Unit4作文专练 2025-2026学年沪教版五四学制英语七年级下册

沪教版五四七下unit 4作文专练 Completing a story about honesty 题目一：书信（给朋友分享一次诚实的经历） 题目： 假设你是李华，你的朋友Tom写信说他最近因为一件小事撒了谎，心里很不安。请你给他写一封回信，分享一次你自己诚实的经历，告诉他诚实的重要性。内容包括： 1. 讲述你经历过的一次关于诚实的事情（时间、地点、发生了什么）； 2. 你当时的选择和内心的感受； 3. 这件事给你的启发，以及你对朋友的建议。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写这封信的核心是：用真实的小故事打动朋友，用真诚的建议帮助朋友。学生需要先讲一个自己亲身经历或亲眼所见的小故事，故事要完整（时间、地点、经过、结果），再说明这个经历让“我”明白了什么，最后给朋友提出具体的建议。语气要温暖、真诚，像朋友之间谈心。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：引出话题，讲述诚实的故事 先回应朋友的烦恼，然后讲一个自己的故事。例如：“I remember one time when I was in the supermarket with my mom. The cashier gave us too much change — 20 yuan more. I saw it, but I said nothing at first.” 故事要真实、简单，有具体场景和细节。 第二段：写出你的选择和内心感受 写出你最终做了什么选择，当时心里怎么想的。例如：“When we got home, I felt very bad. My heart kept telling me to go back. Finally, I told my mom. We went back to the supermarket and returned the money. The cashier was so surprised and said ‘Thank you, little girl.’ I felt so light and happy.” 这段是故事的高潮，要写出“挣扎-决定-结果”的过程。 第三段：谈启发并给朋友建议 写出你从这件事中学到了什么，然后告诉朋友该怎么做。例如：“I learned that honesty makes me feel peaceful inside. Lies only make us worry. My advice for you is to tell the truth as soon as possible. It might be hard at first, but you will feel much better after you do it.” 最后鼓励朋友勇敢面对。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Tom,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。讲故事时用过去时，给建议时用一般现在时。可以用“I remember one time...”开头讲故事。感受部分可以用“I felt...”“My heart told me...”等表达。 重要句型与词组 · I understand how you feel. Let me share a story from my own life. · One time, when I was... · Something happened that taught me a big lesson. · I saw that..., but I didn’t say anything at first. · I felt bad because I knew it was wrong. · Finally, I decided to... · After I did the right thing, I felt very happy and light. · I learned that honesty brings peace to our hearts. · My advice is to tell the truth. It is never too late. · cashier, change, feel guilty, do the right thing, a peaceful heart 高分范文 Dear Tom, I understand how you feel about telling a lie. It makes you worried and uncomfortable. Let me share a story from my own life. Maybe it can help you. One time, last summer, I went to a small shop near my school to buy a pen. The pen cost three yuan, but I gave the shopkeeper ten yuan. He gave me back seven yuan — that was one yuan too much. I saw it, but I said nothing and ran out quickly. On my way home, I felt very bad. My heart kept saying, “That’s not honest. You should go back.” At first I didn’t want to, but I couldn’t stop thinking about it. Finally, I went back to the shop. I told the shopkeeper, “You gave me too much change.” He smiled and said, “Thank you, you are a good girl.” I felt so light and happy. I learned that honesty makes us feel peaceful inside. Lies only make us feel heavy. My advice for you is to tell the truth as soon as possible. It may be hard at first, but you will feel much better after you do it. I believe you can do the right thing. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二：倡议书（呼吁诚实守信） 题目： 假设你是学校学生会成员，你发现有些同学在日常生活中不诚实（如抄作业、说谎、考试作弊等）。请你以学生会的名义写一份英文倡议书，呼吁同学们做一个诚实的人。内容包括： 1. 用一个简短的关于诚实的故事（可以是名人故事或身边故事）开头； 2. 说明诚实的重要性（至少2点，如赢得信任、内心安宁等）； 3. 提出具体的行为倡议（至少2条），呼吁大家从现在做起。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为倡议书，属于应用文中的公开号召类文体。初一学生写这份倡议书的核心是：用故事吸引人，用道理说服人，用号召打动人。故事要简短有力（3-5句话），道理要简单明白，建议要具体易行。语气要有感染力，让同学们觉得“诚实是值得骄傲的品质”。 二、写作要点分析 第一段：用一个诚实的故事开头 选一个简短的故事，可以是名人故事（如华盛顿砍樱桃树）或普通人的小故事。例如：“There is a famous story about young George Washington. He cut down his father’s cherry tree, but when his father asked, he said, ‘I cannot tell a lie. I did it.’ His father was not angry. He was proud of his son’s honesty.” 故事要简洁，快速引出主题。 第二段：说明诚实的重要性 至少写出2点重要性。例如：“First, honest people win trust from others. When you are honest, your friends and teachers believe in you. Second, honesty gives you a peaceful heart. You don’t have to worry about being found out or telling more lies.” 道理要贴近初一学生的实际生活。 第三段：提出具体倡议并呼吁 至少写出2条具体的行为倡议。例如：“First, if you make a mistake, don’t hide it. Tell the truth bravely and try to correct it. Second, never copy homework or cheat in an exam. Do your own work, even if it is hard. Third, when you find something that is not yours, try to return it to the owner.” 最后用有力的号召结尾：“Let’s be honest students. Start from today, start from small things.” 三、语言与格式提醒 倡议书开头用“Dear schoolmates,”，结尾用号召句。故事部分用过去时，倡议部分用一般现在时或祈使句。语气要积极、有感染力。可以用“Let’s...”“I believe we can...”等句式。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to call on everyone to be an honest person. · Let me start with a short story about honesty. · The story tells us that honesty is a great treasure. · Why is honesty so important? · First, honest people are trusted by others. · Second, honesty brings us peace and happiness. · When we lie, we have to remember all the lies. It is tiring. · Here is what we can do to be honest. · If you make a mistake, tell the truth bravely. · Never copy homework or cheat in exams. · Let’s be proud of our honesty. · call on, win trust, a peaceful heart, make a mistake, do the right thing 高分范文 Dear schoolmates, I am writing to call on everyone to be an honest person. Let me start with a short story. There is a famous story about young George Washington. He cut down his father’s cherry tree, but when his father asked, he said, “I cannot tell a lie. I did it.” His father was not angry. He was proud of his son’s honesty. This story tells us that honesty is a great treasure. Why is honesty so important? First, honest people win trust from others. When you are honest, your friends and teachers believe in you. They will respect you and want to be with you. Second, honesty gives you a peaceful heart. When you tell a lie, you have to remember it and may tell more lies. That is very tiring. But when you are honest, you have nothing to hide. You feel light and happy. Here is what we can do to be honest. First, if you make a mistake, don’t hide it. Tell the truth bravely and try to correct it. Second, never copy homework or cheat in exams. Do your own work, even if it is hard. Third, if you find something that is not yours, try to return it to the owner. Let’s be honest students. Start from today, start from small things. I believe we can all be like young George Washington. Students’ Union 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $