型】
①Climbing it made me feel the wisdom of ancient people. (动名词短语作主语)
②We also tried Beijing Duck, which was delicious. (非限制性定语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25七下·辽宁抚顺新抚区·期末)
假如你是李华,正值暑假,今天和家人正在黄山旅行。请你根据提示内容,给你的朋友David写一封电子邮件,告诉他你现在的暑假生活。
内容:
(1) 昨天的天气;做过的事;
(2) 今天的天气;正在做的事;
(3) 你的旅行感受。
要求:
(1) 词数60-80;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear David,
How is it going? I’m here at Mount Huangshan with my family now.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How is it going? I’m here at Mount Huangshan with my family now.
Yesterday, we took a bus here. The weather was cloudy, but we saw many pretty flowers. We ate dumplings for lunch—they were delicious!
Today, the sun is shining, but it’s a little windy. We are climbing the mountain now. Mount Huangshan is a magical place. Look! A monkey is jumping on the tree over there!
I feel happy today. The mountains are beautiful in the sunlight, and I love this travel experience with my family here. What about your summer?
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的内容,包括昨天的天气、做过的事,今天的天气、正在做的事以及旅行感受,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我现在正和家人在黄山”来引出下文要介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“昨天的天气、做过的事,今天的天气、正在做的事以及旅行感受”几个方面重点介绍自己的暑假生活;
第三步,书写结语。邮件结尾已给出,无需再写。
[亮点词汇]
①a little 一点儿
②What about… ……怎么样
[高分句型]
①The mountains are beautiful in the sunlight, and I love this travel experience with my family here.(并列句)
进阶提升
主题01 演讲稿
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁大连·期末)
丰富多彩的体育运动给我们的生活增添了许多生机和活力,游泳可以塑身,跑步可以培养耐力,打篮球可以增强团队精神……作为一名中学生,你最喜欢的运动是什么?请给校园专栏写一篇英语稿,介绍你的体育活动情况。
内容提示:
(1) What’s your favourite sport?
(2) Why do you like that kind of sport?
(3) What can you get from the sport?
要求:
1.中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 100词左右。
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【答案】例文:
My favourite sports
Nowadays, more and more teenagers enjoy playing basketball because it is very interesting and exciting. I am no exception. In my opinion, it is more than a ball game because I’ve learned a lot from it.
First, I feel excited when watching the game. When I concentrate on watching the game, I will feel I am part of the game. It has taught me that if I want to do something well, I should put my heart into it. Then, when I play basketball, I can build up my body. Before playing basketball, I was a frequent visitor to the hospital. But since I started to play basketball, I have been in good health. Moreover, it is also a platform to show myself and give me confidence in myself. Last but not least, it has taught me to believe others. Basketball games ask for team work, and you can’t win the match by yourself. You should believe your friend, your teammates and yourself.
Briefly, I should express thanks to my favourite sport basketball, because it has given me pleasure, good health, confidence and friendship.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的运动;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍你喜欢这项运动的原因及你从中得到的收获;
第三步,书写结语。表达你对该项运动的感情。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more teenagers越来越多的青少年
②build up加强
③frequent经常的
④platform平台
[高分句型]
①It has taught me that if I want to do something well, I should put my heart into it. (宾语从句;条件状语从句)
②Briefly, I should express thanks to my favourite sport basketball, because it has given me pleasure, good health, confidence and friendship. (原因状语从句)
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁大连沙河口区·期末)
假定你是李辉,你校英语社团将举办主题为“_______ makes me happy”的英文演讲活动。请你用英文写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
(1)什么使你快乐;
(2)讲述快乐的经历;
(3)分享收获和感悟。
注意:
(1)词数为60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
_______ makes me happy
Hello everyone! I’m happy to be here, and share my story of happiness. For me, _______ makes me happy.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文:
Nature Makes me Happy Hello everyone! I’m happy to be here, and share my story of happiness. For me, nature makes me happy.
Walking in the park, listening to the birds sing, and feeling the soft wind on my face always fills me with joy. Once, I went hiking with my friends. We climbed up a mountain and were rewarded with a breathtaking view of the valley below. The fresh air, the green trees, and the sound of running water made me feel so alive and content. It was a moment of pure happiness that I will never forget.
Nature reminds me to slow down and appreciate the beauty around me. It teaches me patience and the importance of being present. Every time I spend time outdoors, I come back feeling refreshed and ready to face life’s challenges.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题——什么使我快乐;
第二步,描述自己快乐的经历;
第三步,总结通过这次经历获得的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②go hiking远足,徒步旅行
③remind sb to sth提醒某人做某事
④slow down慢下来,放慢速度
[高分句型]
①Walking in the park, listening to the birds sing, and feeling the soft wind on my face always fills me with joy.(动名词短语作主语)
②It was a moment of pure happiness that I will never forget.(定语从句)
主题02 主题征文
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁本溪·期末)
亲爱的同学,七年级的学校生活接近尾声了。假设你的英语老师近期想要开展一个“English Day”活动,她想让大家回顾自己刚进入中学第一天时的见闻和感受,请你以“My First Day in Middle School”为题,写一篇英语文章并在活动中与大家分享。
注意:
(1)词数为 60~80 词;
(2)文中不能出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。
My First Day in Middle School
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【答案】One Possible Sample:
My First Day in Middle School
My first day in middle school was exciting and I was a little afraid! Everything looked so fresh—new buildings, a huge playground, and many new faces. I walked into my classroom and met my classmates. We smiled and said hello to each other. My teacher walked in and greeted us warmly. She told us about our class rules and subjects. Everyone was so friendly. I felt happy and couldn’t wait to learn more here. What a great start!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:围绕初中第一天的经历展开,涵盖了新环境、同学、老师等要点,通过具体场景描写展现了第一天的感受,细节丰富且突出了 “兴奋又有点害怕”“很棒的开始” 等核心情感。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明初中第一天的整体感受 —— 既兴奋又有点害怕,并描述新环境的新鲜之处,如崭新的建筑、巨大的操场和许多新面孔。
第二步,接着叙述进入教室后的经历,包括遇见同学、老师走进教室打招呼、老师介绍班规和课程等场景。
第三步,最后表达自己的感受,即感到开心并期待在这里学习更多知识,总结这是一个很棒的开始。
[亮点词汇]
①a little afraid有点害怕
②new faces新面孔
③walk into走进
④greet warmly热情地打招呼
⑤class rules班规
[高分句型]
I felt happy and couldn’t wait to learn more here.(and连接并列成分)
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁抚顺东洲区·期末)
“国家喊你减肥了”。近期,国家卫健委宣布,将持续推进“体重管理年”三年行动。同学们,你的生活习惯健康吗?你喜欢吃什么食物?你喜欢什么运动?请你根据以下提示内容,以“My habits”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点包括:
1. What’s your eating habit?
2. What’s your favorite sport and how often do you play it?
3. What do you think of good habits?
要求:
1. 必须包含提示中所给的内容,并进行相应拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
3. 不少于 60词。
My habits
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【答案】One possible version:
My habits
Health is very important to everyone. I have healthy habits.
I like sports. My favorite sport is running and I run every day at school. In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well.
As for eating habits, I eat fruit and vegetables with every meal because they can make me healthy. I don’t drink soft drinks because they have a lot of sugar and are bad for me.
I think we should have good habits because they are helpful for us to keep strong and happy. What’s more, they are also very important to our body and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:文章紧扣主题,包含健康的重要性、个人的运动习惯、饮食习惯,以及对好习惯的看法,内容完整,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明健康对每个人都很重要,引出自己有健康的习惯,总起全文;
第二步,阐述运动习惯。说明自己喜欢运动,解释跑步的好处;介绍饮食习惯。提及每餐吃水果和蔬菜,不喝软饮料,从饮食角度体现健康习惯;
第三步,总结对好习惯的看法,指出好习惯有助于保持强壮和快乐,对身心都很重要,收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①healthy habits健康习惯
②be good for对……有益
③eating habits饮食习惯
④soft drinks软饮料
⑤keep strong保持强壮
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, running is good for me because it can make me happy and it also helps me study well.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I think we should have good habits because they are helpful for us to keep strong and happy.(运用宾语从句)
Passage 3
(24-25七下·辽宁沈阳于洪区·期末)
同学们好,《中学生英语报》的学生生活栏目正在征集学生学习爱好方面的文稿,请同学们以“My Hobby”为题,向报社投稿。词数:60左右。
要求:
1. 围绕主题,进行叙述;
2. 鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分;
3. 字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范。
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【答案】例文:
My Hobby
My hobby is reading. I started reading storybooks when I was six. I like reading because it opens a new world for me. I read every evening for half an hour. My favorite books are about animals. Reading makes me smart and happy. I hope to read more good books. Sometimes I share interesting stories from books with my classmates, and they always listen carefully. I plan to join the school reading club next term to meet more friends who love reading like me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,涵盖了爱好是什么、开始的时间、喜欢的原因、阅读时长、最喜欢的书籍类型、阅读带来的影响、与他人分享及未来计划等,注意不要遗漏这些要点,可适当添加细节,突出对阅读这一爱好的描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先介绍自己的爱好是阅读以及开始阅读的时间;
第二步,接着说明喜欢阅读的原因、阅读的时长、最喜欢的书籍类型以及阅读带来的影响;
第三步,最后讲述与同学分享书中故事的情况和加入学校阅读俱乐部的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth. 开始做某事
②open a new world 打开一个新世界
③every evening 每天晚上
④share...with... 和……分享……
⑤plan to do sth. 计划做某事
[高分句型]
①I like reading because it opens a new world for me.(because引导原因状语从句)
②Sometimes I share interesting stories from books with my classmates, and they always listen carefully.(and连接两个并列分句)
Passage 4
(24-25七下·辽宁鞍山·期末)
每个人的个人经历不同,每天的感受也不同,或兴奋、快乐,或沮丧、懊恼。在你的记忆中,一定会有那么特别的一天,给你带来特殊的感受与回忆。请根据以下要点和要求,以“My Most Special Day”为题,写一篇英语作文。
写作要点:
1. 哪一天对你来说最特别;
2. 这一天发生了什么特别的事情;
3. 你的感受。
写作要求:
1. 参考以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息 (校名、姓名和地名等);
4. 词数:80-100词。
My Most Special Day
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【答案】例文
My Most Special Day
My twelfth birthday is the most special day for me. That day, I thought no one remembered my birthday and felt a bit lonely after school. When I got home, the lights were off. Suddenly, the lights came on, and I saw my family and friends standing there! They shouted “Happy Birthday!” and gave me a big surprise party. The room was decorated beautifully, and there was a delicious birthday cake on the table. I was so surprised and happy! My heart felt warm. We played games, sang songs, and shared the cake. I laughed a lot and forgot my earlier sadness.
That day made me realize how much my family and friends love me. Their love is the most precious gift. I will never forget the happiness and warmth I felt.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍对自己来说最特别的一天;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍这一天发生了什么特别的事情;
第三步,分享感受并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①there be有
②go off停止运转
[高分句型]
①When I got home, the lights were off.(时间状语从句)
②That day made me realize how much my family and friends love me.(宾语从句)
Passage 5
(24-25七下·辽宁营口·期末)
健康就是财富。为了呼吁全体同学积极参与健康行动,学校将举行主题为“与健康同行”的征文活动。请你根据内容提示,以“My healthy life”为题,向同学们介绍一下你的健康生活。
内容提示:
我的健康生活
1. 平衡饮食
(1)吃多种食物(fruit, vegetables…);
(2)远离垃圾食品(too much fat, oil…);
2. 运动
(1)介绍你的日常运动;
(2)运动对你的影响;
3. 保持乐观心态,消除不良情绪
健康生活的重要性
(1)60—80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My healthy life
Health is wealth. Today, more and more people pay much attention to health. Let me share my healthy life with you.
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【答案】例文
My healthy life
Health is wealth. Today, more and more people pay much attention to health. Let me share my healthy life with you.
First, I keep a balanced diet. I eat different kinds of food, such as fruits, and vegetables. I stay away from junk food with too much fat and oil. Second, I exercise every day. I enjoy running and playing basketball. It helps me stay fit. Finally, I stay positive. When I feel stressed, I listen to music or talk to friends to relax.
A healthy life keeps me happy and strong. Let’s take action together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍自己的健康生活;
第三步,总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced diet均衡饮食
②different kinds of各种各样的
③such as例如
④stay away from远离
[高分句型]
①I enjoy running and playing basketball.(动名词作宾语)
②When I feel stressed, I listen to music or talk to friends to relax.(when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25七下·辽宁锦州·期末)
请以“A Day to Remember”为题,写一篇英语短文,描述你生活中难忘的一天。
提示:
1. 简要说明这是怎样的一天(时间、天气等);
2. 描述这一天发生的主要事情;
3. 阐述为什么这一天让你难以忘怀。
要求:
1. 文中要包含所给的提示信息,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数70—80词;
3. 要求字迹工整,语句通顺,条理清晰;
4. 文中不得出现真实的学校,班级和姓名。
A Day to Remember
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【答案】例文
A Day to Remember
There was a special day for me to remember.
Last Friday, the weather was sunny and warm. My friends Alice and Jack asked me to join them to teach some kids art lessons in the countryside. I am good at dancing, so I taught them how to dance. What’s more, Alice and Jack taught them how to draw pictures. With their help, the children could draw by themselves. We ended the day with some music and a funny dance happily. I will remember this special day forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:以“一般将来时”为主;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍这一天的时间和天气;
第二步,描述这一天发生的主要事情;
第三步,阐述为什么这一天让你难以忘怀。
[亮点词汇]
① join sb to do sth 加入某人做某事
② be good at 擅长
③ by themselves 独立地
④ end with 以……结束
[高分句型]
I am good at dancing, so I taught them how to dance.(因果并列句)
主题03 游记
Passage 1
(24-25七下·辽宁盘锦兴隆台区·期末)根据要求完成作文,并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
Please write a diary about your last school trip.
要求:
1. 文中不可以出现真实的姓名;
2. 60词左右。
Friday, 30 May
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【答案】Friday, 30 May
Today, we were glad to go on a school trip to the science museum. It was fantastic! We saw many interesting things. First, we explored the space hall and saw a model of the space station. Then we went to the robot hall. There were all kinds of robots. Some could play chess and others could dance. I was amazed. We also did a fun experiment. It was a great day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达,不要遗漏要点,可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍这次学校旅行的情况。
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①go on a trip去旅行
②be fantastic太棒了
③all kinds of各种各样的
④play chess下棋
[高分句型]
①Today, we were glad to go on a school trip to the science museum. (be glad to do sth结构)
②Some could play chess and others could dance. (并列句)
Passage 2
(24-25七下·辽宁盘锦双台子区·期末)
每个城市都有其特有的文化。假如你是李华,你们班安排了半天的“City Culture”探寻活动。请你根据以下提示和写作要求,写一篇英语短文, 介绍探寻我们的城市盘锦文化的一个经历,再谈谈对这项活动的感受。
提示:
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do/see there?
3. How did you feel?
4. What did you learn?
要求:
1. 词数:80 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 写作内容包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 语言准确,层次清晰,书写规范;
4. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Last week, my class took part in an activity—“City Culture” in Panjin.
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【答案】例文
Last week, my class took part in an activity—“City Culture” in Panjin.
We went to the Red Beach scenic area, a famous symbol of our city. The endless red seepweed looked amazing under the sun. A local elder shared how fishermen here have lived in harmony with nature for centuries, protecting the wetland while making a living. We even tried making a small craft with seepweed leaves.
I felt deeply connected to Panjin’s culture. It taught me that our city’s beauty comes not just from nature, but from people’s love and care for it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以 “一般过去时” 为主;
③提示:要求以李华的视角,介绍在盘锦参与 “City Culture” 探寻活动的经历,需包含去过的地方、所做所见、感受及收获,要点需齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明活动背景。引出班级参与的 “City Culture” 探寻活动及地点盘锦;
第二步,描述活动过程。具体说明去了红海滩景区,看到的景色、听到的故事以及参与的小活动;
第三步,抒发活动感悟。表达对盘锦文化的感受以及从中得到的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①scenic area景区
②live in harmony with 与…… 和谐相处
③make a craft 制作手工艺品
[高分句型]
①A local elder shared how fishermen here have lived in harmony with nature for centuries, protecting the wetland while making a living.(how 引导的宾语从句,及现在分词短语作伴随状语)
②It taught me that our city’s beauty comes not just from nature, but from people’s love and care for it.(that 引导的宾语从句,not just...but... 连接并列成分)
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