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Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 Miss Ren
七下Unit 5 Here and there.作文
写作话题分析
本单元的写作话题是“谈论人们正在进行的事情”,要求同学们能灵活运用现在进行时描述家人、朋友在不同地点正在做的事情以及根据所给图片或汉语提示描述场景中人们正在做的事情,并适当谈及活动氛围与人们的感受。
思路导引
• 开头:引入主题(点明时间、地点)
• 中间:介绍人们正在进行的活动
• 结尾:表达感受
Beginning开头 引入主题(点明时间、地点)
• It’s ... o’clock in the morning now.
• It’s Saturday today.
• Let me show you what my family are doing.
• I’m at XX Park with ...
• Let’s take a look at what is happening right now.
Body中间 具体描述(各事各物)
1. 环境描写
• Look, the sun is shining brightly.
• The air is clean and the sky is blue.
• The birds are singing in the tree.
• The boat is moving slowly down the lake.
2. 人物+地点+活动
• Some people are reading books under the tree.
• While others are running, cycling, jogging and walking.
• Two people are walking their dog on the path.
• A couple is planting a tree/having a picnic on the grass.
• A young man/woman is ... on the bench.
• Some children are ...
• What am I doing? I’m ... (taking photos)
• And my parents are ...
Ending结尾 总结感受
• All of them/us are having a good time.
•They are all having fun/a good time.
•There’s no place like home.
• What a wonderful moment. Let’s go outside and enjoy ourselves.
• Life is colorful. Let’s enjoy our time together.
范文一
假设现在是星期天下午三点钟,Carol 和她的家人正在公园里游玩。请你根据下面表格中的信息写一篇英文短文,描述他们此刻的活动。
Family members Activities
Carol playing games with her friends
Carol’s father reading a newspaper
Carol’s mother listening to music
要求:
1. 短文须包含表格中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2. 不少于 60 词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
It’s three o’clock on Sunday afternoon. It’s a fine day. Carol and her family are in the park.
There are many people there. What are Carol’s family doing?Look! Carol is playing games with her friends. She is friendly to everyone. They all love her. Carol’s father is reading a newspaper under a tree and Carol’s mother is listening to music by a pool. Her mother likes soft music very much.
They are all happy.
范文二
假如你是 Mary,现在是晚上七点钟,你正在拍摄一个 vlog(视频博客)记录家人的活动情况。请你根据下表提供的信息,写一篇英语短文给vlog 配上字幕,可适当发挥,词数 70 左右。
Father talk on the phone
Mother wash the dishes
Grandparents watch TV
Tom play with the cat
Mary do homework
I’m Mary. I live in a happy family. Let me tell you something about my family.
It’s seven o’clock in the evening now and my family are all at home. My father is talking on the phone with his friend. My mother is washing the dishes. She is kind to all of us. My grandparents are watching TV in the living room. Is my little brother Tom also watching TV? No. He is playing with the cat. As for me, I’m doing my homework.
There’s no place like home. We’re having a good time.
范文三
A lovely day in the park
It is Sunday today and the park is full of people . Let’s take a look at what is happening right now ?
Look , some children are flying kites and they look really happy . Some people are having a picnic under a tree . They are enjoying the delicious food . A young woman is walking her dog and the dog is so cute . On the grass , some people are playing the guitar and singing . They bring people some beautiful music . There is a small lake in the park and two men are rowing a boat .
The park is really a good place . Everyone in the park is having a good time .
范文四(进阶作文)
It's Sunday morning and my family are all at home. We are doing different things right now.
My father is reading a newspaper in the living room. He likes to know what's happening around the world. My mother is cooking breakfast in the kitchen. She is making noodles and eggs. The food smells delicious! My little sister is playing with her toys in her bedroom. She is building a castle with her blocks. I am sitting at my desk and writing this English composition. Our pet dog is lying on the floor and sleeping peacefully. Outside the window, some children are playing football in the park. The sun is shining brightly and the birds are singing in the trees. Everyone is busy but happy.
This is a wonderful morning for my family. I love spending time with my family at home.
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