第三部分 高分表达与写作类别点拨-【众相原创·赋能中考】2026年陕西中考英语方向卷

第三部分 高分表达与写作类别点拨 一、高分表达 ·常见动词的高级表达 初阶词汇 高阶词汇 help帮助 give..a hand帮助.… hope希望 look forward to sth./doing sth.期待某物/做某事 influence影响 make a big difference to对…产生重大影响，起重要作用 be interested in./have a strong interest in..对…（非 like;love; enjoy 常)感兴趣；fall in love with爱上；be fond of 喜欢 喜欢…；be crazy about着迷于… remember记得 keep..in mind将…牢记在心 make good/.full use of sth./put sth.to good use充分使用 use使用 某物 should应该 be supposed to do sth.应该做某事 decide to do sth. make a decision to do sth.决定做某事； 决定做某事 make up one's mind to do sth.某人下定决心做某事 try one's best to do sth.某人尽全力做某事； try to do sth. make every effort to do sth./spare no effort to do sth. 尽力做某事 遗余力做某事 want to do sth. feel like doing sth./would like to do sth.想要做某事 想要做某事 don't want to do would rather do A than do B/prefer to do A rather than do B sth.不想做某事 宁愿做A也不愿做B from my point of view;in my opinion;as far as I'm I think.我认为 concerned在我看来 18 ·常见形容词的高级表达 初阶词汇 高阶词汇 happy高兴 enjoy oneself;have a good time玩得开心 important重要的 be of great importance非常重要 be good at/do well in be skilled in熟练；be expert in/have a good 擅长 knowledge of精通 good好的；优秀的 excellent;wonderful;fantastic优秀的；美妙的 clever/smart聪明的 wise;bright;intelligent聪明的 a lot of大量的 a number of;quite a few;plenty of大量的 ·常见逻辑词的高级表达 功能 含义 初阶词汇 高阶词汇 首先 first;firstly first of all:to start with;to begin with 表示顺序/ 其次； second; besides;in addition;what's more; 递进 此外 secondly more importantly 最后 at last;finally last but not least both...and...;as well as;not only...but 表示并列 和 and also.… because; for the reason that;due to;thanks to;as a 表示原因 因为 since result of therefore;as a result;so...that...;that is 表示结果 所以 SO why... 虽然； but;though; on the one hand...,on the other hand; 表示转折 但是 although however;instead of;rather than 19 二、写作类别点拨与分阶范文记背 类型一经历感受类记叙文(2025,2024，副题2021) 作文框架 开头：以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历； 中间：讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果，即五个“W” (what,who,when,where,why)和一个“H”(how); 结尾：对上述经历进行总结，表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么或以后 会怎么做，也可以是这次经历对自己的影响。（万能金句： Although the experience has passed,the influence it had on me is last- ing.) 高分模板 One Experience I still clearly remember the experience about (我的经 历). When I first went into junior high school,I (遭遇的经 历)because (原因).Iwas/felt (感受)and didn't know what to do. (人物)encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice.First of all, (我的行为①)，which helped to (这样做的结果①).Second, (我的 行为②).In this way,I not only but also (这 样做的结果②).Day by day,I could (可以做的事情)and (现在的成长或个人收获)now. Through the experience,I have deeply realized that (感 )I will keep this memory forever. 20 优秀范文记背 Passage 1 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 A Teamwork Experience A Teamwork Experience 开头：点 There is a saying, As an old saying goes,"A 明主题 “One tree can't make a single tree can't make a forest."I forest."I think teamwork think teamwork is the key to is very important. success. I once had a good I once had a great experience team experience. We nee- of teamwork.We were asked to ded to make a poster in a design a poster within one week. 中间：介 week.At first,we didn't At first,we had no idea how to 绍团队合 know what to do.Then we start.But after a group discussion, 作的过程 talked together.Everyone we found that different team had different skills,so we members were good at different did different jobs.After we things,so we decided to divide finished our own work,we the work into different parts.After checked it together. At finishing our own parts,we checked last,our poster got first and improved them together.Finally, prize. our poster won first prize. 结尾：总 From this,I learned This experience taught me 结收获， that everyone has his own that everyone has different 强调团队 good points. Working strengths.Teamwork really makes 合作的重 together can help us the dream work! 要性 succeed！ 21 Passage 2 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 We Need to Be Creative We Need to Be Creative 开头：开 As middle school As middle school students,we 篇点题， students,we need to be need to be more creative.Creativity 中学生需 creative.It helps us try new drives us to explore new things and 培养创造 things and think differently. helps us think differently. 力 Last term,our science Last term,our science teacher teacher asked us to make a asked us to make a greenhouse 中间：叙 greenhouse model.I used model.Instead of paper,I tried 事例证， old plastic bottles and card-old plastic bottles and cardboard. 以制作温 board instead of paper.It It was hard to cut the bottles and 室模型的 was hard,and I almost gave I almost gave up,but I kept going 经历，讲 up,but I kept going with with my dad's help.Finally,I 述自己完 my dad's help.Finally,I finished the model with a tiny 成创意作 finished the model with a solar-powered light,which won 品的过程 small solar light and won high praise in class 结尾：议 praise. This experience taught me 理升华， From this,I learned creativity is not hard-just try new 从经历中 being creative is not hard. ideas and use what is around us.I 感悟，并 We just need to try new believe being creative will help me 指出创造 ideas and use things around face challenges bravely and grow 力的重要 us.It will help me face into a better person. 性 problems bravely. 22 类型二写人叙事类记叙文(2025,2022，副题2023，副题2020) 作文框架 开头：引入人物+简单介绍人物的外貌特征+性格特征（建议选取父母、 朋友、老师等熟悉的人物) ①直接型：直接点明这个人物是谁。如：I'm glad to say something about my best friend. ②用一句有深意的话或者谚语引入话题，再点明这个人物。如： During the process of growing up,it is very important to have someone who knows us.Among all the people around me,I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best. 中间：你与这个人物之间发生的故事(when,where,.what,how) ①建议写作角度：这个人物帮你成长的故事：这个人物身上的闪光 点；②需要注意的点：阐述经历应用一般过去时。 结尾：你的感悟、感受/自己的做法/对这个人的美好祝愿 高分模板 The Most Person in My Heart To be honest, is the most person I've ever met.She/ He (人物身份+人物外貌特征，have a round face,a soft voice..). I think she/he is because she/he is always (描写人物性 格的形容词：patient,kind,helpful.).She/He likes (人物爱好： help others,collect stamps,take part in volunteer activities...). Once I (你遇到的麻烦：be sick,fail in the exam,have diffi culty in+学科，can't get along well with.),she/he told me (人物 的行为：not to give up,not to worry about,keep reading aloud,talk to,help people in need...).Then she/he (人物的行为：teach me how to, ask me to,encourage me to...).In addition,she/he (人物的行 give me flowers or books,give me helpful suggestions,listen to me patiently...)when I was in trouble.I became/felt (你的改变/感 confident,moved,independent,happy,relaxed...)because of her/him. As her/his I have learned that (你的感悟：nothing is impossible,we should help others...).I hope I will be a person like her/ him.I also hope she/he will be better and better. 23 优秀范文记背 Passage 1 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 开头：总 A letter to myself A letter to myself 述初中三 How time flies！ How time flies!Three years have 年的收获 Three years have passed passed since I became a middle since I became a middle school student. school student. I've not only get rich knowledge 中间：阐 I learned many in all subjects but also learned valuable 述对自己 lessons and some useful life skills.I used to be shy and 影响最大 skills.I was shy and afraid to speak in public,but now 的人及具 afraid to talk in public I'm more confident and willing to 体事例 before.Now I'm more express my ideas. confident and like to The person who influenced me share my ideas. most is my English teacher,Ms.Li. My English teacher When I failed my English exam and Ms.Li helped me a lot. wanted to give up,she didn't blame When I did badly in me.Instead,she stayed after school English and wanted to to help me review grammar and give up,she encouraged encouraged me to read English stories me and helped me study. aloud.Thanks to her,I fell in love Thanks to her,I love with English. English now. My dream is to become an 结尾：未 My dream is to be English translator in the future.To 来梦想与 an English translator.I achieve this,I will keep practicing 实现梦想 will practice English my listening and speaking skills every 的计划 every day and study day,read more English literature, hard for a good senior and work hard to get into a good high school senior high school and then a top I'm sure my dream university. will come true. I believe my dream will come true. 24 Passage 2 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 The Person I Want to The Person I Want to Thank Most Thank Most In my junior high school life,I In my junior high have received help from many 开头：引 school life,many people people.I am really thankful