读后续写动作链课件-2026届高三英语二轮复习
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摘要:
该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦书面表达(记叙文)核心考点,依据高考评价体系梳理了句式多样性(Pattern 1-4)、内容要素(动作、对话、情感、环境)等考查要求,通过题型归纳明确“复合句式运用”“多元素融合”为高频考点,构建了系统的写作思路体系。
课件亮点在于“情境化训练+多维度评价”策略,如以“急救场景”为载体,通过动作链构建(V1,V2 and V3等句式)和四要素融合(动作、情感等)提升语言能力,借助评价表格培养思维品质。助力学生掌握高分技巧,教师可据此精准指导,实现高效备考。
内容正文:
Description
of actions
Rule: One question, one point.
Task: Write the first paragraph
Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus.
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Let’s check what happened.
What happened in the accident?
fell off
A. Use precise expressions
The boy _______.
The boy ______.
The boy _______________ .
bled
burst into tears
The ambulance is coming on its way. Now you gained a first aid kit to help the boy stop bleeding.
Pattern 1: V1, V2 and V3
Pattern 2: Doing/done, V1 and V2
B. Create action chains
___________ the top of the bus, the boy
_____ and ________________.
burst into tears
Falling off
bled
The boy fell off the top of the bus, bled, and burst into tears.
Let's describe the boy's action
The boy fell off the top of the bus.
The boy burst into tears.
The boy bled.
Patten 3: With sb/sth doing /done, V1 and V2
Patten 4: Sb/sth doing/done, V1 and V2
With his legs __________ , he _____ his knees and _________ the wound.
covered
swelling
bent
His legs __________ , he _____ his knees and _________ the wound.
swelling
covered
bent
Spot the difference
With
Let's describe the boy's action
'
C. Create a whole picture
Combine four elements---action, dialogue, emotion, environment
Let's describe the boy's action
Frightened and shocked, the boy bent over, trembled with pain and groaned for help. “Please help me. It hurts so much”.
A.Action
B.Language
C.Emotion
D.Environment
C. Create a whole picture
What elements does this paragraph contain?
More than one anwser
Tip: adj.
The ambulance is coming on its way. Now you gained a guiding book to help the doctor.
Patten 1: V1, V2 and V3
Let's check my action
Pattern 2: Doing/done,V1 and V2
B. Create action chains
Adv
I _________________ immediately, __________ a first-aid kit and __________ to the crowd.
rushed
opened the trunk
took out
______________________ immediately, I __________ a first-aid kit and __________ to the crowd.
rushed
Openning the trunk
took out
Pattern 3: With sb/sth doing /done, V1 and V2
Pattern 4: Sb/sth doing/done, V1 and V2
Let's check my action
With bandage ____________________ his hand, I __________ the bleeding and __________ him from pain.
relieved
wrapped around
stopped
Bandage ____________________ his hand, I __________ the bleeding and __________ him from pain.
relieved
wrapped around
stopped
Hearing the noisy voice (hear), a sense of anxiety welled up (emotion). I noticed the painful boy at the disordered scene, his legs bleeding. Carrying a first aid kit, I rushed to him and stopped the bleeding.
A.Action
B.Language
C.Emotion
D.Environment
C. Create a whole picture
What elements does this paragraph contain?
Combine four elements--
action, dialogue, emotion, environment(five senses)
Tip: Emotion (A sense of + n + welled up)
Congratulations. Now the ambulance arrived, you saved the patient. You got a medal as a reward.
Needle 注射针
Pill 药片
Bandage 绷带
Stethoscope 听诊器
ethyl alcohol 酒精
Thermometer温度计
Guiding book
Your package
Write
Evaluation criterion
Content Yes (1 point) No
Pattern 1: V1,V2 and V3
Pattern 2: Doing/Done,V1+V2
Pattern 3: With sb/sth doing/done,V1+V2
Pattern 4: Sb/sth doing/done, V1+V2
Use emotions
Use dialogues
Use environment (Five senses)
Handwriting
评价句式: I found pattern 1/......
Homework: Write down the second paragph
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