Unit 4 作文专练 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级下册

本讲义聚焦初中英语应用文写作核心知识点，围绕“平衡娱乐”主题设计倡议书与建议信专项训练。通过题目分析明确文体要求，写作要点分点指导内容结构，语言格式规范文体特征，搭配重要句型词组及高分范文，构建从审题到表达的完整学习支架。 资料以贴近学生生活的“平衡娱乐”话题为载体，引导学生分析现象、阐述影响、提出建议，培养思维品质。提供具体句型与可操作建议（如设定屏幕时间、先完成作业），提升语言能力与学习能力。课中辅助教师高效引导，课后助力学生自主练习，查漏补缺，强化写作技能。

外研社7下unit 4作文专练 Having fun in a balanced way 题目一:倡议书(呼吁同学们平衡学习与娱乐) 题目: 假设你是学校学生会成员,你发现有些同学玩手机游戏或看电视时间过长,影响了学习和休息。请你以学生会的名义写一份英文倡议书,呼吁同学们以平衡的方式享受快乐。内容包括: 1. 指出同学们中常见的不平衡娱乐现象(至少2点)及其负面影响; 2. 说明平衡娱乐的重要性(对学习、健康、家庭关系的好处); 3. 提出具体建议(至少2条),并呼吁大家行动起来。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为倡议书,属于应用文中的公开号召类文体。初一学生写这份倡议书的核心是:问题要具体、危害要说清、建议要可行。很多学生玩手机、看电视没有节制,导致作业拖拉、视力下降、睡眠不足。倡议书的目的不是说“不能玩”,而是说“要平衡地玩”。语气要积极、鼓励,不要一味批评。 二、写作要点分析 第一段:指出不平衡娱乐现象及负面影响 至少写出2种常见问题及其后果。例如:“Some students spend hours playing phone games every day. This makes them forget to do their homework. Others watch TV until very late at night, so they feel tired in class the next day. Their eyes get sore, and their grades drop.” 问题要真实,让学生感到“这说的就是我”。 第二段:说明平衡娱乐的重要性 写出平衡的好处,可以从三个方面选:学习(有精力听课、作业完成得好)、健康(保护眼睛、保证睡眠)、家庭(有时间陪家人)。例如:“When we balance fun and study, we learn better and feel happier. Our eyes stay healthy, and we have more energy to play sports. We also have time to talk with our family.” 第三段:提出具体建议并呼吁 至少写出2条可操作的建议。例如:“First, set a time limit — no more than 30 minutes of screen time on school days. Second, finish your homework first before you play. Third, try outdoor activities like riding a bike or playing ball games with friends.” 最后用号召句结尾:“Let’s have fun in a balanced way. Start from today!” 三、语言与格式提醒 倡议书开头用“Dear schoolmates,”,结尾用号召句。多用“Let’s...”“Please...”。建议部分用“First, Second”使条理清晰。语气要积极、温和。 重要句型与词组 I am writing to call on everyone to have fun in a balanced way. Some students spend too much time on..., which is bad for their... For example, they forget to do homework or go to bed late. Having fun in a balanced way is important for our health and studies. When we balance play and work, we learn better and feel happier. Here are some easy tips to follow. Set a time limit for your screen time every day. Finish your homework first, then you can play. Try outdoor activities and spend time with your family. Let’s find a balance and enjoy life in a healthy way. too much screen time, set a time limit, finish homework, outdoor activities 高分范文 Dear schoolmates, I am writing to call on everyone to have fun in a balanced way. Some students spend hours playing phone games every day. They forget to do their homework and often go to bed very late. Others watch TV until midnight, so they feel tired and sleepy in class the next day. Their eyes get sore, and their grades start to drop. This is not a healthy way to have fun. Having fun in a balanced way is very important for us. When we balance play and study, we learn better and feel happier. Our eyes stay healthy, and we have more energy to play sports. We also have time to talk with our parents and help around the house. Balance makes everything better. Here are some easy tips to follow. First, set a time limit — no more than 30 minutes of screen time on school days. Second, always finish your homework before you turn on the TV or phone. Third, try outdoor activities like riding a bike, playing basketball, or walking in the park. Let’s have fun in a balanced way. Start from today. You will see the difference! Students’ Union 题目二:书信(给朋友的平衡娱乐建议信) 题目: 假设你是李华,你的好朋友王明最近沉迷于手机游戏,每天玩到很晚,上课打瞌睡,成绩也下降了。他向你求助。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括: 1. 表达理解他的心情(游戏确实好玩),但指出问题所在; 2. 分享你自己如何平衡学习和娱乐的经验(至少2点); 3. 给他提出具体建议,并鼓励他做出改变。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信(建议信),属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写这封信的核心是:先共情、再分析、后建议。朋友沉迷游戏,不能直接骂他“你错了”,而要先理解“游戏真的很好玩”,再温和地指出问题,最后用自己的经验帮助他。语气要温暖、真诚,像朋友在谈心。 二、写作要点分析 第一段:理解朋友的心情,指出问题 先肯定游戏的乐趣,然后说出过度玩的后果。例如:“I understand why you love playing phone games. They are exciting and fun. But playing until late at night makes you sleepy in class. Your grades are dropping, and that worries me.” 不要指责,而是表达关心。 第二段:分享自己的平衡经验 写出你自己是如何做到的,至少2点。例如:“I also like playing games, but I made some rules for myself. First, I finish all my homework before I touch my phone. Second, I set an alarm for 30 minutes. When it rings, I stop and do something else, like reading or helping my mom.” 用自己的真实做法给对方参考。 第三段:提出建议并鼓励 给出具体建议,并鼓励他尝试。例如:“Why don’t you try my rules? Start with 30 minutes a day. After you finish your homework, you can play. You will find that you still have fun, and your grades will come back up. I believe you can do it. I’m here for you.” 结尾要给人信心。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式:称呼(Dear Wang Ming,)、正文、结束语(Yours sincerely,)、签名。语气要温暖、鼓励。多用“I understand...”“Why not try...”“I believe you can...”等句式。 重要句型与词组 I understand why you love playing phone games. They are really fun. But playing too much is causing problems. You feel sleepy in class and your grades are dropping. I used to have the same problem, so I made some rules for myself. First, I finish my homework before I play anything. Second, I set a time limit — only 30 minutes a day. Third, I find other fun things to do, like sports or reading. Why don’t you try my rules? Start small. I believe you can find a balance. I am always here to help you. used to, set a rule, time limit, find a balance, believe in you 高分范文 Dear Wang Ming, I understand why you love playing phone games. They are exciting and fun, and I enjoy them too sometimes. But playing until midnight every day is causing problems. You told me you feel sleepy in class, and your grades are dropping. That makes me worried about you. I used to have the same problem. Last year, I also played too many games. Then I made some rules for myself, and they worked well. First, I finish all my homework before I touch my phone. That way, my schoolwork is always done. Second, I set an alarm for 30 minutes. When the alarm rings, I stop playing no matter what. Then I do something else, like riding my bike, reading a comic, or helping my mom cook. I still have fun, but I also stay healthy and do well in school. Why don’t you try my rules? Start with just 30 minutes a day. After your homework is done, you can play. You will still enjoy the games, and your grades will come back up. I believe you can find a balance. You are a smart guy, and I am always here to help you. Let’s do this together! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二:书信(给朋友的平衡娱乐建议信) 题目: 假设你是李华,你的好朋友王明最近沉迷于手机游戏,每天玩到很晚,上课打瞌睡,成绩也下降了。他向你求助。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括: 1. 表达理解他的心情(游戏确实好玩),但指出问题所在; 2. 分享你自己如何平衡学习和娱乐的经验(至少2点); 3. 给他提出具体建议,并鼓励他做出改变。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信(建议信),属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写这封信的核心是:先共情、再分析、后建议。朋友沉迷游戏,不能直接骂他“你错了”,而要先理解“游戏真的很好玩”,再温和地指出问题,最后用自己的经验帮助他。语气要温暖、真诚,像朋友在谈心。 二、写作要点分析 第一段:理解朋友的心情,指出问题 先肯定游戏的乐趣,然后说出过度玩的后果。例如:“I understand why you love playing phone games. They are exciting and fun. But playing until late at night makes you sleepy in class. Your grades are dropping, and that worries me.” 不要指责,而是表达关心。 第二段:分享自己的平衡经验 写出你自己是如何做到的,至少2点。例如:“I also like playing games, but I made some rules for myself. First, I finish all my homework before I touch my phone. Second, I set an alarm for 30 minutes. When it rings, I stop and do something else, like reading or helping my mom.” 用自己的真实做法给对方参考。 第三段:提出建议并鼓励 给出具体建议,并鼓励他尝试。例如:“Why don’t you try my rules? Start with 30 minutes a day. After you finish your homework, you can play. You will find that you still have fun, and your grades will come back up. I believe you can do it. I’m here for you.” 结尾要给人信心。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式:称呼(Dear Wang Ming,)、正文、结束语(Yours sincerely,)、签名。语气要温暖、鼓励。多用“I understand...”“Why not try...”“I believe you can...”等句式。 重要句型与词组 I understand why you love playing phone games. They are really fun. But playing too much is causing problems. You feel sleepy in class and your grades are dropping. I used to have the same problem, so I made some rules for myself. First, I finish my homework before I play anything. Second, I set a time limit — only 30 minutes a day. Third, I find other fun things to do, like sports or reading. Why don’t you try my rules? Start small. I believe you can find a balance. I am always here to help you. used to, set a rule, time limit, find a balance, believe in you 高分范文 Dear Wang Ming, I understand why you love playing phone games. They are exciting and fun, and I enjoy them too sometimes. But playing until midnight every day is causing problems. You told me you feel sleepy in class, and your grades are dropping. That makes me worried about you. I used to have the same problem. Last year, I also played too many games. Then I made some rules for myself, and they worked well. First, I finish all my homework before I touch my phone. That way, my schoolwork is always done. Second, I set an alarm for 30 minutes. When the alarm rings, I stop playing no matter what. Then I do something else, like riding my bike, reading a comic, or helping my mom cook. I still have fun, but I also stay healthy and do well in school. Why don’t you try my rules? Start with just 30 minutes a day. After your homework is done, you can play. You will still enjoy the games, and your grades will come back up. I believe you can find a balance. You are a smart guy, and I am always here to help you. Let’s do this together! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $