Unit 8 Making a Difference（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版八年级下册

**基本信息** 聚焦“志愿服务”应用文写作，构建“语言要素-仿写训练-写作流程-真题实战”四维体系，系统培养语言运用与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作基础|词汇23组/短语23个/句型14句|分类积累服务场景词汇、功能句型|从核心词汇到复杂句式，搭建表达阶梯| |仿写训练|基础8题+进阶8题|阶梯式仿写（替换要素→句式升级）|由简单替换到逻辑重组，提升语言转换能力| |写作步骤|3阶段流程+检查清单|三段式结构（引言-主体-结尾）+多维度修改策略|从构思提纲到定稿优化，形成完整写作闭环| |真题与练习|1真题+8练习题|情境化写作（社区服务/文化展览等）|对接中考高频话题，强化知识迁移与实战应用|

Unit 8 Make a Difference 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元的写作话题是“志愿服务”，属于“人与社会”范畴中的“志愿服务与社会责任”， 话题贴合学生校园生活与社会实践，引导学生书写公益、奉献、互助主题内容，传递正向价值观。课本要求针对这一话题写一封志愿者申请邮件，目的是向相关组织或负责人表达自己想要成为志愿者的意愿，突出个人优势和能力，以获取志愿者工作机会。此类写作文体多为应用文，采用第一人称进行叙述，主要使用一般现在时，用于陈述自身的能力、习惯和目前的时间安排；涉及过往经历时可用一般过去时和现在完成时。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 ①服务类型 volunteer, service, help, care, support, teach, clean, organize, participate ②服务对象 the elderly, children, disabled people, homeless animals, environment ③品质 kind, patient, responsible, helpful, outgoing, hard-working, warm-hearted, careful ④ 场所 community, nursing home, orphanage, animal shelter, school library，hospital 短语 ①do volunteer work 做志愿工作 ②help out 帮忙 ③take part in 参加 ④care for 照顾 ⑤make a difference 带来改变 ⑥be good at / be skilled in 擅长 ⑦have experience in 有……经验 ⑧be available to do 有时间做…… ⑨look forward to (doing) 期待 ⑩be suitable for 适合 ⑪volunteer for... 为……做志愿 ⑫take part in volunteer activities 参加志愿活动 ⑬help others in need 帮助有需要的人 ⑭be willing to do sth. 乐意做某事 ⑮have time to do sth. 有时间做某事 ⑯work hard 努力工作 ⑰get on well with others 和他人相处融洽 ⑱offer help to people 为他人提供帮助 ⑲serve the community 服务社区 ⑳gain valuable experience 收获宝贵的经验 ㉑improve my communication skills 提升沟通能力 ㉒take responsibility for... 对……负责 ㉓devote my time to volunteering 奉献时间做志愿 句型 ①I am writing to apply for the volunteer job because I really want to serve others.我写这封邮件是申请志愿者岗位，因为我真心想要服务他人。 ②I am writing to apply for the volunteer position at / in ... 我写信是为了申请……的志愿者岗位。 ③I am warm-hearted and patient. 我热心且有耐心。 ④I am free every Saturday afternoon. 我每周六下午有空。 ⑤I have lots of free time on weekends. 我周末有很多空闲时间。 ⑥I like helping people in need. 我喜欢帮助有需要的人。 ⑦I hope I can join the volunteer activity. 我希望我能参加这次志愿活动。 ⑧I believe I am a good choice for this job because ... 我相信我是这份工作的好人选，因为…… ⑨Not only do I have plenty of free time, but I am also good at communicating with different people.我不仅有充足的空闲时间，也擅长和不同的人沟通。 ⑩I believe I can do the volunteer work well with my patience and responsibility. 我相信凭借我的耐心和责任心，我可以做好这份志愿工作。 ⑪Taking part in volunteer activities can help me grow up and make our world warmer.参加志愿活动能让我成长，也能让我们的世界更温暖。 ⑫Thank you for considering my application. 感谢您考虑我的申请。 ⑬I will try my best to finish all the volunteer tasks if I get the chance. 如果我能获得这个机会，我会尽全力完成所有志愿工作。 ⑭I look forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。 名言 ①Helping others is helping ourselves. 帮助他人，就是成就自己。 ②Small kindness makes big warmth. 小小善意，汇聚大大温暖。 ③Small acts of kindness can make a big difference. 小小的善举也能带来巨大的改变。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 1. 原句：I want to be a community volunteer.（我想成为一名社区志愿者。） 仿写：________________________________我想成为一名医院志愿者。 【答案】I want to be a hospital volunteer. 2. 原句：I am willing to help old people.我乐意帮助老人。 仿写：________________________________我乐意帮助贫困儿童。 【答案】I am willing to help poor children. 3. 原句：I have free time to take part in the activity. 我有空闲时间参加这项活动。 仿写：________________________________我有充足的时间做志愿工作。 【答案】I have enough time to do volunteer work. 4. 原句：I hope to make more people happy. 我希望让更多人开心。 仿写： ________________________________ 我希望给他人带去温暖。 【答案】I hope to bring warmth to others. 5. 原句：I can read stories to children. 我可以给孩子们读故事。 仿写：________________________________我可以给植物浇水、喂养小动物。 【答案】I can water the plants and feed the animals. 6. 原句：I am kind and patient. 我善良且有耐心。 仿写：________________________________我有责任心且做事认真。 【答案】I am responsible and hard-working. 7. 原句：I am free on weekends. 我周末有空。 仿写：________________________________ 我每周二下午三点到五点有空。 【答案】I am available from 3 pm to 5 pm every Tuesday. 8. 原句：I hope to get this chance.我希望能得到这次机会。 仿写：________________________________我希望能去敬老院为老人服务。 【答案】I hope to work with the old people in the nursing home. （二）进阶仿写 1. 原句：I am writing to apply for the volunteer job. It is my dream to serve others. 我写信申请志愿者岗位，服务他人是我的梦想。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我写信申请成为志愿者，因为我一直希望为他人做一些有意义的事。 【答案】I am writing to ask for a chance to be a volunteer, because I always hope to do something meaningful for others. 2. 原句：I am writing to apply for the volunteer job. 我写信是为了申请这份志愿者工作。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我写信是想申请贵馆的图书阅读助手志愿者岗位。 【答案】I am writing to apply for the position of a reading helper at your library. 3. 原句：I am patient and responsible, so I can finish the work well. 我耐心且负责，因此我能做好这份工作。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 作为一名细心、积极的学生，我确信我能成为一名优秀的志愿者。 【答案】As a careful and active student, I am sure I can be a good volunteer. 4. 原句：Volunteer work is meaningful and it can help me improve myself. 志愿工作很有意义，还能帮助我提升自我。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 做志愿工作不仅能帮助弱势群体，也能让我变得更优秀。 【答案】Doing volunteer work not only helps people in need but also makes me become a better person. 5. 原句：I want to help others because it makes me happy. 我想要帮助他人，因为这让我快乐。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我志愿成为一名工作人员，因为没有什么比给他人带去快乐更有意义。 【答案】I would like to become a volunteer because nothing is more meaningful than bringing joy to others. 6. 原句：I am good at talking with people. 我擅长与人交流。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我不仅善于沟通，而且还是一名非常有耐心的倾听者。 【答案】Not only am I good at communicating, but I am also a very patient listener. 7. 原句：I can teach children English. 我可以教孩子们英语。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我已经学习英语五年，我相信我能帮助孩子们提升发音和阅读水平。 【答案】Having learned English for five years, I believe I can help children improve their pronunciation and reading. 8. 原句：I look forward to your reply.我期待您的回复。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 若能给我一个服务社区的机会，我将万分感激。 【答案】I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a chance to serve our community. 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing 1、Imagine that you are planning to be a student volunteer. Make notes with the help of these questions. 1). What would you like to be/do? ___________________________________ 2). Why do you want to be a volunteer? _________________________________________________ 3). What skills or talents do you have? _________________________________________________ 4). What experience do you have as a volunteer? ____________________________________________________ 5). Why do you think you are a good choice? __________________________________________________ 6). What other thoughts do you have about volunteering? __________________________________________________ 2、列提纲，写句子 话题1：介绍自己的一个兴趣爱好（是什么→怎么开始的→带来的好处） 话题2：描述一次难忘的业务活动（是什么活动→过程如何→收获与感悟） 列提纲 示例 Beginning （20词左右）：自我介绍+写信目的（申请志愿者） I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to... Body （40-60词）：申请原因（热爱公益、想服务他人）+个人优势+行动承诺（时间、性格、能力、做法） I love helping others... Volunteer work is meaningful... I am...I have free time...I will try my best to... I am not only...but also... Ending （20词左右）： 表达期盼+礼貌结尾 I hope I can get the chance. Thank you! I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a chance to serve our community. 二、While-writing 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 三、Post - writing  1、自我检查清单： ①内容完整吗？ 是否包含了自我介绍、动机、优势、时间、期待？ ②格式正确吗？ 有称呼、结尾语、签名吗？ ③语法与拼写： · 动词时态 (一般现在时为主) · 主谓一致 (I am / He is) · 拼写 (volunteer, available, etc.) 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议。 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误。 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 【范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your advertisement, and I am writing to apply for the volunteer job at your animal shelter. My name is Zhang Wei and I am a Grade 8 student. I love animals very much. I want to help them because they need care and kindness. I am a responsible and patient person. I can feed the animals, clean their cages, and walk the dogs. I am also good at taking photos, so I can help share their stories online to find new homes. I am free every Saturday morning and all day during school holidays. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei 写作真题 赏 赠人玫瑰，手留余香。近日，为弘扬传统美德，培养学生能力，阳光中学准备招募学生志愿者加入援助之手俱乐部（Helping Hands Club），以开展服务社区老人的慈善活动。假如你是李华，你想成为志愿者参与此次活动，请你根据以下思维导图，完成申请信。 注意事项： 1. 申请信须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为限定性内容； 3. 词数不少于90词，申请信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 申请信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 Dear Chairperson, I am writing to join the Helping Hands Club. ________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Chairperson, I am writing to join the Helping Hands Club. My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old. I study in Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. I am in Grade 2. I like playing the piano and basketball. I am good at telling stories, so I can tell stories to the elderly. I want to make my own contribution to taking care of the elderly. I’m looking forward to your reply. My e-mail address is Li Hua@163.com. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为申请信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的性格和爱好； 第二步，说明想加入的俱乐部及原因； 第三步，书写结束语。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②be good at doing sth.擅长做某事 ③make contribution to为……做贡献 ④look forward to期望 [高分句型] I am good at telling stories, so I can tell stories to the elderly.（so引导的句子） 题型通关 练 1．如果你是李华，下个月你们学校将开展志愿者服务活动。请根据以下表格提示内容，用英语给你的笔友Sandy写一封信，告诉她你将在学校做什么志愿者工作，并且说一说你为什么要做志愿者工作。 Places Activities Reasons Classroom Help others with their studies; Hand out food at noon ? School playground Clean up the playground … 要求： 1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名； 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰； 4.词数：不少于80词。 Dear Sandy, How are you? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Sandy, How are you? Next month, our school will hold a volunteer activity. I will help classmates with their studies and hand out food at noon in the classroom. Also, I plan to clean up the school playground. I want to be a volunteer because it makes me happy to help others. I can learn new things and make more friends. Moreover, keeping our school clean is everyone's duty. I believe doing small things can make a big difference. I’m sure this will be a great experience for me. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：说明文（书信作文），以一般将来时为主 明确要点：告知对方学校将举办志愿活动，介绍自己的志愿内容，说明当志愿者的原因与意义 确定人称：第一人称 (I) 注意事项：要点完整不遗漏；语法拼写正确，句式通顺。 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：问候并介绍学校志愿活动及自己要做的事； 中间段：说明想当志愿者的原因与收获； 结尾段：表达期待与祝福。 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：活动内容 help classmates with their studies/hand out food/clean up the school playground 要点二：志愿原因 help others/make me happy 要点三：个人收获 learn new things/make more friends 要点四：责任意义 keep school clean/make a big difference/great experience 2．热心公益，争当志愿者，积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动的计划。 要点：1. What type of volunteer do you want to be? 2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that? 3. How will you work as a volunteer? 要求：1. 短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥； 2. 词数 100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to become a volunteer at a local nursing home.   I want to help the elderly because they often feel lonely and need companionship. I believe spending time with them can bring them joy and make a positive difference in their lives.   As a volunteer, I will visit the nursing home twice a week. I will read books to the elderly, chat with them, and help organize activities like singing or simple crafts. I will also assist the staff with small tasks to make their work easier.   I hope my efforts will bring smiles to their faces and show them that young people care about them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇计划类应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“为了培养责任感，计划成为当地养老院的志愿者”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“原因、计划做什么”几个方面重点介绍志愿服务的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望自己的努力能给老人带来笑容，让他们感受到年轻人的关心”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①make a positive difference in在……方面产生积极影响 ②assist with帮助 [高分句型] ①I believe spending time with them can bring them joy and make a positive difference in their lives.（宾语从句） ②I hope my efforts will bring smiles to their faces and show them that young people care about them.（宾语从句） 3．随着荣昌火热出圈成为网红城市，越来越多游客甚至国外游客来荣昌旅游打卡。政府号召广大市民积极加入志愿者行列，做好荣昌推荐官，服务八方游人。作为荣昌人，你想结合自身优势和具体做法，申请成为志愿者。 写作参考： 写作要求： 1. 可参考但不仅限于写作建议，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3. 文中不出现真实姓名或学校名； 4. 词数不少于80词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am glad to hear that you are calling for volunteers to introduce Rongchang and serve the tourists. I hope_____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Lin Rui 【答案】例文： Dear Sir or Madam,     I am glad to hear that you are calling for volunteers to introduce Rongchang and serve the tourists. I hope I can be one of them.     As a native of Rongchang, I know this city well. I’m friendly and helpful, which makes me good at communicating with people. I can introduce delicious local food like braised goose, bedding noodles and yellow bean jelly to tourists. Also, I’m familiar with beautiful sights such as Xiabu Town and Antao Ceramic Town. I can recommend outdoor activities like dragon boat races and camping too. Moreover, I’ll spread intangible heritage like Rongchang pottery and grass linen folding fan.     I’ll do my best to be a great spokesman of Rongchang. Yours truly,   Lin Rui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇申请信； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：需结合自身优势与具体做法申请成为荣昌志愿者，包含对本地了解、可介绍推广的内容等要点，需突出能为游客服务的方面 。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述写作意图，表明得知招募志愿者后希望成为其中一员； 第二步，从作为荣昌本地人熟悉城市，自身友好、擅长交流，能介绍美食、美景、户外活动、传播非遗多方面说明自身优势与可做的具体事； 第三步，表达会尽全力做好荣昌推荐官的决心 。 [亮点词汇] ①native本地人 ②communicate with和……交流 ③intangible heritage非物质文化遗产 [高分句型] ①I’m friendly and helpful, which makes me good at communicating with people. (which引导定语从句) 4．假如你是李华，你有一个美国笔友Lucy打算下个月来广州游玩，你打算写信邀请她一起参加下个月的广东博物馆中国传统艺术展览的志愿者工作。请你介绍展览的基本内容，说明志愿服务的好处，并邀请她一起做志愿者。 邀请Lucy做志愿者的原因 Lucy非常热爱中国传统文化 Lucy热衷于参加志愿者工作 展览的基本内容 欣赏中国传统艺术作品 观看皮影戏(shadow puppet plays) ……(自行补充一个活动内容) 志愿服务的好处 引导游客 ……(自行补充一个好处) 注意事项： (1)词数80—100左右(请根据要点提示适当发挥，使内容充实，行文连贯。)； (2)开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Lucy, I’m so excited to know that you’re coming to Guangzhou next month! And I have something really cool to share with you._________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lucy, I’m so excited to know that you’re coming to Guangzhou next month! And I have something really cool to share with you. There will be an exhibition of Chinese traditional art in Guangdong Museum next month. You love Chinese traditional culture so much, and this is a perfect chance for you. At the exhibition, you can admire various traditional artworks. There will also be shadow puppet plays, which are full of charm. Additionally, you can join a Chinese knot-making workshop. It’s really interesting to create beautiful knots by hand. Volunteering at this exhibition is beneficial. You can guide visitors, helping them better understand the artworks. Moreover, it’s a great way to make new friends who share the same interests. Since you’re enthusiastic about volunteer work, would you like to be a volunteer with me? I’m sure we’ll have a great time. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头表达得知 Lucy要来广州的兴奋，引出下文要分享的事。 