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英 语
八年级下册 YL
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Unit 7 Charities
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课时同步训练
Period 6 Integration (Ⅱ) &Assessment &Further
study
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写作
第1阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.医疗的 _________
2.组织;机构 ______________
3.慈善机构 _________
4.继续做 __________
medical
organization
charity
carry on
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5.除……以外(还) ________________
6.分发 __________
7.建立 ________
8.为某人提供某物 ________________________________________
in addition to
hand out
set up
provide sth for sb/provide sb with sth
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】It’s difficult for them to breathe, eat and speak.(It’s+adj.+to do
sth)
→仿写:把衣裳捐给慈善商店是很善良的。
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It’s very kind to donate clothes to the charity shop.
10.【教材原句】Local doctors and nurses are invited on board to learn about eye
operations.(一般现在时的被动语态)
→仿写:这个慈善机构的建筑每周都由志愿者打扫。
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The/This charity building is cleaned by volunteers every week.
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11.【教材原句】Save the Children is one of these charities.(one of句型)
→仿写:她是我们小组里最积极的志愿者之一。
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She is one of the most active volunteers in our group.
12.【教材原句】People can help by donating money or working as volunteers.
(by doing sth)
→仿写:通过在图书馆给孩子们读故事,我们给他们带来欢乐和知识。
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By reading stories to kids in the library, we bring them joy and
knowledge.
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第2阶 经典范文模板
Charityis a truly kind act. It shows our care for others and our wish to help.
(开篇点题)
First, we can give money.Even a little bit helps those in need. Second, we
can donate things like old clothes and books. They bring joy to others. Third, we
can spend time doing charity, like visiting the elderly.(用First、Second、Third列
举慈善行为)
Also, charity makes our community closer.We build stronger bonds by
working together.(用Also介绍意义)
In a word, charity is great. Let’s all do it and make the world better!
(末段总结全文,升华主旨)
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第3阶 高分范文赏析
[2025江苏苏州期中]刚刚过去的暑假是参与社会实践、服务社区的良机。
你校英语社团举办了“My Volunteering Experience During Summer Vacation”主题
分享会,请写一篇短文,分享你在暑假期间一次有意义的志愿者经历(过程、感
受与收获)。
参考信息:
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要求:(1)70—100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Volunteering Experience During
Summer Vacation
Volunteering is very meaningful and important. It can help others and make
us feel happy too.
I still remember one of my volunteering experiences during this summer
vacation clearly.
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第一步 审
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:写出该经历的过程、自己的感受以及收获。
写作结构:总—分—总
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第二步 列
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My Volunteering Experience During Summer
Vacation
Volunteering is very meaningful and important. It
can help others and make us feel happy too. ________________________________
①使用了At first、but
soon、Gradually等表示时
间顺序的词汇,使文章的
叙述具有逻辑性和连
贯性;
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I still remember one of my volunteering
experiences during this summer vacation clearly. I
joined a community clean-up.At first ① , I felt a little
shy to work with strangers, but soon ① we started to
clean the park together. We picked up ② rubbish, swept
the ground ② and even talked with people about
protecting the environment.Gradually ① , I enjoyed the
work very much. ②pick up表示“捡起”,
sweep the ground表示“扫
地”,这些短语准确地描
述了社区清洁工作中的具
体动作,使描述更加生动
形象;
续表
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Through this experience, I learnt the meaning of
teamwork. I also experienced the joy of helping
others and realized that even small actions can make
a big difference ③ . ③make a big difference
是一个较为高级的表达,
意思是“产生重大影响”,
提升了文章的档次。
文章采用了总—分—总的结构。开头点明志愿活动有意义且重要,中间详细叙述
了一次具体的志愿活动经历,包括活动前的感受、活动中的具体行为以及活动中
的情绪变化,最后总结从这次经历中获得的收获,层次分明,逻辑清晰。
续表
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第4阶 实战演练
【2025江苏常州期末】为弘扬雷锋精神,你校将开展“学雷锋月”优秀志愿者
事迹分享会。假定你是李华,作为优秀志愿者,要为该活动准备一篇发言稿。请
以“Work as a Volunteer”为主题,用英文写一篇发言稿。
内容包括:(1)the importance of volunteering
(2)your experience as a volunteer
(3)what you have learnt from it
要求:(1)词数不少于80,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is “Work as a Volunteer”.I am glad to share
my volunteer story with you.____
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【参考范文】
Hello, everyone!
I am Li Hua. Today my topic is “Work as a Volunteer”. I am glad
to share my volunteer story with you.Volunteering is really meaningful.
It gives me a chance to do something helpful.
Last month, my friends and I volunteered at a nursing home. The
moment we arrived, we noticed that many elderly people suffered from
loneliness. So, we actively chatted with them, always keeping warm eye
contact and wearing friendly smiles. Besides chatting, we taught them
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to do simple exercises and make beautiful paper cuttings. We brought
joy and peace to their days and truly raised their spirits.
From this experience, I have realized a kind word and a bright
smile can easily pass on love and warmth. We can do some voluntary work
to help people in need and live a more meaningful life!
Thank you!
【解析】知识拓展
volunteer to do sth 志愿做某事
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