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重庆西南大学附中高2026届高三英语5月模拟考应用文深度解析
一、题目
近期,你校学生会调查发现部分同学因法律知识匮乏,常无法察觉生活中的潜在违法行为。为改变这一现状,校英语报特举办Law in Mind, Safety in Hand主题征文活动。请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1 说明问题;
2 提出建议。注意:
3 写作词数应为 80 左右;
4 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
二、审题
1 文体类型:校园英文报主题征文投稿
2 写作身份:在校高中生
3 写作对象:全校师生、校英文报读者
4 写作目的:指出学生法律知识匮乏、难以识别生活潜在违法行为的现状,给出可行建议,呼吁大家学法懂法、筑牢安全防线
5 任务要点:①点明现存问题及危害 ②给出切实可行的改进建议
6 写作语境:语气正式诚恳、条理清晰、倡议感强;
词数 80 词左右,要点齐全、逻辑连贯、行文自然地道。
三、写作构思
1 第一部分:开篇引入,引用学生会调查结果,点明当下学生法律知识薄弱的现状。
2 第二部分:主体第一段,分析问题带来的隐患:难以识别潜在违法行为,自身权益与人身安全易受侵害。
3 第三部分:主体第二段,给出具体可行建议:主动学法、提高警惕、遇事向师长求助。
4 第四部分:简短收尾,呼应标题,呼吁心中有法、守护自身安全。
四、核心词汇
1. 现状问题相关
词汇
造句
中文意思
lack legal knowledge 缺乏法律知识
Many teenagers lack basic legal knowledge in daily life.
许多青少年缺乏基础法律知识。
legal awareness 法律意识
Most students have weak legal awareness nowadays.
如今大多数学生法律意识淡薄。
potential illegal acts 潜在违法行为
We should be alert to potential illegal acts around us.
我们要警惕身边的潜在违法行为。
hidden risks 隐形隐患
Ignoring laws will bring many hidden risks to us.
漠视法律会给我们带来诸多隐形隐患。
2. 建议措施相关
词汇
造句
中文意思
raise legal awareness 提高法律意识
We need to raise our legal awareness from now on.
我们需要从现在起提高法律意识。
stay alert to 保持警惕
We must stay alert to strange people and things.
我们必须对陌生人和事保持警惕。
protect personal rights 维护个人权益
Laws can help us effectively protect personal rights.
法律能帮我们有效维护个人权益。
turn to ... for help 向…… 求助
We can turn to teachers and parents for help in time.
我们可以及时向老师和家长求助。
五、实用句型
1. 开篇引出现状
句型
例句
中文意思
A recent survey shows that...
A recent survey shows that many students are short of legal knowledge.
近期一项调查显示许多学生缺乏法律知识。
It is found that...
It is found that students fail to notice illegal acts in daily life.
调查发现学生难以察觉生活中的违法行为。
2. 分析问题危害
句型
例句
中文意思
be exposed to various dangers
They are easily exposed to various hidden dangers.
他们很容易陷入各种隐形危险中。
put personal safety at risk
Such ignorance will put our personal safety at risk.
这种无知会危及我们的人身安全。
3. 提出建议做法
句型
例句
中文意思
It’s high time for us to...
It’s high time for us to learn basic legal rules.
我们是时候学习基础法律常识了。
We are supposed to...
We are supposed to keep the law in mind all the time.
我们理应时刻把法律铭记于心。
六、语料积累
英文词组
英文造句
中文释义
be deficient in legal knowledge 法律知识欠缺
Some teenagers are deficient in legal knowledge and self-protection awareness.
部分青少年法律知识和自保意识欠缺。
self-protection awareness 自我保护意识
We should strengthen our self-protection awareness in daily life.
我们在生活中要增强自我保护意识。
obey and abide by the law 遵纪守法
Every student should obey and abide by the law strictly.
每位学生都应严格遵纪守法。
avoid falling into traps 避免落入圈套
Legal knowledge helps us avoid falling into illegal traps.
法律知识帮我们避免落入违法圈套。
shape a safe campus atmosphere 营造安全校园氛围
Learning laws helps shape a safe campus atmosphere.
学法有助于营造安全的校园氛围。
七、参考范文
Law in Mind, Safety in Hand
A recent survey by the Student Union shows that many students are deficient in legal knowledge. They can hardly recognize potential illegal acts in daily life, which puts their personal rights and safety at great risk.
To change the situation, we should take practical action. First, learn basic legal knowledge actively in spare time to raise our legal awareness. Second, stay alert to strange surroundings and keep away from hidden traps. Third, turn to teachers or parents for help immediately once we meet illegal troubles.
Always keep law in mind, and we can firmly hold safety in hand.
练习部分
1. 汉译英
1 近期学生会调查发现许多学生法律知识匮乏。
2 他们难以察觉生活中的潜在违法行为。
3 我们应该提高法律意识,增强自我保护能力。
4 遇到麻烦时,我们要及时向老师和家长求助。
5 心中有法,才能守护好自身安全。
2. 高频短语中英互译
英译中
1 lack legal knowledge ——
2 potential illegal acts ——
3 legal awareness ——
4 personal safety ——
5 stay alert to ——
6 turn to ... for help ——
7 self-protection awareness ——
中译英
1 法律知识匮乏 ——
2 潜在违法行为 ——
3 提高法律意识 ——
4 维护个人权益 ——
5 向师长求助 ——
6 增强自保意识 ——
7 营造安全校园氛围 ——
答案:
1. 汉译英
参考译文
1 A recent survey by the Student Union finds that many students lack legal knowledge.
2 They can hardly notice potential illegal acts in daily life.
3 We should raise legal awareness and strengthen self-protection ability.
4 When meeting trouble, we should turn to teachers and parents for help in time.
5 Only by keeping law in mind can we guard our personal safety.
2. 高频短语中英互译
英译中
答案
1 lack legal knowledge —— 缺乏法律知识
2 potential illegal acts —— 潜在违法行为
3 legal awareness —— 法律意识
4 personal safety —— 人身安全
5 stay alert to —— 对…… 保持警惕
6 turn to ... for help —— 向…… 求助
7 self-protection awareness —— 自我保护意识
中译英
答案
1 法律知识匮乏 —— be deficient in legal knowledge
2 潜在违法行为 —— potential illegal acts
3 提高法律意识 —— raise legal awareness
4 维护个人权益 —— protect personal rights
5 向师长求助 —— turn to teachers and parents for help
6 增强自保意识 —— strengthen self-protection awareness
7 营造安全校园氛围 —— shape a safe campus atmosphere
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