第二步，介绍展览基本内容，如欣赏传统艺术作品、观看皮影戏、参加中国结制作工作坊等。接着阐述志愿服务的好处，像引导游客、结交志同道合的朋友。 第三步，发出邀请并表达期待回复。 [亮点词汇] ①be excited to 对……感到兴奋 ②be full of 充满 ③make new friends 交新朋友 [高分句型] ①There will also be shadow puppet plays, which are full of charm.（which引导非限制性定语从句） ②It’s really interesting to create beautiful knots by hand.（it作形式主语，真正主语是后面的不定式） 5．志愿服务源于心，献出爱心在于行。学校将举行以“Volunteering makes me happy”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。 活动内容 1.清理公园垃圾； 2.整理图书馆书籍； 3… 活动意义 1.培养生活技能； 2… 3… 发出倡议 …… 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear classmates, Volunteering is an experience that brings joy to us. As middle school students, we have many chances to volunteer. For example, we can clean up parks to make them more beautiful. And in the library we can volunteer to tidy up books to keep it organized. Besides, we can visit the old peoples home to help care for the old. By doing these, we can develop life skills to look after ourselves and become more independent. We can also improve our ability to communicate with others, building friendships. What’s more, we can get the feelings of satisfaction from helping people in need. All in all, volunteering creates a better life so let’s take an active part in it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题并具体阐述活动内容，如清理公园、图书馆整理书籍、探访老人院等，展示参与志愿服务的多样活动及这些活动发生的地点。 第二步，深入讨论活动意义，论述参与志愿服务如何帮助学生发展生活技能、增强沟通能力、建立友谊及获得满足感。 第三步，发出倡议，总结志愿服务对创造更美好生活的积极影响，并鼓励同学们积极参与。 [亮点词汇] ①develop life skills培养生活技能 ②independent独立的 ③communicate with others与他人沟通 ④the feelings of satisfaction满足感 ⑤people in need需要帮助的人 [高分句型] ①Volunteering is an experience that brings joy to us. (that引导定语从句) ②We can also improve our ability to communicate with others, building friendships. (非谓语动词“building”作结果状语) ③All in all, volunteering creates a better life so let’s take an active part in it. (so连接并列句) 6．学校英文学习报正在开展以“志愿者服务”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示信息，以“My Experience of Being A Volunteer”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍一下你的志愿者工作内容和感受。 My Experience of Being A Volunteer What did you do? How did you feel? What did you learn? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） My Experience of Being A Volunteer It is important for middle school students to take part in volunteer service activities in their free time. ____________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Experience of Being A Volunteer It is important for middle school students to take part in volunteer service activities in their free time. Last year, I joined a group to help the neighbors throw out their rubbish. Every morning, I needed to get up very early, and collect the rubbish from door to door. At first, I found it hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for two weeks. In the end, I got a thank-you letter from the neighbors. At that time, I felt proud of myself. From that, I learned how to sort different kinds of garbage. What’s more, I know that I am able to offer help even though I am still a middle school student. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：要求以“My Experience of Being A Volunteer”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明参加志愿服务活动是很重要的； 第二步，具体介绍自己的志愿经历和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①throw out 扔出 ②get up 起床 ③In the end 最后 ④sort different kinds of garbage 分类不同种类的垃圾 [高分句型] ①Every morning, I needed to get up very early, and collect the rubbish from door to door.（并列结构） ②What’s more, I know that I am able to offer help even though I am still a middle school student.（宾语从句和让步状语从句） 7．6月3日，教育部发布文件，将劳动教育(labor education)纳入义务教育必修课。劳动教育，也是吃苦耐劳精神的教育，包括了家务、校内劳动、社区志愿者服务等方面。在暑假即将到来之际，为了响应教育部的号召，我校鼓励学生积极参加志愿者活动。扬州援手俱乐部正在招募暑期志愿者。假设你是李华，请结合图片提示写一封自荐信。 要求： 1、字数100字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数。 2、缩写短文必须包括图片要点并适当发挥让文章流畅。 3、文中不出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. _________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to receiving your letter soon. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer to do some voluntary activities in Yangzhou. I do well in making a speech and I’m good at communicating with others. I have a lot of free time during the summer vacation. I have taken part in some voluntary activities in my neighborhood since I was young. I have a habit of helping others in trouble. I can get on well with others and I am patient with children and the elderly. At weekends I often go to the library to do some voluntary work. At school I often help with my classmates. I do voluntary activities more than ten times a year. Voluntary activities make my life meaningful. They not only increase our knowledge, improve our abilities to solve problems, but also help me form a good habit with the feelings of happiness. I am looking forward to receiving your letter soon. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信，申请成为扬州援手俱乐部的志愿者，要包括个人自荐条件，结合图片提示进行写作，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。要沿用已给出的开头和结尾，中间叙述个人推荐条件。要包含所有提示信息，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 8．让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work ◎Help in the city library               ◎Clean up the city parks ◎Hold a charity bazaar（义卖）       ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital ◎Visit the old people’s home           ◎… 要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 My Volunteer Work Plan ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Volunteer Work Plan The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city park. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon. Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 8 Make a Difference 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元的写作话题是“志愿服务”，属于“人与社会”范畴中的“志愿服务与社会责任”， 话题贴合学生校园生活与社会实践，引导学生书写公益、奉献、互助主题内容，传递正向价值观。课本要求针对这一话题写一封志愿者申请邮件，目的是向相关组织或负责人表达自己想要成为志愿者的意愿，突出个人优势和能力，以获取志愿者工作机会。此类写作文体多为应用文，采用第一人称进行叙述，主要使用一般现在时，用于陈述自身的能力、习惯和目前的时间安排；涉及过往经历时可用一般过去时和现在完成时。 本单元相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 ①服务类型 volunteer, service, help, care, support, teach, clean, organize, participate ②服务对象 the elderly, children, disabled people, homeless animals, environment ③品质 kind, patient, responsible, helpful, outgoing, hard-working, warm-hearted, careful ④ 场所 community, nursing home, orphanage, animal shelter, school library，hospital 短语 ①do volunteer work 做志愿工作 ②help out 帮忙 ③take part in 参加 ④care for 照顾 ⑤make a difference 带来改变 ⑥be good at / be skilled in 擅长 ⑦have experience in 有……经验 ⑧be available to do 有时间做…… ⑨look forward to (doing) 期待 ⑩be suitable for 适合 ⑪volunteer for... 为……做志愿 ⑫take part in volunteer activities 参加志愿活动 ⑬help others in need 帮助有需要的人 ⑭be willing to do sth. 乐意做某事 ⑮have time to do sth. 有时间做某事 ⑯work hard 努力工作 ⑰get on well with others 和他人相处融洽 ⑱offer help to people 为他人提供帮助 ⑲serve the community 服务社区 ⑳gain valuable experience 收获宝贵的经验 ㉑improve my communication skills 提升沟通能力 ㉒take responsibility for... 对……负责 ㉓devote my time to volunteering 奉献时间做志愿 句型 ①I am writing to apply for the volunteer job because I really want to serve others.我写这封邮件是申请志愿者岗位，因为我真心想要服务他人。 ②I am writing to apply for the volunteer position at / in ... 我写信是为了申请……的志愿者岗位。 ③I am warm-hearted and patient. 我热心且有耐心。 ④I am free every Saturday afternoon. 我每周六下午有空。 ⑤I have lots of free time on weekends. 我周末有很多空闲时间。 ⑥I like helping people in need. 我喜欢帮助有需要的人。 ⑦I hope I can join the volunteer activity. 我希望我能参加这次志愿活动。 ⑧I believe I am a good choice for this job because ... 我相信我是这份工作的好人选，因为…… ⑨Not only do I have plenty of free time, but I am also good at communicating with different people.我不仅有充足的空闲时间，也擅长和不同的人沟通。 ⑩I believe I can do the volunteer work well with my patience and responsibility. 我相信凭借我的耐心和责任心，我可以做好这份志愿工作。 ⑪Taking part in volunteer activities can help me grow up and make our world warmer.参加志愿活动能让我成长，也能让我们的世界更温暖。 ⑫Thank you for considering my application. 感谢您考虑我的申请。 ⑬I will try my best to finish all the volunteer tasks if I get the chance. 如果我能获得这个机会，我会尽全力完成所有志愿工作。 ⑭I look forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。 名言 ①Helping others is helping ourselves. 帮助他人，就是成就自己。 ②Small kindness makes big warmth. 小小善意，汇聚大大温暖。 ③Small acts of kindness can make a big difference. 小小的善举也能带来巨大的改变。 优美句子 仿 （一）基础仿写 1. 原句：I want to be a community volunteer.（我想成为一名社区志愿者。） 仿写：________________________________我想成为一名医院志愿者。 2. 原句：I am willing to help old people.我乐意帮助老人。 仿写：________________________________我乐意帮助贫困儿童。 3. 原句：I have free time to take part in the activity. 我有空闲时间参加这项活动。 仿写：________________________________我有充足的时间做志愿工作。 4. 原句：I hope to make more people happy. 我希望让更多人开心。 仿写： ________________________________ 我希望给他人带去温暖。 5. 原句：I can read stories to children. 我可以给孩子们读故事。 仿写：________________________________我可以给植物浇水、喂养小动物。 6. 原句：I am kind and patient. 我善良且有耐心。 仿写：________________________________我有责任心且做事认真。 7. 原句：I am free on weekends. 我周末有空。 仿写：________________________________ 我每周二下午三点到五点有空。 8. 原句：I hope to get this chance.我希望能得到这次机会。 仿写：________________________________我希望能去敬老院为老人服务。 （二）进阶仿写 1. 原句：I am writing to apply for the volunteer job. It is my dream to serve others. 我写信申请志愿者岗位，服务他人是我的梦想。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我写信申请成为志愿者，因为我一直希望为他人做一些有意义的事。 2. 原句：I am writing to apply for the volunteer job. 我写信是为了申请这份志愿者工作。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我写信是想申请贵馆的图书阅读助手志愿者岗位。 3. 原句：I am patient and responsible, so I can finish the work well. 我耐心且负责，因此我能做好这份工作。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 作为一名细心、积极的学生，我确信我能成为一名优秀的志愿者。 4. 原句：Volunteer work is meaningful and it can help me improve myself. 志愿工作很有意义，还能帮助我提升自我。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 做志愿工作不仅能帮助弱势群体，也能让我变得更优秀。 5. 原句：I want to help others because it makes me happy. 我想要帮助他人，因为这让我快乐。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我志愿成为一名工作人员，因为没有什么比给他人带去快乐更有意义。 6. 原句：I am good at talking with people. 我擅长与人交流。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我不仅善于沟通，而且还是一名非常有耐心的倾听者。 7. 原句：I can teach children English. 我可以教孩子们英语。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 我已经学习英语五年，我相信我能帮助孩子们提升发音和阅读水平。 8. 原句：I look forward to your reply.我期待您的回复。 仿写：___________________________________________________________ 若能给我一个服务社区的机会，我将万分感激。 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing 1、Imagine that you are planning to be a student volunteer. Make notes with the help of these questions. 1). What would you like to be/do? ___________________________________ 2). Why do you want to be a volunteer? _________________________________________________ 3). What skills or talents do you have? _________________________________________________ 4). What experience do you have as a volunteer? ____________________________________________________ 5). Why do you think you are a good choice? __________________________________________________ 6). What other thoughts do you have about volunteering? __________________________________________________ 2、列提纲，写句子 话题1：介绍自己的一个兴趣爱好（是什么→怎么开始的→带来的好处） 话题2：描述一次难忘的业务活动（是什么活动→过程如何→收获与感悟） 列提纲 示例 Beginning （20词左右）：自我介绍+写信目的（申请志愿者） I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to... Body （40-60词）：申请原因（热爱公益、想服务他人）+个人优势+行动承诺（时间、性格、能力、做法） I love helping others... Volunteer work is meaningful... I am...I have free time...I will try my best to... I am not only...but also... Ending （20词左右）： 表达期盼+礼貌结尾 I hope I can get the chance. Thank you! I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a chance to serve our community. 二、While-writing 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型。 三、Post - writing  1、自我检查清单： ①内容完整吗？ 是否包含了自我介绍、动机、优势、时间、期待？ ②格式正确吗？ 有称呼、结尾语、签名吗？ ③语法与拼写： · 动词时态 (一般现在时为主) · 主谓一致 (I am / He is) · 拼写 (volunteer, available, etc.) 2. 同伴互评：两人一组，根据“内容完整度、语法正确性、表达流畅度”打分，并提出修改建议。 3. 教师点评：选取2-3篇优秀范文和1-2篇典型问题作文，重点讲解亮点表达和常见错误。 4. 点评后，同学对自己的作文进行修改，然后完成定稿。 写作真题 赏 赠人玫瑰，手留余香。近日，为弘扬传统美德，培养学生能力，阳光中学准备招募学生志愿者加入援助之手俱乐部（Helping Hands Club），以开展服务社区老人的慈善活动。假如你是李华，你想成为志愿者参与此次活动，请你根据以下思维导图，完成申请信。 注意事项： 1. 申请信须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 流程图中括号部分为限定性内容； 3. 词数不少于90词，申请信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 申请信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 Dear Chairperson, I am writing to join the Helping Hands Club. ________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题型通关 练 1．如果你是李华，下个月你们学校将开展志愿者服务活动。请根据以下表格提示内容，用英语给你的笔友Sandy写一封信，告诉她你将在学校做什么志愿者工作，并且说一说你为什么要做志愿者工作。 Places Activities Reasons Classroom Help others with their studies; Hand out food at noon ? School playground Clean up the playground … 要求： 1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名； 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰； 4.词数：不少于80词。 Dear Sandy, How are you? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes Yours, Li Hua 2．热心公益，争当志愿者，积极为文明实践、阳光助残、环境保护、为老弱服务等志愿项目作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你按以下要点，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备作为志愿者参加的一次服务活动的计划。 要点：1. What type of volunteer do you want to be? 2. Why do you want to be a volunteer like that? 3. How will you work as a volunteer? 要求：1. 短文必须包含所有要求并适当发挥； 2. 词数 100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．随着荣昌火热出圈成为网红城市，越来越多游客甚至国外游客来荣昌旅游打卡。政府号召广大市民积极加入志愿者行列，做好荣昌推荐官，服务八方游人。作为荣昌人，你想结合自身优势和具体做法，申请成为志愿者。 写作参考： 写作要求： 1. 可参考但不仅限于写作建议，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3. 文中不出现真实姓名或学校名； 4. 词数不少于80词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am glad to hear that you are calling for volunteers to introduce Rongchang and serve the tourists. I hope_____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Lin Rui 4．假如你是李华，你有一个美国笔友Lucy打算下个月来广州游玩，你打算写信邀请她一起参加下个月的广东博物馆中国传统艺术展览的志愿者工作。请你介绍展览的基本内容，说明志愿服务的好处，并邀请她一起做志愿者。 邀请Lucy做志愿者的原因 Lucy非常热爱中国传统文化 Lucy热衷于参加志愿者工作 展览的基本内容 欣赏中国传统艺术作品 观看皮影戏(shadow puppet plays) ……(自行补充一个活动内容) 志愿服务的好处 引导游客 ……(自行补充一个好处) 注意事项： (1)词数80—100左右(请根据要点提示适当发挥，使内容充实，行文连贯。)； (2)开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Lucy, I’m so excited to know that you’re coming to Guangzhou next month! And I have something really cool to share with you._________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．志愿服务源于心，献出爱心在于行。学校将举行以“Volunteering makes me happy”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。 活动内容 1.清理公园垃圾； 2.整理图书馆书籍； 3… 活动意义 1.培养生活技能； 2… 3… 发出倡议 …… 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear classmates, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．学校英文学习报正在开展以“志愿者服务”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示信息，以“My Experience of Being A Volunteer”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍一下你的志愿者工作内容和感受。 My Experience of Being A Volunteer What did you do? How did you feel? What did you learn? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） My Experience of Being A Volunteer It is important for middle school students to take part in volunteer service activities in their free time. ____________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．6月3日，教育部发布文件，将劳动教育(labor education)纳入义务教育必修课。劳动教育，也是吃苦耐劳精神的教育，包括了家务、校内劳动、社区志愿者服务等方面。在暑假即将到来之际，为了响应教育部的号召，我校鼓励学生积极参加志愿者活动。扬州援手俱乐部正在招募暑期志愿者。假设你是李华，请结合图片提示写一封自荐信。 要求： 1、字数100字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数。 2、缩写短文必须包括图片要点并适当发挥让文章流畅。 3、文中不出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua. _________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to receiving your letter soon. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 8．让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。 Volunteer Work ◎Help in the city library               ◎Clean up the city parks ◎Hold a charity bazaar（义卖）       ◎Do volunteer work in a hospital ◎Visit the old people’s home           ◎… 要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。 My Volunteer Work Plan ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $