Unit 3 The world at one click 单元主题写作讲练讲义2025-2026学年译林版英语八年级下册

Unit 3 The world at one click单元同步写作课讲义 一、单元主题和写作要求 本单元围绕“The world at one click（一键之遥看世界）”展开，介绍了通过互联网进行线上旅行的新方式，带领学生“云游”利物浦、纽约等世界著名城市以及数字敦煌、大堡礁等景点，引导学生探索线上旅游的便利与乐趣，同时思考其与实地旅行的差异。 通过本单元学习，学生需能够准确运用与线上旅行相关的词汇（如 online tour, website, video, photo, introduction, attraction等）、一般过去时与现在完成时的区别，以及描述经历、表达感受、对比观点的句型，来介绍一次线上游览的经历，描述一个著名景点，或对比线上与实地旅行的利弊。同时，学生需具备信息整合、细节描写、观点表达和简单辩证思考的能力，为中考书面表达中“网络应用”“旅行经历”“观点对比”等话题奠定坚实基础。 二、出题方向和命题形式 方向1：介绍一个你通过线上旅行了解的国内外景点。（信息介绍类说明文） （1）命题形式： · 命题作文（如 “An Online Tour of the Louvre Museum” “Exploring the Great Barrier Reef Online”）； · 提示类作文（给出景点名称，要求介绍其位置、特色、线上游览方式等）； · 博客/分享帖（为班级网站写一篇线上旅行推荐）。 （2）考察重点： · 现在完成时与一般过去时的正确运用（描述线上旅行经历及发现）； · 信息组织能力（按位置、历史、特色、线上体验等顺序介绍）； · 描写生动性（使用形容词、感官描写等）。 方向2：对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点，并表达自己的偏好。（观点对比类议论文） （1）命题形式： · 话题作文（如 “Online Travel vs. On-site Travel: Which Is Better?”）； · 材料作文（根据教材中Amy和David的对话，续写或发表看法）； · 辩论稿（如参加英语辩论赛，论题为“Online travel is better than real travel”）。 （2）考察重点： · 对比类句型运用（while, however, on the other hand, compared to）； · 观点表达与论证能力（列出2-3个优缺点，得出结论）； · 辩证思维能力（承认双方合理性，表达个人偏好及理由）。 方向3：分享一次自己进行线上旅行的经历和感受。（叙事文） （1）命题形式： · 日记（如 “My Online Tour to the Mogao Caves”）； · 邮件（给笔友写信分享线上旅行的体验）； · 命题作文（如 “An Unforgettable Online Trip” “A Click Away from the World”）。 （2）考察重点： · 时间顺序叙事能力（按“开始-过程-感受”的顺序）； · 细节描写与情感表达（看到什么、听到什么、感受如何）； · 一般过去时与现在完成时的混合运用（描述操作过程和收获）。 三、典型范文分析 方向1：介绍一个你通过线上旅行了解的国内外景点 An Online Tour of the Eiffel Tower Last weekend, I took an online tour of the Eiffel Tower in Paris, France. It was amazing! The Eiffel Tower is one of the most famous landmarks in the world. It was built in 1889 and is about 330 metres tall. On the website, I could see high-quality photos and videos. I even found a 360-degree view from the top of the tower! The view of Paris was breath-taking. I could see the Seine River, the Louvre Museum and many beautiful buildings. The website also had interesting introductions about the history of the tower. I learnt that millions of people visit it every year. I have never been to France in person, but this online tour made me feel like I was there. I will definitely take more online tours in the future. It is a convenient way to explore the world! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 信息介绍类说明文：以第一人称分享一次线上游览埃菲尔铁塔的经历，融入对景点的介绍，推荐线上旅行方式并介绍该景点。 （2）篇章结构 总-分-总： 开头（总起）：点明时间和事件（took an online tour）。 正文（分述）：介绍埃菲尔铁塔的基本信息（位置、高度、建造年份）→ 线上游览的内容（照片、视频、360度视图）→ 看到的景色和学到的知识。 结尾（总结）：表达感受（feel like I was there）和未来计划。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Last weekend, I took an online tour of...（经典叙事开篇） ②It was amazing!（简短感叹，表达情感） ③...one of the most famous landmarks...（最高级结构，突出地位） ④I could see high-quality photos and videos.（could表达线上游览的能力） ⑤The view of Paris was breath-taking.（breath-taking高级形容词） ⑥I have never been to France in person, but this online tour made me feel like I was there.（现在完成时+but转折，强调线上体验的真实感） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：使用时间词Last weekend，递进词even，总结词but。 隐性逻辑：按“线上游览→发现景点信息→描述具体内容→表达感受”的顺序。 （5）时态运用 一般过去时（叙述游览过程：took, could see, learnt）；一般现在时（介绍景点事实：is, was built, has）；现在完成时（强调从未去过但通过线上体验到了）。 方向2：对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点 Online Travel vs. On-site Travel Nowadays, we can travel online without leaving home. But is it better than real travel? Both ways have their advantages and disadvantages. Online travel is fast, easy and often free. You can visit any place in the world with just a few clicks. There are no crowds, no traffic and no waiting. You can also zoom in on artworks to see every detail. However, you cannot feel the real atmosphere, taste local food, or take a deep breath of fresh air there. On-site travel, on the other hand, gives you a real experience. You can walk on the streets, talk to local people and enjoy the local culture. But it costs more money and takes more time. Sometimes it is also tiring. In my opinion, both are good. Online travel is perfect for learning and exploring. Real travel is better for experiencing and making memories. I will use both in the future! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 观点对比类议论文：客观对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点，并表达个人看法，帮助读者做出选择。 （2）篇章结构 总-分-总： 开头（总起）：提出问题，点明两者各有优劣。 正文（分述）：第一段写线上旅行的优点（方便、免费、无拥挤）和缺点（缺乏真实感）；第二段写实地旅行的优点（真实体验、文化沉浸）和缺点（贵、耗时、累）。 结尾（总结）：表达个人观点（两者都好，用途不同）。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Nowadays, we can travel online without leaving home.（开门见山，引出话题） ②Both ways have their advantages and disadvantages.（经典对比开篇句） ③Online travel is fast, easy and often free.（三个形容词并列，简洁有力） ④However, you cannot feel the real atmosphere...（however转折，引出缺点） ⑤On the other hand, on-site travel gives you a real experience.（on the other hand对比衔接） ⑥In my opinion, both are good. Online travel is perfect for... Real travel is better for...（平行结构，观点清晰） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：使用However, On the other hand, In my opinion等词；段落间自然过渡。 隐性逻辑：先线上再线下，每段内部先优点后缺点，结构对称。 （5）时态运用 一般现在时为主（陈述事实和个人观点）。情态动词（can, cannot, may）表达可能性。 方向3：分享一次自己进行线上旅行的经历和感受 My Online Trip to the Great Barrier Reef Yesterday, I went on an online tour of the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. It was exciting and helpful. On the website, I watched videos and looked at many beautiful photos. I saw colourful coral in all kinds of shapes and sizes. Some looked like fans, and some looked like trees. I also watched different fish swimming around. They were so bright and lively! I even listened to the sounds of the deep sea. It was really relaxing. I have always wanted to dive in the sea, but I can’t swim. This online tour made my dream come true. I learnt a lot about sea animals and plants. The website also had articles about protecting the reef. It made me think about the importance of environmental protection. I will tell my friends about this amazing online tour. They should try it too! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 叙事文：以第一人称叙述一次线上游览大堡礁的经历，重点描写感官体验（视觉、听觉）和感悟，分享乐趣并引发环保意识。 （2）篇章结构 时间顺序叙事： 开头：交代时间、地点和总体感受（Yesterday, went on an online tour, exciting and helpful）。 正文：详细描述线上游览的内容（视频、照片、珊瑚、鱼、海底声音）→ 个人情况（不会游泳但梦想潜水）→ 线上旅行的弥补作用 → 学到环保知识。 结尾：号召朋友尝试。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Yesterday, I went on an online tour of...（经典叙事开篇） ②It was exciting and helpful.（形容词概括感受） ③I saw colourful coral in all kinds of shapes and sizes.（细节描写，教材原句） ④Some looked like fans, and some looked like trees.（比喻，生动形象） ⑤I have always wanted to dive in the sea, but I can’t swim.（现在完成时+but，表达长期愿望与现实矛盾） ⑥This online tour made my dream come true.（make one‘s dream come true，经典表达） ⑦It made me think about the importance of...（引申思考，升华主题） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：按时间顺序Yesterday，使用also, even, then等词递进。 隐性逻辑：从“看”到“听”到“思考”，由浅入深。 （5）时态运用 一般过去时（叙述过去的行为：went, watched, looked, saw, listened）；现在完成时（强调长期愿望和结果：have always wanted, has made）；一般现在时（陈述事实和感受：can’t swim, is, will tell）。 四、素材积累和写作支架 1. 与本单元写作主题（The world at one click）相关的词汇替换练习： 原句 替换词汇 替换后的句子 Online travel is good. great / wonderful / fantastic You can see many pictures. look at / view / enjoy The website has many videos. plenty of / lots of / a wealth of I think it is convenient. believe / consider / feel It is very beautiful. truly / really / quite The tour was exciting. amazing / breath-taking / unforgettable I liked the online tour. enjoyed / loved 2. 与本单元写作主题（The world at one click）相关的句子扩写练习： （1）引出主题/表明意图 The other day, I took an online tour of... 前几天，我线上游览了…… Thanks to the internet, we can explore the world without leaving home. 多亏了互联网，我们足不出户就能探索世界。 Have you ever tried online travel? Let me share my experience. 你试过线上旅行吗？让我分享一下我的经历。 （2）描述线上游览过程 On the website, I watched videos and looked at high-quality photos. 在网站上，我观看了视频和高清照片。 I could zoom in on the artwork to see every detail. 我可以放大艺术品，看到每一个细节。 I even listened to the sounds of the deep sea. 我甚至听到了深海的声音。 （3）列举例子/描述景点 For example, I visited the Eiffel Tower online and saw a 360-degree view. 例如，我线上游览了埃菲尔铁塔，看到了360度全景。 The Great Barrier Reef is home to thousands of sea animals, such as colourful fish and coral. 大堡礁是成千上万海洋动物的家园，比如彩色的鱼和珊瑚。 The website also provides introductions to the history of the tower. 网站还提供了关于这座塔历史的介绍。 （4）对比观点/文化差异（本单元中对比线上与实地） Online travel is fast and free, while on-site travel costs more money and time. 线上旅行又快又免费，而实地旅行花费更多金钱和时间。 Unlike real travel, online travel cannot let you feel the local atmosphere. 与实地旅行不同，线上旅行无法让你感受当地氛围。 On the other hand, real travel allows you to taste local food and talk to people. 另一方面，实地旅行让你品尝当地食物并与人们交谈。 （5）发表观点/感受和感悟 In my opinion, online travel is a great way to learn about the world. 在我看来，线上旅行是了解世界的好方法。 I believe that both online and on-site travel have their own advantages. 我相信线上和实地旅行各有优势。 This online tour made me feel like I was there in person. 这次线上游览让我感觉身临其境。 （6）表达情感 I was amazed by the beauty of the coral. 我被珊瑚的美震撼了。 I felt so excited when I watched the fish swimming around. 当我看到鱼儿游来游去时，我感到非常兴奋。 It was really a wonderful experience to explore the museum online. 线上探索博物馆真是一次美妙的体验。 （7）衔接句子 First... Second... Finally... 首先……其次……最后…… Moreover... / What‘s more... 而且…… However... 然而…… On the other hand... 另一方面…… 3. 与本单元写作主题（The world at one click）相关的整篇仿写练习： 方向1：介绍一个你通过线上旅行了解的国内外景点 An Online Tour of ________ Last ________, I took an online tour of ________ in ________. It was ________! ________ is one of the most famous ________ in the world. It was built in ________ and is about ________ metres tall. On the website, I could see ________. I even found ________. The view from there was ________. I could see ________. The website also had interesting introductions about ________. I learnt that ________. I have never been to ________ in person, but this online tour made me feel like ________. I will definitely take more online tours in the future. It is a ________ way to explore the world! 方向2：对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点 Online Travel vs. On-site Travel Nowadays, we can ________ without leaving home. But is it better than ________? Both ways have their ________ and ________. Online travel is ________, ________ and often ________. You can visit any place in the world with just a few clicks. There are no ________, no ________ and no ________. However, you cannot ________ the real atmosphere, ________ local food, or ________ a deep breath of fresh air there. ________ travel, on the other hand, gives you a ________ experience. You can ________ on the streets, ________ to local people and ________ the local culture. But it ________ more money and ________ more time. Sometimes it is also ________. In my opinion, ________ are good. Online travel is perfect for ________ and ________. Real travel is better for ________ and ________ memories. I will use both in the future! 方向3：分享一次自己进行线上旅行的经历和感受 My Online Trip to ________ ________, I went on an online tour of ________ in ________. It was ________ and ________. On the website, I watched ________ and looked at many beautiful ________. I saw ________ in all kinds of ________ and ________. Some looked like ________, and some looked like ________. I also watched ________ swimming around. They were so ________ and ________! I even listened to ________. It was really ________. I have always wanted to ________, but ________. This online tour made my ________ come true. I learnt a lot about ________. The website also had articles about ________. It made me think about ________. I will tell my friends about this amazing online tour. They should ________ too! 五、能力达标练 1．现在一点击鼠标就能联通全世界，网络深刻改变了我们的生活。请以How to Use the Internet Well为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈网络的利弊和健康上网的方法。 要求： 1. 语法正确，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 2. 不少于80词； 3. 包含网络优点、网络危害、正确上网做法三点内容。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．随着网络和人工智能(AI)的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择——“云游(online tours)”和“亲历(in-person travel)”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”则是亲自前往心仪之地,感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点 具体要求 你的选择及原因 陈述你喜欢的旅行方式(“云游”或“亲历”),并写出至少两点原因。 印象深刻的旅行 分享一次令你印象深刻的旅行经历。 感悟 谈谈你对这种旅行方式的感悟。 【注意】1. 词数 90 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 短文要包含所有要点，可以适当发挥。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 My way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose ________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．以“The Internet Changes Our Life”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 要点： 1.互联网让世界变小； 2.可以在线学习、旅游、聊天； 3.方便快捷，改变日常生活。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．科技让我们足不出户就能欣赏祖国的大好河山。请你以“My Online Tour”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的一次线上游览经历。 要点： 1. 你线上游览的地点； 2. 你看到的景色或体验； 3. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数80–100； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world at one click单元同步写作课讲义 一、单元主题和写作要求 本单元围绕“The world at one click（一键之遥看世界）”展开，介绍了通过互联网进行线上旅行的新方式，带领学生“云游”利物浦、纽约等世界著名城市以及数字敦煌、大堡礁等景点，引导学生探索线上旅游的便利与乐趣，同时思考其与实地旅行的差异。 通过本单元学习，学生需能够准确运用与线上旅行相关的词汇（如 online tour, website, video, photo, introduction, attraction等）、一般过去时与现在完成时的区别，以及描述经历、表达感受、对比观点的句型，来介绍一次线上游览的经历，描述一个著名景点，或对比线上与实地旅行的利弊。同时，学生需具备信息整合、细节描写、观点表达和简单辩证思考的能力，为中考书面表达中“网络应用”“旅行经历”“观点对比”等话题奠定坚实基础。 二、出题方向和命题形式 方向1：介绍一个你通过线上旅行了解的国内外景点。（信息介绍类说明文） （1）命题形式： · 命题作文（如 “An Online Tour of the Louvre Museum” “Exploring the Great Barrier Reef Online”）； · 提示类作文（给出景点名称，要求介绍其位置、特色、线上游览方式等）； · 博客/分享帖（为班级网站写一篇线上旅行推荐）。 （2）考察重点： · 现在完成时与一般过去时的正确运用（描述线上旅行经历及发现）； · 信息组织能力（按位置、历史、特色、线上体验等顺序介绍）； · 描写生动性（使用形容词、感官描写等）。 方向2：对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点，并表达自己的偏好。（观点对比类议论文） （1）命题形式： · 话题作文（如 “Online Travel vs. On-site Travel: Which Is Better?”）； · 材料作文（根据教材中Amy和David的对话，续写或发表看法）； · 辩论稿（如参加英语辩论赛，论题为“Online travel is better than real travel”）。 （2）考察重点： · 对比类句型运用（while, however, on the other hand, compared to）； · 观点表达与论证能力（列出2-3个优缺点，得出结论）； · 辩证思维能力（承认双方合理性，表达个人偏好及理由）。 方向3：分享一次自己进行线上旅行的经历和感受。（叙事文） （1）命题形式： · 日记（如 “My Online Tour to the Mogao Caves”）； · 邮件（给笔友写信分享线上旅行的体验）； · 命题作文（如 “An Unforgettable Online Trip” “A Click Away from the World”）。 （2）考察重点： · 时间顺序叙事能力（按“开始-过程-感受”的顺序）； · 细节描写与情感表达（看到什么、听到什么、感受如何）； · 一般过去时与现在完成时的混合运用（描述操作过程和收获）。 三、典型范文分析 方向1：介绍一个你通过线上旅行了解的国内外景点 An Online Tour of the Eiffel Tower Last weekend, I took an online tour of the Eiffel Tower in Paris, France. It was amazing! The Eiffel Tower is one of the most famous landmarks in the world. It was built in 1889 and is about 330 metres tall. On the website, I could see high-quality photos and videos. I even found a 360-degree view from the top of the tower! The view of Paris was breath-taking. I could see the Seine River, the Louvre Museum and many beautiful buildings. The website also had interesting introductions about the history of the tower. I learnt that millions of people visit it every year. I have never been to France in person, but this online tour made me feel like I was there. I will definitely take more online tours in the future. It is a convenient way to explore the world! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 信息介绍类说明文：以第一人称分享一次线上游览埃菲尔铁塔的经历，融入对景点的介绍，推荐线上旅行方式并介绍该景点。 （2）篇章结构 总-分-总： 开头（总起）：点明时间和事件（took an online tour）。 正文（分述）：介绍埃菲尔铁塔的基本信息（位置、高度、建造年份）→ 线上游览的内容（照片、视频、360度视图）→ 看到的景色和学到的知识。 结尾（总结）：表达感受（feel like I was there）和未来计划。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Last weekend, I took an online tour of...（经典叙事开篇） ②It was amazing!（简短感叹，表达情感） ③...one of the most famous landmarks...（最高级结构，突出地位） ④I could see high-quality photos and videos.（could表达线上游览的能力） ⑤The view of Paris was breath-taking.（breath-taking高级形容词） ⑥I have never been to France in person, but this online tour made me feel like I was there.（现在完成时+but转折，强调线上体验的真实感） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：使用时间词Last weekend，递进词even，总结词but。 隐性逻辑：按“线上游览→发现景点信息→描述具体内容→表达感受”的顺序。 （5）时态运用 一般过去时（叙述游览过程：took, could see, learnt）；一般现在时（介绍景点事实：is, was built, has）；现在完成时（强调从未去过但通过线上体验到了）。 方向2：对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点 Online Travel vs. On-site Travel Nowadays, we can travel online without leaving home. But is it better than real travel? Both ways have their advantages and disadvantages. Online travel is fast, easy and often free. You can visit any place in the world with just a few clicks. There are no crowds, no traffic and no waiting. You can also zoom in on artworks to see every detail. However, you cannot feel the real atmosphere, taste local food, or take a deep breath of fresh air there. On-site travel, on the other hand, gives you a real experience. You can walk on the streets, talk to local people and enjoy the local culture. But it costs more money and takes more time. Sometimes it is also tiring. In my opinion, both are good. Online travel is perfect for learning and exploring. Real travel is better for experiencing and making memories. I will use both in the future! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 观点对比类议论文：客观对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点，并表达个人看法，帮助读者做出选择。 （2）篇章结构 总-分-总： 开头（总起）：提出问题，点明两者各有优劣。 正文（分述）：第一段写线上旅行的优点（方便、免费、无拥挤）和缺点（缺乏真实感）；第二段写实地旅行的优点（真实体验、文化沉浸）和缺点（贵、耗时、累）。 结尾（总结）：表达个人观点（两者都好，用途不同）。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Nowadays, we can travel online without leaving home.（开门见山，引出话题） ②Both ways have their advantages and disadvantages.（经典对比开篇句） ③Online travel is fast, easy and often free.（三个形容词并列，简洁有力） ④However, you cannot feel the real atmosphere...（however转折，引出缺点） ⑤On the other hand, on-site travel gives you a real experience.（on the other hand对比衔接） ⑥In my opinion, both are good. Online travel is perfect for... Real travel is better for...（平行结构，观点清晰） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：使用However, On the other hand, In my opinion等词；段落间自然过渡。 隐性逻辑：先线上再线下，每段内部先优点后缺点，结构对称。 （5）时态运用 一般现在时为主（陈述事实和个人观点）。情态动词（can, cannot, may）表达可能性。 方向3：分享一次自己进行线上旅行的经历和感受 My Online Trip to the Great Barrier Reef Yesterday, I went on an online tour of the Great Barrier Reef in Australia. It was exciting and helpful. On the website, I watched videos and looked at many beautiful photos. I saw colourful coral in all kinds of shapes and sizes. Some looked like fans, and some looked like trees. I also watched different fish swimming around. They were so bright and lively! I even listened to the sounds of the deep sea. It was really relaxing. I have always wanted to dive in the sea, but I can’t swim. This online tour made my dream come true. I learnt a lot about sea animals and plants. The website also had articles about protecting the reef. It made me think about the importance of environmental protection. I will tell my friends about this amazing online tour. They should try it too! 【范文分析】 （1）语篇类型 叙事文：以第一人称叙述一次线上游览大堡礁的经历，重点描写感官体验（视觉、听觉）和感悟，分享乐趣并引发环保意识。 （2）篇章结构 时间顺序叙事： 开头：交代时间、地点和总体感受（Yesterday, went on an online tour, exciting and helpful）。 正文：详细描述线上游览的内容（视频、照片、珊瑚、鱼、海底声音）→ 个人情况（不会游泳但梦想潜水）→ 线上旅行的弥补作用 → 学到环保知识。 结尾：号召朋友尝试。 （3）词汇句型运用 ①Yesterday, I went on an online tour of...（经典叙事开篇） ②It was exciting and helpful.（形容词概括感受） ③I saw colourful coral in all kinds of shapes and sizes.（细节描写，教材原句） ④Some looked like fans, and some looked like trees.（比喻，生动形象） ⑤I have always wanted to dive in the sea, but I can’t swim.（现在完成时+but，表达长期愿望与现实矛盾） ⑥This online tour made my dream come true.（make one‘s dream come true，经典表达） ⑦It made me think about the importance of...（引申思考，升华主题） （4）逻辑衔接 显性衔接：按时间顺序Yesterday，使用also, even, then等词递进。 隐性逻辑：从“看”到“听”到“思考”，由浅入深。 （5）时态运用 一般过去时（叙述过去的行为：went, watched, looked, saw, listened）；现在完成时（强调长期愿望和结果：have always wanted, has made）；一般现在时（陈述事实和感受：can’t swim, is, will tell）。 四、素材积累和写作支架 1. 与本单元写作主题（The world at one click）相关的词汇替换练习： 原句 替换词汇 替换后的句子 Online travel is good. great / wonderful / fantastic Online travel is fantastic. You can see many pictures. look at / view / enjoy You can enjoy many pictures. The website has many videos. plenty of / lots of / a wealth of The website has a wealth of videos. I think it is convenient. believe / consider / feel I believe it is convenient. It is very beautiful. truly / really / quite It is truly beautiful. The tour was exciting. amazing / breath-taking / unforgettable The tour was unforgettable. I liked the online tour. enjoyed / loved I loved the online tour. 2. 与本单元写作主题（The world at one click）相关的句子扩写练习： （1）引出主题/表明意图 The other day, I took an online tour of... 前几天，我线上游览了…… Thanks to the internet, we can explore the world without leaving home. 多亏了互联网，我们足不出户就能探索世界。 Have you ever tried online travel? Let me share my experience. 你试过线上旅行吗？让我分享一下我的经历。 （2）描述线上游览过程 On the website, I watched videos and looked at high-quality photos. 在网站上，我观看了视频和高清照片。 I could zoom in on the artwork to see every detail. 我可以放大艺术品，看到每一个细节。 I even listened to the sounds of the deep sea. 我甚至听到了深海的声音。 （3）列举例子/描述景点 For example, I visited the Eiffel Tower online and saw a 360-degree view. 例如，我线上游览了埃菲尔铁塔，看到了360度全景。 The Great Barrier Reef is home to thousands of sea animals, such as colourful fish and coral. 大堡礁是成千上万海洋动物的家园，比如彩色的鱼和珊瑚。 The website also provides introductions to the history of the tower. 网站还提供了关于这座塔历史的介绍。 （4）对比观点/文化差异（本单元中对比线上与实地） Online travel is fast and free, while on-site travel costs more money and time. 线上旅行又快又免费，而实地旅行花费更多金钱和时间。 Unlike real travel, online travel cannot let you feel the local atmosphere. 与实地旅行不同，线上旅行无法让你感受当地氛围。 On the other hand, real travel allows you to taste local food and talk to people. 另一方面，实地旅行让你品尝当地食物并与人们交谈。 （5）发表观点/感受和感悟 In my opinion, online travel is a great way to learn about the world. 在我看来，线上旅行是了解世界的好方法。 I believe that both online and on-site travel have their own advantages. 我相信线上和实地旅行各有优势。 This online tour made me feel like I was there in person. 这次线上游览让我感觉身临其境。 （6）表达情感 I was amazed by the beauty of the coral. 我被珊瑚的美震撼了。 I felt so excited when I watched the fish swimming around. 当我看到鱼儿游来游去时，我感到非常兴奋。 It was really a wonderful experience to explore the museum online. 线上探索博物馆真是一次美妙的体验。 （7）衔接句子 First... Second... Finally... 首先……其次……最后…… Moreover... / What‘s more... 而且…… However... 然而…… On the other hand... 另一方面…… 3. 与本单元写作主题（The world at one click）相关的整篇仿写练习： 方向1：介绍一个你通过线上旅行了解的国内外景点 An Online Tour of ________ Last ________, I took an online tour of ________ in ________. It was ________! ________ is one of the most famous ________ in the world. It was built in ________ and is about ________ metres tall. On the website, I could see ________. I even found ________. The view from there was ________. I could see ________. The website also had interesting introductions about ________. I learnt that ________. I have never been to ________ in person, but this online tour made me feel like ________. I will definitely take more online tours in the future. It is a ________ way to explore the world! 挖空提示词： weekend / the Sydney Opera House / Australia / amazing / The Sydney Opera House / landmarks / 1973 / 185 / high-quality photos and videos / a 360-degree view from the top / breath-taking / the blue sea and the busy harbour / its history / millions of tourists visit it every year / Australia / I was there / convenient 方向2：对比线上旅行和实地旅行的优缺点 Online Travel vs. On-site Travel Nowadays, we can ________ without leaving home. But is it better than ________? Both ways have their ________ and ________. Online travel is ________, ________ and often ________. You can visit any place in the world with just a few clicks. There are no ________, no ________ and no ________. However, you cannot ________ the real atmosphere, ________ local food, or ________ a deep breath of fresh air there. ________ travel, on the other hand, gives you a ________ experience. You can ________ on the streets, ________ to local people and ________ the local culture. But it ________ more money and ________ more time. Sometimes it is also ________. In my opinion, ________ are good. Online travel is perfect for ________ and ________. Real travel is better for ________ and ________ memories. I will use both in the future! 挖空提示词： travel online / real travel / advantages / disadvantages / fast / easy / free / crowds / traffic / waiting / feel / taste / take / On-site / real / walk / talk / enjoy / costs / takes / tiring / both / learning / exploring / experiencing / making 方向3：分享一次自己进行线上旅行的经历和感受 My Online Trip to ________ ________, I went on an online tour of ________ in ________. It was ________ and ________. On the website, I watched ________ and looked at many beautiful ________. I saw ________ in all kinds of ________ and ________. Some looked like ________, and some looked like ________. I also watched ________ swimming around. They were so ________ and ________! I even listened to ________. It was really ________. I have always wanted to ________, but ________. This online tour made my ________ come true. I learnt a lot about ________. The website also had articles about ________. It made me think about ________. I will tell my friends about this amazing online tour. They should ________ too! 挖空提示词： the Mogao Caves / Last weekend / the Mogao Caves / China / exciting / educational / videos / photos / ancient paintings / shapes / sizes / fans / flowers / colourful fish / bright / lively / the sounds of the desert / peaceful / visit the caves in person / I can’t go there now / dream / the history of the Silk Road / protecting cultural treasures / the importance of protecting ancient sites / try it 五、能力达标练 1．现在一点击鼠标就能联通全世界，网络深刻改变了我们的生活。请以How to Use the Internet Well为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈网络的利弊和健康上网的方法。 要求： 1. 语法正确，语句通顺，逻辑清晰； 2. 不少于80词； 3. 包含网络优点、网络危害、正确上网做法三点内容。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： How to Use the Internet Well The Internet has greatly changed our lives. It helps us study, connect with friends far away, and shop easily at home, saving lots of time. However, it also has risks. Bad information harms teenagers, too much screen time hurts our eyes, and personal information may be stolen. To use it well, we must use it wisely. Control online time, stay away from bad content, and keep personal information safe. Let’s make good use of the Internet and avoid its harms. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：网络的优点、网络的危害、健康上网的方法 确定人称：第一人称复数 注意事项：语法正确、语句通顺、逻辑清晰，不少于80词，符合八年级难度 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明互联网深刻改变生活，介绍其优点 主体段：转折介绍互联网存在的风险与危害 结尾段：给出正确上网的建议，总结升华 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：网络优点 核心依据：“helps our study、connects people、makes life easy、saves time” 写作思路：用一句话总起，并列列举学习、社交、生活三个维度的便利 对应句：It helps us study, connect with friends far away, and shop easily at home, saving lots of time. 要点二：网络危害 核心依据： “has risks、Bad information is bad for teenagers、Too much screen time hurts eyes、Personal information may be stolen” 写作思路：用however转折，三个并列句工整罗列危害 对应句：Bad information harms teenagers, too much screen time hurts our eyes, and personal information may be stolen. 要点三：正确上网做法 核心依据：“use the Internet wisely、Control online time、stay away from bad things、keep safe online” 写作思路：用祈使句给出可操作的建议 对应句：Control online time, stay away from bad content, and keep personal information safe. Let’s make good use of the Internet and avoid its harms. 2．随着网络和人工智能(AI)的不断进步，如今旅游有了两种热门选择——“云游(online tours)”和“亲历(in-person travel)”。“云游”借助网络，让我们足不出户就能饱览世界各地的美景；而“亲历”则是亲自前往心仪之地,感受当地的风土人情。这两种方式各有魅力，你更倾向于哪一种呢？请以“My way of travelling”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点 具体要求 你的选择及原因 陈述你喜欢的旅行方式(“云游”或“亲历”),并写出至少两点原因。 印象深刻的旅行 分享一次令你印象深刻的旅行经历。 感悟 谈谈你对这种旅行方式的感悟。 【注意】1. 词数 90 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 短文要包含所有要点，可以适当发挥。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 My way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose ________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My way of travelling Different ways of travelling may give us different feelings. I choose in-person travel, for I love to see real sights and talk with local people face to face. Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. We visited the old hutong, tried delicious jianbing and talked with the locals. They told us many interesting stories. We also visited the Great Wall. Climbing the Great Wall was tiring, but the views were really beautiful. I like in-person travel. It not only lets me see real sights and learn a lot about different cultures, but also creates wonderful memories for me. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时（选择及感悟）+一般过去时（旅行经历）为主 明确要点：选择“亲历”旅行并说明原因，分享一次印象深刻的亲历旅行经历，谈谈对该旅行方式的感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：不得出现真实信息   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给开头，点明选择“亲历”旅行及原因 主体段：分享一次印象深刻的亲历旅行经历 结尾段：谈谈对“亲历”旅行的感悟   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：选择及原因 内容：“I choose in-person travel, for I love to see real sights and talk with local people face to face”   要点二：印象深刻的旅行经历 内容：“Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. We visited old hutongs, tried jianbing and talked with locals. We also climbed the Great Wall—tiring but with wonderful views”   要点三：感悟 内容：“In-person travel not only lets me see real scenery and learn different cultures, but also creates precious memories. It’s the best way to feel the world” 3．以“The Internet Changes Our Life”为题，写一篇短文，80词左右。 要点： 1.互联网让世界变小； 2.可以在线学习、旅游、聊天； 3.方便快捷，改变日常生活。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 The Internet Changes Our Life The Internet is changing our lives in many ways. It makes the world feel smaller, because we can connect with people everywhere easily. With the Internet, we can do many things at home. We can take online classes to learn new knowledge, go on virtual trips to famous places, and chat with friends whenever we want. The Internet is fast and convenient. It helps us do almost everything quickly. It really changes our daily life for the better. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：互联网让世界变小；可以在线学习、旅游、聊天；方便快捷，改变日常生活 确定人称：第一人称 (we/our/us)、第三人称 (It/the Internet) 注意事项：80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明互联网正在改变我们的生活，引出“让世界变小”的特点 主体段：分别介绍互联网的三个功能：在线学习、虚拟旅游、线上聊天 结尾段：总结互联网“方便快捷”的优势，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：世界因互联网变小 核心表达：makes the world feel smaller/connect with people everywhere easily/talk to people around the world easily/makes the world a global village等 要点二：网络多元功能 核心表达：take online classes/go on virtual trips/chat with friends online/learn online/talk to friends online/visit places virtually等 要点三：便捷改变生活 核心表达：fast and convenient/change our daily life for the better/simple and fast/improve our daily life等 4．科技让我们足不出户就能欣赏祖国的大好河山。请你以“My Online Tour”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的一次线上游览经历。 要点： 1. 你线上游览的地点； 2. 你看到的景色或体验； 3. 你的感受。 要求： 1. 词数80–100； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Online Tour Last Sunday, I took an online tour of the Great Wall through a virtual reality website. During the tour, I saw its long walls winding over mountains like a huge dragon. What amazing views! Following the guide’s real-time explanation, I could even “walk” on some parts and look at ancient towers closely, which was quite fascinating. This experience made me feel excited and proud. Technology brings famous places to our homes. Although I wasn’t truly there, I still learned a lot about Chinese history. I hope to visit it in person one day. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，叙述一次过往线上游览经历，时态以一般过去时为主 明确要点：说明线上游览的地点、描述途中的景色/个人体验、分享游览后的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数控制在80-100之间，不得透露真实姓名、学校等个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，交代进行线上游览的背景，点明本次线上游览的地点 主体段：具体描述线上游览过程中看到的景色，以及个人的体验 结尾段：总结整体体验，升华科技改变生活的主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：游览的地点 目的地：the Great Wall/the Palace Museum/West Lake/Huangshan Mountain等 背景：take an online tour/through a virtual reality website/try online tour/on a travel website等 要点二：描述途中的景色/个人体验 景点描述：long walls winding over mountains like a huge dragon/ancient towers/splendid cultural relics等 经历分享：follow the guide’s real-time explanation/get a 360-degree panoramic view of the spot/learn lots of historical knowledge等 要点三：分享游览后的感受 感受：amazing views/quite fascinating/feel excited and proud/meaningful等 观点：technology brings famous places to our homes/save much time and money/show the great convenience brought by modern technology等 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $