【听歌学英语】Edelweiss 形容词做状语(歌词填空、写作指导、句式升级) 课件-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

2026.5.11-5.12圆创联考 2026.5.11-5.12圆创联考 2026.5.11-5.12圆创联考 观察对比：激发模仿欲望！ 【听歌学英语】 形容词做状语 (歌词填空、写作指导、句式升级) 导入：音乐欣赏（猜歌名+歌曲主旨） 创作背景 主旨思想 Edelweiss是美国电影和音乐剧《音乐之声》中的著名歌曲，于1959年面世。 电影剧情：上校一家参加为德国军官举行的音乐会，他们决定当夜离开奥地利，前往瑞士。音乐会上，上校弹起吉他，唱起了这首奥地利民歌，之后哽咽地唱不下去了，玛利亚和孩子们走上去与他一起唱，他们的深情感动了在场的奥地利观众，在上校的示意下奥地利观众都激动地与他们合唱了起来。 这首歌把edelweiss拟人化，使它具有人类的感情和高尚的品格，难怪男主人公在开始唱之前对观众说他要唱首情歌。不错，他将自己的感情注入这一生长在高山的植物，更主要的是，他通过这“小而白、洁又亮”的小花儿保佑自己的祖国永远平安、顽强。 这首歌歌词不长，却情深意远。主人公赞扬雪绒花的美丽，实际在希望自己的祖国也不失这些品性。 歌词填空 寓教于乐 Edelweiss, edelweiss, every morning you 1.________ me. 2.________ and 3.________, 4.________ and 5.________, you look happy to 6.________ me. Blossom of 7.________, may you bloom and 8.________, 9.________ and grow forever. Edelweiss, edelweiss, 10.________ my homeland forever ... 音乐欣赏 验证答案 完整歌词 （观察并列的四个形容词做什么成分？） Edelweiss, edelweiss, every morning you 1.greet me. 2.Small and 3.white, 4.clean and 5.bright, you look happy to 6.meet me. Blossom of 7.snow, may you bloom and 8.grow, 9.bloom and grow forever. Edelweiss, edelweiss, 10.bless my homeland forever ...（简述歌词中语言现象） 形容词作状语有什么好处？ 可以避免使用冗长的从句，让句子即简洁高效、又有画面感、还有利于塑造主人公情绪，作文档次瞬间提升，是读后续写必背必用的黄金句式。 形容词或形容词短语说明谓语动作发生的原因，一般位于句首。例如： Exhausted, I slid into bed and fell fast asleep. （人教版 Book 5 Unit 3 Reading 1） Upon seeing what had happened, overwhelmed with anxiety and fear, mom laid down her phone and walked towards me in a flash. (2021年1月浙江卷读后续写第1段) 形容词或形容词短语说明伴随状态或心理状态，通常位于句末。 例如： The following morning， I should again greet the dawn, anxious to discover new delights, new revelations of beauty. （新外研版选择性必修一Unit 2 Reading 1） 01 At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit，my nose briefly prevented entry. （2021年1月浙江卷读后续写原文） 02 形容词或形容词短语说明主语所处的状态，通常位于句末。例如： With the assistance of the helicopter, Jane got out of the forest and saw her husband, safe and sound. (2016年10月浙江卷读后续写第2段) They broke into the uncle’s bedroom and found the man lying on the floor, dead. 一、情绪激动/欣喜（场景：久别重逢、愿望实现、意外惊喜） _________________________ （急切又兴奋）, she walked towards the door where her long-lost brother stood, his eyes filled with the same longing. _________________________ （欣喜若狂又如释重负）, she rushed forward and threw her arms around her mother. _________________________ （狂喜又自豪）, he held up the trophy high, his face glowing with happiness. 一、情绪激动/欣喜（场景：久别重逢、愿望实现、意外惊喜） Eager and excited （急切又兴奋）, she walked towards the door where her long-lost brother stood, his eyes filled with the same longing. Overjoyed and relieved （欣喜若狂又如释重负）, she rushed forward and threw her arms around her mother. Wild with joy and pride （狂喜又自豪）, he held up the trophy high, his face glowing with happiness. 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 郭静静 总分 111分 语填 9分 应用文9.5分 读后续写 15.5分 Overjoyed and grateful, Emerly hugged Ms. Frank tightly after the dance... (这里的 Overjoyed and grateful 同样是并列形容词作状语，直接点明了她拥抱老师时的两种核心情绪，让句子情感更饱满。) 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 郭静静 总分 111分 语填 9分 应用文9.5分 读后续写 15.5分 二、恐惧/紧张/担忧（场景：遭遇危险、丢失物品、亲人失联） _________________________（害怕却好奇）, she followed the faint strange noise into the deep woods. _________________________ （万分担忧又焦急）, they searched every corner of the park, calling their little sister's name repeatedly. _________________________ （吓得愣住了）, she stood there speechless, watching the huge bear slowly approaching. 二、恐惧/紧张/担忧（场景：遭遇危险、丢失物品、亲人失联） Frightened but curious（害怕却好奇）, she followed the faint strange noise into the deep woods. Extremely worried and anxious （万分担忧又焦急）, they searched every corner of the park, calling their little sister's name repeatedly. Scared and frozen （吓得愣住了）, she stood there speechless, watching the huge bear slowly approaching. 三、疲惫/虚弱/绝望（场景：长途跋涉、遭遇挫折、陷入困境） _________________________（又累又饿）, the little girl finally reached the village at dusk, hoping to find a place to rest and a bite to eat. _________________________ （精疲力竭又心灰意冷）, he sank onto the ground, staring at the broken compass. _________________________ （绝望又无助）, she knelt down by the side of the road, begging for help from passing cars. 三、疲惫/虚弱/绝望（场景：长途跋涉、遭遇挫折、陷入困境） Tired and hungry（又累又饿）, the little girl finally reached the village at dusk, hoping to find a place to rest and a bite to eat. Exhausted and discouraged （精疲力竭又心灰意冷）, he sank onto the ground, staring at the broken compass. Desperate and helpless （绝望又无助）, she knelt down by the side of the road, begging for help from passing cars. 音乐欣赏：奥斯卡获奖电影《音乐之声》插曲Edelweiss（完整版） 四、清醒/专注/沉思（场景：复盘过往、做出抉择、守护他人） _________________________（陷入沉思）, he walked slowly along the river, trying to figure out his next step. _________________________ （毫无睡意且警惕十足）, she lay in bed, listening to every slight sound outside the door. _________________________ （冷静而坚定）, she faced the group of bullies bravely, protecting the little boy behind her from being hurt. 四、清醒/专注/沉思（场景：复盘过往、做出抉择、守护他人） Deep in thought（陷入沉思）, he walked slowly along the river, trying to figure out his next step. Wide awake and alert （毫无睡意且警惕十足）, she lay in bed, listening to every slight sound outside the door. Calm and determined （冷静而坚定）, she faced the group of bullies bravely, protecting the little boy behind her from being hurt. 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 杨府兴 总分 102.5分 语填 10.5分 应用文8分 读后续写 18.5分 Determined and focused, she continued to dance perfectly, with no time to express her gratitude. (用 Determined and focused 作状语，精准描述了她专注跳舞的状态，和后面的 no time to express her gratitude 形成呼应，逻辑更顺畅。) 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 郭静静 总分 102.5分 语填 10.5分 应用文8分 读后续写 18.5分 五、受伤/狼狈/湿冷（场景：意外受伤、遭遇暴雨、野外求生） _________________________ （浑身湿冷）, the homeless boy trembled in the corner of the bridge, trying to keep warm with his thin arms wrapped around himself. _________________________ （受伤又虚弱）, he struggled to his feet with great effort, determined to get help for his friend. Wet and cold （浑身湿冷）, the homeless boy trembled in the corner of the bridge, trying to keep warm with his thin arms wrapped around himself. Injured and weak （受伤又虚弱）, he struggled to his feet with great effort, determined to get help for his friend. 五、受伤/狼狈/湿冷（场景：意外受伤、遭遇暴雨、野外求生） 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 万欣 总分 108分 语填 9分 应用文9分 读后续写 20分 Calm and sincere, Emerly stepped out of the crowd and spoke from her heart... (用 Calm and sincere 作状语，点明了她发言时的状态，让人物形象更立体，也比原句更高级。) 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 万欣 总分 108分 语填 9分 应用文9分 读后续写 20分 小结一下 形容词做状语，大多数结构为：Adj. + and / but + adj. , 主语 + 谓语 …（and并列状态、but 反差对比） 逻辑主语紧扣主句（形容词状语逻辑主语 = 主句主语），句式整齐、阅卷辨识度高。 属于高考书面表达高分句式，可促进形成高级文风，拉高整体档次。 歌词填空 寓教于乐 I found a love for me. Oh darling, just 1.________ right in and follow my 2.________. Well, I found a girl 3.________ and 4.________. Oh, I never knew you were the someone 5.________ for me, 'cause we were just kids when we 6.________ in love. Not 7.________ what it was, I will not give you 8.________ this time ... 音乐欣赏 验证答案 完整歌词 （观察思考：并列形容词是否还是做状语？） I found a love for me. Oh darling, just 1.dive right in and follow my 2.lead. Well, I found a girl 3.beautiful and 4.sweet. Oh, I never knew you were the someone 5.waiting for me, 'cause we were just kids when we 6.fell in love. Not 7.knowing what it was, I will not give you 8.up this time ... 形容词短语做定语 如果用简洁的形容词或形容词短语替代冗长的定语从句，聚焦名词特征，补充名词细节信息，可以让描写更生动鲜活，句式更高级。这样的句式适合读后续写场景，可以提升表达效率。 Anything ___________________________ (重要且紧急) needs to be handled immediately. A smile ___________________________ (充满温暖与善意) could melt the coldest heart and make people feel the beauty of the world. The young candidate, ___________________________ (紧张却自信), is waiting outside for the interview to start. The small house, ___________________________ (简朴而温暖), had yellow lights shining through all its windows. 形容词短语做定语 如果用简洁的形容词短语替代冗长的定语从句，聚焦名词特征，补充细节，可以让描写更生动鲜活，句式更高级，适合读后续写场景，从而提升表达效率。 Anything important and urgent (重要且紧急) needs to be handled immediately. A smile full of warmth and kindness (充满温暖与善意) could melt the coldest heart and make people feel the beauty of the world. The young candidate, nervous but confident (紧张却自信), is waiting outside for the interview to start. The small house, simple and warm (简朴而温暖), had yellow lights shining through all its windows. 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 詹一鸣 总分 75分 语填 7.5分 应用文9.5分 读后续写 17.5分 升级为：Under the stage, no sniggering, no whispering, only warm, loud and heartfelt claps and praise filled the air. （用 warm, loud, heartfelt 三个并列形容词作定语，精准描绘了台下掌声与赞扬的氛围，比原文更有画面感，也符合高考写作的高级表达要求。） 2026届高三下学期五月强化三（圆创联考） 郧阳中学高三（13）班 詹一鸣 总分 75分 语填 7.5分 应用文9.5分 读后续写 17.5分 THANKS 2026高考必胜 Lavf57.83.100 null 52035.2 Lavf57.83.100 Lavf57.83.100 null 46993.83 Lavf57.83.100 $