内容正文:
Practical Writing
Review of News Report
PART 1 Review
Think and review
What are the features of a news report?
Thinking
narration记叙文
genre体裁
News
Report
tense时态
person
人称
simple past tense以一般过去时为主
the third person以第三人称为主
structure结构
The headline 标题
The lead 导语
The body 主体
The end 结语
假定你是李华, 上周五你校举办了爱国主义人物事迹展览活动。请你为校报写一篇英文新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 展览路线:从校门口到操场
3. 活动反响。
注意:
写作词数应为80左右
An Exhibition of Patriots’ stories
Step1 (Analyzing审题): Figure out the writing purpose, the tense & the event before you start.
Tense:
Person:
Event:
Simple past
Third/First
An Exhibition of Patriots’ stories
目的(why)
时间(when)
地点(where)
事情(what)
Step2(Outlining列提纲): Arrange the requirements into each part
The lead
参加人员(who)
The body
展览路线
The end
活动反响
5W
News report = 5W+1H+2Re
过程(how)
The body
展览路线
The end
活动反响
Result+Reflection
Step3(Adding补充): Add some detailed information
活动前
活动中
活动后
Process
2Re
Some useful expressions
First of all,
And then,
Result
Reflection
1. sth. turned out to be a success
2. sth. was thought highly of by sb.
评价高 / 非常重视
Not only could sb./sth. do..., but also do...
In order to do
Aimed at doing
Purpose
With the aim of doing
PART 3 Write
Write a news report within 10~12min
Checklist
Content 内容要点齐全 )
有适当拓展要点(5W1H2Re) )
Structure 格式:新闻报道(倒金字塔) )
段落:分段落写作(三段) )
结构:内容布局合理 )
Language Polish the language in the next lesson
Write a news report within 10~12min
假定你是李华, 上周五你校举办了爱国主义人物事迹展览活动。请你为校报写一篇英文新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 展览路线:从校门口到操场
3. 活动反响。
注意:
写作词数应为80左右
An Exhibition of Patriots’ stories
Write a news report within 10~12min
假定你是李华, 上周五你校举办了爱国主义人物事迹展览活动。请你为校报写一篇英文新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 参加人员:
2. 展览路线:从校门口到操场
3. 活动反响。
注意:
写作词数应为80左右
An Exhibition of Patriots’ stories
PART 4 Feedback
An Exhibition of Patriots’ Stories
Intended to enrich our campus life and arouse our love for our country, last Friday witnessed an exhibition of patriots’ stories in our school. Nearly two thousand students from three grades got involved in the activity actively.
The route of exhibition started at the school gate and ended at the sports field. First of all, the principal gave an opening speech,and then all the students read the stories with high spirits and shared their feelings with fellows.
The exhibition turned out to be a great success. Not only did it move every participant a great deal but also enable them to cherish the present lives and study much harder.
Write a news report within 10~12min
假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5千米越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1.参加人员;
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Write a news report within 10~12min
Step 2:字斟句酌 巧妙润色
1.上周日,我校举办了一场5千米越野跑比赛,我校师生参加了比赛。
①高级词汇和句式(并列句):Last Sunday witnessed a 5km cross-country running race,and both students and teachers of our school participated in the race.
②高级句式(利用定语从句升级):Last Sunday witnessed a 5km cross-country running race,in which both students and teachers of our school participated.
Write a news report within 10~12min
2.我们非常重视这项活动,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且对我们的身体和心理健康有很大的好处。
①高级词汇和句式(并列句):We thought highly of the activity, because it not only provided an opportunity for us to exercise,but it was also of great benefit to our health, physically and mentally.
②高级句式(利用被动句+倒装句升级):The activity was highly thought of, because not only did it provide an opportunity for us to exercise, but it was also of great benefit to our health, physically and mentally.
Write a news report within 10~12min
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed a 5km cross-country running race, in which both students and teachers of our school participated.
The route started from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. The whole course was extremely challenging, especially the part near the mountain, narrow and rough. However difficult it was, no participants gave up halfway. In the end, all the runners held on to the finish line.
The activity was highly thought of, because not only did it provide an opportunity for us to exercise, but it was also of great benefit to our health, physically and mentally.
Write a news report within 10~12min
假定你是学校英语杂志社的记者, 上周你校开展了给偏远地区学生捐赠“爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动的时间与地点;
2.活动过程;
3.活动意义。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Write a news report within 10~12min
假定你是学校英语杂志社的记者, 上周你校开展了给偏远地区学生捐赠“爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1.活动的时间与地点;
2.活动过程;
3.活动意义。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Write a news report within 10~12min
Loving Parcels for Students in Need(标题)
Last week (活动时间) witnessed our “Loving Parcels” donation activity at our school(活动主题与活动地点). Aimed at helping the students in the remote areas(活动目的), this activity was well received in the whole school.
All of the teachers and students(活动参与者) took an active part in the activity. The activity(活动) provided a platform for all the students to donate their clothes, books and schoolbags to the students in need(活动内容一). Most impressively, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the remote areas(活动内容二).
With the students’ active participation and teachers’ enthusiastic support, the donation was undoubtedly a success(活动结果).
Write a news report within 10~12min
你校上周组织了以“劳动最光荣”(Labor is the most glorious thing)为主题的社会实践活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.你参加的活动 (社区服务、公益活动等);
3.你的感想及收获。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Homework
polish
thanks for your listening
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