专题12 书面表达满分范文12篇（期末真题汇编，上海专用）八年级英语下学期

**基本信息** 初中英语书面表达专题汇编，含12个情境化写作任务，覆盖文化传承（如传统手艺、古代发明）、科技发展（如春晚机器人）、生活实践（如零花钱管理、防震减灾）等主题，注重语言应用与跨文化素养培育。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|12题|应用文（邮件、投稿）、记叙文（灾害描述）、议论文（时尚观讨论）；涉及传统文化（剪纸、印刷术）、科技前沿（AI机器人）、生活技能（消费规划）等话题|情境创设兼具时代性（2026春晚科技表演）与文化性（传统手艺人介绍），问题设计呈梯度：从基础信息描述（手艺人外貌、制作步骤）到高阶观点表达（传统手艺传承看法、科技应用思考），适配初中英语核心素养中语言能力与思维品质的培养需求。|

专题12 书面表达满分范文12篇 1．你校正在开展“传统艺术周”活动，现面向全体学生征集英文稿件，主题为传统手艺（剪纸paper-cutting、国画Chinese painting、书法calligraphy、风筝制作kite-making等）与手艺人，优秀作品将发布在学校校园网。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文投稿。 内容要点： 1．描述一位传统手艺人（如姓名、外貌等）； 2．介绍他的传统手艺（如工具、制作步骤、原因等）； 3．谈谈你对此类传统手艺传承的看法与观点。 要求： 1．词数80—100，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 2．涵盖所有要点，可适当补充细节； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、班级及学校名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文： There is a traditional craftsman in my neighbourhood. His name is Grandpa Zhang. He is over sixty years old, with grey hair and a warm smile.   Grandpa Zhang is good at paper-cutting. He uses a pair of scissors and red paper. First, he folds the paper. Then he carefully cuts different patterns like flowers or animals. Each piece is full of life.   I think traditional crafts like paper-cutting are valuable. They show the beauty of Chinese culture. We should learn from craftsmen and pass down these skills to keep our traditions alive. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文/观点类文章，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述一位传统手艺人（姓名、外貌等）、介绍他的传统手艺（工具、制作步骤等）、谈谈对传统手艺传承的看法 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第三人称（he）为主 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、班级及学校名称，需涵盖所有要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：介绍手艺人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、外貌） 主体段：介绍手艺人所掌握的传统手艺（工具、制作步骤） 结尾段：表达对传统手艺传承的看法 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：手艺人信息 姓名：Grandpa Zhang/Master Li等 年龄外貌：over sixty years old/grey hair/warm smile/kind eyes等 要点二：传统手艺介绍 手艺名称：paper-cutting 工具：scissors/red paper/knife/cutting board等 制作步骤：fold the paper/cut patterns/show the result等 图案内容：flowers/animals/Chinese characters/dragons等 要点三：手艺特点 特点描述：full of life/beautiful/delicate/meaningful等 要点四：传承看法 观点表达：valuable/show the beauty of Chinese culture/part of our heritage等 建议行动：learn from craftsmen/pass down these skills/keep traditions alive/take part in traditional art activities等 2．科技点亮新春，创新引领未来。2026年央视春晚中，机器人舞者、AI互动等智能表演惊艳全场，展现了中国科技的蓬勃发展。作为新时代青少年，我们应努力学习、创新科技。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的想法。 内容提示： 1. What do you think of the robots at the Spring Festival Gala (春晚)? 2. What kind of robot do you want to invent in the future? 3. How will you use technology in your daily life? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 书写认真，语句通顺，表达正确，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 The robot shows at the 2026 Spring Festival Gala are so wonderful, and I have a lot to say about them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 The robot shows at the 2026 Spring Festival Gala are so wonderful, and I have a lot to say about them. I think the robots are fantastic because they show China's rapid progress in technology. Their dances and AI interactions were impressive and inspiring. In the future, I hope to invent a study-assistant robot. It could help students with homework, explain complex topics, and even encourage them when they feel stressed. This robot would make education more accessible and enjoyable. In my daily life, I will use technology to learn and create. For example, I can use online courses to improve my skills and apps to manage my tasks. Moreover, I will stay curious and try to innovate in small ways every day. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文或感想类记叙文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：对春晚机器人节目的评价（精彩、体现科技进步）、未来发明设想（学习辅助机器人）、个人行动（利用科技学习和创新） 确定人称：第一人称（我） 注意事项：内容连贯，逻辑清晰，不偏离科技与学习主题 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：表达对春晚机器人节目的观感，点出科技快速进步 主体段：分两层——未来希望发明的学习辅助机器人的功能；日常生活中如何利用科技进行学习和创造 结尾段：总结个人态度，强调保持好奇与创新 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：对春晚机器人节目的感受 评价词语：wonderful/fantastic/impressive/inspiring 原因说明：show China’s rapid progress in technology/dances and AI interactions were impressive 要点二：未来发明设想（学习辅助机器人） 发明对象：study-assistant robot 主要功能：help students with homework/explain complex topics/encourage when stressed 作用效果：make education more accessible and enjoyable 要点三：日常科技使用与创新 具体做法：use online courses to improve skills/use apps to manage tasks/stay curious/innovate in small ways every day 核心态度：actively use technology to learn and create 3．学校开展“勤俭节约”主题活动，英语角将重点讨论如何有规划地合理地使用零花钱，请以“How to Use Pocket Money Wisely”为题，写一篇英语短文向学校英语校刊投稿，谈谈你的做法和建议。 内容提示： 1. 你每周有多少零花钱； 2. 你通常用零花钱做什么； 3. 你如何存钱； 4. 给同学的建议（如制定预算、不浪费等）。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： How to Use Pocket Money Wisely Hello, everyone! I’d like to share how to use pocket money wisely. I get 50 yuan weekly, spending 30 yuan on needs like school supplies and saving 20 yuan in my piggy bank to achieve small goals. I hope to buy useful books with the money I save. Here’s my advice: First, make a simple budget. Second, think twice before buying what you want. Finally, save a little every time—small amounts add up. Let’s be smart with our money and save every coin! 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇关于如何明智使用零花钱的建议类说明文，用一般现在时 明确要点：分享自己零花钱的使用情况以及给出明智使用零花钱的建议 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：语言表达要清晰易懂，建议要切实可行，能让读者明白如何去做 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：表明要分享如何明智使用零花钱，引出下文 主体段：先介绍自己零花钱的使用情况，再给出具体的使用零花钱的建议 结尾段：呼吁大家明智使用零花钱，节约每一分钱 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：分享自己零花钱的使用情况 具体情况：school supplies/buy useful books/have a special piggy bank等 要点二：给出明智使用零花钱的建议 具体建议：make a simple budget/think twice before buying what you want/save a little every time/don’t waste money on unnecessary things等 4．请以“My Favourite Clothes Style”为题，写一篇80~100词的英语短文，需包含以下要点：1. 点明自己最喜欢的服装风格（如休闲风、复古风、中国传统风等）； 2. 说明喜欢该风格的2个原因； 3. 列举1~2件该风格的日常衣物； 4. 表达自己对时尚穿衣的简单看法。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，无单词拼写错误，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite Clothes Style My favourite clothes style is casual style. I like it because casual clothes are very comfortable to wear and they are easy to match with other things. I usually wear jeans and T-shirts in daily life. They are cheap and suitable for all kinds of activities. I don’t think we need to follow the fashion blindly. The most important thing is to wear clothes that are comfortable and suitable for ourselves. In a word, casual style is the best for me, and I will always love it. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：观点阐述类短文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：包含四个方面——最喜欢的服装风格、喜欢该风格的两个原因、1~2件该风格的日常衣物、对时尚穿衣的简单看法 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：语句通顺，语法正确；词数80~100 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：点明最喜欢的服装风格 第二段：说明喜欢该风格的两个原因，并列举1~2件该风格的日常衣物 第三段：表达对时尚穿衣的看法 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：风格选择 风格类型：casual style/sporty style/vintage style/Chinese traditional style/simple style 表达方式：My favourite clothes style is.../I like...best 要点二：喜欢原因（两点） 原因一：comfortable to wear/makes me feel relaxed 原因二：easy to match with other things/suitable for all kinds of activities 要点三：日常衣物举例 衣物选择：jeans/T-shirts/sneakers/hoodies/leggings/sweaters 表达方式：I usually wear...in daily life/For example, I often wear... 要点四：时尚看法 核心观点：don’t need to follow fashion blindly/the most important thing is to be comfortable 补充观点：wear clothes that are suitable for ourselves/feeling good is more important than looking trendy 5．假如你是李华，小圈子英语角正在举行以“防震减灾，守护生命”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，写一篇英文短文投稿，谈谈我们应该如何在地震中进行自我保护。 How to protect ourselves in an earthquake Inside should stay away from windows and heavy furniture… shouldn’t jump from high buildings not take a lift Outside should move to clear areas keep away from tall buildings shouldn’t stand under trees… 要求: 1 参考提示内容，可适当发挥。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)。 4.词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) How to protect ourselves in an earthquake Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from the earthquakes. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       【答案】例文 How to protect ourselves in an earthquake Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from earthquakes. If we are inside a building when an earthquake happens, we should stay away from windows and heavy furniture at once. We can hide under a strong table and protect our heads. We mustn’t jump from high buildings or take the lift, because it’s really dangerous. If we are outside, we should move to clear and open areas quickly and keep away from tall buildings. We shouldn’t stand under trees. Besides, we should always keep calm in an earthquake. Keeping calm can help us make the right decisions to keep safe. 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：地震发生时，室内外应该和不应做的事，保持冷静的心态 确定人称：第一人称we/us为主，直接给出建议时，可以用第二人称you 注意事项：必须覆盖表格内的所有要点，词数不少于80词，不得出现真实姓名、学校等个人信息 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，点明主旨 主体段：介绍地震发生时，在室内外应该做和不应该做的事 结尾段：提醒要冷静行动，呼应开头 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：室内 Should do: hide under a desk/protect your head with hands/keep away from heavy furniture/crouch down low等 Shouldn’t do: run around wildly/push others/stand near glass doors等 要点二：室外 Should do: go to open spaces/keep away from power poles/protect your head等 Shouldn’t do: stay near billboards/go back into buildings/stay near glass structures等 要点三：心态 keep a cool head/don’t panic/keep your mind clear/try not to be afraid等 6．假设你是张华，你的英国好友Tom来信说他得了流感，上周还和朋友吵架了，导致他最近压力很大。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Tom写一封回信。 Should Shouldn’t Drink more water; Explain your feelings; ... Stay up late; Say hurtful words; ... 注意:（1）根据Tom的烦恼，在回信中提出至少三条合理建议； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等名称； （3）词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                   Hope everything gets better soon. Write back anytime. Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. First, for your flu, you’d better get enough rest and drink more warm water. If you still cough a lot or have a fever, you should see a doctor and take the medicine on time. As for the fight with your friend, I think you can calm down first. Then try to talk to your friend face to face. If you were wrong, apologize honestly. If not, you can still explain your feelings kindly. Finally, you can do some exercise and listen to music to relax. I’m sure you’ll feel better soon. I hope everything gets better soon. Write back anytime. Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：建议类书信 明确要点：针对Tom生病、和朋友吵架、压力大三个问题提建议 确定人称：第一人称I、第二人称you 注意事项：全文以一般现在时为主，词数80词左右，不出现真实姓名、校名    第二步：构思布局 三段式结构： 开头段：得知对方近况，表达关心，引出写作主题 主体段：依次针对三个问题，分点给出合理建议 结尾段：表达美好祝愿，希望对方早日好转    第三步：要点展开 要点一（感冒身体不适）：First, for your flu, you’d better get enough rest and drink more warm water. If you still cough a lot or have a fever, you should see a doctor and take the medicine on time. 要点二（与朋友发生争吵）：As for the fight with your friend, I think you can calm down first. Then try to talk to your friend face to face. If you were wrong, apologize honestly. If not, you can still explain your feelings kindly. 要点三（心情紧张压力大）：Finally, you can do some exercise and listen to music to relax. I’m sure you’ll feel better soon. 7．假设你是李华，你在学校论坛上看到Lisa讨论选择什么样的人交朋友的帖子，请根据内容写一篇英文回信，分享你的观点并说明理由。 要点：1. 表明你认为朋友应该相似还是不同（或两者皆可）； 2. 结合具体例子说明理由（如兴趣、性格、学习习惯等）； 3. 表达你对友谊的看法。 注意事项：1. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当补充细节，使内容连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear Lisa, I read your post about choosing friends. In my opinion, it’s better to make friends with people who are similar to us. For example, my best friend Tom and I both love playing basketball. We often practice together and encourage each other. We also share the same habit of finishing homework on time. That’s why we can understand each other so well. I believe that friends don’t need to be exactly the same, but having common interests and habits makes it easier to get along. Friendship is about trust and support, not just differences. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】   确定文体：书信体议论文，以一般现在时为主，兼用一般过去时描述例子   明确要点：观点陈述（相似/不同/两者皆可）+具体例子（兴趣、性格、学习习惯）+友谊看法   确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we）   注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称   【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构：   开头段：回应Lisa的帖子，明确表明自己的观点   主体段：结合具体例子说明理由 结尾段：总结对友谊的看法，升华主题   【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：表明观点   相似：make friends with people who are similar to us/choose friends who share our interests/find friends with the same hobbies等   不同：prefer friends who are different from me/like to make friends with opposite personalities/enjoy having friends who are not like me等   两者皆可：We can make friends with both similar and different people/both types of friends have their advantages等 要点二：结合例子说明理由   兴趣相同：both love playing basketball/enjoy the same music/like reading books together等 习惯相似：share the same habit of finishing homework on time/both like to study in the library/have the same daily routine等 性格互补：I am shy but my friend is outgoing, which helps me learn to be braver/my friend is patient while I am active/he is good at planning and I am good at doing等 要点三：表达友谊看法   友谊本质：Friendship is about trust and support/true friends always help each other/friendship means being there for each other等 相处方式：Having common interests makes it easier to get along/good communication helps friends stay close/we should listen to each other and be kind等 友谊意义：Good friends help us grow and become better people/friendship makes our life more colorful/a true friend makes us feel less lonely等 8．假设你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友David对中国的传统发明很感兴趣。他给你写邮件，想了解一项中国古代的伟大发明。请给他回复一封邮件，向他介绍印刷术 (Printing) 或 指南针 (Compass)。(任选一个介绍即可) 要求： 1. 内容须包含以下要点： 这项发明是什么? 它是谁发明的/改进的?(毕昇 Bi Sheng 或 古代中国人) 它是如何工作的?(简单描述即可) 它对世界有什么影响? 2. 语言流畅，符合英语邮件格式。词数不少于80词。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear David,   I’m glad to know you are interested in traditional Chinese inventions. I’d like to introduce printing.   Printing was invented by Bi Sheng during the Song Dynasty. He used movable clay type to print books. First, he made single clay characters. Then he arranged them into a page to print. After printing, he could reuse the characters for new pages.   Before printing, books were copied by hand, which took a long time. Printing made book production faster and cheaper. It helped spread knowledge and culture around the world. Without printing, learning might not be as easy as it is today.   I hope you find this invention as amazing as I do.   Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件/介绍类文章，以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：发明是什么、发明者/改进者、工作原理、对世界的影响 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（you）为主 注意事项：不得出现真实的人名、校名，需从印刷术或指南针中任选一个介绍 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：回应对方，引出要介绍的发明 主体段：介绍发明的发明者、工作原理及历史背景 结尾段：阐述发明对世界的影响，表达期望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：发明与发明者 发明名称：printing/print 发明者：Bi Sheng/ancient Chinese people等 时代背景：during the Song Dynasty/over a thousand years ago等 要点二：工作原理 材料：movable clay type/single clay characters等 操作步骤：arranged them into a page/printed onto paper/reused the characters等 要点三：历史对比 对比说明：books were copied by hand/took a long time/slow and expensive等 要点四：对世界的影响 影响：made book production faster and cheaper/helped spread knowledge and culture/made learning easier等 要点五：结尾表达 期望表达：I hope you find this invention amazing/hope this helps you understand Chinese culture better等 9．请以“A Terrible Natural Disaster”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你经历或听说过的一次自然灾害（如暴风雨、地震、洪水等）。 内容包括： 1. 灾害发生的时间、地点和天气情况； 2. 灾害发生时人们正在做的事情； 3. 灾害造成的影响及人们的应对措施； 4. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数：80-100词； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Terrible Natural Disaster Last summer, I experienced a terrible rainstorm in my hometown. It was a hot afternoon. Suddenly, clouds gathered and the wind blew strongly. When the rainstorm came, I was walking home with my friend. We had no umbrellas, so we ran to a shop to take shelter. Many people were running to find a safe place. After the storm, the street was full of water. Some trees fell down. We worked together to clean up the street. I felt scared but lucky. I realize we must learn to protect ourselves when natural disasters happen. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时为主   明确要点：  灾害发生的时间、地点、天气情况，灾害发生时人们正在做的事情，灾害造成的影响及应对措施，个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my），以亲历者视角叙述   注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和地名；词数控制在80-100词   [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 第一段：交代灾害发生的时间、地点和灾害前的天气情况。   第二段：描述灾害发生时“我”和朋友正在做什么，以及周围人们的反应。   第三段：描述灾害造成的影响及人们的应对措施。   第四段：表达个人感受，并从中吸取教训。   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：灾害背景 时间表达：Last summer/One day in July/On a stormy night等   地点表达：in my hometown/in a small village/in the city center等   天气描述：clear/clouds gathered/sunny/dark clouds appeared/hot/wind blew等 要点二：灾害发生时人们正在做的事情 常见动作：walking home/playing outside/watching TV/working in the field等 要点三：灾害造成的影响及应对措施 影响描述：streets were flooded/trees fell down/houses were damaged等 应对措施：ran for shelter/stayed indoors/helped clean up after the disaster等 要点四：感受与感悟 感受词汇：scared/lucky/sad/thankful等 感悟内容：learn to be prepared/pay attention to weather warnings/stay safe等 10．假如你是李华，最近你的笔友 Tony 非常苦恼，他总是在月初就花光父母每月给他的零花钱，之后没有足够的钱来购买真正需要的东西，他常对自己的消费感到后悔，为此他发来邮件向你求助，如何才能更好地使用零花钱？请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。 提示: 1. 表示理解；2.给出建议；3.表达希望。注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.文不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文赏析: Dear Tony, I know how you feel! I used to spend all my pocket money quickly too, and then worry about not having enough later. Don’t worry—I have some useful ideas for you. First, make a plan at the start of each month. Write down what you need to buy, like school supplies or bus fares, and how much they cost. Second, think carefully before buying something new. Wait for a day or two—maybe you’ll realize you don’t really need it. Finally, keep a small notebook to write down every coin you spend. This way, you’ll always know where your money goes.   I’m sure these tips will help you use your pocket money better. Just be patient, and you’ll get better at it.   Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信体应用文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：给朋友提供零花钱管理建议 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）、第二人称（you/your） 注意事项：未透露真实姓名和学校名称        [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，共情对方困扰，引出建议 主体段：分点介绍三条零花钱管理建议 结尾段：总结建议，表达鼓励与信心        [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：共情引入 方式：用I know how you feel! I used to spend all my pocket money quickly too这类句子共情 作用：拉近距离，自然引出主题 要点二：具体建议 内容：make a plan 、 think carefully before buying 、 keep a small notebook 说明：每条建议都搭配了可操作的英文表达 要点三：结尾升华 内容：用I’m sure these tips will help you use your pocket money better总结 作用：呼应开头，强化书信的鼓励语气 11．你所在的社区计划举办名为“Teenagers and Fashion”(青少年与时尚)的主题座谈会,现就座谈会方案征求意见。假设你是初中学生林悦，请阅读以下方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人刘女士，邮件须包含以下内容： 1.你是否会参加此座谈会，并简述理由； 2.针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 座谈会方案(Forum plan) 目的 引导青少年正确看待“时尚”，树立健康的“时尚观”。 参与对象 13—16岁的青少年 形式 嘉宾分享和小组讨论 时间 12月每周六下午1-3 点 地点 社区活动中心 (注意：邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Ms. Liu,     I’m Lin Yue, a junior high student. I will attend the forum because I care about fashion and want to learn how to build a healthy view of it. However, I suggest changing the time. Having it every Saturday afternoon in December may conflict with our study schedules. Perhaps holding it once or twice during winter vacation would allow more teenagers to join.     Thank you for your effort. Yours, Lin Yue 【总体分析】①题材：电子邮件 ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 ③提示：需表明是否参加并说明理由，同时针对方案提出一项修改建议。 【写作步骤】第一步：礼貌问候并自我介绍，明确表达参加意愿及理由。 第二步：针对方案内容（如时间安排）提出修改建议，并说明原因。 第三步：表达感谢并结尾署名。 【亮点词汇】①attend参加 ②suggest建议 ③conflict with与……冲突 【高分句型】①I will attend the forum because I care about fashion and want to learn how to build a healthy view of it.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） ②Having it every Saturday afternoon in December may conflict with our study schedules.（运用了动名词短语作主语） 12．假设你是李辉，你的英国朋友Tom对中国传统技艺非常感兴趣，他来信想让你介绍一位你熟悉或听说过的传统手工艺人。请你用英文给他写一封回信。 词数：80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：paper cutting/ dough toys/ Chinese knots... 提示要点： 1. 这位传统手工艺人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、所掌握的传统技艺）； 2. 描述这位手工艺人的工作内容（制作过程及所使用的工具）； 3. 期待Tom来中国参观体验。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive a letter from you. I’m writing to introduce a person to you devoted to Chinese traditional crafts. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】 例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive a letter from you. I’m writing to introduce you a person devoted to Chinese traditional crafts. Mr. Zhang, a 70-year-old craftsman, is the inheritor of the intangible cultural heritage of paper cutting. He has a lot of exquisite works. They are colorful and beautiful. He has created many wonderful paper-cut works. He uses scissors and red paper to cut out all kinds of characters and animals. He draws the outline of the picture, and then uses scissors to cut along the outline. He is very skilled, so every paper cutting is very good. I hope you will come to China to experience it. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点： 这位传统手工艺人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、所掌握的传统技艺）、描述这位手工艺人的工作内容（制作过程及所使用的工具）、期待Tom来中国参观体验 确定人称：第三人称(He/his) 注意事项：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 【第二步:构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出话题 主体段：首先这位传统手工艺人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、所掌握的传统技艺），然后描述这位手工艺人的工作内容（制作过程及所使用的工具），最后表达期待Tom来中国参观体验 结尾段：总结感受，升华主题 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：基本信息 姓名：Mr. Zhang 年龄：a 70-year-old craftsman 所掌握的传统技艺：paper cutting 要点二：工作内容 制作过程：draw the outline of the picture/cut along the outline/fold the paper carefully/skillfully/open the paper/amazing pictures of flowers or animals/appear等 所使用的工具：scissors/red paper/cut out all kinds of characters and animals/create beautiful patterns等 要点三：期待Tom来中国参观体验 hope/come to China/experience/visit/try/one day等 2 / 21 1 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题12 书面表达满分范文12篇 1． 【答案】 范文： There is a traditional craftsman in my neighbourhood. His name is Grandpa Zhang. He is over sixty years old, with grey hair and a warm smile.   Grandpa Zhang is good at paper-cutting. He uses a pair of scissors and red paper. First, he folds the paper. Then he carefully cuts different patterns like flowers or animals. Each piece is full of life.   I think traditional crafts like paper-cutting are valuable. They show the beauty of Chinese culture. We should learn from craftsmen and pass down these skills to keep our traditions alive. 2． 【答案】 例文 The robot shows at the 2026 Spring Festival Gala are so wonderful, and I have a lot to say about them. I think the robots are fantastic because they show China's rapid progress in technology. Their dances and AI interactions were impressive and inspiring. In the future, I hope to invent a study-assistant robot. It could help students with homework, explain complex topics, and even encourage them when they feel stressed. This robot would make education more accessible and enjoyable. In my daily life, I will use technology to learn and create. For example, I can use online courses to improve my skills and apps to manage my tasks. Moreover, I will stay curious and try to innovate in small ways every day. 3． 【答案】范文： How to Use Pocket Money Wisely Hello, everyone! I’d like to share how to use pocket money wisely. I get 50 yuan weekly, spending 30 yuan on needs like school supplies and saving 20 yuan in my piggy bank to achieve small goals. I hope to buy useful books with the money I save. Here’s my advice: First, make a simple budget. Second, think twice before buying what you want. Finally, save a little every time—small amounts add up. Let’s be smart with our money and save every coin! 4． 【答案】例文 My Favourite Clothes Style My favourite clothes style is casual style. I like it because casual clothes are very comfortable to wear and they are easy to match with other things. I usually wear jeans and T-shirts in daily life. They are cheap and suitable for all kinds of activities. I don’t think we need to follow the fashion blindly. The most important thing is to wear clothes that are comfortable and suitable for ourselves. In a word, casual style is the best for me, and I will always love it. 5． 【答案】例文 How to protect ourselves in an earthquake Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from earthquakes. If we are inside a building when an earthquake happens, we should stay away from windows and heavy furniture at once. We can hide under a strong table and protect our heads. We mustn’t jump from high buildings or take the lift, because it’s really dangerous. If we are outside, we should move to clear and open areas quickly and keep away from tall buildings. We shouldn’t stand under trees. Besides, we should always keep calm in an earthquake. Keeping calm can help us make the right decisions to keep safe. 6． 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. First, for your flu, you’d better get enough rest and drink more warm water. If you still cough a lot or have a fever, you should see a doctor and take the medicine on time. As for the fight with your friend, I think you can calm down first. Then try to talk to your friend face to face. If you were wrong, apologize honestly. If not, you can still explain your feelings kindly. Finally, you can do some exercise and listen to music to relax. I’m sure you’ll feel better soon. I hope everything gets better soon. Write back anytime. Yours, Zhang Hua 7． 【答案】 例文 Dear Lisa, I read your post about choosing friends. In my opinion, it’s better to make friends with people who are similar to us. For example, my best friend Tom and I both love playing basketball. We often practice together and encourage each other. We also share the same habit of finishing homework on time. That’s why we can understand each other so well. I believe that friends don’t need to be exactly the same, but having common interests and habits makes it easier to get along. Friendship is about trust and support, not just differences. Yours, Li Hua 8． 【答案】范文： Dear David,   I’m glad to know you are interested in traditional Chinese inventions. I’d like to introduce printing.   Printing was invented by Bi Sheng during the Song Dynasty. He used movable clay type to print books. First, he made single clay characters. Then he arranged them into a page to print. After printing, he could reuse the characters for new pages.   Before printing, books were copied by hand, which took a long time. Printing made book production faster and cheaper. It helped spread knowledge and culture around the world. Without printing, learning might not be as easy as it is today.   I hope you find this invention as amazing as I do.   Yours sincerely, Li Hua 9． 【答案】例文 A Terrible Natural Disaster Last summer, I experienced a terrible rainstorm in my hometown. It was a hot afternoon. Suddenly, clouds gathered and the wind blew strongly. When the rainstorm came, I was walking home with my friend. We had no umbrellas, so we ran to a shop to take shelter. Many people were running to find a safe place. After the storm, the street was full of water. Some trees fell down. We worked together to clean up the street. I felt scared but lucky. I realize we must learn to protect ourselves when natural disasters happen. 10． 【答案】范文赏析: Dear Tony, I know how you feel! I used to spend all my pocket money quickly too, and then worry about not having enough later. Don’t worry—I have some useful ideas for you. First, make a plan at the start of each month. Write down what you need to buy, like school supplies or bus fares, and how much they cost. Second, think carefully before buying something new. Wait for a day or two—maybe you’ll realize you don’t really need it. Finally, keep a small notebook to write down every coin you spend. This way, you’ll always know where your money goes.   I’m sure these tips will help you use your pocket money better. Just be patient, and you’ll get better at it.   Best wishes, Li Hua 11． 【答案】 Dear Ms. Liu,     I’m Lin Yue, a junior high student. I will attend the forum because I care about fashion and want to learn how to build a healthy view of it. However, I suggest changing the time. Having it every Saturday afternoon in December may conflict with our study schedules. Perhaps holding it once or twice during winter vacation would allow more teenagers to join.     Thank you for your effort. Yours, Lin Yue 12． 【答案】 例文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive a letter from you. I’m writing to introduce you a person devoted to Chinese traditional crafts. Mr. Zhang, a 70-year-old craftsman, is the inheritor of the intangible cultural heritage of paper cutting. He has a lot of exquisite works. They are colorful and beautiful. He has created many wonderful paper-cut works. He uses scissors and red paper to cut out all kinds of characters and animals. He draws the outline of the picture, and then uses scissors to cut along the outline. He is very skilled, so every paper cutting is very good. I hope you will come to China to experience it. Yours, Li Hui 2 / 21 1 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题12 书面表达满分范文12篇 1．你校正在开展“传统艺术周”活动，现面向全体学生征集英文稿件，主题为传统手艺（剪纸paper-cutting、国画Chinese painting、书法calligraphy、风筝制作kite-making等）与手艺人，优秀作品将发布在学校校园网。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文投稿。 内容要点： 1．描述一位传统手艺人（如姓名、外貌等）； 2．介绍他的传统手艺（如工具、制作步骤、原因等）； 3．谈谈你对此类传统手艺传承的看法与观点。 要求： 1．词数80—100，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 2．涵盖所有要点，可适当补充细节； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、班级及学校名称。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．科技点亮新春，创新引领未来。2026年央视春晚中，机器人舞者、AI互动等智能表演惊艳全场，展现了中国科技的蓬勃发展。作为新时代青少年，我们应努力学习、创新科技。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你的想法。 内容提示： 1. What do you think of the robots at the Spring Festival Gala (春晚)? 2. What kind of robot do you want to invent in the future? 3. How will you use technology in your daily life? 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 书写认真，语句通顺，表达正确，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 The robot shows at the 2026 Spring Festival Gala are so wonderful, and I have a lot to say about them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校开展“勤俭节约”主题活动，英语角将重点讨论如何有规划地合理地使用零花钱，请以“How to Use Pocket Money Wisely”为题，写一篇英语短文向学校英语校刊投稿，谈谈你的做法和建议。 内容提示： 1. 你每周有多少零花钱； 2. 你通常用零花钱做什么； 3. 你如何存钱； 4. 给同学的建议（如制定预算、不浪费等）。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．请以“My Favourite Clothes Style”为题，写一篇80~100词的英语短文，需包含以下要点：1. 点明自己最喜欢的服装风格（如休闲风、复古风、中国传统风等）； 2. 说明喜欢该风格的2个原因； 3. 列举1~2件该风格的日常衣物； 4. 表达自己对时尚穿衣的简单看法。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，无单词拼写错误，可适当发挥。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是李华，小圈子英语角正在举行以“防震减灾，守护生命”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，写一篇英文短文投稿，谈谈我们应该如何在地震中进行自我保护。 How to protect ourselves in an earthquake Inside should stay away from windows and heavy furniture… shouldn’t jump from high buildings not take a lift Outside should move to clear areas keep away from tall buildings shouldn’t stand under trees… 要求: 1 参考提示内容，可适当发挥。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)。 4.词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) How to protect ourselves in an earthquake Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from the earthquakes. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       6．假设你是张华，你的英国好友Tom来信说他得了流感，上周还和朋友吵架了，导致他最近压力很大。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Tom写一封回信。 Should Shouldn’t Drink more water; Explain your feelings; ... Stay up late; Say hurtful words; ... 注意:（1）根据Tom的烦恼，在回信中提出至少三条合理建议； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等名称； （3）词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling so stressed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                   Hope everything gets better soon. Write back anytime. Yours, Zhang Hua 7．假设你是李华，你在学校论坛上看到Lisa讨论选择什么样的人交朋友的帖子，请根据内容写一篇英文回信，分享你的观点并说明理由。 要点：1. 表明你认为朋友应该相似还是不同（或两者皆可）； 2. 结合具体例子说明理由（如兴趣、性格、学习习惯等）； 3. 表达你对友谊的看法。 注意事项：1. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可适当补充细节，使内容连贯；3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李华，你的英国交换生朋友David对中国的传统发明很感兴趣。他给你写邮件，想了解一项中国古代的伟大发明。请给他回复一封邮件，向他介绍印刷术 (Printing) 或 指南针 (Compass)。(任选一个介绍即可) 要求： 1. 内容须包含以下要点： 这项发明是什么? 它是谁发明的/改进的?(毕昇 Bi Sheng 或 古代中国人) 它是如何工作的?(简单描述即可) 它对世界有什么影响? 2. 语言流畅，符合英语邮件格式。词数不少于80词。 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 9．请以“A Terrible Natural Disaster”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你经历或听说过的一次自然灾害（如暴风雨、地震、洪水等）。 内容包括： 1. 灾害发生的时间、地点和天气情况； 2. 灾害发生时人们正在做的事情； 3. 灾害造成的影响及人们的应对措施； 4. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数：80-100词； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你是李华，最近你的笔友 Tony 非常苦恼，他总是在月初就花光父母每月给他的零花钱，之后没有足够的钱来购买真正需要的东西，他常对自己的消费感到后悔，为此他发来邮件向你求助，如何才能更好地使用零花钱？请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信。 提示: 1. 表示理解；2.给出建议；3.表达希望。注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.文不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tony, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．你所在的社区计划举办名为“Teenagers and Fashion”(青少年与时尚)的主题座谈会,现就座谈会方案征求意见。假设你是初中学生林悦，请阅读以下方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人刘女士，邮件须包含以下内容： 1.你是否会参加此座谈会，并简述理由； 2.针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 座谈会方案(Forum plan) 目的 引导青少年正确看待“时尚”，树立健康的“时尚观”。 参与对象 13—16岁的青少年 形式 嘉宾分享和小组讨论 时间 12月每周六下午1-3 点 地点 社区活动中心 (注意：邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假设你是李辉，你的英国朋友Tom对中国传统技艺非常感兴趣，他来信想让你介绍一位你熟悉或听说过的传统手工艺人。请你用英文给他写一封回信。 词数：80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：paper cutting/ dough toys/ Chinese knots... 提示要点： 1. 这位传统手工艺人的基本信息（姓名、年龄、所掌握的传统技艺）； 2. 描述这位手工艺人的工作内容（制作过程及所使用的工具）； 3. 期待Tom来中国参观体验。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive a letter from you. I’m writing to introduce a person to you devoted to Chinese traditional crafts. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 2 / 21 1 / 21 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $