内容正文:
第三部分
专题突破
专题五
读写综合
书面表达
题型分析
一、命题规律
2023~2025广东中考英语“书面表达”分析
年份
素材
主题
体裁
考查方式
人与自我(多彩、有意义的校园生
交换生参加民俗
2025
活)、人与社会(跨国文化沟通与
应用文—邮件
半开放式写作
活动
交流、语言与文化)
人与自我(多彩、安全、有意义的校
自荐成为交换生
2024
园生活)、人与社会(跨国文化沟
应用文—邮件
半开放式写作
的共读伙伴
通与交流、语言与文化)
人与自我(多彩、安全、有意义的校
2023
分享一个有趣的梦
记叙文
半开放式写作
园生活)、人与社会(科技兴国)
二、解题技巧
1.审清题目要求,明确写作目的、内容和文体。
一审主题(写什么);二审人称(用什么人称写);三审体裁(记叙文、说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议文、
应用文);四审时态(主要时态);五审内容要点。
2.列要点,写提纲,理清思路。
3.巧用已知信息。
从A部分回答问题的阅读材料中提取有用的信息,灵活利用有用的短语和句子,但不能原封不
动照抄内容。
4.扬长避短,发挥优势。
尽量使用自己熟练或熟悉的句式,适当使用感叹句、祈使句或疑问句等句式,切忌盲目追求难度
较大的复杂句式,同时不要出现中式英语。
5,根据文章话题和体裁的不同选用合适的模板和句型结构,提升文章的档次。
6.篇章布局通常采用“总一分一总”的三段式。
第一段(开头):简单明了,开门见山,点明写作目的或中心思想,引出下文;
第二段(主体):分2~3点阐述具体内容或要点;
第三段(结尾):总结提升或呼吁建议等。常用行文过渡词:
(1)表并列:and,both.…and.…,also,too,as well as,not only..but also.等;
(2)表递进:what's more,in addition/additionally等;
(3)表转折:but,yet,however,while,after all,though/even though,in fact等;
(4)表时间顺序:when,while,not..until.,after,.before,first,later,then,next,finally等;
(5)表因果:so,because,thus,as a result,therefore等;
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(6)表目的:in order to,so as to,so that等;
(7)表列举:like,such as,for example,and so on等;
(8)表总结:in short,in general,generally speaking,in a word,in summary,all in all等。
7.检查与改错。
检查格式、单词拼写、大小写、人称、时态、语态以及标点符号等方面是否正确或合适。
8.注意书写工整,卷面整洁。
真题解题范例
B.书面表达
假设你是李明。你校计划与市博物馆合作举办民俗体验活动,需要同学们从若干民俗项目中选出
最想体验的一项。你期待交换生Pter也参与投票。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,写一封电子邮件
给他。
给PeterE的邮件
票数最高的两项
你的选择
你的期待
1.舞狮
1.选择项目
1.…
2.…
2.选择理由
2.…
3..
注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名;
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Our school and the city museum will hold an event for us to get a taste of a folk custom.We are invited
to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes first now.
Best,
Li Ming
【写作指导】
1.人称:
2.时态:
-1.舞狮
目前票数最高的两项
2.…
1.项目名称
给Peter的电子邮件
你的选择
2.选择理由(2,点)
3.项目目前的得票情况
1.…
你的期待
2.…
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1.总体分析
①体裁:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②人称:以第一人称为主时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括介绍活动背景、个人选择及原因、邀请收信人参与投票,考生应注
意要点齐全,并可以适当补充细节以增强说服力。
2.写作步骤
第一步,表明写作意图。用“我们学校计划与市博物馆合作举办民俗体验活动”引出活动背景,表明
个人选择,进而为下文阐述原因做铺垫。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“中国结编织的精致与创意性”和“其丰富的文化意义”两个方面详细
阐述选择该项目的原因,增强说服力。
第三步,书写结语。以“期待你的选择”,表达期待之情。
3.亮点词汇
①delicate精致的
②creative有创意的
③symbolize象征
④potential潜力
⑤make a difference有影响,起作用
4.高分句型
You can use different colors and lengths of ropes to make various shapes like butterflies or flowers,
which can be used as decorations at home.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【例文】
Dear Peter,
Our school and the city museum will hold an event for us to get a taste of a folk custom.We are invited
to vote for our favorite,and lion dance comes first now.
I've chosen Chinese knot-tying.Firstly,it's a very delicate and creative craft.You can use
different colors and lengths of ropes to make various shapes like butterflies or flowers,which can be
used as decorations at home.Secondly,it has rich cultural meanings.Chinese knots often symbolize
good luck and unity in Chinese culture.I believe it has great potential.
I really hope you can take part in this voting.Your vote might make a big difference.Looking
forward to your choice.
Best,
Li Ming
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评分标准
1.评分原则与方法
从内容与语言两方面予以分档给分。内容方面要求考生能完整地按写作要点进行表述,要,点
详略得当、表述合理,词数符合写作要求;语言方面要求考生表达准确连贯、符合逻辑。允许考生合
理运用原文句式结构,但不可以照抄原文。如考生把文章所给出的开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,不
扣分(即使抄写有错误)。
2.内容分与语言分的分配
内容分:6分
(1)共读意愿…
…1分
(2)个人优势…
…1+1+1分
(3)共读计划
…1+1分
内容要,点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得6分,词数在70以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分。
语言分:9分(确定语言分档次时要考虑内容的涵盖)
第一档:8~9分要求:内容涵盖所有的要点,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑,只有个别不影响理
解的语言错误。
第二档:6~7分要求:内容涵盖绝大部分要点,表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑,但有少量语言
错误。
第三档:4~5分要求:内容涵盖大部分要点,表达较为清楚、连贯,基本符合逻辑,但有一些语言
错误。
第四档:1~3分要求:内容涵盖部分要点,能写出少数正确句子,但整体表达不连贯,且语言错误
较多。
第五档:0分空白卷或完全没有相关内容。
专题特训
特训1
俗话说,“读万卷书,行万里路。”旅行拓宽了我们的眼界,丰富了我们的人生。在你的旅行经历中,
哪个地方给你留下了最深刻的印象?请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文给英文杂志
Teenage magazine投稿,分享一次令你印象深刻的旅行。
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
一次令我印象深刻的旅行
旅行的时间、地点
旅行的具体情况
我对这次旅行的感受
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如
An Impressive Trip
特训2
你有爱不释手的物品吗?例如:你最喜爱的一本书、一辆单车或者一件玩具等。你和它有什么特
别的故事吗?Dongguan Today公众号计划新增一个“好物分享”的英语栏目。请你选择一件物品,写一
篇文章向公众号投稿。内容包括:
My Favorite
物品信息
喜欢的原因
你和它的故事
1.它很特别
2.…
注意:
1.把题目补充完整,并在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。
My Favorite
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特训3
近年来,越来越多的青少年沉迷于电子游戏,导致他们上课时注意力不集中,成绩下降。假如你们
班英语课要进行一次有关问题讨论,请你写一篇英文演讲稿表达自己的观点。
Playing video games
谈谈对玩电子游戏的看法
你这样看待电子游戏的原因
给玩电子游戏的同学们提一些建议
1.…
2.…
注意:
1.不得在作文中出现学校和学生的真实名称。
2.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Different people have different ideas about playing video games.Some people think that playing video
games is good,but others hold the opposite opinion.
特训4
近年来,全球的环境污染状况令人担忧,请你根据以下思维导图内容的提示,用英文写一封倡议
书,呼吁大家保护环境,减少污染。
保护环境的倡议书
环境污染的现状和原因
解决办法
呼吁
1.空气污染…
1绿色出行
2.…
2.…
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计人总词数。
Nowadays,the pollution on Earth is becoming worse and worse.
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特训5
近几年来,志愿者工作被社会广泛重视,为了丰富学生的生活,学校成立了志愿者社团。假如你是
社长李明,请你根据以下思维导图内容的提示,写一篇英语倡议书,呼吁同学们积极参与志愿活动。
Being a volunteer
成立意图
活动计划
呼吁
1.为了丰富学生的生活
1.在公园捡垃圾
希望同学们积极参与
2.…
2.…
3.…
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
Being a volunteer
Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Ming,the leader of the new Volunteer Club.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
特训6
假如你校英文报正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为题的征文活动,你对此很感兴趣。
请你根据以下思维导图内容的提示,用英文写一篇短文,分享你完成创意英语作业的经历和看法。
我的创意英语作业
作业内容:
创作经历:
收获:
制作一个关于
1.制订相关计划
1.了解中国传统节日
中秋节的英语视频
2.寻找资料(询问、查阅…)
2.
3.制作视频
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注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
My Creative English Homework
Hello,everyone!I'm happy to share my creative English homework with you.
特训7
随着“双减”政策的落实,学生有了更多时间休息和参加各项活动,然而部分学生却在手机、电脑上
玩游戏到半夜,严重影响他们的睡眠质量及上课状态。假如你是李华,请你根据以下思维导图内容的
提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
睡眠和健康
睡眠不足的影响
如何提高睡眠质量
呼吁
1.上课犯困,不能认真
1.白天做适量运动
希望大家早睡早起,
听课
2避免睡前玩手机、电脑等
好好学习
2.…
3.…
要求:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头,结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
Dear students,
I am Li Hua,and I'm going to talk about sleep and health.With the implementation of the "double
reduction"policy,we have more time to rest and participate in activities.However,some students stay up
late playing games on mobile phones or computers,which leads to lack of sleep.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题突破
如
特训8
假如你是初中生Jck,最近,你在网上了解到一家宠物医院正在招募志愿者。请你根据以下思维
导图内容的提示,给医院负责人Mr.Smith写一封英文邮件,申请成为一名志愿者。
Jack的邮件
空闲时间
做志愿者的理由
个人优势
。。。
1.喜欢动物
1.有相关经验
2.…
2.…
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm Jack,a middle school student.I'm writing to ask for a volunteer job at your hospital.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jack
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and giving red envelopes to children.The atmosphere is
very festive and everyone is happy.(答案不唯一,合理
即可)
专题五读写综合—一书面表达
特训1
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten
thousand books.I love travelling very much.Last summer
vacation,I went to Beijing with my parents.On the first
day,we climbed the Great Wall.I felt tired but happy.The
next day,we visited the Palace Museum and enjoyed many
beautiful works of art.I learned more about the history of
Ming and Qing Dynasties.Then I tasted Beijing duck in
Wangfujing Street.I really had a good time in Beijing.I
think travelling can open up our minds.We can meet all
kinds of people and learn more about different cultures.
Let's go travelling and learn more about the world!
特训2
My Favorite Book
My favorite book is The Old Man and the Sea.It's a
story about an old fisherman.
I love this book for two reasons.Firstly,the book is
special to me.My favorite teacher gave it to me as a gift.
Secondly,it encourages me a lot.
My story with the book began two years ago.When I
found it hard to learn English,my teacher gave the book to
me.I have read it many times.The book has taught me not
to give up,so I decided to try harder.If you want to read
something educational,choose the book.
特训3
Different people have different ideas about playing
video games.Some people think that playing video games is
good,but others hold the opposite opinion.
In my opinion,playing video games is not good.On
one hand,playing video games can waste you a lot of time.
And you're supposed to spend the waste time studying or
having a rest.On the other hand,playing video games is
harmful to your eyes because you must spend a long time
staring at the screen.
But if you really want to play video garmes,you must
manage your time well.What's more,you'd better do eye
exercises to relax your eyes after playing video games for a
long time.
特训4
Nowadays,the pollution on Earth is becoming worse
and worse.Many people are suffering from the effects of air
and water pollution.To protect our environment,we should
take immediate actions.
First,we should reduce the use of plastic and recycle
more.Second,we need to plant more trees to improve air
quality.Finally,we should use public transportation instead
of driving cars to reduce carbon emissions.By reducing
pollution,we can create a better future for the next
generation.
Let's work together to make our planet a cleaner and
healthier place to live!
特训5
Being a volunteer
Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Ming,the leader of the new Volunteer Club.
Our club is set up to make our life colorful and offer us
chances to help people in need.
We've planned many meaningful activities.First of all,
we intend to pick up the litter in the park to make our living
environment more beautiful.Besides,we plan to visit the
old who live in the old people's home.We will talk with
them and sing songs for them.What's more,we also plan to
sell DIY products to raise money for poor children.All these
actions will not only benefit the society but also enrich our
life.
Come and join us to make a difference!If you join the
Volunteer Club,you will learn a lot.Looking forward to
your support!
Best wishes,
Li Ming
特训6
My Creative English Homework
Hello,everyone!I'm happy to share my creative
English homework with you.
Our task was to make an English video about the Mid-
Autumn Festival.First,I made a clear plan.Then,I
looked for useful information.I asked my grandparents
about the festival stories and also read some books.After
that,I started making the video with my classmates.We
took pictures,wrote scripts,and recorded our voices in
English.
Through this homework,I learned more about Chinese
traditional culture.I also improved my English speaking
skills and learned how to work better in a team.It was a
meaningful experience!
特训7
Dear students,
I am Li Hua,and I'm going to talk about sleep and
health.Lack of sleep can make us feel sleepy in class and
unable to focus.We may also get angry easily.To improve
sleep quality,we can do some exercise during the day.
Avoid using mobile phones or computers before bedtime.
Also,keep a regular sleep schedule.Let's go to bed early
and get up early to study well.
Yours,
Li Hua
2
特训8
Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm Jack,a middle school student.I'm writing to ask
for a volunteer job at your hospital.
I have enough free time after school every day.I would
like to be a volunteer because I love animals,and I want to
do something meaningful for them.I want to help them
become healthier.Besides,I have some experience looking
after my neighbor's cat and dog.Last year,I helped look
after some pet dogs at a local animal rescue.I'm patient,
friendly,and good at taking care of small animals.I believe
I can help to make the animals there feel better.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jack
第四部分
质量检测
质量检测(一)
一、语法选择。
1-5 BACAB
6-10
CBABB
二、完形填空
11-15 ABCDC
16-20 ABDCA
三、阅读理解
21-25 BCBBC
26—30 BACDB
31-35 DGFAC
四、短文填空。
36.directions 37.shopping 38.said
39.first
40.describe 41.different
42.uncomfortable 43.left
44.out
45.top
五、读写综合
A.回答问题
46.The writer traveled to Wanning,Hainan this summer
holiday
47.The coach taught the writer basic skills on the first day.
48.Because the writer was nervous.
49.By practising hard many times.
50.The writer learned that practice 2s makes perfect,
B.书面表达
Now AI technology has found its way into our daily
life.There is a heated discussion on whether middle school
students should be allowed to use AI in their studies.
I believe that middle school students should be allowed
to use AI when learning because it can provide valuable
information.For example,AI can offer help on homework in
time.Moreover,it can reorganize information clearly,
helping students understand complex topics.It can also
make learning fun.
However,we must learn to use AI wisely and avoid
simply copying answers.Only by thinking independently
can we truly improve our knowledge and skills.Therefore,
2
参考答案
with the right attitude,Al can become a powerful tool to
develop our study habits.
So,I agree that middle school students should be allowed
to use AI.
质量检测(二)
一、语法选择。
1-5 CABBC
6-10
CABAC
二、完形填空
11-15 DACBC
16-20
BDCDC
三、阅读理解
21-25 CDADA
26-30
BCACD
31-35 EFGDB
四、短文填空。
36.until
37.book
38.full
39.reason
40.played
41.ways
42.however
43.decision 44.mainly
45.their
五、读写综合
A.回答问题
46.Eight Section Brocade Qigong.
47.Because it uses slow movements with deep breathing.
48.Those who often use phones or work at the desks.
49.About 15 minutes.
50.Through short videos.
B.书面表达
One possible version:
Dear Mr.White,
I'm Li Hua from Class 2,Grade 9.I am glad to know
that our school will hold a new after-school activity.I advise
that we can learn paper cutting.Because it is one of the
oldest folk arts in China.
The activity will be held in the art room at 4 pm every
Friday.We can listen to a talk about the history and
development of paper cutting.Besides,we can learn how to
draw pictures on paper and how to cut it from our art
teachers.What's more,there will be a paper-cutting
competition every month.Anyone who makes the best paper
cutting can get some gifts.
I hope my advice can be accepted and we can learn
more about traditional Chinese culture.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
中考模拟卷
模拟卷(一)
一、语法选择。
1-5 ABBCC
6-10 AACBB
二、完形填空。
11-15 AABAC
16-20 BDCDD
三、阅读理解。
21-25 BACCD
26-30
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