to 出最想感 helped me.I want to them.The person I want to thank 谢的人 thank my English teacher, most is my English teacher,Ms. Ms. Wang,most. Wang. She is kind and She is so patient that she 中间：描 always smiles. When I always has a warm smile.When I 述人物的 didn't understand grammar, had trouble with grammar,she 性格特 she explained it many explained it again and again until I 点，具体 times.She also encouraged understood it.She also encouraged 叙述人物 me to take part in English me to take part in English speech 给予帮助 speech competitions and competitions and helped me practice 的事例 helped me practice. after school. With her help, With her help,I have become 结尾：表 made much progress. much more confident and made 达感受及 will never forget her.In great progress.I will never forget 未来的 the future,I want to be a her kindness.In the future,I hope 行动 teacher like her to help to be a teacher like her so that I other students. can help more students in need. 25 类型三 活动介绍类说明文（副题2025,2023,2021，副题2024） 作文框架 ①介绍活动 开头：引入文章话题； 中间：介绍活动的时间、地点、人物和活动的具体内容等： 结尾：表达个人感悟。 ②介绍节日 开头：介绍节日名称和节日意义； 中间：介绍节日里具体的活动； 结尾：表达个人情感。 高分模板 ①介绍活动 Dear (听众)， I am very pleased to tell you that we are going to organize a(n) (活动名字)and I would be very happy if you could take part in the activity.The activity will be held on (活动日期)at (活动地点). In the morning,we (活动1).We will learn about (活动1的目的).Then we (活动2)，which helps us (活动2的目的).After lunch,we will go to (活动3)，where we (活动3的目的). I am looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 注意：此模板也适用于“已经发生过的活动”，句子时态需改为一般过 去时。 26 ②介绍节日 Dear (听众)， How are you going?I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.There are many traditional festivals in China,such as the Spring Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival.I'd like to introduce (节日名称)to you. (节日名称)isa(n) (重要性) traditional holiday in China.It usually lasts for (持续时间). Days before the festival,people (节日活动一).They (节日活动二).During the festival, (节日活动三).Then (节日活动四).Tome, (节日名称)means because at that time, (节日的意义) Welcome to China to celebrate (节日名称)together..I believe you will (感受) Yours, Li Hua 27 优秀范文记背： Passage 1 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 A Wonderful A Wonderful Museum Tour Museum Tour Last Saturday,I had a 开头：点 Last Saturday,I visited wonderful trip to Shaanxi History 明活动的 the Shaanxi History Museum Museum with my friends.It was a 时间、地 with my friends. It was really meaningful experience. 点和人物 great fun. First,we visited the historical First, we saw many show and saw many ancient cultural old things about history. relics.They made me amazed at 中间：按 Some were from ancient the wisdom of ancient people. 顺序描述 times. Next,we enjoyed Next,we enjoyed traditional 参观内容 beautiful old paintings and Chinese paintings and artworks.I works of art.They made me felt so proud of our great culture. proud of our culture. We We also learned about the long and also learned about the long rich history of Shaanxi.During history of Shaanxi.We kept the visit,we spoke quietly and quiet and followed the rules. followed the museum rules. 结尾：总 This trip was short but This short trip helped me 结收获与 meaningful.I learned a lot learn much more about history 感受 about history and culture. and culture.I will never forget this wonderful tour. 28 Passage 2 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Colorful School Activities Colorful School Activities 开头：点 In Grade Nine,our During the days in Grade 题，并引 school had many interesting Nine,there have been many 出重点介 activities.I will never forget colorful activities in our school.I 绍的内容 the Reading Sharing Meeting. will never forget the Reading It was in the school library Sharing Meeting.It took place last month. in the school library last month. 中间：从 At the meeting,we During the meeting, we “时间、地 talked about our favorite shared our favorite books and 点、活动 books and stories. Some stories.Some students even acted 内容、影 students acted out short parts out scenes from the books,which 响”几个 from the books.It was very was really fun and engaging, 方面重点 funny and interesting,and drawing loud applause from 介绍读书 we all clapped for them.This everyone.This activity not only 分享会的 activity helped us read better improved our reading skills but 情况 and learn more new things.I also broadened our horizons was very happy and excited. greatly,exposing us to new I love reading more now. ideas. 结尾：表 I hope we can have I felt excited and inspired 达感受， more activities like this. by the meeting.It made me love 并提出 They can make our school reading even more.I suggest 建议 life more wonderful. having more such activities in the future to make our school life even richer and more enjoyable. 29 类型四 观点看法类说明文(2020) 作文框架 开头：引入话题，点明需要讨论的观点； 中间：介绍别人的观点+表达你自己的观点； 结尾：总结你的观点并提出愿望。 高分模板 ①对某现象的观点或看法 The topic of (主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say (A)is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of (理 )However,others think that (选择B)is a better choice in the following three reasons.First, Second(Besides), Third(Lastly), .(三个理由)》 From my point of view,I think (我的观，点).The reason is that What's more, Moreover, .(我的三 个理由)》 All in all/In a word,I hold the opinion that (总结我的观 点).And I hope (提出愿望) ②对某科技/发明的观点或看法 Nowadays,there is a hot discussion on (某科技/发明) In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in (某 科技/发明).Generally speaking,it is widely believed that there are several positive points as follows.Firstly, (优点一).Secondly, (优点二) Just as a popular saying goes,"Every coin has two sides." (某 科技/发明)is no exception,and in other words,it still has negative points.. To begin with, (缺，点一).In addition, (缺点二) 30 To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of (某科技 into full play,and reduce its disadvantages at the same time.In that case,we will surely make a better use of (某科技/发明). 优秀范文记背 Passage 1 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 Zero Waste Makes Zero Waste Makes a Difference a Difference As our lives become easier,we Our lives are easier throw away too much.To solve this 开头：解 now, but we produce problem,"zero waste"is a key idea. 释“零浪 much rubbish. “Zero It means producing less rubbish by 费”的含 waste'”is a good idea to using fewer things and finding new 义 solve this problem.It uses for old ones. means making less This idea is very important rubbish and reusing old because too much rubbish pollutes things. our land and water,which is harm- 中间：说 Too much rubbish is ful to animals,plants and people. 明其对于 bad for our land,water, Making less waste helps keep our 环保的重 and all living things. earth clean and healthy for the 要性 Reducing waste helps future. keep our earth clean and We can all help.At home,use 结尾：分 healthy. both sides of paper and fix broken 地点（家、 We can do small things.At school,bring our own 学校、社 things:use both sides of water bottles and share old books.In 区)列举 paper, take our own the community,take part in clean-up 具体做 water bottles,and share activities and encourage others to 法，并呼 old books.Every small reuse things.Every small action 吁行动 action helps！ makes a difference! 31 Passage 2 写作脉络 初阶范文 高阶范文 开头：介 Now AI is widely Now Al technology has found 绍AI已 used in our daily life. its way into our daily life.There is 经走进我 Many people talk about a heated discussion on whether 们的生活 whether middle school middle school students should be students should use AI for allowed to use Al in their studies. study. I believe that middle school 中间：提出 I think students students should be allowed to use 观点— should use Al because it AI when learning because it can 应该允许 can give us much useful provide valuable information. 使用AI, help.For example,AI For example,AI can offer help on 并且介绍 can help us with home- homework in time.Moreover,it AI的益处 work at any time.It can can reorganize information clearly, 以及应该 also explain difficult things helping students understand complex 避免的问 clearly and make learning topics.It can also make learning 题 more interesting. fun. But we must use AI However,we must learn to use in a right way.We should AI wisely and avoid simply copying not just copy answers.We answers.Only by thinking inde- need to think by our- pendently can we truly improve our 结尾：书写 selves.Only in this way knowledge and skills.Therefore, 结语，表达 can we make progress. with the right attitude,Al can 赞成使用 So I think middle become a powerful tool to develop AI的观点 school students should our study habits. use AI. In short,I agree that we should be allowed to use Al. 32