摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Unit 8 A green world”环保主题写作,从高分词句储备(如eco-friendly、recycle等话题词汇,run out、deal with等短语)入手,通过教材原句仿写(如It’s a good idea to do sth结构)搭建学习支架,衔接经典范文模板(Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly列举措施)与实战演练,帮助学生构建从词句到篇章的写作脉络。
其亮点在于以“四阶训练”系统提升语言能力与思维品质,如佳句仿写结合教材原句结构提示,培养规范表达;高分范文赏析通过“审体裁、列结构”步骤,引导学生分析写作逻辑。融入中考真题演练(如江苏盐城期末、苏州期中题),助力学生掌握写作策略,发展学习能力。学生能提升环保主题写作水平,教师可直接用于课堂教学,提高效率。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级下册 YL
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Unit 8 A green world
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.环保的 ______________
2.回收利用 _________
3.控制 _________
4.污染 ___________
eco-friendly
recycle
control
pollution
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5.用完;耗尽 _________
run out
【解析】链接狂K
run out 的详细讲解见狂K重点P44。
6.解决 ___________
7.把……分成 _________________
8.有作用;有影响 ___________________
deal with
separate… into
make a difference
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It’s a good idea to share a ride to school with others or take the
bus.(It’s a good idea to do sth)
→仿写:多种些树让我们的城市更绿是个好主意。
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It’s a good idea to plant more trees to make our city greener.
10.【教材原句】In fact, Switzerland has one of the highest levels of waste
recycling in the world… (one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
→仿写:保护环境最好的方法之一是减少浪费。
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One of the best ways to protect the environment is to reduce waste.
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11.【教材原句】A recycling event is going to be held at our school.(be going
to be done)
→仿写:为了保护环境,我们城市将要禁止使用塑料袋。
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Plastic bags are going to be banned in our city to protect the
environment.
12.【教材原句】Everyone can share ideas on how to make the world a better
place.(疑问词+动词不定式)
→仿写:我不知道能做什么来减少空气污染。
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I don’t know what to do to reduce air pollution.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Nowadays, environmental problems are becoming more serious.Pollution,
waste of resources, and deforestation threaten our planet. To protect the
environment, we should take action immediately.
Firstly, we can save energy by turning off lights when leaving a room and
using public transport instead of cars. Secondly, reducing waste is important. We
should recycle paper, glass, and plastic, and avoid using disposable
products.. .Thirdly,. .planting more trees helps improve air quality and protect
wildlife.(用Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly列举具体措施)#1.1
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Everyone has a role to play. If we work together, our world will become a
greener and healthier place.Let’s start now!(呼吁行动,升华主题)#1.2
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏盐城期末]学校英文报发
起“Green life, start from me!”主题征文活
动,请根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文投
稿,和同学们分享你在环境保护方面的做
法和倡议。
注意事项:
(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(2)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(3)词数:80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
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Green living is a necessary lifestyle. To live a green life, I____
第一步 审
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:环境保护方面的做法和倡议
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列#5
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Green living ① is a necessary lifestyle. To live
a green life ①, I always turn off ② the lights and
the TV when I’m not using them. I also try to use
less water ② by taking shorter showers ② .They can
help me save energy. At school, I recycle paper and
plastic, and I often walk or ride my bike ② instead
of taking a car ③ . ________________________________
①green living和live a
green life准确表达了“绿色
生活”的概念,符合环保
主题。
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I think we can all do more to protect our
environment. I plan to organize a “Green Week” at
our school. During this week, we can have activities
like planting trees, cleaning up the schoolyard, and
sharing tips on how to save energy.
I hope more and more people will join us in
living a green life. Let’s start from ourselves and
make our world a better place! ②使用turn off、use less
water、take shorter
showers、walk or ride my
bike等基础动词短语,用简
单词汇清晰传达具体的环
保行为,表达直观且易于
理解。
③instead of taking a car
结构说明替代方式和实现
途径,短语使用规范。
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该短文围绕“绿色生活”主题展开,词汇朴实精准,短语搭配地道,以简单句为主
且句式多样,语法规范准确。全文逻辑连贯,从个人践行到学校计划再到呼吁他
人,完整传达环保理念。
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025江苏苏州期中】下周的英语课上,老师要求每位同学做一个主题为
“Saving Our Planet”的演讲,请根据以下表格内容,写一篇演讲稿,词数80左右
(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Saving Our Planet Why it is sick cut down…
waste water……
What we can do reduce…
reuse…
recycle……
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注意:(1)内容必须包含提示的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文本中出现真实的校名、人名等。
Dear classmates,
It’s my honour to give a speech about saving our planet.____
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
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【参考范文】
Dear classmates,
It’s my honour to give a speech about saving our planet. Our
planet is sick because of us. People cut down too many trees, waste
water, and pollute the air and rivers. This harms animals and our
environment.
We must act now! First, reduce waste. Turn off lights when they’re
unnecessary and save water. Second, reuse things like shopping bags and
water bottles. Third, recycle paper, plastic, and glass. Planting trees
also helps a lot.
By doing these small things, we can make a big difference. Let’s
work together to protect our beautiful home!
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
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