摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级下册Unit 6“旅行”主题写作,通过话题词汇(如expect、places of interest)和教材原句仿写(如take sb to…、can’t wait to do sth)搭建学习支架,帮助学生从词句积累过渡到篇章写作,形成“词汇-句型-模板-实战”的递进脉络。
其亮点在于分阶训练体系,通过“高分词句储备-经典范文模板-高分范文赏析-实战演练”四阶设计,培养学生语言能力(如运用as…as…句型)和思维品质(如按时间顺序组织行程)。例如范文模板用Early in the morning等时间词构建逻辑,实战演练结合真题补全标题并描述经历,助力学生掌握写作结构,教师可直接使用分阶资源提升教学效率。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级下册 WY
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Unit 6 Hitting the road
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.预料;预期 ________
2.文化的 __________
3.惊人地;使人吃惊地 ______________
4.更喜欢 ________
5.名胜 ____________________
6.(兴奋地)期待;盼望 _________________
7.因……而出名 _______________
8.通常;一般情况下 ____________
expect
cultural
surprisingly
prefer
places of interest
look forward to
be famous for
in general
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】My friend Haoyu took me to a restaurant right from the airport.
(take sb to…)
→仿写:今年暑假,我父母将带我去长城。
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My parents will take me to the Great Wall this summer vacation.
10.【教材原句】I just couldn’t wait to try Sichuan hot pot!(can’t wait to do sth)
→仿写:我迫不及待地与你分享我的上一次旅行。
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I can’t wait to share my last trip with you.
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11.【教材原句】People say I’m as great as Zhang Qian and Xuanzang.
(as… as…)
→仿写:海滩和我预想的一样有趣。
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The beach is as interesting as I expected.
12.【教材原句】But at the time, it was very difficult to travel far.(it is+adj.+to
do sth)
→仿写:去新地方旅行是令人兴奋的。
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It is exciting to travel to new places.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Last summer, . .I had an amazing trip to Zhejiang with my family.
(介绍地点,提出主题)
Early in the morning, we got on the train.During the journey, we chatted
and looked out of the window at the passing scenery. When we arrived in
Zhejiang around noon, we first had a big lunch. Then, in the afternoon, we went
to Wuzhen, a traditional Chinese-style town. We walked around and took plenty
of photos.As the evening came, we sat by the lake, enjoying the beautiful sunset.
The sky turned colourful, and it was so peaceful.(用Early in the morning、
During the journey、around noon、in the afternoon、As the evening came按时间
顺序介绍行程)
This trip, filled with joy, will always stay in my heart. (末段进行总结)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025海南期末]世界是一本书,需要我们用心去阅读。旅行可以让我们开阔
眼界、增长见识,也可以让我们放松心情、释放自我。你一定也有很多旅行经历
想和大家分享吧。请根据表格提示,说一说你的旅行经历。
My travel experience When and where did you go?
What fun things did you do there?
How did you feel?
…
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要求:1.文章须包括所给提示内容,可展开思路,适当增加细节;
2.语言表达准确,语义通顺、连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
4.80个词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Travel Experience
I like travelling a lot.____________
第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
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人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:根据表格介绍旅行经历
写作结构:总—分—总
第二步 列#5
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My Travel Experience
I like travelling a lot. Last summer vacation, I
travelled to Beijing with my parents. It was a really
exciting trip.As we all know ①, Beijing is famous for ②
many places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the
Palace Museum.
When we got to the Great Wall, I was surprised at
the amazing landscape. We climbed up and enjoyed the
beautiful scenery on the way. It was a little tiring, but
I felt very happy. We also visited the Palace Museum.
The ancient buildings were so amazing. ________________________________
①As we all know拉近
与读者的距离,使描述
更自然。
②is famous for这个短
语准确地表达了北京以
众多名胜古迹而闻名的
特点。
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Travelling gives us a lot of benefits. This trip to
Beijing not only made me happy but also ③ let me
know more about Chinese history and culture. I really
had a good time and I hope to go there again in the
future. ③用“not only… but
also…”说明北京之旅的
意义。
这篇范文词汇贴合旅行场景,基础实用且搭配自然,用places of interest、
climbed up、“not only… but also…”等短语精准表达。句式以简单句为主,用
and、but连接分句。文章逻辑连贯,兼顾叙事与流畅度。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025广西柳州期末】城市漫步
(City Walk)越来越受到人们的欢迎,
它能让人们发现自己家乡或所访之地隐
藏的魅力和独特之处。你校英语广播站
正在开展题为“A/An ____ City Walk”的
征文活动,请参考图文信息,写一篇短文投稿。
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要求:1.补全标题;
2.分享一次漫步经历及这次经历带给你的感受,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
A/An ___ City Walk
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【参考范文】
A Sunny City Walk
Last Saturday morning, the weather was sunny but not too hot.My
cousin and I went on a city walk near Green Lake Park.
We walked slowly along the quiet streets.First, we saw many old
trees with singing birds.Then, we found a small garden full of
colourful flowers.The air smelt sweet! Finally, we watched friendly old
people playing chess under a big tree.
I felt very happy because I noticed beautiful things in our city.I
learnt that walking slowly helps us see wonderful sights around us.It
was like being an explorer in my own neighbourhood!
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